Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZFP58SR0YSJQ5MGJMPPM

Run Details

Duration:
28.0s
Cost:
$0.000974

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Fae Grove, the air thick with an unsettling stillness. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled branches twisting against the night sky. She had come here seeking answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her. The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness. Each step felt heavy, as if the ground beneath her was reluctant to let her pass. She paused, scanning the clearing. Shadows danced at the edges of her vision, flickering like candle flames. “Just the wind,” she muttered, though the words felt hollow. A rustle came from the underbrush, sharp and sudden. Aurora’s heart raced. She turned, but nothing emerged. Just the whisper of leaves, the distant croak of a frog. She took a deep breath, trying to steady herself. “Focus, Rory. You’re here for a reason.” The pendant pulsed against her thigh, a gentle thrum that seemed to sync with her heartbeat. She reached for it, fingers brushing the cool silver chain. The glow intensified, casting a soft crimson light that illuminated her surroundings. “Why did I think this was a good idea?” she whispered, half to herself, half to the grove. The trees shifted, their branches creaking as if in response. Aurora stepped deeper into the grove, the wildflowers brushing against her legs. She felt the weight of the night pressing in, the air thickening with an unnameable tension. A low hum filled the air, a sound that didn’t belong. It vibrated through her bones, a melody that twisted and turned, echoing off the stones. She squinted into the darkness, searching for the source. “Hello?” Her voice broke the silence, but it felt swallowed by the grove. The hum faded, replaced by a soft rustling. Aurora turned sharply, her breath hitching. A figure flitted between the trees, just out of sight. She strained to catch a glimpse, but it vanished like smoke. “Get a grip,” she scolded herself, forcing her feet to move forward. The pendant pulsed again, stronger this time, as if urging her onward. She followed its call, the glow illuminating a path through the underbrush. The trees closed in around her, their branches intertwining like fingers, creating a canopy that blocked out the stars. A chill crept up her spine. She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—trailing her. The grove felt alive, watching, waiting. “Just a little further,” she whispered, though doubt gnawed at her resolve. The hum returned, louder now, a haunting melody that wrapped around her like a shroud. It beckoned her deeper into the grove, where the shadows thickened and the air grew colder. “Is anyone there?” she called, her voice trembling. Silence answered, heavy and oppressive. Aurora pressed on, her heart pounding in her chest. The pendant glowed brighter, casting eerie shadows that danced along the trees. Then she saw it—a flicker of movement, a flash of pale skin against the dark bark. She froze, eyes wide. “Who’s there?” A figure stepped into the light, a woman with long, flowing hair that shimmered like moonlight. Her eyes glowed with an otherworldly light, piercing through the darkness. “Welcome, Aurora.” The woman’s voice was melodic, yet laced with something unsettling. Aurora’s breath caught. “Do I know you?” The woman smiled, but it didn’t reach her eyes. “You seek answers, do you not?” “I—” Aurora hesitated, the weight of the pendant growing heavier in her pocket. “I came for the Heartstone.” The woman tilted her head, studying her. “The Heartstone calls to you. It knows your heart’s desire.” A shiver ran down Aurora’s spine. “What do you know about it?” “More than you can imagine.” The woman stepped closer, her presence both alluring and terrifying. “But the grove holds secrets, and not all are meant to be uncovered.” Aurora took a step back, the pendant pulsing wildly now, as if warning her. “I need to know. I can’t go back without answers.” The woman’s smile faded, replaced by a look of pity. “Some truths are better left buried.” A rustle echoed from behind Aurora, and she spun around, heart racing. The shadows shifted, coalescing into shapes that loomed just beyond the trees. “Stay back!” she shouted, panic rising in her throat. The woman’s expression darkened. “You’ve disturbed the balance.” The shadows crept closer, their forms indistinct but menacing. Aurora’s instincts screamed at her to run, but her feet felt rooted to the ground. “Please,” she pleaded, clutching the pendant tightly. “I just want to understand.” The woman’s gaze softened for a moment, then hardened again. “Understanding comes at a price.” The shadows surged forward, and Aurora stumbled back, the pendant’s glow flickering. She turned, sprinting through the grove, branches clawing at her clothes. “Rory!” The woman’s voice echoed behind her, a haunting melody that chased her through the darkness. Aurora’s breath came in ragged gasps as she ran, the hum of the grove rising to a deafening crescendo. The shadows followed, whispering secrets she couldn’t comprehend. “Get out!” she shouted, desperation fueling her flight. The trees closed in, the path twisting and turning, disorienting her. She could feel the weight of unseen eyes upon her, the wrongness of the grove pressing down like a heavy fog. The pendant pulsed violently, a beacon in the dark. Aurora clutched it, willing it to guide her. “Please, show me the way!” The shadows lunged, and she ducked, narrowly avoiding their grasp. The grove felt alive, a labyrinth of fear and uncertainty. With one final push, she burst through the trees, the moonlight flooding her vision. She stumbled into the clearing, gasping for breath. But the grove didn’t release her. The shadows lingered at the edge, whispering her name, weaving their dark melody into the night. Aurora stood frozen, the Heartstone Pendant glowing fiercely in her hand, a reminder of the secrets that lay just beyond her reach.
total_cost0.0009739499999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1001
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1001
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count3
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"oppressive"
count1
16
word"pounding"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count1
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"otherworldly"
count1
20
word"desire"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count2
22
word"racing"
count1
23
word"could feel"
count1
24
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"reminder"
4"scanning"
5"raced"
6"whisper"
7"pulsed"
8"weight"
9"tension"
10"vibrated"
11"echoing"
12"silence"
13"chill"
14"resolve"
15"oppressive"
16"pounding"
17"flicker"
18"shimmered"
19"otherworldly"
20"desire"
21"echoed"
22"racing"
23"could feel"
24"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords997
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount872
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Silence1
Aurora15
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Silence"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.64
windowScore0.333
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"thrum that seemed to sync with her heartbeat"
1"as if urging her onward"
2"as if warning her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount997
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean21.21
std11.92
cv0.562
sampleLengths
057
150
210
337
47
538
618
738
835
913
1035
1112
1243
1323
1412
1531
168
1726
1820
192
2027
2112
227
2315
2418
2517
2612
2728
2824
2916
3024
319
328
3324
3412
3515
3623
3716
3827
398
4032
4117
425
4320
4422
4522
4622
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
82.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences94
ratio0.021
matches
0"She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—trailing her."
1"Then she saw it—a flicker of movement, a flash of pale skin against the dark bark."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount876
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0273972602739726
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0091324200913242
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean10.61
std4.66
cv0.44
sampleLengths
013
116
228
317
416
55
612
710
89
93
105
1111
129
137
1416
1510
1612
1718
1810
1912
2016
2111
2215
239
2413
258
266
2710
2811
2912
3012
3112
3219
336
3411
356
3612
3715
3816
398
405
419
4212
4316
444
452
4616
4711
4812
493
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3191489361702128
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners30
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Just the whisper of leaves,"
1"Then she saw it—a flicker"
ratio0.025
90.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences80
matches
0"She had come here seeking"
1"She paused, scanning the clearing."
2"she muttered, though the words"
3"She turned, but nothing emerged."
4"She took a deep breath,"
5"She reached for it, fingers"
6"she whispered, half to herself,"
7"She felt the weight of"
8"It vibrated through her bones,"
9"She squinted into the darkness,"
10"Her voice broke the silence,"
11"She strained to catch a"
12"she scolded herself, forcing her"
13"She followed its call, the"
14"She glanced over her shoulder,"
15"she whispered, though doubt gnawed"
16"It beckoned her deeper into"
17"she called, her voice trembling"
18"She froze, eyes wide."
19"Her eyes glowed with an"
ratio0.325
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences80
matches
0"Aurora stepped into The Fae"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She had come here seeking"
3"The moon hung low, casting"
4"Each step felt heavy, as"
5"She paused, scanning the clearing."
6"Shadows danced at the edges"
7"she muttered, though the words"
8"A rustle came from the"
9"Aurora’s heart raced."
10"She turned, but nothing emerged."
11"She took a deep breath,"
12"The pendant pulsed against her"
13"She reached for it, fingers"
14"The glow intensified, casting a"
15"she whispered, half to herself,"
16"The trees shifted, their branches"
17"Aurora stepped deeper into the"
18"She felt the weight of"
19"A low hum filled the"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
9.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She had come here seeking answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her…"
1"The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness."
2"Each step felt heavy, as if the ground beneath her was reluctant to let her pass."
3"The pendant pulsed against her thigh, a gentle thrum that seemed to sync with her heartbeat."
4"The glow intensified, casting a soft crimson light that illuminated her surroundings."
5"The trees closed in around her, their branches intertwining like fingers, creating a canopy that blocked out the stars."
6"A figure stepped into the light, a woman with long, flowing hair that shimmered like moonlight."
7"The shadows lingered at the edge, whispering her name, weaving their dark melody into the night."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she muttered, though the words felt hollow"
1"she whispered, half to herself, half to the grove"
2"she called, her voice trembling"
3"Aurora hesitated, the weight of the pendant growing heavier in her pocket"
4"The woman stepped, her presence both alluring and terrifying"
5"she shouted, desperation fueling her flight"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she scolded (scold)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she shouted (shout)"
5"she pleaded (plead)"
6"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.875
effectiveRatio0.519
72.8181%