Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR00SRSXNGRECHF10PD5RG

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Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.000954

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory adjusted her scarf against the chill that swept through Richmond Park. A sliver of moonlight pierced the clouds, casting an eerie glow over the twisted branches of the oak trees. She stepped carefully over the damp earth, the sharp scent of moss filling her lungs. Though this was a familiar path — one she walked countless times in the daylight — it felt different now. The quiet of the night pressed against her, thick and oppressive. She glanced back, the path behind her swallowed in shadow. A shiver trickled down her spine, not from the cold, but from the weight of silence that enveloped her. The only sound came from her boots crunching on the gravel, each step echoing in the stillness. Rory pulled out the Heartstone Pendant from her coat pocket. It pulsed gently, warming her palm and setting her nerves just a bit more at ease. The faint crimson glow seemed to dance, but she frowned, noting how it dimmed slightly as she approached the grove. Unease washed over her. She hadn’t wanted to come here at night, but something — a whisper in her gut — urged her to return. The Fae Grove, a hidden clearing known only to a few, lay ahead. As she entered, the ancient oak standing stones loomed like forgotten sentinels. Their twisted forms carved against the night sky felt watchful. She paused, taking in the night-blooming wildflowers that dotted the ground. They appeared vibrant even in darkness, their colors somehow alive, yet their scent—sweet with an undertone of decay—turned her stomach. “Okay, let’s get this over with,” she muttered to herself, stepping further in. In one corner of her vision, she noticed movement. A flicker, a whisper of something just beyond the reach of the grove. When she turned her head, nothing but the sighing trees remained. She shook her head, trying to clear the fog that encroached upon her thoughts. “Just the wind,” Rory whispered, but her heart raced, drumming like an anxious bird trapped in a cage. A breeze brushed past her cheek, cooler than before, leaving a jumble of unease tangled in her limbs. She fidgeted with her pendant, feeling its warmth reassuring despite the growing dread. Ten minutes ticked by as she searched the grove, seeking signs, clues, anything that explained the half-stirred whispers in her mind. The air thickened, loamy and damp, yet an invisible specter of something sinister began to creep closer. A rustle in the underbrush made her freeze. Eyes darting, she scanned the darkness. “Gonna get caught by the fairies if I’m not careful,” she chuckled weakly, though the humor barely made it to her lips. The trees shifted, and shadows danced around her, aching elastic webs of silence absorbing sound. The further she ventured, the more the pendant’s warmth faded, pulsing only sporadically. “Great. Just great.” The grove felt alive, yet somehow wrong. A tinge of desperation clung to her thoughts. She turned her head sharply again, caught by the nagging sense of being watched. There it was again, that flicker at the edge of her vision, like a candle struggling against an autumn wind. “Who’s there?” she called, her voice steady but low. The grove answered only with the sigh of the trees. “Such a clever girl.” The voice was low, mocking, drifting through the branches like a wisp of smoke. Her skin prickled at the sound — not quite a human voice, more an echo carried between realms. Unease morphed into something sharper: fear. She gripped the pendant tightly, its warmth now a steady pulse against her palm. “Show yourself!” she demanded, her heart hammering loud enough to drown out any other sound. The darkness held its breath. A movement caught her gaze once again, this time, more pronounced. A figure cloaked in shadows, the edges blurring into the surrounding gloom, stepped forth from behind a tree. Rory’s breath snagged in her throat; the shape—and the scents of lavender and musk — coiled around her like a threat. “Rory,” it whispered, the name a caress that curled into her mind. “Why do you seek the grove? There are things that lie between time and truth, and they can consume your hopes.” “Get away from me,” she snapped, her voice fierce despite the tremors in her hands. “You’ve come for more than answers,” the figure replied, stepping into a slant of moonlight. Dull skin stretched over skeletal features, shadows lurking beneath hollow eyes. “You seek freedom, don’t you?” “Don’t you dare come closer,” Rory warned, shifting backward. The grove pulsed with a life of its own as the unseen weight of lingering dread pressed down on her. Their eyes met, and she felt a strange pull, like tendrils wrapping around her thoughts, whispering secrets she could barely grasp. “Shadows betray,” it hissed, voice grating, resembling the crunch of leaves underfoot. “They reveal more than they conceal.” Rory squeezed her eyes shut, willing herself not to listen, unwilling to succumb to whatever temptation it offered. As if sensing her resolve, the figure shifted. “I can grant you power. Unveil your past — the chains that bind you to the boy who once ruled your heart.” “No,” she spat, the word an anchor against the tide of fear. “Choose, Rory. Shadows or solace.” A rustle behind her made her whip around. Nothing remained but thick darkness and the horrible whispers spiraling through her mind. The grove thickened, gripping her with unseen fingers. “Leave me be!” she shouted, hurling the pendant to the ground. The Heartstone hit the earth, glinting faintly amongst the dark. The figure’s grin widened, revealing sharp teeth. “You are always welcome, Aurora.” The voice morphed, an echo that lingered, melding into the rustling leaves. Heart racing, Rory stumbled backward, each breath heavy as she turned. The shadows stretched, shifting closer, whispering her failures and fears. She sprinted, weaving through the standing stones, desperate to escape their grasp. Before she reached the edge of the grove, a frigid touch brushed against her arm. Her scream echoed in the stillness of night, swallowed by the dark, as the grove consumed the last remnants of her hesitation.
total_cost0.00095355

