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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZSTTG9NJGMZ6SF7V5PY1
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 2.5 72B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.001123
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
94.94%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
0.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
33.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
92.62%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
44.56%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
30.03%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
93.87%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.54%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
76.1299%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The rain came down in
sheets, each drop a tiny dagger against Detective Harlow Quinn's windbreaker.
Her breath fogged in the
cold air, and her
footsteps
echoed
off the soaked cobblestones.
She kept her eyes locked
on the fleeing figure, a dark silhouette darting between the shadows of Soho's narrow streets.
Her worn leather watch clicked
on her wrist with the precision of a metronome, a silent
reminder
of the time it had taken for her to get here.
Tomás Herrera had always been
a step ahead, but tonight, she would close the gap.
The scar running along his
forearm, a
testament
to his past, wouldn't protect him from the harsh realities of the law.
She had spent the last
three years piecing together the puzzle of DS Morris's disappearance, and every clue led her back to Herrera and his
clandestine
connections.
Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as
she rounded a corner, the suspect vanish into the mouth of an alley. She followed, her movements precise, each step
calculated
.
The alley was a labyrinth
of garbage bins and overflowing gutters, the stench of decay mingling with the scent of wet asphalt. She paused at the end, her eyes
scanning
the darkness. There, a
flicker
of movement. He was close. "Tomás, stop!"
Her voice cut through the
rain, a command that demanded attention. But Herrera didn't break his pace.
Instead, he veered left, ducking
into a doorway.
Quinn followed, her hand instinctively
reaching for her service weapon, the
weight
of it a
comforting
presence in the chaos.
The doorway led to a
dimly lit stairwell, the walls stained with years of neglect.
The air grew colder, the
scent of mold and damp earth overwhelming.
Quinn's boots thudded on the
concrete steps, the
echo
of her pursuit a relentless drumbeat.
She rounded a landing, her
eyes locking onto Herrera's retreating form as he disappeared through a metal door at the bottom. She hesitated for a moment, her hand on the doorknob. The Veil Market. The name
sent a shiver down
her spine.
It was a place of
whispers and shadows, a haven for those who dabbled in the dark arts. But it was also a lead, a
potential
breakthrough in a case that had haunted her for years. Quinn took a deep breath and pushed open the door. The air inside
was stifling
, a thick miasma of incense and damp soil. The room was vast, a cavernous space illuminated by flickering candles and the occasional flash of neon light. The walls
were lined
with stalls, each one a treasure trove of bizarre and forbidden items. The air buzzed with the murmur of hushed conversations and the clink of coins changing hands. Herrera moved swiftly through the crowd, his dark coat parting a sea of curious onlookers. Quinn kept a respectful distance, her eyes
scanning
the faces around her. The market was a melting pot of the supernatural, a place where the line between the mundane and the magical blurred.
She saw vampires with piercing
eyes, witches with skin like
porcelain
, and creatures whose origins defied imagination. "Looking for something, Detective?" A voice beside her made her start.
She turned to find a
woman with silver eyes and a sardonic smile. "Or someone." "Tomás Herrera,"
Quinn replied, her hand tightening on her weapon
. "Have you seen him?" The woman's eyes
flicked
to something beyond Quinn's shoulder. "He's got a knack for slipping through the cracks. But if you're quick, you might catch him." Quinn nodded her thanks and pushed through the crowd, her gaze fixed on Herrera's retreating form.
He was heading towards a
dimly lit corner, the air heavy with the scent of incense and the subtle crackle of magic.
She followed, her footsteps muffled
by the thick carpet of the market floor. "Herrera, stop!"
she called again, her voice
a sharp command. This time, he paused, turning to face her. The candlelight cast deep shadows across his face, the scar on his forearm a
stark
contrast to his olive skin. "You shouldn't have followed me here,"
he said, his voice low
and steady. "This isn't your world, Detective." Quinn raised her weapon, the barrel steady. "I don't care about your world. I just want answers. What happened to DS Morris?" Herrera's eyes darkened, a mix of sorrow and defiance. "You wouldn't understand. This is more than just a missing person case. It's about survival." "Survival?" Quinn's grip on the gun tightened. "Explain." Herrera took a step closer, his gaze
unwavering
. "Morris was mixed up in something he shouldn't have been. Something that cost him his life. And if you keep digging, it will cost you yours too." Quinn's mind
raced
, the pieces of the puzzle beginning to shift into place. "What are you involved in, Herrera? What are you protecting?" Herrera sighed, his shoulders sagging with the
weight
of his secrets. "I'm protecting the people who can't protect themselves. The ones who fall through the cracks. The ones who need someone to
watch
their back." Quinn lowered her weapon, her brow
furrowed
in thought. "Why are you telling me this now?" "Because you're here,"
Herrera replied, his voice softening
. "Because you're not like the others. You see the edges, the places where the lines blur. And you want to understand." Quinn's gaze
flicked
around the market, the whispers and shadows a constant
reminder
of the dangers that lurked. "What do you want from me?" Herrera's eyes met hers, a quiet determination in his gaze. "I want you to see the truth. To understand that sometimes, the law isn't enough. Sometimes, you have to make a choice. A choice that might seem wrong, but is the only way to protect the ones you care about." Quinn's mind was a whirlwind of conflicting thoughts.
She had always prided herself
on following the rules, on doing what was right. But the case of DS Morris, the unexplained phenomena, the whispers of the supernatural—none of it fit neatly into the black and white of the law. She took a deep breath, her decision forming. "Lead me to the truth,"
she said, her voice steady
. "I'll decide from there." Herrera nodded, a small smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "Follow me." He turned and led her deeper into the market, the crowd parting like water around a stone. Quinn followed, her senses on high alert. The market was a maze, each turn revealing new wonders and dangers. She saw stalls selling enchanted potions, others offering whispered information for a price.
The air was thick with
the hum of power, a force that
pulsed
through the
very
foundations of the place. They came to a halt at a hidden door, the entrance concealed behind a
tapestry
of ancient symbols. Herrera pushed it open, revealing a narrow passage that led deeper into the bowels of the market. Quinn hesitated, her hand on the hilt of her weapon. But something in Herrera's eyes, a mix of
resolve
and compassion, convinced her to take the step. The passage was dark, the only light coming from the faint glow of bioluminescent fungi growing on the walls. They moved in
silence
, the only sound their
footsteps
and the distant
echo
of the market above. Quinn's senses
were heightened
, every fiber of her being on edge. They emerged into a small, dimly lit room.
The air was thick with
the scent of incense and the murmur of ancient incantations. At the center of the room stood a man, his presence commanding. He was older, his eyes a deep, piercing blue, his hair a silver-white cascade over his shoulders. He turned to face them, his gaze locking onto Quinn. "Welcome, Detective Quinn,"
he said, his voice smooth and dangerous
. "I've been expecting you." Quinn's hand tightened on her weapon, her instincts telling her to be wary. "Who are you?" "I am Silas,"
he replied, his voice a smooth as silk
. "The keeper of the Veil Market. And the one who can give you the answers you seek." Quinn's gaze
flicked
to Herrera, who gave a slight nod. "What do you know about DS Morris?" Silas's eyes darkened, a shadow of a smile playing on his lips. "Morris was a good man, but he was in over his head. He stumbled upon something he shouldn't have, something that put him on a path from which there was no return." Quinn's
heart pounded in her chest
, the pieces of the puzzle clicking into place. "What did he find?" Silas's smile faltered, a hint of regret in his eyes. "He found the truth. The truth about the supernatural forces that govern this city. Forces that are beyond the reach of your laws. Forces that will stop at nothing to protect their secrets." Quinn's mind reeled, the implications of his words sinking in. "What are you talking about?" Silas leaned forward, his eyes boring into hers. "There are powers at work here, Detective. Powers that have been hidden from the world for centuries. Morris uncovered one of their secrets, and it cost him his life. If you continue down this path, it will cost you yours as well." Quinn's hand
trembled
,
the weight of his words
heavy in the
silence
. "Why are you telling me this?" "Because you're different,"
Silas replied, his voice softening
. "You have the
potential
to see beyond the veil, to understand the truths that others cannot. But you must be careful. The path you walk is dangerous, and the choices you make will have consequences." Quinn's gaze shifted to Herrera, who met her eyes with a steady, supportive look. She took a deep breath, her
resolve
strengthening. "I need to know the truth. I need to understand what happened to Morris." Silas nodded, a hint of approval in his eyes. "Then I will show you." He gestured to a table in the corner, where a book lay open, its pages yellowed with age. "This is the journal of DS Morris. It contains everything he discovered, the truths he uncovered." Quinn approached the table, her heart
pounding
as she picked up the journal. The pages
were filled
with Morris's neat handwriting, each entry a piece of the puzzle she had been trying to solve. She flipped through the pages, the words a mix of information and speculation. But there, at the end, was a name written in bold letters: Silas. Quinn's
