Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR02CJECZZCYNZ79MHZ04G

Run Details

Duration:
27.2s
Cost:
$0.016962
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over Richmond Park. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, her breath visible in the crisp night air. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled forms casting long shadows that danced across the ground. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its faint warmth a small comfort against the chill that seeped into her bones. Rory had come here for a reason, though the specifics eluded her now, lost in the fog of unease that had settled over her mind. The Grove was a place of mystery, a pocket of the Fae realm that defied the logic of the world she knew. Time twisted here, bending and stretching in ways that made her skin prickle with apprehension. She took a tentative step forward, the soft crunch of leaves underfoot echoing in the stillness. The wildflowers, vibrant even in the dim light, seemed to sway in a breeze she couldn't feel. Rory's heart thudded in her chest, each beat a reminder of her solitude. She was alone, yet the sensation of being watched prickled at the back of her neck. A rustle to her left drew her gaze, but there was nothing there—only shadows playing tricks on her eyes. She shook her head, trying to dispel the creeping dread that threatened to overwhelm her. The pendant pulsed gently against her skin, a rhythmic throb that matched her racing heart. "Get a grip, Rory," she muttered to herself, her voice barely more than a whisper. The sound seemed to hang in the air, absorbed by the Grove's unnatural silence. She moved deeper into the clearing, the standing stones forming a circle around her. The air felt thicker here, charged with an energy that made her skin tingle. Rory paused, listening intently. The usual night sounds were absent—no rustling leaves, no distant calls of nocturnal creatures. Instead, there was a low hum, almost imperceptible, like the distant drone of a beehive. Her eyes darted around, searching for the source of the sound. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once, a disorienting symphony that set her nerves on edge. She took another step, and the hum intensified, vibrating through her bones. A flicker of movement caught her attention, a shadow flitting at the edge of her vision. She spun around, heart pounding, but the Grove remained unchanged. The standing stones loomed, their surfaces etched with patterns that seemed to shift and writhe in the moonlight. "Who's there?" Rory called, her voice stronger now, tinged with defiance. Silence answered her, the hum fading into the background like a forgotten melody. She took a deep breath, trying to steady herself. The pendant's warmth was a constant presence, a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had entrusted it to her. It was supposed to guide her, to protect her, but here in the Grove, it felt like a fragile tether to reality. Rory's gaze fell on the ground, where the wildflowers grew in abundance. Their petals glistened with dew, untouched by the chill that permeated the air. She crouched down, reaching out to touch one, but hesitated. The flowers seemed to pulse with a life of their own, their colors shifting subtly in the moonlight. A sudden gust of wind swept through the clearing, ruffling her hair and sending a shiver down her spine. The hum returned, louder now, a chorus of whispers that seemed to rise from the very earth beneath her feet. Rory stood, her heart racing, as the shadows around her deepened, coalescing into shapes that defied explanation. She backed away, her instincts screaming at her to flee, but her feet refused to move. The Grove held her in its thrall, a web of enchantment that tightened with every passing moment. The whispers grew louder, a cacophony of voices that spoke in a language she couldn't understand. Rory clutched the pendant, its warmth a lifeline in the encroaching darkness. She closed her eyes, willing herself to focus, to remember why she had come here. The answer danced at the edge of her consciousness, elusive and tantalizing. A soft laugh echoed through the clearing, a sound both familiar and alien. Rory's eyes snapped open, her gaze darting around in search of the source. The shadows shifted, parting to reveal a figure standing at the edge of the Grove. It was a woman, her features obscured by the darkness. She stood with an air of confidence, her posture relaxed, as if she belonged here. Rory's heart skipped a beat, a flicker of recognition sparking in her mind. "Who are you?" Rory demanded, her voice steady despite the fear that coiled in her gut. The woman stepped forward, her movements fluid and graceful. As she entered the moonlight, her features became clear—sharp cheekbones, piercing eyes that seemed to glow with an inner light. She smiled, a slow, knowing smile that sent a chill down Rory's spine. "You know who I am, Aurora," the woman replied, her voice smooth and melodic. "You've always known." Rory's mind raced, memories flashing before her eyes. The Grove, the pendant, the whispers—they were all connected, pieces of a puzzle she had yet to solve. She took a step back, her instincts screaming at her to run, but the woman's gaze held her captive. "What do you want?" Rory asked, her voice barely more than a whisper. The woman tilted her head, her expression thoughtful. "I want what you want, Aurora. To understand, to see beyond the veil." Rory's heart pounded in her chest, the pendant's warmth a steady pulse against her skin. She felt the weight of the woman's words, the truth hidden within them. The Grove was a place of secrets, a gateway to a world she had only glimpsed in dreams. The woman extended a hand, her fingers beckoning. "Come, Aurora. The answers you seek are within your grasp." Rory hesitated, her mind a whirlwind of doubt and curiosity. The Grove pulsed with energy, the whispers rising to a crescendo that filled her senses. She took a deep breath, her decision made. With a final glance at the standing stones, she stepped forward, her hand reaching for the woman's. The Grove seemed to hold its breath, the air charged with anticipation. As their fingers touched, a jolt of energy surged through Rory, a connection that transcended words. The Grove shifted around them, the shadows retreating as the moonlight bathed them in its glow. Rory's heart raced, the pendant's warmth a steady presence against her skin. She felt the weight of the woman's gaze, the promise of answers in her eyes. Together, they stepped into the unknown, the Grove closing behind them like a curtain drawn on a stage. The whispers faded, leaving only the sound of their footsteps as they ventured deeper into the heart of the Fae realm.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsms47
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count5
3
word"chill"
count3
4
word"apprehension"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"throb"
count1
10
word"racing"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"charged"
count2
14
word"symphony"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count2
16
word"pounding"
count1
17
word"etched"
count1
18
word"tinged"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count2
20
word"down her spine"
count1
21
word"cacophony"
count1
22
word"tantalizing"
count1
23
word"echoed"
count1
24
word"familiar"
count1
25
word"skipped a beat"
count1
26
word"raced"
count2
27
word"weight"
count2
28
word"anticipation"
count1
29
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"chill"
4"apprehension"
5"echoing"
6"reminder"
7"pulsed"
8"rhythmic"
9"throb"
10"racing"
11"whisper"
12"silence"
13"charged"
14"symphony"
15"flicker"
16"pounding"
17"etched"
18"tinged"
19"pulse"
20"down her spine"
21"cacophony"
22"tantalizing"
23"echoed"
24"familiar"
25"skipped a beat"
26"raced"
27"weight"
28"anticipation"
29"footsteps"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"sent a chill down"
2"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences76
matches
0"e with apprehension"
1"d with anticipation"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1151
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1106
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Rory18
Fae3
Grove13
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Silence1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Grove"
3"Silence"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.686
windowScore0.5
16.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"patterns that seemed to shift and writhe in the moonlight"
1"felt like a fragile tether to reality"
2"whispers that seemed to rise from the very earth beneath her feet"
3"eyes that seemed to glow with an inner light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1151
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
67.38% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean39.69
std15.31
cv0.386
sampleLengths
074
162
262
349
429
561
642
744
824
950
1053
1156
1249
1339
1441
1538
1616
1742
1817
1945
2013
2121
2246
2318
2433
2529
2632
2727
2839
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences79
ratio0.051
matches
0"A rustle to her left drew her gaze, but there was nothing there—only shadows playing tricks on her eyes."
1"The usual night sounds were absent—no rustling leaves, no distant calls of nocturnal creatures."
2"As she entered the moonlight, her features became clear—sharp cheekbones, piercing eyes that seemed to glow with an inner light."
3"The Grove, the pendant, the whispers—they were all connected, pieces of a puzzle she had yet to solve."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1110
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02072072072072072
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007207207207207207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
53.30% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.57
std4.13
cv0.283
sampleLengths
011
124
220
319
425
522
615
716
817
913
1016
1119
1215
1315
1415
1514
1614
1714
184
1914
2015
2111
2219
2312
2416
2510
2618
2711
2813
299
3019
3122
3212
3313
3410
3518
3619
3720
3817
3916
4017
4116
4212
4315
4412
4513
4613
4715
4810
4915
46.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.25316455696202533
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners20
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Instead, there was a low"
ratio0.013
98.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences76
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant,"
1"She took a tentative step"
2"She was alone, yet the"
3"She shook her head, trying"
4"she muttered to herself, her"
5"She moved deeper into the"
6"Her eyes darted around, searching"
7"It seemed to come from"
8"She took another step, and"
9"She spun around, heart pounding,"
10"She took a deep breath,"
11"It was supposed to guide"
12"Their petals glistened with dew,"
13"She crouched down, reaching out"
14"She backed away, her instincts"
15"She closed her eyes, willing"
16"It was a woman, her"
17"She stood with an air"
18"She smiled, a slow, knowing"
19"She took a step back,"
ratio0.303
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The moon hung low, casting"
1"Aurora Carter, known to her"
2"The ancient oak standing stones"
3"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant,"
4"Rory had come here for"
5"The Grove was a place"
6"She took a tentative step"
7"The wildflowers, vibrant even in"
8"Rory's heart thudded in her"
9"She was alone, yet the"
10"A rustle to her left"
11"She shook her head, trying"
12"The pendant pulsed gently against"
13"she muttered to herself, her"
14"The sound seemed to hang"
15"She moved deeper into the"
16"The air felt thicker here,"
17"Rory paused, listening intently."
18"The usual night sounds were"
19"Her eyes darted around, searching"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled forms casting long shadows that danced across the ground."
1"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its faint warmth a small comfort against the chill that seeped into her bones."
2"Time twisted here, bending and stretching in ways that made her skin prickle with apprehension."
3"She shook her head, trying to dispel the creeping dread that threatened to overwhelm her."
4"The pendant pulsed gently against her skin, a rhythmic throb that matched her racing heart."
5"The air felt thicker here, charged with an energy that made her skin tingle."
6"The pendant's warmth was a constant presence, a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had entrusted it to her."
7"Rory stood, her heart racing, as the shadows around her deepened, coalescing into shapes that defied explanation."
8"She stood with an air of confidence, her posture relaxed, as if she belonged here."
9"As she entered the moonlight, her features became clear—sharp cheekbones, piercing eyes that seemed to glow with an inner light."
10"The Grove pulsed with energy, the whispers rising to a crescendo that filled her senses."
11"As their fingers touched, a jolt of energy surged through Rory, a connection that transcended words."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she muttered, her voice barely more than a whisper"
1"Rory called, her voice stronger now, tinged with defiance"
2"the woman replied, her voice smooth and melodic"
3"Rory asked, her voice barely more than a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.4
60.3318%