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she chuckled weakly [weakly]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.65
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
75.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1022
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
2"slightly"
3"sharply"
4"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1022
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"oppressive"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"dance"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"loomed"
count1
11
word"sentinels"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count2
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count3
16
word"sinister"
count1
17
word"scanned"
count1
18
word"tinge"
count1
19
word"sense of"
count1
20
word"echo"
count2
21
word"pulse"
count1
22
word"gloom"
count1
23
word"resolve"
count1
24
word"solace"
count1
25
word"glinting"
count1
26
word"racing"
count1
27
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"familiar"
2"oppressive"
3"down her spine"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"echoing"
7"pulsed"
8"dance"
9"whisper"
10"loomed"
11"sentinels"
12"stomach"
13"flicker"
14"raced"
15"warmth"
16"sinister"
17"scanned"
18"tinge"
19"sense of"
20"echo"
21"pulse"
22"gloom"
23"resolve"
24"solace"
25"glinting"
26"racing"
27"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"the tide of fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1024
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount908
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Fae1
Grove1
Dull1
Rory7
Heart1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Grove"
3"Rory"
4"Heart"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"appeared vibrant even in darkness, their colors somehow alive, yet their scent—sweet with an undertone of decay—turned her stomach"
1"not quite a human voice, more an echo carried between realms"
2"As if sensing her resolve, the figure shifted"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.977
wordCount1024
matches
0"not from the cold, but from the weight of silence"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean32
std18.3
cv0.572
sampleLengths
077
146
271
366
413
547
649
738
814
950
103
1149
1219
1318
1438
1520
1650
1733
1815
1931
2029
2139
2218
2330
2412
255
2629
2721
2824
2933
3015
3122
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences77
ratio0.065
matches
0"Though this was a familiar path — one she walked countless times in the daylight — it felt different now."
1"She hadn’t wanted to come here at night, but something — a whisper in her gut — urged her to return."
2"They appeared vibrant even in darkness, their colors somehow alive, yet their scent—sweet with an undertone of decay—turned her stomach."
3"Her skin prickled at the sound — not quite a human voice, more an echo carried between realms."
4"Rory’s breath snagged in her throat; the shape—and the scents of lavender and musk — coiled around her like a threat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount907
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03969128996692393
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.015435501653803748
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
91.76% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean13.3
std5.05
cv0.379
sampleLengths
012
119
215
320
411
510
619
717
810
916
1020
114
1221
1313
1412
1510
1611
1720
1813
199
2013
2111
2214
2318
2418
2513
2621
2717
288
296
3022
3115
3213
333
347
358
3614
3720
389
3910
4018
4118
426
4314
4415
455
4611
4718
4821
4912
72.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4675324675324675
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences71
matches
0"She stepped carefully over the"
1"She glanced back, the path"
2"It pulsed gently, warming her"
3"She hadn’t wanted to come"
4"Their twisted forms carved against"
5"She paused, taking in the"
6"They appeared vibrant even in"
7"she muttered to herself, stepping"
8"She shook her head, trying"
9"She fidgeted with her pendant,"
10"she chuckled weakly, though the"
11"She turned her head sharply"
12"she called, her voice steady"
13"Her skin prickled at the"
14"She gripped the pendant tightly,"
15"she demanded, her heart hammering"
16"it whispered, the name a"
17"she snapped, her voice fierce"
18"Their eyes met, and she"
19"it hissed, voice grating, resembling"
ratio0.338
23.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences71
matches
0"Rory adjusted her scarf against"
1"A sliver of moonlight pierced"
2"She stepped carefully over the"
3"The quiet of the night"
4"She glanced back, the path"
5"A shiver trickled down her"
6"The only sound came from"
7"Rory pulled out the Heartstone"
8"It pulsed gently, warming her"
9"The faint crimson glow seemed"
10"Unease washed over her."
11"She hadn’t wanted to come"
12"The Fae Grove, a hidden"
13"Their twisted forms carved against"
14"She paused, taking in the"
15"They appeared vibrant even in"
16"she muttered to herself, stepping"
17"A flicker, a whisper of"
18"She shook her head, trying"
19"Rory whispered, but her heart"
ratio0.873
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences71
matches
0"Though this was a familiar"
1"As if sensing her resolve,"
2"Before she reached the edge"
ratio0.042
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory adjusted her scarf against the chill that swept through Richmond Park."
1"The only sound came from her boots crunching on the gravel, each step echoing in the stillness."
2"She shook her head, trying to clear the fog that encroached upon her thoughts."
3"She fidgeted with her pendant, feeling its warmth reassuring despite the growing dread."
4"Ten minutes ticked by as she searched the grove, seeking signs, clues, anything that explained the half-stirred whispers in her mind."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Rory whispered, but her heart raced, drumming like an anxious bird trapped in a cage"
1"she called, her voice steady but low"
2"it whispered, the name a caress that curled into her mind"
3"she snapped, her voice fierce despite the tremors in her hands"
4"it hissed, voice grating, resembling the crunch of leaves underfoot"
5"she spat, the word an anchor against the tide of fear"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"she chuckled weakly (chuckle)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"it whispered (whisper)"
5"she snapped (snap)"
6"Rory warned (warn)"
7"it hissed (hiss)"
8"she spat (spit)"
9"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.833
75.0463%