"She clenched her fingers around it, the silver chain biting into her wrist, and the air around them *shifted*—not like a gust, not like a breath, but like the moment before a door creaks open on its own."
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"Nyx stepped forward—or rather, *into* the space around her, their solid form coalescing from the mist like a ghost given flesh."
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"The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something like burnt honey and rust."
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"She hadn’t heard the Half-Fae approach, but there she was—silver hair catching the dim light like moonlight on water, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the pendant."
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"The voice wasn’t just in her ears—it *was* in her ears, vibrating against her bones, familiar and yet wrong, like hearing a childhood song sung by a stranger."
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"A crown of twisted vines and fruit coiled around his brow, heavy with grapes and figs, and his smile was the kind that promised indulgence—and ruin."
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"The pendant’s warmth flared, searing through her palm, and for a heartbeat, she saw—"
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"And at the center of it all, a table set for one—with a single, empty chair."
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"One moment, she was standing in the alleyway’s aftermath, the other—she was falling."
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"She rolled onto her side—and froze."
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"She reached for a plate of fruit, her fingers brushing the surface—and the moment her skin touched it, the world *shifted* again."
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"She reached out, her hand hovering over the pot—"
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"—and the woman turned."
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"She could feel it—the pull of the feast, the hunger, the *promise* of satisfaction."
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"The world around her blurred, edges softening into something alive, the cobblestones beneath her boots dissolving into something smoother, warmer."
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"The pendant’s glow intensified, casting long, wavering shadows that stretched unnaturally, twisting into shapes Aurora couldn’t name."
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"The voice wasn’t just in her ears—it *was* in her ears, vibrating against her bones, familiar and yet wrong, like hearing a childhood song sung by a stranger."
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"The figure stepping into the light was tall, broader than any man should be, his frame draped in a robe of deep crimson silk that seemed to drink in the light r…"
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"A crown of twisted vines and fruit coiled around his brow, heavy with grapes and figs, and his smile was the kind that promised indulgence—and ruin."
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"A feast laid out before her, endless and shimmering, plates piled with fruits she’d never tasted, meats that glistened like molten gold, desserts dripping with …"
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"A bed of plush, velvety darkness that swallowed her whole."
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"A *massive* table, stretching longer than Aurora could see, laden with dishes of food that glowed faintly, their colors shifting like oil on water."
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"The prince, stepping from the shadows, his robe swirling around his legs."
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"A plate of bread became a towering cake, its layers glistening with frosting that dripped like liquid gold."
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"A bowl of soup transformed into a steaming roast, its juices running down the sides, inviting."