| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx's form condensed slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 85.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 700 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 700 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "dancing" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 98.96% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | matches | | |
| 8.93% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 701 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.54% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 553 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.99 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Isolde | 6 | | Nyx | 4 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | December | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Wildflowers" |
| | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.505 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to move when viewed from the corner of the eye" | | 1 | "not quite sound, but the memory of sound, like the ghost of a melody played centuries ago still echoing in the stone" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.853 | | wordCount | 701 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite sound, but the memory of sound, like the ghost of a melody played centu" | | 1 | "Not just between Earth and the Fae realm, but everywhere" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.43% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 38.94 | | std | 13.53 | | cv | 0.348 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 41 | | ratio | 0.122 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught at the sight before her - reality itself seemed to bend and twist here, the trees growing at impossible angles while still somehow remaining upright." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous colors that had no business blooming in December - violet bell-shaped blooms next to golden star-petals and spiraling crimson flowers Aurora had never seen before." | | 2 | "Aurora cocked her head, and for a moment she thought she caught something - not quite sound, but the memory of sound, like the ghost of a melody played centuries ago still echoing in the stone." | | 3 | "Fragments of other places flickered at the edges of Aurora's vision - sun-drenched meadows, moonlit forests, landscapes that couldn't exist on Earth." | | 4 | "She had never felt smaller - or more aware of how vast and strange the world truly was." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 552 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.025362318840579712 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005434782608695652 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 41 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 41 | | mean | 17.1 | | std | 8.35 | | cv | 0.489 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 18 |
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| 84.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5365853658536586 | | totalSentences | 41 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught at the" | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 2 | "she breathed, understanding dawning" | | 3 | "She had never felt smaller" |
| | ratio | 0.125 | |
| 38.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver moonlight shifted and" | | 1 | "Her breath caught at the" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 4 | "Each step released bursts of" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 6 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 7 | "The bark felt both rough" | | 8 | "Isolde glided ahead of them," | | 9 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 10 | "Isolde's pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 11 | "The Fae-forged blade at her" | | 12 | "Nyx's form condensed slightly as" | | 13 | "The stones rose from the" | | 14 | "The air grew thicker, heavier" | | 15 | "Isolde said, trailing her fingers" | | 16 | "Aurora cocked her head, and" | | 17 | "The circle opened onto a" | | 18 | "A pool of water flowed" | | 19 | "Isolde cautioned as Aurora stepped" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "As if to emphasize her" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 18.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous colors that had no business blooming in December - violet bell-shaped blooms next to golden star-petals and spiraling…" | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught the strange light filtering through the canopy above, creating dancing patterns that hurt Aurora's eyes if she looked too long." | | 2 | "As if to emphasize her point, Aurora spotted a patch of autumn leaves falling upward into their branch, while nearby spring buds burst into full bloom in the sp…" | | 3 | "Fragments of other places flickered at the edges of Aurora's vision - sun-drenched meadows, moonlit forests, landscapes that couldn't exist on Earth." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on a nonexistent breeze" | | 1 | "she breathed, understanding dawning" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.188 | | leniency | 0.375 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |