| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she chuckled weakly [weakly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.65 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 75.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1022 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1022 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "oppressive" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "dance" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "sentinels" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "sinister" | | 17 | "scanned" | | 18 | "tinge" | | 19 | "sense of" | | 20 | "echo" | | 21 | "pulse" | | 22 | "gloom" | | 23 | "resolve" | | 24 | "solace" | | 25 | "glinting" | | 26 | "racing" | | 27 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1024 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 908 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Dull | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Heart | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Heart" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 39.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared vibrant even in darkness, their colors somehow alive, yet their scent—sweet with an undertone of decay—turned her stomach" | | 1 | "not quite a human voice, more an echo carried between realms" | | 2 | "As if sensing her resolve, the figure shifted" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.977 | | wordCount | 1024 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the cold, but from the weight of silence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 32 | | std | 18.3 | | cv | 0.572 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "Though this was a familiar path — one she walked countless times in the daylight — it felt different now." | | 1 | "She hadn’t wanted to come here at night, but something — a whisper in her gut — urged her to return." | | 2 | "They appeared vibrant even in darkness, their colors somehow alive, yet their scent—sweet with an undertone of decay—turned her stomach." | | 3 | "Her skin prickled at the sound — not quite a human voice, more an echo carried between realms." | | 4 | "Rory’s breath snagged in her throat; the shape—and the scents of lavender and musk — coiled around her like a threat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 907 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03969128996692393 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015435501653803748 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 91.76% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 13.3 | | std | 5.05 | | cv | 0.379 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 72.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4675324675324675 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped carefully over the" | | 1 | "She glanced back, the path" | | 2 | "It pulsed gently, warming her" | | 3 | "She hadn’t wanted to come" | | 4 | "Their twisted forms carved against" | | 5 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 6 | "They appeared vibrant even in" | | 7 | "she muttered to herself, stepping" | | 8 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 9 | "She fidgeted with her pendant," | | 10 | "she chuckled weakly, though the" | | 11 | "She turned her head sharply" | | 12 | "she called, her voice steady" | | 13 | "Her skin prickled at the" | | 14 | "She gripped the pendant tightly," | | 15 | "she demanded, her heart hammering" | | 16 | "it whispered, the name a" | | 17 | "she snapped, her voice fierce" | | 18 | "Their eyes met, and she" | | 19 | "it hissed, voice grating, resembling" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 23.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory adjusted her scarf against" | | 1 | "A sliver of moonlight pierced" | | 2 | "She stepped carefully over the" | | 3 | "The quiet of the night" | | 4 | "She glanced back, the path" | | 5 | "A shiver trickled down her" | | 6 | "The only sound came from" | | 7 | "Rory pulled out the Heartstone" | | 8 | "It pulsed gently, warming her" | | 9 | "The faint crimson glow seemed" | | 10 | "Unease washed over her." | | 11 | "She hadn’t wanted to come" | | 12 | "The Fae Grove, a hidden" | | 13 | "Their twisted forms carved against" | | 14 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 15 | "They appeared vibrant even in" | | 16 | "she muttered to herself, stepping" | | 17 | "A flicker, a whisper of" | | 18 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 19 | "Rory whispered, but her heart" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Though this was a familiar" | | 1 | "As if sensing her resolve," | | 2 | "Before she reached the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory adjusted her scarf against the chill that swept through Richmond Park." | | 1 | "The only sound came from her boots crunching on the gravel, each step echoing in the stillness." | | 2 | "She shook her head, trying to clear the fog that encroached upon her thoughts." | | 3 | "She fidgeted with her pendant, feeling its warmth reassuring despite the growing dread." | | 4 | "Ten minutes ticked by as she searched the grove, seeking signs, clues, anything that explained the half-stirred whispers in her mind." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory whispered, but her heart raced, drumming like an anxious bird trapped in a cage" | | 1 | "she called, her voice steady but low" | | 2 | "it whispered, the name a caress that curled into her mind" | | 3 | "she snapped, her voice fierce despite the tremors in her hands" | | 4 | "it hissed, voice grating, resembling the crunch of leaves underfoot" | | 5 | "she spat, the word an anchor against the tide of fear" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she chuckled weakly (chuckle)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 6 | "Rory warned (warn)" | | 7 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 8 | "she spat (spit)" | | 9 | "she shouted (shout)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.833 | |