eyes widened
, the realization dawning on her. "You were the one he was investigating. You're the one who killed him." Silas's eyes darkened, a cold smile playing on his lips. "You are perceptive, Detective. But you are also naive. Morris was a threat to the balance. He was uncovering secrets that should have remained hidden. I had
no choice but
to
silence
him." Quinn's hand tightened on the journal, her mind
racing
. "You're admitting to murder." "I am admitting to what was necessary,"
Silas replied, his voice steely
. "The forces I control are ancient, and they will not be tampered with. You can choose to walk away now, or you can continue down this path and face the consequences." Quinn's gaze
flicked
to Herrera, who nodded in silent support. She took a deep breath, her
resolve
hardening. "I won't back down. I will find the truth, no matter the cost." Silas's smile faltered, a hint of respect in his eyes. "Then so be it. But remember, Detective, the path you walk is not one for the faint of heart. Tread
carefully
." Quinn nodded, her mind made up. She turned to Herrera, a steely determination in her eyes. "Let's go." They left the room, Silas's words
echoing
in Quinn's mind. The market was a place of shadows and secrets, a world where the lines between right and wrong
were blurred
. But she had a mission, a promise to keep. And she would see it through, no matter the cost.
created_at
"2026-02-19T10:44:02.546Z"
2/19/2026, 10:44:02 AM
model
"qwen/qwen-2.5-72b-instruct"
app_id
182717
external_user
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streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
393
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
62684
tokens_prompt
1162
tokens_completion
2925
native_tokens_prompt
1007
native_tokens_completion
2569
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.00112275
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"8b6b26e9-621a-4b31-b55a-c9aaa7482ede"
id
"cmpl-d07a23e1ddd7407183bcf52fe869f261"
is_byok
false
latency
58
model_permaslug
"qwen/qwen-2.5-72b-instruct"
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771497842-jgaAP0jZFXPe6qBfT5Md"
upstream_id
"cmpl-d07a23e1ddd7407183bcf52fe869f261"
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0
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences
49
tagDensity
0.224
leniency
0.449
rawRatio
0.091
effectiveRatio
0.041
94.94%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1977
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
1
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"carefully"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1977
totalAiIsms
44
found
0
word
"footsteps"
count
3
1
word
"echoed"
count
1
2
word
"reminder"
count
2
3
word
"testament"
count
1
4
word
"clandestine"
count
1
5
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
6
word
"calculated"
count
1
7
word
"scanning"
count
2
8
word
"flicker"
count
1
9
word
"weight"
count
3
10
word
"comforting"
count
1
11
word
"echo"
count
2
12
word
"down her spine"
count
1
13
word
"potential"
count
2
14
word
"porcelain"
count
1
15
word
"flicked"
count
4
16
word
"stark"
count
1
17
word
"unwavering"
count
1
18
word
"raced"
count
1
19
word
"furrowed"
count
1
20
word
"pulsed"
count
1
21
word
"tapestry"
count
1
22
word
"resolve"
count
3
23
word
"silence"
count
3
24
word
"silk"
count
1
25
word
"trembled"
count
1
26
word
"pounding"
count
1
27
word
"racing"
count
1
28
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"footsteps"
1
"echoed"
2
"reminder"
3
"testament"
4
"clandestine"
5
"jaw clenched"
6
"calculated"
7
"scanning"
8
"flicker"
9
"weight"
10
"comforting"
11
"echo"
12
"down her spine"
13
"potential"
14
"porcelain"
15
"flicked"
16
"stark"
17
"unwavering"
18
"raced"
19
"furrowed"
20
"pulsed"
21
"tapestry"
22
"resolve"
23
"silence"
24
"silk"
25
"trembled"
26
"pounding"
27
"racing"
28
"echoing"
0.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
7
maxInWindow
5
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
2
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
3
label
"air was thick with"
count
2
4
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
5
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"eyes widened"
2
"jaw clenched"
3
"The air was thick with"
4
"the weight of his words"
5
"sent a shiver down"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
111
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
111
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
147
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
42
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1975
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
17
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
33.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
67
wordCount
1394
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
2.22
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
4
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective
1
Harlow
1
Quinn
31
Soho
1
Herrera
18
Morris
3
Veil
1
Market
1
Silas
10
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Herrera"
3
"Morris"
4
"Silas"
places
0
"Soho"
1
"Market"
globalScore
0.388
windowScore
0.333
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
104
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.506
wordCount
1975
matches
0
"no choice but"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
147
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
53
mean
37.26
std
18.94
cv
0.508
sampleLengths
0
79
1
63
2
66
3
47
4
63
5
57
6
73
7
65
8
26
9
14
10
26
11
51
12
38
13
18
14
22
15
24
16
8
17
35
18
23
19
35
20
16
21
29
22
24
23
50
24
56
25
14
26
14
27
69
28
62
29
47
30
62
31
14
32
16
33
28
34
17
35
44
36
18
37
43
38
15
39
50
40
18
41
43
42
36
43
48
44
60
45
21
46
43
47
13
48
43
49
31
92.62%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"were lined"
1
"were heightened"
2
"were filled"
3
"were blurred"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
204
matches
0
"was stifling"
1
"was heading"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
1
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
147
ratio
0.007
matches
0
"But the case of DS Morris, the unexplained phenomena, the whispers of the supernatural—none of it fit neatly into the black and white of the law."
