| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1155 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1155 | | totalAiIsms | 47 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
| | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "apprehension" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "charged" | | 14 | "symphony" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "pounding" | | 17 | "etched" | | 18 | "tinged" | | 19 | "pulse" | | 20 | "down her spine" | | 21 | "cacophony" | | 22 | "tantalizing" | | 23 | "echoed" | | 24 | "familiar" | | 25 | "skipped a beat" | | 26 | "raced" | | 27 | "weight" | | 28 | "anticipation" | | 29 | "footsteps" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "sent a chill down" | | 2 | "a flicker of recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "e with apprehension" | | 1 | "d with anticipation" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1151 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1106 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Silence" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.686 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift and writhe in the moonlight" | | 1 | "felt like a fragile tether to reality" | | 2 | "whispers that seemed to rise from the very earth beneath her feet" | | 3 | "eyes that seemed to glow with an inner light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.38% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 39.69 | | std | 15.31 | | cv | 0.386 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "A rustle to her left drew her gaze, but there was nothing there—only shadows playing tricks on her eyes." | | 1 | "The usual night sounds were absent—no rustling leaves, no distant calls of nocturnal creatures." | | 2 | "As she entered the moonlight, her features became clear—sharp cheekbones, piercing eyes that seemed to glow with an inner light." | | 3 | "The Grove, the pendant, the whispers—they were all connected, pieces of a puzzle she had yet to solve." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1110 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.02072072072072072 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007207207207207207 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 53.30% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 14.57 | | std | 4.13 | | cv | 0.283 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 46.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.25316455696202533 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, there was a low" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 98.95% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant," | | 1 | "She took a tentative step" | | 2 | "She was alone, yet the" | | 3 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 4 | "she muttered to herself, her" | | 5 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "Her eyes darted around, searching" | | 7 | "It seemed to come from" | | 8 | "She took another step, and" | | 9 | "She spun around, heart pounding," | | 10 | "She took a deep breath," | | 11 | "It was supposed to guide" | | 12 | "Their petals glistened with dew," | | 13 | "She crouched down, reaching out" | | 14 | "She backed away, her instincts" | | 15 | "She closed her eyes, willing" | | 16 | "It was a woman, her" | | 17 | "She stood with an air" | | 18 | "She smiled, a slow, knowing" | | 19 | "She took a step back," |
| | ratio | 0.303 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung low, casting" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant," | | 4 | "Rory had come here for" | | 5 | "The Grove was a place" | | 6 | "She took a tentative step" | | 7 | "The wildflowers, vibrant even in" | | 8 | "Rory's heart thudded in her" | | 9 | "She was alone, yet the" | | 10 | "A rustle to her left" | | 11 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed gently against" | | 13 | "she muttered to herself, her" | | 14 | "The sound seemed to hang" | | 15 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 16 | "The air felt thicker here," | | 17 | "Rory paused, listening intently." | | 18 | "The usual night sounds were" | | 19 | "Her eyes darted around, searching" |
| | ratio | 0.921 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled forms casting long shadows that danced across the ground." | | 1 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its faint warmth a small comfort against the chill that seeped into her bones." | | 2 | "Time twisted here, bending and stretching in ways that made her skin prickle with apprehension." | | 3 | "She shook her head, trying to dispel the creeping dread that threatened to overwhelm her." | | 4 | "The pendant pulsed gently against her skin, a rhythmic throb that matched her racing heart." | | 5 | "The air felt thicker here, charged with an energy that made her skin tingle." | | 6 | "The pendant's warmth was a constant presence, a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had entrusted it to her." | | 7 | "Rory stood, her heart racing, as the shadows around her deepened, coalescing into shapes that defied explanation." | | 8 | "She stood with an air of confidence, her posture relaxed, as if she belonged here." | | 9 | "As she entered the moonlight, her features became clear—sharp cheekbones, piercing eyes that seemed to glow with an inner light." | | 10 | "The Grove pulsed with energy, the whispers rising to a crescendo that filled her senses." | | 11 | "As their fingers touched, a jolt of energy surged through Rory, a connection that transcended words." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her voice barely more than a whisper" | | 1 | "Rory called, her voice stronger now, tinged with defiance" | | 2 | "the woman replied, her voice smooth and melodic" | | 3 | "Rory asked, her voice barely more than a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |