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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZJ5VGG59ETJYSYXVMFG0
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.005269
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
81.06%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
93.69%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
85.45%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
99.11%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
96.03%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
98.86%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
62.89%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
95.59%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.0894%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rory's finger hovered over the
buzzer, hesitating.
She took a deep breath
and pressed it before she could change her mind.
The door clicked open almost
instantly, as if he'd been waiting on the other side. "I was wondering when you'd show up." Lucien stood in the doorway, leaning on his cane. "Tea?"
His voice was guarded but
not unwelcoming. "How
very
British of you."
She stepped inside
. Same cramped flat, same musty book smell.
A stack of takeout containers
teetered on the edge of the coffee table. "You look good, Rory."
He limped to the kitchen
. "Cardiff treating you well?" "Can't complain."
She perched on the arm
of the sofa, trying to look casual. "Work's keeping me busy." "Mmm."
He reappeared with two steaming
mugs and held one out to her. "And Evan? How is the dear boy these days?" "Fuck off."
She took a sip, scalding
her tongue. "We're not doing this." "Doing what? Catching up with an old friend?" "We were never friends."
The mug shook in her
hands.
She set it down before
she spilled it. He shrugged. "Benefits then. Fine distinction." "This was a mistake."
She stood up
. "I shouldn't have come back." "And yet, here you are." He leaned against the wall, blocking her path to the door. "Why is that? Homesick? Miss me?" "I need your help."
It came out in a
rush. "I'm in trouble, Luc." "Ah."
He sipped his tea, considering
. "Of course you are. You always did have a talent for finding it. What's the flavor this time? Gambling debts? Jealous husband?" "Worse." She glanced at the window, dropped her voice. "It's Evan. He's back." He stilled. "I see." A pause. "And you think I can help you how, exactly?" "I need to disappear."
Her voice cracked
. "New identity. Papers. Passage out of the country. You have connections." "Very expensive connections."
He studied her over the
rim of his mug. "What are you offering in exchange?" "Anything." The word hung between them, heavy with meaning. "Whatever you want." "Dangerous thing to say to a desperate man, mon chèrie."
He smiled, a predatory flash
of teeth. "You sure about that?" "Desperate times."
Her hands fisted in her
pockets. "Please, Luc. I don't have anyone else." "How the mighty have fallen."
He finished his tea and
set the mug aside. "Alright. I'll make some calls." She exhaled shakily. "Thank you." A beat. "I mean it." "Mmm." He pushed off the wall, limped toward her. "I'm sure you do." He reached out, tugged a lock of her hair. "Just like old times." "Don't." She jerked back. "This doesn't change anything between us." "Doesn't it?" He closed the gap between them in one smooth step. "One could argue it changes everything." His hand slid around her waist, pulled her flush against him. "And you did say anything." "I didn't-" She
started to
protest but his mouth cut her off, hot and demanding. She froze, then kissed him back just as fiercely, angry and desperate. He broke away first, breathing hard. "Did you think of me?" His lips brushed her ear. "At night. Alone. Did you remember?" "Yes." She hated herself for it. "No. I don't know." "Were you hoping I'd chase after you?" His hands tightened on her hips. "Beg you to stay?" "I didn't want-" Her head fell back as he kissed her throat. "Liar." He bit down on the tendon in her neck, just hard enough to leave a mark. "You always did love the drama." "This is a mistake." But she was already tugging his shirt off, fingers clumsy with haste. "We shouldn't-" "Shut up, Rory." He wrestled her onto the couch, pinned her beneath him. "For once in your goddamn life, just shut up." He rocked against her, claiming her mouth again to muffle her reply. They scrabbled at each other's clothes with renewed urgency, popping buttons, ripping seams. When he finally pushed inside her, she was slick and scorching around him, nails digging crescents into his shoulders. "Fuck." He dropped his head to her collarbone, gasping. "Jesus. You feel-" "Move." She wrapped her legs around him, heels digging into the small of his back. "Just. Move." He did, thrusting deep and hard. The sofa springs creaked in protest. She met him stroke for stroke, urging him on with breathless demands, punctuated by the slap of flesh against flesh. Release built between them until it finally
shattered
, sending them both tumbling over the edge with twin cries.
