Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR0510W93HJ2E7AYW6PBP0

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13.4s
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$0.028585
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Azure

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the door to The Raven's Nest, the familiar green neon sign casting a soft glow on her face. She stepped inside, the scent of aged wood and whiskey wrapping around her like an old, comforting blanket. The dim lighting and the hum of quiet conversations made the bar feel like a sanctuary from the bustling streets of Soho. She made her way to the counter, her eyes scanning the room out of habit. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his silver signet ring catching the light as he polished a glass. He looked up and gave her a nod, his hazel eyes warm with recognition. "Rory," he greeted, his voice a low rumble. "It's been a while." "Hey, Si," she replied, sliding onto a barstool. "Busy day. Thought I'd unwind here." Silas placed the glass down and leaned on the counter, his gaze steady. "You look like you could use a drink. The usual?" "Please." As Silas prepared her drink, Aurora glanced around the bar. The walls were still adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, each one telling a story of its own. She felt a pang of nostalgia, remembering the countless nights she had spent here, seeking refuge from her chaotic life. Silas set the drink in front of her, and she took a sip, savoring the familiar taste. "Thanks, Si." "Anytime, Rory." The door to the bar opened again, and Aurora turned to see who had entered. Her breath caught in her throat as she recognized the figure standing in the doorway. It was Eva, her childhood friend, the one who had convinced her to leave Cardiff and start anew in London. But Eva looked different now. Her once vibrant red hair was now a muted auburn, and there was a hardness in her eyes that hadn't been there before. Eva's gaze swept the room and landed on Aurora. For a moment, they simply stared at each other, the weight of years and unspoken words hanging between them. Then, with a hesitant smile, Eva made her way to the bar. "Rory," she said, her voice tinged with surprise. "I didn't expect to see you here." "Eva," Aurora replied, her tone carefully neutral. "It's been a long time." Eva slid onto the barstool next to Aurora, her movements graceful yet guarded. "Yeah, it has. How have you been?" Aurora took another sip of her drink, buying herself a moment to gather her thoughts. "I've been... managing. You?" "Same," Eva said, her eyes flicking to Silas, who was watching them with a keen interest. "Can I get a whiskey, neat?" Silas nodded and set about preparing the drink. Aurora studied Eva, noting the subtle changes in her friend's appearance. There were faint lines around her eyes, and her posture was more rigid than Aurora remembered. It was clear that time had not been kind to either of them. "So," Aurora began, her voice soft. "What brings you to The Raven's Nest?" Eva shrugged, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. "I was in the area and thought I'd stop by. Didn't expect to run into you, though." "Yeah, well, life has a funny way of throwing surprises at us." Silas placed Eva's drink in front of her and retreated to the other end of the bar, giving them some privacy. Eva took a sip of her whiskey, her eyes never leaving Aurora's face. "You've changed," Eva said, her tone almost accusatory. Aurora raised an eyebrow. "So have you." Eva let out a bitter laugh. "I suppose we all do, eventually." They fell into a heavy silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora's mind raced with memories of their childhood, the laughter and secrets they had shared. But those days felt like a lifetime ago, and the distance between them now seemed insurmountable. "Do you ever think about Cardiff?" Eva asked suddenly, her voice barely above a whisper. Aurora's grip tightened around her glass. "Sometimes. But it's not the same without you." Eva looked away, her expression pained. "I had to leave, Rory. You know that." "I know," Aurora said, her voice cracking. "But it doesn't make it any easier." Eva's eyes softened, and for a moment, Aurora saw a glimpse of the friend she had once known. "I'm sorry," Eva said, her voice filled with regret. "I never meant to hurt you." Aurora swallowed hard, the lump in her throat making it difficult to speak. "I know. I just... I miss the way things used to be." Eva reached out and placed a hand on Aurora's arm, the touch both comforting and heartbreaking. "Me too." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar fading into the background as they grappled with the weight of their past. Aurora felt a tear slip down her cheek, and she quickly wiped it away, not wanting to show weakness. "Do you ever wonder what might have been?" Eva asked, her voice barely audible. "All the time," Aurora admitted. "But we can't change the past." "No, we can't," Eva agreed. "But maybe we can find a way to move forward." Aurora looked into Eva's eyes, searching for any sign of the friend she had once known. "Do you think we can?" Eva's smile was sad but hopeful. "I think we can try." Aurora nodded, feeling a glimmer of hope for the first time in years. "Yeah, we can try." They clinked their glasses together, the sound a small but significant gesture of reconciliation. As they drank, Aurora felt the weight of the years begin to lift, replaced by the possibility of a new beginning. Silas watched them from the other end of the bar, a knowing smile on his lips. He had seen many reunions in his time, but this one felt different. There was a sense of healing in the air, a promise of better days to come. Aurora and Eva continued to talk, their conversation flowing more easily as the night wore on. They shared stories of their lives, the struggles and triumphs that had shaped them into the people they were now. And as they spoke, the distance between them slowly began to close. By the time the bar began to empty, Aurora felt a sense of peace she hadn't known in years. She looked at Eva, her heart full of gratitude for this unexpected reunion. "Thank you," she said, her voice filled with emotion. "For everything." Eva smiled, her eyes shining with unshed tears. "No, thank you, Rory. For not giving up on me." They embraced, the hug a promise of a renewed friendship. As they pulled away, Aurora felt a sense of hope for the future, knowing that no matter what lay ahead, they would face it together. Silas approached them, his limp more pronounced after a long night on his feet. "Closing time, ladies." Aurora nodded, feeling a sense of contentment she hadn't felt in years. "We'll be going, Si. Thanks for everything." "Anytime, Rory," Silas replied, his eyes twinkling with warmth. "Take care of each other." "We will," Eva said, her voice filled with determination. As they left The Raven's Nest, Aurora felt a sense of closure and a new beginning all at once. The weight of the past had been lifted, and she was ready to face whatever the future held, knowing that she had her friend by her side once more.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.042
79.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1239
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"quickly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1239
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"comforting"
count2
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"pang"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"weight"
count5
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"tinged"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count5
15
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"comforting"
2"sanctuary"
3"scanning"
4"pang"
5"chaotic"
6"weight"
7"unspoken"
8"tinged"
9"tracing"
10"eyebrow"
11"silence"
12"raced"
13"whisper"
14"sense of"
15"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a glimmer of hope"
26.32% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells9
narrationSentences76
matches
0"a pang of nostalgia"
1"d with surprise"
2"filled with regret"
3"d with regret"
4"was sad"
5"a sense of hope"
6"g with warmth"
7"filled with determination"
8"d with determination"
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"begin to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1237
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount999
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.8
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Blackwood1
Silas10
Aurora28
Eva25
Cardiff1
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
5"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.099
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed insurmountable"
1"felt like a lifetime ago, and the dista"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1237
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"clear that time"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean24.25
std16.18
cv0.667
sampleLengths
062
147
212
314
423
51
649
719
82
978
1040
1115
1212
1320
1419
1522
1648
1713
1827
1912
2034
218
227
2312
2447
2515
2614
2714
2814
2933
3025
3118
3241
3314
3411
3515
3621
3711
3817
3935
4045
4148
4232
4311
4418
4535
4617
4719
4814
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"been lifted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences108
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1001
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.026973026973026972
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007992007992007992
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.45
std5.96
cv0.521
sampleLengths
022
118
222
315
418
514
68
74
88
96
1013
1110
121
1310
1419
1520
1617
172
182
1915
2015
2120
225
2323
249
2519
2612
278
287
297
305
3113
327
3315
344
3516
366
378
3811
3916
4013
416
427
4310
4417
4512
4621
4713
488
494
56.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.35185185185185186
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners38
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then, with a hesitant smile,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences74
matches
0"She stepped inside, the scent"
1"She made her way to"
2"He looked up and gave"
3"he greeted, his voice a"
4"she replied, sliding onto a"
5"She felt a pang of"
6"Her breath caught in her"
7"It was Eva, her childhood"
8"Her once vibrant red hair"
9"she said, her voice tinged"
10"It was clear that time"
11"They fell into a heavy"
12"They sat in silence, the"
13"They clinked their glasses together,"
14"He had seen many reunions"
15"They shared stories of their"
16"She looked at Eva, her"
17"she said, her voice filled"
18"They embraced, the hug a"
ratio0.257
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
1"She stepped inside, the scent"
2"The dim lighting and the"
3"She made her way to"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"He looked up and gave"
6"he greeted, his voice a"
7"she replied, sliding onto a"
8"Silas placed the glass down"
9"The walls were still adorned"
10"She felt a pang of"
11"Silas set the drink in"
12"The door to the bar"
13"Her breath caught in her"
14"It was Eva, her childhood"
15"Her once vibrant red hair"
16"Eva's gaze swept the room"
17"she said, her voice tinged"
18"Aurora replied, her tone carefully"
19"Eva slid onto the barstool"
ratio0.838
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"By the time the bar"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"They shared stories of their lives, the struggles and triumphs that had shaped them into the people they were now."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he greeted, his voice a low rumble"
1"Aurora replied, her tone carefully neutral"
2"Aurora began, her voice soft"
3"Eva said, her tone almost accusatory"
4"Eva asked suddenly, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"Aurora said, her voice cracking"
6"Eva asked, her voice barely audible"
7"Silas replied, his eyes twinkling with warmth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora admitted (admit)"
1"Eva agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.292
leniency0.583
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.083
79.4764%