Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR03VVA4Z5QAKXDQDKJ2KS

Run Details

Duration:
32.9s
Cost:
$0.041010
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver moonlight shifted and warped as Aurora stepped through the ancient oak archway into Isolde's grove. Her breath caught at the sight before her - reality itself seemed to bend and twist here, the trees growing at impossible angles while still somehow remaining upright. Behind her, Nyx's shadowy form rippled like ink in water. "The Veil is paper-thin here," Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on a nonexistent breeze. "Watch your step." Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous colors that had no business blooming in December - violet bell-shaped blooms next to golden star-petals and spiraling crimson flowers Aurora had never seen before. Each step released bursts of sweet fragrance into the air. The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed with warmth, matching the rhythm of her quickening heartbeat. "This place..." Aurora reached out to touch one of the twisted tree trunks. The bark felt both rough and smooth beneath her fingers, like water frozen in the act of flowing. "It's beautiful and wrong at the same time." Isolde glided ahead of them, her bare feet passing over the flowers without bending a single stem. Her silver hair caught the strange light filtering through the canopy above, creating dancing patterns that hurt Aurora's eyes if she looked too long. "The grove remembers what it once was, and what it might have been, and what it could still become." Isolde's pale lavender eyes reflected something ancient and unknowable. "All times are one time here." As if to emphasize her point, Aurora spotted a patch of autumn leaves falling upward into their branch, while nearby spring buds burst into full bloom in the space of a heartbeat. The Fae-forged blade at her hip grew colder, its presence both reassuring and a reminder that they weren't in the normal world anymore. "There." Nyx's form condensed slightly as they pointed toward a circle of standing stones ahead. "The boundary stones grow stronger. We're nearing the heart." The stones rose from the earth like ancient teeth, their surfaces covered in spiraling patterns that seemed to move when viewed from the corner of the eye. As they passed between two of the monoliths, Aurora's skin prickled with electricity. The air grew thicker, heavier with possibility. "The stones remember the old songs," Isolde said, trailing her fingers along one of the carvings. "They sing them still, for those who know how to listen." Aurora cocked her head, and for a moment she thought she caught something - not quite sound, but the memory of sound, like the ghost of a melody played centuries ago still echoing in the stone. The circle opened onto a clearing where reality seemed to have given up entirely on making sense. A pool of water flowed up the trunk of an enormous oak tree, its surface rippling with stars that didn't match the sky above. Fragments of other places flickered at the edges of Aurora's vision - sun-drenched meadows, moonlit forests, landscapes that couldn't exist on Earth. "Mind the edges," Isolde cautioned as Aurora stepped forward. "The boundaries blur here. One misstep could send you somewhere else entirely." Nyx drifted to the base of the impossible tree, their shadowy form seeming more substantial in this place between places. "The Veil doesn't just thin here - it weaves. Threads of all realms intertwine." Aurora's hand went to the Heartstone pendant as it flared with sudden warmth. Through the twisted branches above, she caught a glimpse of an amber sky that had to belong to Dymas. The scent of exotic spices drifted past, there and gone in an instant. "It's a crossroads," she breathed, understanding dawning. "Not just between Earth and the Fae realm, but everywhere." Isolde smiled, the expression both ageless and sad. "Now you begin to see. This grove is a place of possibilities, of paths not taken and choices yet to make. It shows us what we need to see, if we have the courage to look." The wildflowers swayed in patterns that had nothing to do with wind, and somewhere in the distance, Aurora heard bells that chimed with colors instead of sound. She had never felt smaller - or more aware of how vast and strange the world truly was.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx's form condensed slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.125
85.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount700
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount700
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"dancing"
3"reminder"
4"echoing"
5"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
98.96% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences32
matches
0"d with warmth"
8.93% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences32
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences41
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords701
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount553
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Isolde6
Nyx4
Wildflowers1
December1
Heartstone2
Fae-forged1
Earth1
Dymas1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Wildflowers"
places
0"December"
1"Heartstone"
2"Dymas"
globalScore0.505
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"patterns that seemed to move when viewed from the corner of the eye"
1"not quite sound, but the memory of sound, like the ghost of a melody played centuries ago still echoing in the stone"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.853
wordCount701
matches
0"not quite sound, but the memory of sound, like the ghost of a melody played centu"
1"Not just between Earth and the Fae realm, but everywhere"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
56.43% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean38.94
std13.53
cv0.348
sampleLengths
055
117
257
339
441
534
655
724
847
927
1036
1163
1221
1334
1445
1517
1644
1745
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences41
ratio0.122
matches
0"Her breath caught at the sight before her - reality itself seemed to bend and twist here, the trees growing at impossible angles while still somehow remaining upright."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous colors that had no business blooming in December - violet bell-shaped blooms next to golden star-petals and spiraling crimson flowers Aurora had never seen before."
2"Aurora cocked her head, and for a moment she thought she caught something - not quite sound, but the memory of sound, like the ghost of a melody played centuries ago still echoing in the stone."
3"Fragments of other places flickered at the edges of Aurora's vision - sun-drenched meadows, moonlit forests, landscapes that couldn't exist on Earth."
4"She had never felt smaller - or more aware of how vast and strange the world truly was."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount552
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.025362318840579712
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005434782608695652
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences41
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences41
mean17.1
std8.35
cv0.489
sampleLengths
017
128
210
314
43
531
610
716
813
918
108
1117
1224
1328
146
1532
1623
1715
189
1927
2013
217
2216
2311
2436
2517
2624
2722
289
2912
3020
3114
3213
3319
3413
357
3610
378
3836
3927
4018
84.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5365853658536586
totalSentences41
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences32
matches
0"Her breath caught at the"
1"Her silver hair caught the"
2"she breathed, understanding dawning"
3"She had never felt smaller"
ratio0.125
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences32
matches
0"The silver moonlight shifted and"
1"Her breath caught at the"
2"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying"
3"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
4"Each step released bursts of"
5"The Heartstone pendant at her"
6"Aurora reached out to touch"
7"The bark felt both rough"
8"Isolde glided ahead of them,"
9"Her silver hair caught the"
10"Isolde's pale lavender eyes reflected"
11"The Fae-forged blade at her"
12"Nyx's form condensed slightly as"
13"The stones rose from the"
14"The air grew thicker, heavier"
15"Isolde said, trailing her fingers"
16"Aurora cocked her head, and"
17"The circle opened onto a"
18"A pool of water flowed"
19"Isolde cautioned as Aurora stepped"
ratio0.844
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences32
matches
0"As if to emphasize her"
ratio0.031
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous colors that had no business blooming in December - violet bell-shaped blooms next to golden star-petals and spiraling…"
1"Her silver hair caught the strange light filtering through the canopy above, creating dancing patterns that hurt Aurora's eyes if she looked too long."
2"As if to emphasize her point, Aurora spotted a patch of autumn leaves falling upward into their branch, while nearby spring buds burst into full bloom in the sp…"
3"Fragments of other places flickered at the edges of Aurora's vision - sun-drenched meadows, moonlit forests, landscapes that couldn't exist on Earth."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on a nonexistent breeze"
1"she breathed, understanding dawning"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.25
66.3963%