| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.258 | | leniency | 0.516 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "quivered" | | 4 | "fluttered" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "mechanical" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "reverberated" | | 16 | "scanned" | | 17 | "flicked" | | 18 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1371 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1041 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 20 | | Eva | 9 | | Nyx | 8 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Seer | 1 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Grove" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.539 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 23.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile, not quite pity" | | 1 | "not quite pity" | | 2 | "as if ushering her onward" | | 3 | "seemed older than memory, but the flowers at their base looked new-hatched, burning too bright" | | 4 | "as if flinging water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.729 | | wordCount | 1371 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 34.28 | | std | 17.86 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 66 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 51 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.191 | | matches | | 0 | "Her trainers pressed soft earth—a crescent moon stamped in shadow, swallowed at once by burgeoning wildflowers that shouldn’t have bloomed." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant full against her chest gave off barely perceptible warmth, nothing more—no Hel portal here, only the subtle, wrong-side-of-the-looking-glass shimmer where sunlight bent strangely around the trees." | | 2 | "The living shadow stretched tall—elongated, limbs whispering like smoke—and their eyes glowed violet beneath a drifting cowl of nothingness." | | 3 | "“You stand in the threshold.” Their mouth formed silhouettes more than words; Aurora heard them more than she listened." | | 4 | "She didn’t say which path—no trail marked through the sea of clover and tiny bluebells, only faint impressions where sun slid along bark in deliberate, spiralling patterns." | | 5 | "Aurora caught a flicker of movement—translucent moths, wings like thin parchment, whirled above." | | 6 | "Her pulse snagged; Eva’s breath stuttered near her shoulder." | | 7 | "Aurora’s gaze snagged on a sigil—a circle within a spiral—before it flowed into another." | | 8 | "Nyx’s shadow split—one stretch of darkness leaked along Isolde’s skirt, twisting between roots." | | 9 | "A breeze sighed across the grove, bringing scents that defied sense—autumn spice, fresh rain, hot sugar, new-cut grass all at once." | | 10 | "She checked her wrist; the crescent-scar there glowed faint under the eerie light." | | 11 | "Every living thing shimmered around the edge—tree trunks seemed older than memory, but the flowers at their base looked new-hatched, burning too bright." | | 12 | "She scanned tree after tree, hunting for a hint—a way into concrete knowledge." | | 13 | "A far-off bell tolled—one, two, three soft chimes." | | 14 | "Something glinted—strange, unnatural, like broken glass pressed into loam." | | 15 | "“Within the heart, the oldest root runs deepest. Dig where shadows gather longest; what is oldest endures, what endures, remembers.”" | | 16 | "The world swayed, colours unpeeling like scales across her vision; sun and moon flickered on leaves." | | 17 | "For a dizzy second, she tasted copper and thunder; then something clicked—an invitation and a warning, folded together." | | 18 | "The stone split along a hair-thin seam; inside, an impossible hollow shone with dim light." | | 19 | "Something ancient moved within—breath or sigh or memory." | | 20 | "The Grove paused—petals, butterflies, even air suspending—waiting for her next move." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1075 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.035348837209302326 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0065116279069767444 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 12.46 | | std | 5.68 | | cv | 0.456 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 55.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Her trainers pressed soft earth—a" | | 1 | "She tried for dry, but" | | 2 | "Their mouth formed silhouettes more" | | 3 | "She squinted between the trunks," | | 4 | "She didn’t say which path—no" | | 5 | "She moved forward, toes brushing" | | 6 | "Her heart ticked double-time." | | 7 | "Her pulse snagged; Eva’s breath" | | 8 | "She startled at something brushing" | | 9 | "She glanced down to see" | | 10 | "She checked her wrist; the" | | 11 | "She scanned tree after tree," | | 12 | "She angled her head, silver" | | 13 | "She leapt back, shooting Aurora" | | 14 | "She swatted another from her" | | 15 | "She crouched, blade ready, only" | | 16 | "She stepped toward a crooked" | | 17 | "She braced herself, fingers tightening" |
| | ratio | 0.209 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter shifted her grip" | | 1 | "The blade’s surface caught odd" | | 2 | "Her trainers pressed soft earth—a" | | 3 | "Eva’s voice hovered at her" | | 4 | "Aurora peered back, catching her" | | 5 | "She tried for dry, but" | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant full against" | | 7 | "Everything quivered at the edge" | | 8 | "Nyx surged from a patch" | | 9 | "The living shadow stretched tall—elongated," | | 10 | "Their mouth formed silhouettes more" | | 11 | "Eva tried to mask flinching." | | 12 | "She squinted between the trunks," | | 13 | "Nyx’s laughter fluttered like moths." | | 14 | "Aurora muttered, quick, a private" | | 15 | "She didn’t say which path—no" | | 16 | "She moved forward, toes brushing" | | 17 | "Her heart ticked double-time." | | 18 | "The grove shifted around her," | | 19 | "Every step erased the mechanical" |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Her trainers pressed soft earth—a crescent moon stamped in shadow, swallowed at once by burgeoning wildflowers that shouldn’t have bloomed." | | 1 | "A breeze sighed across the grove, bringing scents that defied sense—autumn spice, fresh rain, hot sugar, new-cut grass all at once." | | 2 | "A small toad, stripes of turquoise and rose, hopped through damp moss and croaked once, an echo that reverberated through Aurora’s bones." | | 3 | "A band of blue light traced itself along the trunks, pooling into floating motes that buzzed past Aurora’s face." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She tried, but her voice betrayed awe" | | 1 | "She squinted, uncertain" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their shadow drawing close, protective" | | 3 | "She swatted, breath flickering, panic close" |
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| 85.48% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.065 | | leniency | 0.129 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |