Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR0BHCDPHKHQDR0R7H984B

Run Details

Duration:
45.0s
Cost:
$0.036996
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora nursed her whiskey, watching the amber liquid catch the dim light of The Raven's Nest. Friday night, and the bar hummed with the usual crowd – city professionals unwinding after a long week, locals seeking refuge from London's persistent drizzle, and the occasional tourist who'd stumbled upon this hidden gem in Soho by happy accident. Three months since she'd fled Cardiff, and this place had become her sanctuary. The thought of Evan still sent a cold shiver down her spine – his messages, his "apologies," his threats. She took another sip, letting the liquor burn away the memory. "Penny for your thoughts?" Silas appeared behind the bar, cloth in hand, polishing an already gleaming glass. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light as he moved. "Just the usual demons." She smiled thinly. "Nothing worth a penny." Silas nodded, understanding in his hazel eyes. He leaned slightly against the bar, taking weight off his left leg – the old Prague injury acting up again with the damp weather. "Sometimes naming the demons robs them of power." His voice carried the weight of experience. "But I won't pry." The door swung open, letting in a blast of cold air and the sound of rain. Aurora didn't look up, tracing the rim of her glass with her finger, until— "Rory? Aurora Carter?" The voice froze her mid-motion. Familiar, yet altered somehow – deeper, more confident than she remembered. She turned slowly, disbelief washing over her. "Marcus?" He stood just inside the entrance, rain glistening on his expensive wool coat. Marcus Whitley – her university debate partner, once her closest friend, now practically a stranger. Five years since they'd last spoken. "My God, it is you." His face broke into a wide smile as he approached, arms opening for an embrace. Aurora stood, accepting the hug stiffly, catching Silas's watchful gaze over Marcus's shoulder. "What are you doing here?" She pulled back, studying him. Gone was the disheveled philosophy student with radical ideas and perpetually stained t-shirts. This Marcus was polished, tailored, with a haircut that probably cost more than her weekly rent. "Client meeting nearby. I remembered this place from that article in The Guardian last year." He gestured vaguely around the bar. "Never imagined I'd find you here, though. Small world, eh?" "The smallest." She gestured to the stool beside hers. "Join me?" Marcus slid onto the seat, ordering a scotch from Silas, who introduced himself with a firm handshake and searching look before moving away to give them space. "So." Marcus turned to her, appraising her with those familiar brown eyes. "Delivery girl for a Chinese restaurant. Not exactly where I pictured Aurora Carter ending up." Heat rose to her cheeks. Of course he'd spotted her jacket with the Golden Empress logo draped over her chair. "It pays the rent while I figure things out." "And what happened to law school? Last I heard, you were following Daddy's footsteps into the illustrious world of barristers." Aurora's finger traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a nervous habit. "I finished the degree. Never took the bar exam." "What a waste." The words weren't malicious, but they stung all the same. "And you? Still planning to dismantle capitalism from within?" Marcus laughed, the sound polished like the rest of him. "God, we were naive back then. No, I'm with Harrington & Webb now. Corporate law." "The very firm you once called, and I quote, 'soulless vampires feeding on the blood of the working class.'" She took a sip of her whiskey, watching him over the rim. "People change, Rory." He loosened his tie slightly. "Some of us grow up." The unspoken accusation hung between them. "So I see." She nodded at his platinum wedding band. "Married too." "Three years now. Charlotte. She's in finance. We have a place in Kensington." "Children?" "Not yet. Career first, you know how it is. Or..." He trailed off, perhaps remembering that she might not, in fact, know how it was. "I'm happy for you," she said, meaning it despite the strange hollowness in her chest. Silas delivered Marcus's scotch, then limped back to the other end of the bar, though Aurora noticed he remained within earshot. "What about you? Anyone special?" Marcus swirled his drink, not quite meeting her eyes. The image of Evan flashed through her mind – his smile, his rage, the sound of breaking glass. "Not anymore." Something in her tone made Marcus look up sharply. "I heard you left Cardiff rather suddenly." "News travels." "We still have mutual friends." He paused. "Was it because of me? What happened at graduation?" Aurora laughed, a short, harsh sound. "Not everything is about you, Marcus." "Then what? Because one day you were there, and the next you'd blocked everyone and disappeared." "I needed a fresh start." "From what?" "From people asking too many questions." She drained her glass. Silence settled between them, heavy with unspoken words. "We were good friends once," Marcus said finally, softer now. "Best friends." "Once." "What happened to us, Rory?" She studied him – the designer watch, the manicured nails, the careful distance in his eyes despite his intimate questions. "You happened. I happened. Life happened." "That's cryptic." "It's honest." She signaled to Silas for another drink. "You made your choices, I made mine." "My choices weren't wrong just because they were different from what we planned at twenty." "I never said they were wrong. Just different." Her voice softened. "You fit your life like a tailored suit, Marcus. It suits you." "But you don't approve." "It's not about approval." "Then what is it about? Because I feel like you're judging me for having a successful career and a stable life." Aurora laughed, genuine this time. "Is that what you think this is? Me judging your success?" "Isn't it?" "No, Marcus. It's about the fact that you haven't once asked why I left Cardiff. Why I'm working delivery instead of law. Why I live above a bar in Soho instead of practicing in chambers." She accepted the fresh whiskey Silas silently placed before her. "It's about you assuming I'm judging you, when really, you're the one measuring me against your standards and finding me wanting." Marcus flinched. "That's not fair." "Isn't it? Five minutes in, and you called my life choices a 'waste.'" He had the grace to look embarrassed. "I didn't mean—" "Yes, you did." She sighed, running a hand through her straight black hair. "We were friends because we saw the world the same way once. Now we don't. That's all." "Is there no middle ground? No way to bridge that gap?" Aurora's bright blue eyes met his. "I don't know. Is there? Because from where I'm sitting, you've become everything we once despised, and you're proud of it." "And you're running from something, hiding in a bar, delivering takeout instead of using your degree." His words weren't cruel, just concerned, which somehow made them worse. "Yes." She nodded slowly. "I am." The admission hung between them, unexpected in its honesty. "Why?" he asked, gentler now. Aurora touched her scar again. "Because I learned the hard way that some battles can't be won through debate and clever arguments. That sometimes the right answer is just to walk away." "From what, Rory? What happened?" She hesitated, then turned her wrist slightly, revealing the crescent scar in the bar's dim light. "Not all scars are from childhood accidents." Understanding dawned slowly on Marcus's face, followed by horror. "Someone hurt you." "Someone I trusted." He reached for her hand, but stopped short, unsure if the gesture would be welcome. "I'm sorry." "Not your fault." "I should have stayed in touch. After what happened between us—" "That was five years ago. Ancient history." "Not to me." He looked down at his expensive shoes. "I think about it sometimes. What I said to you. How we left things." "We were kids playing at being adults." "We were friends who let politics and ambition come between us." Aurora's smile was sad. "And look at us now. You became what you swore you'd fight. I'm running from the battles I promised I'd win." "We were both wrong about a lot of things." "And right about others." She met his gaze. "I don't regret standing by what I believed, even if the world's more complicated than I thought." "Neither do I." Silence fell again, but different now – reflective rather than tense. "Do you ever wonder," Marcus asked finally, "what would have happened if we'd stayed friends? If we hadn't let that fight end everything?" "Sometimes." She looked toward Silas, who was watching them with quiet consideration. "But I think we both needed to find our own paths." "Even if those paths led us here? Me to everything we once mocked, you to hiding from your life?" "I'm not hiding. I'm healing. There's a difference." Marcus nodded slowly. "I think I understand that now."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:44:20.657Z" 2/19/2026, 10:44:20 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
73.68% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"She smiled thinly [thinly]"
1"She pulled back [back]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"Marcus said finally [finally]"
4"She nodded slowly [slowly]"
5"Marcus asked finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.295
leniency0.589
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.126
63.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1487
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count4
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"sharply"
4"suddenly"
5"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1487
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"carried the weight"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"glistening"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count2
11
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"down her spine"
2"gleaming"
3"weight"
4"carried the weight"
5"tracing"
6"familiar"
7"glistening"
8"footsteps"
9"traced"
10"unspoken"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"was sad"
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1494
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount744
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Marcus"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Soho1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Silas8
Prague1
Whitley1
Aurora10
Marcus14
Gone1
Heat1
Golden1
Empress1
Silence2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Evan"
2"Silas"
3"Whitley"
4"Aurora"
5"Marcus"
6"Silence"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
globalScore0.559
windowScore0.667
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared behind the bar, cloth in hand, polishing an already gleaming glass"
1"not quite meeting her eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1494
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"remembering that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean16.42
std11.83
cv0.72
sampleLengths
056
143
231
311
431
519
630
73
823
91
1034
1120
1213
1339
1431
1511
1627
1727
1820
199
2020
2124
2213
239
2425
2531
2613
276
2812
2913
301
3125
3215
3321
3414
3520
3616
372
3816
3912
4016
415
422
4310
448
4512
461
475
4826
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences137
ratio0.073
matches
0"Friday night, and the bar hummed with the usual crowd – city professionals unwinding after a long week, locals seeking refuge from London's persistent drizzle, and the occasional tourist who'd stumbled upon this hidden gem in Soho by happy accident."
