Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR02HTVPKDFBT6ZC3R40EQ

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Duration:
37.1s
Cost:
$0.001095

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Fae Grove, her breath catching in her throat. Dark trees loomed over her, twisting branches clawing at the inky sky. The air, thick with humidity, wrapped around her like a heavy blanket. Deep crimson flowers glistened in the dim light filtering through the leaves. They stood like ominous sentinels, silently judging her presence. She clutched the Heartstone pendant at her neck, feeling its warmth pulse against her skin, sending a reassuring thrum through her body. It beckoned her deeper into the Grove, closer to the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary between this world and the unknown. A chill ran down her spine despite the warmth of the Heartstone. Rory always found solace in nature, but tonight, something felt distinctly off. She peered into the underbrush, the darkness seemed thicker, almost sentient. A rustle startled her, and she swung around, eyes darting. Just shadows—only shadows. “Get a grip,” she murmured to herself, her voice swallowed by the silence. "It's just the wind." As she forged ahead, the faint sounds of the city—distant sirens and murmurings—faded, replaced by an eerie stillness. The trees whispered, leaves shivered under an unseen breath. Aurora remembered Eva’s warnings, the strange tales woven over pints in smoky bars: “Don’t linger too long in the Grove, Rory. Time’s different there.” Ahead, something flickered—a hint of movement? She squinted, but it vanished before her eyes could make it out. Rory took a tentative step closer, the unease tightening in her chest. She instinctively reached for her wrist, where the crescent scar from a childhood accident still throbbed faintly, a reminder of vulnerability. “Hello?” she called out, voice steady despite the quavering of her core. The woods swallowed her words, leaving the tension to thicken. No reply. Nothing but the rustle of leaves, and the creeping sensation that something watched her. Shrugging off her discomfort, Rory pressed on, determined to find what she came for—a glimpse of the portal. The stories said the Heartstone revealed it, but she hadn’t expected to feel so…exposed. Then there it was—a soft glow, shimmering just beyond the standing stones. Rory’s heart raced. This had to be it. She stepped closer, the Grass crunching underfoot. The pulsating warmth from the Heartstone escalated as she crossed into the circle of standing stones, each ancient oak towering above her like a protective guardian—or perhaps a prison warden. She gasped as the portal came into view, a swirling mass of colors, vibrant yet dark. It beckoned, promising secrets and what-ifs. Another noise reached her, a low growl, echoing in the stillness. She froze, eyes wide, scanning the surroundings. Shadows shifted on the edges of her vision, darting from one tree to another. Everything grew heavier, a weight pressing against her chest. “Who’s there?” Rory asked, voice steady. “You can show yourself.” Silence enveloped her once more. Maybe she was being foolish, letting the stories get to her. The Heartstone pulsed regularly now, synchronizing with her quickening heartbeat. Ignoring the prickling sensations crawling along her skin, she stepped closer to the portal, reached forward. A sharp snap echoed, like a twig breaking underfoot. Rory recoiled, heart thumping violently against her ribcage. She turned slowly, searching. “Show yourself!” she shouted, defiant. Silence. Just as she thought she might turn back, a figure darted between the trees. It was quick—rapid movement barely catching the corner of her eye. Rory gulped but pressed onward. The pull of the portal consumed her thoughts. She needed to know what lay beyond. A branch snapped again, louder this time, and she turned her gaze wildly. “Alright, enough games!” Then it happened—the air shimmered, expanded, as if breathing. The Heartstone hung heavy, a beacon in the night pulling her closer. “Rory...” A voice—soft, almost a whisper—drifted through the trees, warm and inviting, yet laced with an unshakable tension. She blinked, looking around. “Who’s there?” Silence followed again, thick with anticipation. The trees swayed, an unseen wind with no origin. A flash of movement caught her eye, too quick to discern, but a feeling of dread gripped her. “Rory...” The voice rolled through the grove once more, beckoning her, wrapping around her thoughts like a vine. Her pulse quickened—was it a trick, a lure? Had she stepped into a game she didn't understand? Shaking her head, she took a step back from the glowing portal. Instinct warned her. The shadows crept closer, swirling against the backdrop of the trees. “Stop!” she yelled, hoping the command would somehow halt whatever it was stalking her. The shadows shifted, no longer mere tricks of the light. They formed shapes, grotesque and elongated, shifting under the canopy. She turned, heart racing, and took another fearful step back. The pendant’s pulse quickened, warning her of their approach. “Don’t,” she heard, barely a breath in the air. It sounded like a warning, or perhaps a plea. “No,” she countered, feeling her back hit the rough bark of a tree. “You’re not taking me…” The shadows writhed as the figures moved closer, their features indistinct, pooling darkness. They elongated, twisted limbs reaching toward her. Fear surged through her, her instincts screaming for her to run, but she stood frozen. A flash illuminated the grove—a crackling burst of energy shot from the portal, bright and blinding. The shadows paused, retreating slightly, hissing like smoke caught in a flame. She felt a strange disconnect; the air trembled with a strange current, urging her to choose. “Rory,” the voice sang again, gentle yet terrified of what loomed in the dark. The portal pulsated, a poignant reminder of possibility and danger. Her fingers tightened around the Heartstone, a last tether to this world. If she stepped through, would she be lost to shadows? Suddenly, a deep, malevolent growl echoed, sending a jolt through her spine. The shadows coiled back, rippling like water disturbed, and she gritted her teeth. “Get away from me!” she shouted, finally breaking the paralysis gripping her limbs. With a deep breath, she turned, footfall loud and wild on the earth, and fled. The shadows hissed, the voice calling after her, desperate, almost pleading. “Rory!” But she wouldn't stop. Not tonight. Under the canopy of twisted trees, she darted, heart racing and footsteps pounding. The grove whispered and shouted, the echoes of the portal behind her fading into the wind. The cacophony of shadows left her breathless, but the familiar cityscape echoed in her ears, drawing her ever forward. She pushed through the tangled branches, tearing at her clothes and skin, but the thrill of fear kept her going. She would not be taken. Not tonight. Not ever. As the wildflowers swayed with her escape, she burst through the standing stones and into the night, gasping for the cool air that swept over her. The dread lingered, coiling around her like a lingering mist, as the grove receded behind her, but she had escaped— for now.
total_cost0.0010951499999999998

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she heard barely [barely]"
1"the voice sang again [again]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
87.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsms46
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"solace"
count1
7
word"silence"
count4
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count2
11
word"tension"
count2
12
word"determined"
count1
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count3
19
word"shimmered"
count1
20
word"beacon"
count1
21
word"whisper"
count1
22
word"anticipation"
count1
23
word"quickened"
count2
24
word"racing"
count2
25
word"trembled"
count1
26
word"footfall"
count1
27
word"footsteps"
count1
28
word"pounding"
count1
29
word"echoes"
count1
30
word"cacophony"
count1
31
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"chill"
5"down her spine"
6"solace"
7"silence"
8"flickered"
9"throbbed"
10"reminder"
11"tension"
12"determined"
13"raced"
14"echoing"
15"scanning"
16"weight"
17"pulsed"
18"echoed"
19"shimmered"
20"beacon"
21"whisper"
22"anticipation"
23"quickened"
24"racing"
25"trembled"
26"footfall"
27"footsteps"
28"pounding"
29"echoes"
30"cacophony"
31"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences100
matches
0"k with anticipation"
1"a feeling of dread"
2"the thrill of fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1148
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1101
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove2
Heartstone7
Eva1
Ahead1
Rory7
Grass1
Silence3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Grass"
4"Silence"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed thicker almost sentient"
1"as if breathing"
2"sounded like a warning, or perhaps a plea"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1148
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean26.7
std17.43
cv0.653
sampleLengths
057
158
236
317
451
551
638
732
857
922
1041
1110
1242
1321
145
151
1625
1733
183
1921
201
2117
226
2333
2418
2517
2626
2714
2839
2918
3017
3135
3244
3314
3432
3525
3613
3726
381
396
4068
419
4248
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was being"
1"was stalking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences107
ratio0.121
matches
0"Just shadows—only shadows."
1"As she forged ahead, the faint sounds of the city—distant sirens and murmurings—faded, replaced by an eerie stillness."
2"Ahead, something flickered—a hint of movement?"
3"Shrugging off her discomfort, Rory pressed on, determined to find what she came for—a glimpse of the portal."
4"Then there it was—a soft glow, shimmering just beyond the standing stones."
5"The pulsating warmth from the Heartstone escalated as she crossed into the circle of standing stones, each ancient oak towering above her like a protective guardian—or perhaps a prison warden."
6"It was quick—rapid movement barely catching the corner of her eye."
7"Then it happened—the air shimmered, expanded, as if breathing."
8"A voice—soft, almost a whisper—drifted through the trees, warm and inviting, yet laced with an unshakable tension."
9"Her pulse quickened—was it a trick, a lure?"
10"A flash illuminated the grove—a crackling burst of energy shot from the portal, bright and blinding."
11"She felt a strange disconnect; the air trembled with a strange current, urging her to choose."
12"The dread lingered, coiling around her like a lingering mist, as the grove receded behind her, but she had escaped— for now."
94.98% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1115
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.045739910313901344
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013452914798206279
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.73
std5.77
cv0.538
sampleLengths
012
112
212
312
49
522
624
712
812
911
1010
113
1213
134
1418
159
1624
176
1812
1912
2021
2112
2210
232
2414
2518
2614
2712
283
295
307
3130
3216
336
3411
357
3614
379
386
394
405
4111
4210
4316
449
458
464
475
481
4914
62.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3925233644859813
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences95
matches
0"Just shadows—only shadows."
1"Then there it was—a soft"
2"Maybe she was being foolish,"
3"Then it happened—the air shimmered,"
4"Suddenly, a deep, malevolent growl"
ratio0.053
93.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences95
matches
0"They stood like ominous sentinels,"
1"She clutched the Heartstone pendant"
2"It beckoned her deeper into"
3"She peered into the underbrush,"
4"she murmured to herself, her"
5"She squinted, but it vanished"
6"She instinctively reached for her"
7"she called out, voice steady"
8"She stepped closer, the Grass"
9"She gasped as the portal"
10"It beckoned, promising secrets and"
11"She froze, eyes wide, scanning"
12"She turned slowly, searching."
13"she shouted, defiant"
14"It was quick—rapid movement barely"
15"She needed to know what"
16"She blinked, looking around."
17"Her pulse quickened—was it a"
18"she yelled, hoping the command"
19"They formed shapes, grotesque and"
ratio0.316
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences95
matches
0"Aurora stepped into The Fae"
1"The air, thick with humidity,"
2"They stood like ominous sentinels,"
3"She clutched the Heartstone pendant"
4"It beckoned her deeper into"
5"A chill ran down her"
6"Rory always found solace in"
7"She peered into the underbrush,"
8"A rustle startled her, and"
9"she murmured to herself, her"
10"The trees whispered, leaves shivered"
11"Aurora remembered Eva’s warnings, the"
12"She squinted, but it vanished"
13"Rory took a tentative step"
14"She instinctively reached for her"
15"she called out, voice steady"
16"The woods swallowed her words,"
17"Nothing but the rustle of"
18"The stories said the Heartstone"
19"Rory’s heart raced."
ratio0.8
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Just as she thought she"
1"If she stepped through, would"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone pendant at her neck, feeling its warmth pulse against her skin, sending a reassuring thrum through her body."
1"It beckoned her deeper into the Grove, closer to the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary between this world and the unknown."
2"As the wildflowers swayed with her escape, she burst through the standing stones and into the night, gasping for the cool air that swept over her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called out, voice steady despite the quavering of her core"
1"Rory asked, voice steady"
2"she shouted, defiant"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she shouted (shout)"
3"she yelled (yell)"
4"the voice sang again (sing)"
5"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.667
79.2063%