Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZP66MFRKR1F5MHYSN342

Run Details

Duration:
14.0s
Cost:
$0.022250
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood in front of Eva's flat, her breath visible in the cold night air. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the door. The three deadbolts stared back at her, a reminder of the security Eva always insisted on. She took a deep breath and knocked. The sound of footsteps approached, and the door creaked open. Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic eyes widening in surprise. He looked as impeccably dressed as ever, his tailored charcoal suit fitting him like a second skin. The ivory-handled cane was in his hand, a constant companion. "Rory," he said, his voice a mix of surprise and something else she couldn't quite place. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. "I didn't expect to see you here." He stepped aside, allowing her to enter. "Eva's out for the evening. I'm watching Ptolemy." Aurora stepped into the cramped flat, the familiar scent of old books and curry filling her nostrils. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, rubbed against her leg, purring softly. She bent down to scratch behind his ears, using the moment to gather her thoughts. "How have you been?" Lucien asked, closing the door behind her. The sound of the deadbolts clicking into place echoed in the small space. "Busy," she replied, straightening up. "Work's been... demanding." He nodded, his eyes never leaving her face. "I heard about Evan." Her heart skipped a beat. "How?" "I have my ways," he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "You know that." She sighed, running a hand through her hair. "It's over. I'm done with him." "Good," Lucien said, his voice firm. "You deserve better." She looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the concern in his eyes. It was a look she hadn't seen in a long time, not since they had parted ways. The memories came flooding back, unbidden and unwelcome. "Why are you here, Lucien?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. He took a step closer, the distance between them shrinking. "I needed to see you." "Why now?" she demanded, her emotions bubbling to the surface. "After all this time, why now?" "Because I couldn't stay away any longer," he admitted, his voice raw with emotion. "I tried, Rory. I really did. But I can't." She felt a tear slip down her cheek, and she quickly wiped it away. "You hurt me, Lucien." "I know," he said, his voice breaking. "And I'm sorry. I never meant to." She shook her head, the pain still fresh despite the time that had passed. "You left without a word. You just disappeared." "I had to," he said, his eyes pleading for her to understand. "It was the only way to keep you safe." "Safe from what?" she asked, her voice rising. "From you?" "From my world," he said, his voice barely audible. "From the dangers that come with being with me." She took a step back, the weight of his words sinking in. "You think I can't handle it?" "No," he said, shaking his head. "I know you can. But I couldn't bear the thought of you getting hurt because of me." She looked at him, her heart aching. "You don't get to make that decision for me." "I know," he said, his voice filled with regret. "And I'm sorry." They stood there in silence, the weight of their past hanging heavy in the air. Ptolemy meowed, breaking the tension. Aurora bent down to pick him up, cradling the cat in her arms. "I don't know if I can trust you again," she said, her voice soft. "I understand," Lucien said, his eyes filled with pain. "But I'm willing to do whatever it takes to earn your trust back." She looked at him, searching his face for any sign of deception. All she saw was sincerity and regret. She wanted to believe him, but the wounds were still too fresh. "Why should I give you another chance?" she asked, her voice trembling. "Because I love you," he said, his voice unwavering. "And I can't imagine my life without you." Her heart skipped a beat at his words. She had waited so long to hear them, but now that they were finally spoken, she didn't know how to respond. "I need time," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I'll wait," he said, his eyes never leaving hers. "For as long as it takes." She nodded, the weight of their past still heavy on her shoulders. "I should go." "Stay," he said, his voice filled with desperation. "Please." She looked at him, her heart torn. She wanted to stay, to believe that they could make things right. But the pain was still too fresh, the wounds too deep. "I can't," she said, her voice breaking. "Not yet." He nodded, his eyes filled with understanding. "I understand." She turned to leave, her heart heavy. As she reached the door, she paused, looking back at him. "Goodnight, Lucien," she said, her voice soft. "Goodnight, Rory," he replied, his voice filled with longing. She stepped out into the cold night air, the door closing behind her. The weight of their past still hung heavy on her shoulders, but for the first time in a long time, she felt a glimmer of hope.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:43:58.795Z" 2/19/2026, 10:43:58 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.943
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount883
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount883
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"skipped a beat"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"weight"
count4
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"footsteps"
2"familiar"
3"echoed"
4"skipped a beat"
5"whisper"
6"weight"
7"silence"
8"tension"
9"unwavering"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
1"a glimmer of hope"
61.87% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences66
matches
0"g in surprise"
1"filled with regret"
2"d with regret"
3"filled with longing"
4"d with longing"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords882
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount644
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Lucien4
Aurora3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount882
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"believe that they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean19.17
std10.33
cv0.539
sampleLengths
046
146
216
318
415
542
624
78
812
96
1018
1114
129
1340
1413
1515
1616
1723
1818
1914
2022
2121
2210
2318
2418
2523
2616
2712
2833
2914
3022
3131
3212
3317
3429
3511
3615
3715
389
3930
409
419
4218
437
449
4539
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences94
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount645
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.037209302325581395
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012403100775193798
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean9.38
std4.5
cv0.479
sampleLengths
015
18
216
37
410
59
617
710
816
911
107
117
128
1317
1410
1515
1611
1713
185
193
208
214
225
231
2415
253
268
276
286
293
3015
3117
328
3313
3410
355
3610
376
3814
399
4014
414
427
437
4414
458
4612
479
488
492
50.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3404255319148936
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences66
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
1"She took a deep breath"
2"He looked as impeccably dressed"
3"he said, his voice a"
4"she replied, her voice steady"
5"He stepped aside, allowing her"
6"She bent down to scratch"
7"she replied, straightening up"
8"He nodded, his eyes never"
9"Her heart skipped a beat."
10"he said, a hint of"
11"She sighed, running a hand"
12"She looked at him, really"
13"It was a look she"
14"she asked, her voice barely"
15"He took a step closer,"
16"she demanded, her emotions bubbling"
17"he admitted, his voice raw"
18"She felt a tear slip"
19"he said, his voice breaking"
ratio0.727
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences66
matches
0"Aurora stood in front of"
1"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
2"The three deadbolts stared back"
3"She took a deep breath"
4"The sound of footsteps approached,"
5"Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic"
6"He looked as impeccably dressed"
7"The ivory-handled cane was in"
8"he said, his voice a"
9"she replied, her voice steady"
10"He stepped aside, allowing her"
11"Aurora stepped into the cramped"
12"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, rubbed"
13"She bent down to scratch"
14"Lucien asked, closing the door"
15"The sound of the deadbolts"
16"she replied, straightening up"
17"He nodded, his eyes never"
18"Her heart skipped a beat."
19"he said, a hint of"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount16
matches
0"she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
1"he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips"
2"Lucien said, his voice firm"
3"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she demanded, her emotions bubbling to the surface"
5"he admitted, his voice raw with emotion"
6"he said, his voice breaking"
7"he said, his eyes pleading for her to understand"
8"she asked, her voice rising"
9"he said, his voice barely audible"
10"she said, her voice soft"
11"she asked, her voice trembling"
12"he said, his voice unwavering"
13"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
14"she said, her voice breaking"
15"she said, her voice soft"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.943
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.075
75.3326%