Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZGHKMARAGT3M5CTKDFY4

Run Details

Duration:
28.8s
Cost:
$0.010168

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Lucien could knock a second time. Rory stood there, her black hair damp from the rain, a dish towel slung over her shoulder. The scent of ginger and garlic clung to her clothes. "You." Her bright blue eyes narrowed. "What the hell are you doing here?" Lucien adjusted his grip on the ivory handle of his cane. "Is that any way to greet an old friend?" "Friend?" She crossed her arms. "I don't recall us ever being friends." Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, wound between Rory's legs, tail flicking. She didn't look down. The deadbolts on the door behind her gleamed under the dim hallway light—three of them, all engaged. Lucien stepped forward, forcing her to retreat. The flat smelled of old paper and candle wax. Books teetered in stacks on every surface, some open, pages marked with sticky notes. A map of London's underground tunnels was pinned to the wall, red string connecting pushpins. "You're working with Eva again," he said. Not a question. Rory tossed the dish towel onto a chair. "That's none of your business." "It is when it involves things that go bump in the night." He tapped his cane against the floor. "You remember how that ended last time." Her fingers twitched at her sides. "I remember you walking away without a word." Silence stretched between them, thick as the dust motes swirling in the lamplight. Lucien exhaled through his nose. "I had my reasons." "Reasons you couldn't share? Not even a note?" She stepped closer, close enough that he caught the faint scent of her shampoo—something citrusy. "You just vanished. No explanation, no goodbye. Nothing." His jaw tightened. "Would you have listened if I'd tried to explain?" "I deserved the chance to decide that for myself." Ptolemy leapt onto the table, scattering a pile of scrolls. Rory didn't seem to notice. Her gaze remained locked on Lucien, unflinching. He set his cane against the wall and shrugged off his coat. "Fine. You want an explanation? Here it is. The last time we worked together, you nearly got yourself killed. Again. I wasn't about to stick around and watch it happen a third time." Her lips parted. "That's not—" "Fair? No, it wasn't. But neither is expecting me to stand by while you charge headfirst into danger like some kind of suicidal knight." He ran a hand through his slicked-back hair, disrupting the careful styling. "I told you before, Rory. You don't get to play the hero. Not in this world." She scoffed. "And you do?" "I know my limits. You don't." Her hands clenched into fists. "You don't get to decide what I can and can't handle." "Someone has to." He stepped forward, closing the distance between them. "Because you sure as hell won't." Rory didn't back down. Her chin lifted, defiance flashing in her eyes. "Get out." Lucien didn't move. "Not until you listen to me." "I don't have to listen to anything you say." "Then listen to this." His voice dropped, low and rough. "I'm here because Eva called me. Said you were digging into something you shouldn't. Something that's going to get you killed if you're not careful." Rory's breath hitched. "Eva had no right—" "She's worried about you. We both are." "We?" Her voice cracked. "There is no *we*, Lucien. There hasn't been for a long time." The words hung between them, sharp as broken glass. Lucien's chest tightened. He reached for her, his fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. She flinched but didn't pull away. "You're wrong," he said quietly. "There's always been a *we*. Even when you didn't want there to be." Rory's breath came faster. Her eyes searched his face, lingering on the heterochromatic gaze that marked him as something other. "Why now? After all this time, why show up now?" "Because I'm an idiot." His thumb traced the edge of her scar. "And because I couldn't stay away any longer." She swallowed hard. "This changes nothing." "Everything," he corrected. "It changes everything." The air between them crackled, charged with something neither of them dared to name. Lucien's hand slid up her arm, his fingers curling around the back of her neck. Her skin was warm, her pulse fluttering beneath his touch. Rory didn't move. Didn't breathe. "This is a mistake." "Probably." His voice was rough. "But I'm done pretending I don't want it." Her lips parted, but before she could speak, Lucien closed the distance between them. The kiss was rough, desperate, a collision of months of frustration and longing. Rory stiffened for a heartbeat before melting into him, her hands fisting in the lapels of his suit. The taste of her was familiar—mint and something sweet, like honey. Lucien groaned against her mouth, his free hand sliding down to grip her hip, pulling her flush against him. She gasped, her fingers tightening in his jacket. Ptolemy yowled from the table, knocking over a stack of books. The crash shattered the moment. Rory jerked back, her chest heaving. Her lips were swollen, her eyes wide. Lucien didn't let go. "Tell me to stop." She hesitated. Then, quieter, "I should." "But you won't." Her gaze dropped to his mouth. "No. I won't." He kissed her again, slower this time, savoring the way she arched into him. Her hands slid up his chest, her fingers tangling in his hair. Lucien's cane clattered to the floor as he backed her against the wall, his body pressing hers into the peeling wallpaper. Rory broke the kiss with a gasp. "We can't—" "We can." His lips trailed down her jaw, her throat. "And we will." Her fingers dug into his shoulders. "This doesn't fix anything." "Maybe not." His teeth grazed her collarbone. "But it's a start." She exhaled shakily, her head falling back against the wall. "Damn you, Lucien." He smirked against her skin. "You already have."
total_cost0.010168

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.036
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"disrupting"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"disrupting"
2"traced"
3"charged"
4"pulse"
5"familiar"
6"shattered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched into fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords982
ratio0.002
matches
0"we"
1"we"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount616
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien12
Ptolemy3
Eva1
Rory11
London1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.526
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount982
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean18.88
std13.18
cv0.698
sampleLengths
038
113
220
312
431
545
610
713
826
914
1022
1131
1212
139
1422
1545
165
1752
185
196
2016
2117
2214
239
249
2535
267
277
2816
2931
3018
3130
3220
336
346
3539
369
3713
3845
3938
4029
418
426
433
449
4547
469
4713
4810
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was pinned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
68.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences116
ratio0.026
matches
0"The deadbolts on the door behind her gleamed under the dim hallway light—three of them, all engaged."
1"\"Reasons you couldn't share? Not even a note?\" She stepped closer, close enough that he caught the faint scent of her shampoo—something citrusy."
2"The taste of her was familiar—mint and something sweet, like honey."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount621
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.017713365539452495
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.00322061191626409
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean8.47
std5.99
cv0.707
sampleLengths
011
117
210
36
47
511
69
75
87
910
104
1117
127
139
1414
1515
167
173
188
195
2019
217
226
238
2413
255
264
2723
288
293
309
319
3210
335
347
3512
3633
373
382
3936
4016
412
423
436
445
4511
4611
476
484
498
58.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.35344827586206895
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes narrowed"
1"She crossed her arms"
2"She didn't look down."
3"He tapped his cane against"
4"Her fingers twitched at her"
5"She stepped closer, close enough"
6"His jaw tightened."
7"Her gaze remained locked on"
8"He set his cane against"
9"Her lips parted."
10"He ran a hand through"
11"Her hands clenched into fists."
12"He stepped forward, closing the"
13"Her chin lifted, defiance flashing"
14"His voice dropped, low and"
15"Her voice cracked"
16"He reached for her, his"
17"She flinched but didn't pull"
18"he said quietly"
19"Her eyes searched his face,"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences70
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Rory stood there, her black"
2"The scent of ginger and"
3"Her bright blue eyes narrowed"
4"Lucien adjusted his grip on"
5"She crossed her arms"
6"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, wound"
7"She didn't look down."
8"The deadbolts on the door"
9"Lucien stepped forward, forcing her"
10"The flat smelled of old"
11"Books teetered in stacks on"
12"A map of London's underground"
13"Rory tossed the dish towel"
14"He tapped his cane against"
15"Her fingers twitched at her"
16"Silence stretched between them, thick"
17"Lucien exhaled through his nose."
18"She stepped closer, close enough"
19"His jaw tightened."
ratio0.986
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory stiffened for a heartbeat before melting into him, her hands fisting in the lapels of his suit."
1"Lucien groaned against her mouth, his free hand sliding down to grip her hip, pulling her flush against him."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.107
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.036
80.6242%