1"The thought of Evan still sent a cold shiver down her spine – his messages, his \"apologies,\" his threats."
2"He leaned slightly against the bar, taking weight off his left leg – the old Prague injury acting up again with the damp weather."
3"Aurora didn't look up, tracing the rim of her glass with her finger, until—"
4"Familiar, yet altered somehow – deeper, more confident than she remembered."
5"Marcus Whitley – her university debate partner, once her closest friend, now practically a stranger."
6"Aurora's finger traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a nervous habit."
7"The image of Evan flashed through her mind – his smile, his rage, the sound of breaking glass."
8"She studied him – the designer watch, the manicured nails, the careful distance in his eyes despite his intimate questions."
9"Silence fell again, but different now – reflective rather than tense."
77.82% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount737
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.054274084124830396
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.024423337856173677
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean10.91
std7.58
cv0.695
sampleLengths
016
140
213
319
411
517
614
77
84
97
1024
1115
124
1316
1414
153
165
1711
187
191
2013
2115
226
2320
2413
2510
2613
2716
2821
2910
309
312
3227
3312
3415
355
3615
379
3820
3915
409
4113
429
4310
4415
4531
468
475
486
4910
68.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4233576642335766
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners58
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Of course he'd spotted her"
ratio0.014
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences70
matches
0"She took another sip, letting"
1"She smiled thinly"
2"He leaned slightly against the"
3"His voice carried the weight"
4"She turned slowly, disbelief washing"
5"He stood just inside the"
6"His face broke into a"
7"She pulled back, studying him"
8"He gestured vaguely around the"
9"She gestured to the stool"
10"She took a sip of"
11"He loosened his tie slightly"
12"She nodded at his platinum"
13"He trailed off, perhaps remembering"
14"she said, meaning it despite"
15"She drained her glass"
16"She studied him – the"
17"She signaled to Silas for"
18"Her voice softened"
19"She accepted the fresh whiskey"
ratio0.429
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"Aurora nursed her whiskey, watching"
1"Friday night, and the bar"
2"The thought of Evan still"
3"She took another sip, letting"
4"Silas appeared behind the bar,"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"She smiled thinly"
7"Silas nodded, understanding in his"
8"He leaned slightly against the"
9"His voice carried the weight"
10"The door swung open, letting"
11"Aurora didn't look up, tracing"
12"The voice froze her mid-motion."
13"She turned slowly, disbelief washing"
14"He stood just inside the"
15"Marcus Whitley – her university"
16"His face broke into a"
17"Aurora stood, accepting the hug"
18"She pulled back, studying him"
19"This Marcus was polished, tailored,"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Friday night, and the bar hummed with the usual crowd – city professionals unwinding after a long week, locals seeking refuge from London's persistent drizzle, …"
1"Marcus slid onto the seat, ordering a scotch from Silas, who introduced himself with a firm handshake and searching look before moving away to give them space."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His face broke, arms opening for an embrace"
1"Marcus swirled, not quite meeting her eyes"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She sighed (sigh)"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.053
leniency0.105
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.021
76.0258%