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1396
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"deep, piercing blue, his"
adverbCount
18
adverbRatio
0.012893982808022923
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.0071633237822349575
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
147
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
147
mean
13.44
std
7.44
cv
0.554
sampleLengths
0
16
1
15
2
20
3
28
4
15
5
21
6
27
7
18
8
8
9
22
10
10
11
5
12
3
13
13
14
6
15
8
16
20
17
15
18
12
19
15
20
21
21
10
22
3
23
8
24
18
25
18
26
10
27
13
28
18
29
16
30
16
31
15
32
12
33
21
34
17
35
11
36
13
37
2
38
10
39
4
40
9
41
17
42
16
43
22
44
13
45
10
46
8
47
20
48
13
49
5
44.56%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.22448979591836735
totalSentences
147
uniqueOpeners
33
30.03%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"Instead, he veered left, ducking"
ratio
0.009
93.87%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
35
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"Her breath fogged in the"
1
"She kept her eyes locked"
2
"Her worn leather watch clicked"
3
"She had spent the last"
4
"She followed, her movements precise,"
5
"She paused at the end,"
6
"He was close."
7
"Her voice cut through the"
8
"She rounded a landing, her"
9
"She hesitated for a moment,"
10
"It was a place of"
11
"She saw vampires with piercing"
12
"She turned to find a"
13
"He was heading towards a"
14
"She followed, her footsteps muffled"
15
"she called again, her voice"
16
"he said, his voice low"
17
"She had always prided herself"
18
"She took a deep breath,"
19
"she said, her voice steady"
ratio
0.315
0.54%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
102
totalSentences
111
matches
0
"The rain came down in"
1
"Her breath fogged in the"
2
"She kept her eyes locked"
3
"Her worn leather watch clicked"
4
"Tomás Herrera had always been"
5
"The scar running along his"
6
"She had spent the last"
7
"Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as"
8
"She followed, her movements precise,"
9
"The alley was a labyrinth"
10
"She paused at the end,"
11
"There, a flicker of movement."
12
"He was close."
13
"Her voice cut through the"
14
"Quinn followed, her hand instinctively"
15
"The doorway led to a"
16
"The air grew colder, the"
17
"Quinn's boots thudded on the"
18
"She rounded a landing, her"
19
"She hesitated for a moment,"
ratio
0.919
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
111
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
73
technicalSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"She rounded a landing, her eyes locking onto Herrera's retreating form as he disappeared through a metal door at the bottom."
1
"Herrera pushed it open, revealing a narrow passage that led deeper into the bowels of the market."
2
"Quinn's gaze shifted to Herrera, who met her eyes with a steady, supportive look."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
11
uselessAdditionCount
9
matches
0
"Quinn replied, her hand tightening on her weapon"
1
"she called again, her voice a sharp command"
2
"he said, his voice low and steady"
3
"Herrera replied, his voice softening"
4
"she said, her voice steady"
5
"he said, his voice smooth and dangerous"
6
"he replied, his voice a smooth as silk"
7
"Silas replied, his voice softening"
8
"Silas replied, his voice steely"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
49
tagDensity
0.184
leniency
0.367
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
76.1299%