| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 80.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 787 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 787 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
| | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "sent shivers down" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "macabre" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "solace" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "dance" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "skipped a beat" | | 15 | "looming" | | 16 | "sentinels" | | 17 | "firmly" | | 18 | "tension" | | 19 | "sent shivers down" | | 20 | "echoing" | | 21 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 13 | | narrationSentences | 36 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 790 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "With a shiver, she continued on, her senses heightened as she scanned the surroundings for any sign of movement." | | 1 | "Her mind was playing tricks on her, she told herself firmly, but the doubt was already there, gnawing at the edges of he…" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 789 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 7 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite put her finger on – a tingling in the back of her mind, like the whispered promise of a threat yet to materialize" | | 1 | "murmur that seemed to come from all around her, like the faint echo of a long-forgotten voice" | | 2 | "seemed different tonight, the beat of the Heartstone faster, more urgent, like a warning she couldn't decipher" | | 3 | "bloom that seemed to suffocate her" | | 4 | "word that seemed to reverberate through the air" | | 5 | "murmur that seemed to take on a new, even more ominous tone" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 790 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.48% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 56.43 | | std | 20.8 | | cv | 0.369 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 86 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 81 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 41 |
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| 85.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | | 0 | "been drawn" | | 1 | "was headed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "was playing" | | 1 | "was calling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 37 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a feeling she couldn't quite put her finger on – a tingling in the back of her mind, like the whispered promise of a threat yet to materialize." | | 1 | "An hour inside the grove could be minutes or days outside – she might be trapped in this macabre dance for an eternity." | | 2 | "As she turned to continue walking, Rory caught a glimpse of something out of the corner of her eye – a flash of movement, like a shadow darting across the periphery of her vision." | | 3 | "Rory's breath caught in her throat as the sound seemed to take on a pattern, like the low, raspy murmur had coalesced into a single word – a soft, whispery call that sent shivers down her spine." |
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| 99.38% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 786 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.04071246819338423 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011450381679389313 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 37 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 91.21% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 37 | | mean | 21.35 | | std | 8.07 | | cv | 0.378 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 22 |
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| 62.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.40540540540540543 | | totalSentences | 37 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 92.59% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, the whisper began to" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 97.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | | 0 | "She had been drawn to" | | 1 | "It was a feeling she" | | 2 | "She spun the silver chain" | | 3 | "It was a low, raspy" | | 4 | "She stumbled over a hidden" | | 5 | "She reached up to adjust" | | 6 | "Her heart skipped a beat," | | 7 | "Her mind was playing tricks" | | 8 | "She forced herself to breathe" | | 9 | "She spun around, trying to" | | 10 | "She stared around her, but" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 57.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees loomed around Rory" | | 1 | "Wildflowers still bloomed in this" | | 2 | "The dry rustle of leaves" | | 3 | "Rory had arrived just after" | | 4 | "She had been drawn to" | | 5 | "The temptation to explore its" | | 6 | "It was a feeling she" | | 7 | "She spun the silver chain" | | 8 | "Rory stopped walking, cocking her" | | 9 | "It was a low, raspy" | | 10 | "The hairs on the back" | | 11 | "The darkness seemed to seethe" | | 12 | "She stumbled over a hidden" | | 13 | "Time moved differently here, Rory" | | 14 | "An hour inside the grove" | | 15 | "The moon climbed higher in" | | 16 | "She reached up to adjust" | | 17 | "Her heart skipped a beat," | | 18 | "Her mind was playing tricks" | | 19 | "She forced herself to breathe" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees loomed around Rory like skeletal fingers, the moonlight filtering through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, c…" | | 1 | "Wildflowers still bloomed in this forsaken place, their vibrant colors a stark contrast to the eerie atmosphere that clung to her like a shroud." | | 2 | "The dry rustle of leaves beneath her feet was the only sound that broke the oppressive silence." | | 3 | "She spun the silver chain of her Heartstone Pendant around her fingers, feeling the deep crimson gemstone throb with its usual gentle warmth, but tonight it see…" | | 4 | "It was a low, raspy murmur that seemed to come from all around her, like the faint echo of a long-forgotten voice." | | 5 | "The wildflowers seemed to close in around her, their vibrant colors now a malevolent bloom that seemed to suffocate her." | | 6 | "Rory's breath caught in her throat as the sound seemed to take on a pattern, like the low, raspy murmur had coalesced into a single word – a soft, whispery call…" | | 7 | "The whisper seemed to come from all around her, echoing off the trees, until it became a single, stark word that seemed to reverberate through the air." | | 8 | "The silence that followed was oppressive, like a physical presence that suffocated her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |