| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1005 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1005 | | totalAiIsms | 44 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "beacon" | | 7 | "footfall" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "anticipation" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "raced" | | 17 | "pulsed" | | 18 | "tension" | | 19 | "down her spine" | | 20 | "glinting" | | 21 | "intensity" | | 22 | "skipped a beat" | | 23 | "familiar" | | 24 | "chill" | | 25 | "sentinels" | | 26 | "shimmered" | | 27 | "surreal" | | 28 | "determined" | | 29 | "sense of" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "a thrill of fear" | | 1 | "h in anticipation" |
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| 62.37% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1004 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 988 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Silence" |
| | globalScore | 0.842 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 77.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "warmth that seemed to urge her forward" | | 1 | "rhythm that seemed to sync with her heartbeat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1004 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.46% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 35.86 | | std | 13.09 | | cv | 0.365 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 19 |
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| 90.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "been drawn" | | 1 | "was said" | | 2 | "was determined" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 989 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.0262891809908999 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008088978766430738 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 59.70% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 13.94 | | std | 4.17 | | cv | 0.299 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 45.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.25 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.99% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to The" | | 1 | "She felt watched, a sensation" | | 2 | "Her hand instinctively brushed the" | | 3 | "She had been drawn here" | | 4 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 5 | "It felt alive, thrumming with" | | 6 | "She turned sharply, but the" | | 7 | "Her heart pounded in her" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 9 | "She had dismissed them as" | | 10 | "She took another step, her" | | 11 | "She could almost taste it," | | 12 | "Her voice was stronger now," | | 13 | "She refused to be cowed" | | 14 | "Her heart skipped a beat," | | 15 | "She took a step back," | | 16 | "She couldn't leave, not yet." | | 17 | "It vanished as quickly as" | | 18 | "It was a voice she" | | 19 | "she demanded, her voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.423 | |
| 2.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter's breath came in" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She had come to The" | | 3 | "The grove was eerily silent," | | 4 | "Aurora paused, her bright blue" | | 5 | "She felt watched, a sensation" | | 6 | "Her hand instinctively brushed the" | | 7 | "She had been drawn here" | | 8 | "The grove, a hidden clearing" | | 9 | "Aurora took a cautious step" | | 10 | "The standing stones seemed to" | | 11 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 12 | "It felt alive, thrumming with" | | 13 | "A whisper of movement caught" | | 14 | "She turned sharply, but the" | | 15 | "Her heart pounded in her" | | 16 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 17 | "Silence answered her, a heavy," | | 18 | "Aurora's mind raced, recalling the" | | 19 | "Tales of those who entered" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones seemed to pulse with their own rhythm, a silent heartbeat that matched the pendant's glow." | | 1 | "It felt alive, thrumming with an ancient power that resonated through her bones." | | 2 | "The pendant pulsed again, a steady rhythm that seemed to sync with her heartbeat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her gut" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |