Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZZY7GKWPXD9S292ZE01H

Run Details

Duration:
15.5s
Cost:
$0.000770
Provider:
Hyperbolic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The trees loomed around Rory like skeletal fingers, the moonlight filtering through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, casting long, macabre shadows on the ground. Wildflowers still bloomed in this forsaken place, their vibrant colors a stark contrast to the eerie atmosphere that clung to her like a shroud. The dry rustle of leaves beneath her feet was the only sound that broke the oppressive silence. Rory had arrived just after sunset, seeking solace in the secluded grove. She had been drawn to this place since discovering its existence, a hidden clearing that existed in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. The temptation to explore its secrets had eventually become too great to resist, and so she had slipped away from her duties at the Golden Empress, telling no one where she was headed. Not even Eva. As she wandered deeper into the grove, the sensation that something was off began to creep over her. It was a feeling she couldn't quite put her finger on – a tingling in the back of her mind, like the whispered promise of a threat yet to materialize. She spun the silver chain of her Heartstone Pendant around her fingers, feeling the deep crimson gemstone throb with its usual gentle warmth, but tonight it seemed to be pulsing with an urgency that left her skin crawling. Rory stopped walking, cocking her head to one side as the faintest whisper of a sound drifted through the air. It was a low, raspy murmur that seemed to come from all around her, like the faint echo of a long-forgotten voice. The hairs on the back of her neck rose as she strained to listen, but it was already gone, swallowed up by the oppressive silence. With a shiver, she continued on, her senses heightened as she scanned the surroundings for any sign of movement. The darkness seemed to seethe around her, like a living entity that watched her every step. She stumbled over a hidden root, and the sound of her own yelp of surprise seemed to reverberate through the air like a challenge. Time moved differently here, Rory reminded herself, but the fact didn't offer much comfort. An hour inside the grove could be minutes or days outside – she might be trapped in this macabre dance for an eternity. The moon climbed higher in the sky, casting its silver glow over the clearing, but even that offered no solace, only serving to illuminate the dark shapes that loomed around her. She reached up to adjust the chain of her pendant, the rhythmic pulse of the gemstone a source of comfort in this desolate place. But even that seemed different tonight, the beat of the Heartstone faster, more urgent, like a warning she couldn't decipher. As she turned to continue walking, Rory caught a glimpse of something out of the corner of her eye – a flash of movement, like a shadow darting across the periphery of her vision. Her heart skipped a beat, and she spun around, but there was nothing there, just the dark trunks of trees looming like sentinels. Her mind was playing tricks on her, she told herself firmly, but the doubt was already there, gnawing at the edges of her composure. She forced herself to breathe deeply, to walk slowly, trying to shake off the creeping feeling of unease. But with every step, the tension seemed to build, like a gathering storm brewing in the darkness. The wildflowers seemed to close in around her, their vibrant colors now a malevolent bloom that seemed to suffocate her. A cold wind swept through the grove, sending the trees creaking softly in its wake. Rory's breath caught in her throat as the sound seemed to take on a pattern, like the low, raspy murmur had coalesced into a single word – a soft, whispery call that sent shivers down her spine. She spun around, trying to see who or what was calling her, but the grove was empty, the shadows dark and unmoving. The whisper seemed to come from all around her, echoing off the trees, until it became a single, stark word that seemed to reverberate through the air. "Laila." Rory spun around, her eyes wide with a mixture of fear and confusion. The name seemed to echo through the grove, until it became lost in the darkness. The silence that followed was oppressive, like a physical presence that suffocated her. She stared around her, but the darkness seemed to press in, a crushing weight that threatened to consume her. Slowly, the whisper began to build again, a soft, raspy murmur that seemed to take on a new, even more ominous tone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
80.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount787
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount787
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"macabre"
count2
2
word"stark"
count2
3
word"oppressive"
count3
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"solace"
count2
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count3
9
word"echo"
count2
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"dance"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"skipped a beat"
count1
15
word"looming"
count1
16
word"sentinels"
count1
17
word"firmly"
count1
18
word"tension"
count1
19
word"sent shivers down"
count1
20
word"echoing"
count1
21
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"macabre"
2"stark"
3"oppressive"
4"silence"
5"solace"
6"throb"
7"warmth"
8"whisper"
9"echo"
10"scanned"
11"dance"
12"rhythmic"
13"pulse"
14"skipped a beat"
15"looming"
16"sentinels"
17"firmly"
18"tension"
19"sent shivers down"
20"echoing"
21"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount13
narrationSentences36
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences37
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords790
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"With a shiver, she continued on, her senses heightened as she scanned the surroundings for any sign of movement."
1"Her mind was playing tricks on her, she told herself firmly, but the doubt was already there, gnawing at the edges of he…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount789
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Fae2
Grove1
Earth1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"quite put her finger on – a tingling in the back of her mind, like the whispered promise of a threat yet to materialize"
1"murmur that seemed to come from all around her, like the faint echo of a long-forgotten voice"
2"seemed different tonight, the beat of the Heartstone faster, more urgent, like a warning she couldn't decipher"
3"bloom that seemed to suffocate her"
4"word that seemed to reverberate through the air"
5"murmur that seemed to take on a new, even more ominous tone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount790
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
62.48% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean56.43
std20.8
cv0.369
sampleLengths
073
173
286
367
459
568
644
781
855
952
1049
111
1241
1341
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences36
matches
0"been drawn"
1"was headed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was playing"
1"was calling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences37
ratio0.108
matches
0"It was a feeling she couldn't quite put her finger on – a tingling in the back of her mind, like the whispered promise of a threat yet to materialize."
1"An hour inside the grove could be minutes or days outside – she might be trapped in this macabre dance for an eternity."
2"As she turned to continue walking, Rory caught a glimpse of something out of the corner of her eye – a flash of movement, like a shadow darting across the periphery of her vision."
3"Rory's breath caught in her throat as the sound seemed to take on a pattern, like the low, raspy murmur had coalesced into a single word – a soft, whispery call that sent shivers down her spine."
99.38% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount786
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04071246819338423
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011450381679389313
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences37
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
91.21% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences37
mean21.35
std8.07
cv0.378
sampleLengths
032
124
217
312
425
533
63
718
830
938
1020
1122
1225
1319
1416
1524
1614
1723
1831
1924
2020
2134
2223
2324
2418
2517
2620
2715
2837
2922
3027
311
3213
3315
3413
3519
3622
62.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.40540540540540543
totalSentences37
uniqueOpeners15
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"Slowly, the whisper began to"
ratio0.028
97.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences36
matches
0"She had been drawn to"
1"It was a feeling she"
2"She spun the silver chain"
3"It was a low, raspy"
4"She stumbled over a hidden"
5"She reached up to adjust"
6"Her heart skipped a beat,"
7"Her mind was playing tricks"
8"She forced herself to breathe"
9"She spun around, trying to"
10"She stared around her, but"
ratio0.306
57.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences36
matches
0"The trees loomed around Rory"
1"Wildflowers still bloomed in this"
2"The dry rustle of leaves"
3"Rory had arrived just after"
4"She had been drawn to"
5"The temptation to explore its"
6"It was a feeling she"
7"She spun the silver chain"
8"Rory stopped walking, cocking her"
9"It was a low, raspy"
10"The hairs on the back"
11"The darkness seemed to seethe"
12"She stumbled over a hidden"
13"Time moved differently here, Rory"
14"An hour inside the grove"
15"The moon climbed higher in"
16"She reached up to adjust"
17"Her heart skipped a beat,"
18"Her mind was playing tricks"
19"She forced herself to breathe"
ratio0.806
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The trees loomed around Rory like skeletal fingers, the moonlight filtering through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, c…"
1"Wildflowers still bloomed in this forsaken place, their vibrant colors a stark contrast to the eerie atmosphere that clung to her like a shroud."
2"The dry rustle of leaves beneath her feet was the only sound that broke the oppressive silence."
3"She spun the silver chain of her Heartstone Pendant around her fingers, feeling the deep crimson gemstone throb with its usual gentle warmth, but tonight it see…"
4"It was a low, raspy murmur that seemed to come from all around her, like the faint echo of a long-forgotten voice."
5"The wildflowers seemed to close in around her, their vibrant colors now a malevolent bloom that seemed to suffocate her."
6"Rory's breath caught in her throat as the sound seemed to take on a pattern, like the low, raspy murmur had coalesced into a single word – a soft, whispery call…"
7"The whisper seemed to come from all around her, echoing off the trees, until it became a single, stark word that seemed to reverberate through the air."
8"The silence that followed was oppressive, like a physical presence that suffocated her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
70.9844%