Afterwards, they lay in a
sweaty tangle, trying to catch their breath. She ran a hand through her hair,
suddenly
shy. "Was that ‘anything' enough for you?" "Not even close." He rolled them so she
was sprawled
on top of him. "But it's a start."
created_at
"2026-02-19T10:43:54.689Z"
2/19/2026, 10:43:54 AM
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4591
tokens_completion
1201
native_tokens_prompt
4148
native_tokens_completion
1121
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native_tokens_reasoning
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0
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
34
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"She jerked back [back]"
1
"His hand slid around [around]"
dialogueSentences
69
tagDensity
0.493
leniency
0.986
rawRatio
0.059
effectiveRatio
0.058
81.06%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
792
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
2
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"suddenly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
93.69%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
792
totalAiIsms
1
found
0
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"shattered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
57
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
57
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
88
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
22
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
792
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
8
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
n/a
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
44
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
792
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
88
matches
(empty)
85.45%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
40
mean
19.8
std
8.89
cv
0.449
sampleLengths
0
36
1
24
2
28
3
13
4
18
5
22
6
13
7
8
8
18
9
6
10
12
11
22
12
14
13
28
14
13
15
15
16
18
17
18
18
12
19
21
20
15
21
19
22
10
23
26
24
10
25
34
26
27
27
22
28
10
29
17
30
12
31
23
32
18
33
34
34
32
35
12
36
17
37
50
38
27
39
18
99.11%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
57
matches
0
"was sprawled"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
97
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
88
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
96.03%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
494
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.044534412955465584
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.01417004048582996
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
88
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
88
mean
9
std
4.97
cv
0.552
sampleLengths
0
7
1
14
2
15
3
16
4
8
5
8
6
7
7
13
8
9
9
4
10
14
11
4
12
13
13
9
14
9
15
4
16
8
17
10
18
8
19
2
20
4
21
7
22
5
23
16
24
6
25
10
26
4
27
6
28
22
29
9
30
4
31
2
32
4
33
9
34
7
35
11
36
12
37
6
38
9
39
3
40
17
41
4
42
8
43
7
44
14
45
5
46
3
47
4
48
3
49
9
98.86%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.6477272727272727
totalSentences
88
uniqueOpeners
57
62.89%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"Afterwards, they lay in a"
ratio
0.019
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
41
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"She took a deep breath"
1
"His voice was guarded but"
2
"She stepped inside"
3
"He limped to the kitchen"
4
"She perched on the arm"
5
"He reappeared with two steaming"
6
"She took a sip, scalding"
7
"She set it down before"
8
"She stood up"
9
"He leaned against the wall,"
10
"It came out in a"
11
"He sipped his tea, considering"
12
"She glanced at the window,"
13
"Her voice cracked"
14
"He studied her over the"
15
"He smiled, a predatory flash"
16
"Her hands fisted in her"
17
"He finished his tea and"
18
"She exhaled shakily."
19
"He pushed off the wall,"
ratio
0.774
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
49
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"Rory's finger hovered over the"
1
"She took a deep breath"
2
"The door clicked open almost"
3
"Lucien stood in the doorway,"
4
"His voice was guarded but"
5
"She stepped inside"
6
"A stack of takeout containers"
7
"He limped to the kitchen"
8
"She perched on the arm"
9
"He reappeared with two steaming"
10
"She took a sip, scalding"
11
"The mug shook in her"
12
"She set it down before"
13
"She stood up"
14
"He leaned against the wall,"
15
"It came out in a"
16
"He sipped his tea, considering"
17
"She glanced at the window,"
18
"Her voice cracked"
19
"He studied her over the"
ratio
0.925
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
53
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
9
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
95.59%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
34
uselessAdditionCount
2
matches
0
"She perched, trying to look casual"
1
"She wrapped, heels digging into the small of his back"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"She started (start)"
dialogueSentences
69
tagDensity
0.014
leniency
0.029
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
0.029
87.0894%