| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Oak trunks arranged almost [almost]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 86.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "hungrily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "resolving" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1107 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1057 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.47 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 5 | | Eva | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Standing | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Grinding | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Standing" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 83.33% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if daring her to move" | | 1 | "as if trying to keep her here for someone else" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.613 | | wordCount | 1107 | | matches | | 0 | "not from exertion but from the clinging sense" | | 1 | "Not enough to burn, but enough to warn" | | 2 | "Not living, but entangling all the same, clinging to her boots as if trying" | | 3 | "not in a breeze but in answer to a command" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 30.75 | | std | 18.41 | | cv | 0.599 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The so-called map in her hand – Eva’s scrawled lines and cryptic landmarks – had led her further from the city’s faint sodium glow and deeper into the flinty hush of Richmond Park than she’d ever dared alone." | | 1 | "The clearing within pulsed against her skin—too still, air thick with green scents and something bitter underneath." | | 2 | "Not a branch; a sound less organic, a brittle click echoing unnatural precision." | | 3 | "No wind shifted the wildflowers – bluebells, foxgloves, moon-pale primroses nodding unbruised in the hush." | | 4 | "A low, rhythmic tapping – like knuckles brushing glass, barely heard but impossible to ignore." | | 5 | "Limbs too long, draped in something shifting—more like cobwebs than clothing." | | 6 | "All that training, all those hours in Cardiff running moot courts and telling herself logic solved everything—useless now." | | 7 | "Not food – it wanted something else." | | 8 | "Something gleamed in those fingers—a locket?" | | 9 | "Heat slid through her veins; the smell of burnt ozone flared." | | 10 | "A shriek, high and keening, burst across the clearing as the pendant glowed—crimson lighting up the figure’s blank face." |
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| 74.08% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 158 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.06962025316455696 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0189873417721519 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 9.38 | | std | 7.5 | | cv | 0.8 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 60.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3898305084745763 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the crunch of her" | | 1 | "Just drop the parcel, snap" | | 2 | "Somewhere behind her, something snapped." | | 3 | "All that training, all those" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She staggered, swearing softly, only" | | 1 | "Her heart hammered from the" | | 2 | "She checked her phone." | | 3 | "She stepped over the nearest" | | 4 | "She laid the parcel on" | | 5 | "She pocketed her phone again." | | 6 | "She scanned the ring of" | | 7 | "Her ears thudded with her" | | 8 | "It hadn’t been there a" | | 9 | "Her chest constricted." | | 10 | "She blinked, but the thing" | | 11 | "She stepped back, every instinct" | | 12 | "She tugged free, nearly losing" | | 13 | "She spoke, the sound a" | | 14 | "Her thoughts tumbled." | | 15 | "Her own shadow loomed on" | | 16 | "She moved to leave, foot" | | 17 | "She reached the stone boundary" | | 18 | "It stood directly in front" | | 19 | "It extended an arm, joint" |
| | ratio | 0.263 | |
| 86.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Roots snagged Aurora’s boot heel." | | 1 | "She staggered, swearing softly, only" | | 2 | "Her heart hammered from the" | | 3 | "The so-called map in her" | | 4 | "She checked her phone." | | 5 | "The grove's entrance revealed itself" | | 6 | "Oak trunks arranged almost artfully," | | 7 | "The clearing within pulsed against" | | 8 | "Soap and wild garlic, cut" | | 9 | "She stepped over the nearest" | | 10 | "The pendant at her throat," | | 11 | "Aurora forced herself to walk" | | 12 | "That had not been a" | | 13 | "She laid the parcel on" | | 14 | "Camera app up." | | 15 | "A shadow flickered across the" | | 16 | "The corner of her vision" | | 17 | "She pocketed her phone again." | | 18 | "A low, rhythmic tapping –" | | 19 | "She scanned the ring of" |
| | ratio | 0.747 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Not even the stuttering bars that flickered desperately through the yew trees near the park’s southern edge." | | 1 | "She blinked, but the thing remained, swaying fractionally in the non-existent breeze, as if daring her to move." | | 2 | "Not living, but entangling all the same, clinging to her boots as if trying to keep her here for someone else." | | 3 | "Something inside the creature’s form shimmered, like moonlight glancing off water, then the illusion snapped and all she could see was a hunger that did not bel…" | | 4 | "Rory fell screaming into the darkness below as the woods above closed over her, the stones ringing with that unearthly tapping, the pendant at her throat searin…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the parcel snap (the parcel snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |