Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR0HX520EMAQN7WDEBXQ2A

Run Details

Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.035920
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood at the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones, the Fae Grove whispering secrets to the night. Richmond Park behind her seemed a different world entirely, a secondary reality, but one she was bound to return to. The moon hung low, casting an eerie glow that barely interrupted the profound darkness. Her breath fogged in the chill, her heartstone pendant pulsing faintly against her chest. Warmth. Just a flicker. She touched the pendant instinctively, balancing the comfort it gave her against the discomfort of being alone in a realm that didn't adhere to the rules she grew up knowing. She took a cautious step forward into the Grove, the grass soft beneath her boots. The wildflowers strewn across the clearing swayed gently as if stirred by an invisible breeze. She glanced around, her bright blue eyes searching for any kind of movement. Silence greeted her, but not the peaceful kind she craved. This silence felt alive, watching, waiting. She took another step, the air growing thicker, charged with an electricity that set the hairs on the back of her neck on end. Her black hair shifted slightly in the breeze. She was used to navigating the bustling streets and crowded bars of London. This place was an entity, ancient and all-knowing, and she felt distinctly out of place. “Alright, Carter. You’re here for a reason,” she muttered to herself, the words absorbed by the surrounding night. She clenched her fists, determined not to be unnerved. The Heartstone hung heavy and warm, an anchor in this strange, shifting world. A rustle to her left made her freeze on the spot. Just the wind, Rory. Just the wind. She continued walking, her eyes scanning the flora. The wildflowers, vibrant under the moonlight, seemed almost too still. She felt the weight of their presence, as if they were subtly shifting to watch her. Another sound now, behind her—a twig snapping, the unmistakable crunch making her whirl around. “Nobody's here, right?” Her words, once more, were swallowed by the oppressive silence. Her mind raced, replaying the storied history of the Grove. Tales of people disappearing, time bending around them, of almost sentient flora and fauna. Fiction, she had thought. But here, alone, it seemed all too plausible. She saw movement at the edge of her vision, but when she turned, nothing was there. Her pulse quickened. She forced herself to walk forward again, determined not to be intimidated by shadows and whispers. Stones shifted under her boots, a path she hadn’t noticed before beckoning her deeper. The pendant against her skin grew warmer, its subtle pulse quickening. She glanced at it, the faint inner glow reassuring her she was on the right track, even if every instinct screamed that she should retreat. A sound, low and mournful, weaved through the air, barely discernible but there. A distant cry, perhaps, or a ghost of memory trapped in this place. Rory’s breath hitched. She ignored it, focusing on the path. The Grove felt endless, as if every step she took pushed her deeper into its core. Her foot caught on a root, nearly sending her sprawling. She cursed under her breath, catching herself just in time. When she straightened, she found herself facing a large, ancient oak at the center of a small glade. Its branches seemed to stretch out welcomingly, yet there was an ominous energy to it. She felt compelled to approach. The air here was different, heavier, richer, laden with the scent of earth and something else—something sweet yet rotten. She reached out a tentative hand, resting it against the rough bark of the oak. A jolt ran up her arm, a sense of connection, a thread tying her to the history and magic of this place. Another rustling, louder this time. She spun around, heart pounding. The shadows at the edge of the glade seemed darker, more substantial. For a moment, she thought she saw a figure among the trees, but it vanished as quickly as it had appeared. She took a step back, toward the oak, seeking its protection. Is someone there? No answer. Only the deepening silence and the pulse of her heartstone, erratic now. The wind, too, had picked up, carrying snatches of distant, unintelligible whispers. Rory’s skin prickled. Her out-of-the-box thinking had no box to work within here. No framework for logic. She thought of Eva, urging her to be brave. Yeah, well, easier said than done when you’re not the one standing in a haunted forest. The ground beneath her feet seemed to shift slightly, as if unsure whether it wanted to support her weight or not. Rory glanced down, noting how the wildflowers seemed to lean towards her, petals trembling as if caught in anticipation. Her hand tightened around the heartstone pendant. "Okay, what now?" she whispered to herself, her voice shaking. The tree behind her felt like the sole solid entity in a world of shifting realities. She closed her eyes for a moment, drawing a deep breath to steady her nerves. Places like this fed on fear. She wouldn’t give it that satisfaction. When she opened her eyes, the world seemed sharper, the colors more vivid. The moon had risen higher, casting longer, deeper shadows. Rory could see clearer, but that didn't alleviate the sense of being watched. She turned her back to the oak and started walking once more. Movement felt necessary, anything to keep from becoming a static target for whatever lurked here. The whispers grew louder, merging into a discordant symphony of words just out of reach, their meanings twisted by the Fae magic that saturated the air. Her eyes darted to the side again, drawn by the periphery shadows. A figure stood there, dark and foreboding, a silhouette against the backdrop of night. When she blinked, it disappeared. Her pulse thrummed painfully in her ears, an inner metronome counting down the seconds she dared spend in this place. Despite the creeping fear, a part of her was fascinated. The Grove was a puzzle, its pieces scattered among the tales she had heard and the truths she now experienced. She pushed forward, driven by the need to understand. Ahead, a cluster of stones formed a circle, their arrangements deliberate and ancient. They seemed to hum with energy, an old magic that predates human understanding. She stepped into the circle, feeling the shift immediately. The whispers hushed, the wind stilled, and silence once more claimed dominion. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small parchment, handed to her by the mysterious figure in a dark alley weeks prior. Symbols marked its surface, ancient glyphs of the Fae. The heartstone pendant warmed in recognition, its glow pulsating, casting faint light onto the stones. As she studied the symbols, her surroundings shifted. The grove seemed to come alive, the flowers shifting subtly, trees bending to peer at her, their leaves rustling like a thousand hushed voices. Amidst the surreal tableau, Aurora felt an intimate connection with the heartstone and the parchment, the artifacts tying her to this place. Despite the dread that gnawed at the edge of her sanity, her fascination pressed her forward, unfurling within her a need to solve the riddle that the Grove presented. She understood, in that profound moment, the fine balance that the place held. Between beauty and terror, magic and malevolence. She started tracing the glyphs on the parchment with her finger, an incantation she knew not the source of but felt compelled to complete. The stones seemed to respond, their hum intensifying, resonating with the heartbeat of the earth itself. A shadow moved closer, not vanishing this time. She felt its presence behind her, felt eyes boring into her back, unrelenting. She could almost hear the breath of the shadow, a faint rasp that echoed in the labyrinth of her mind. Paralyzed by a mixture of fear and wonder, she nevertheless willed herself forward, the glyphs pulling her toward completion. "Aurora Carter," came a whisper from the darkness, a voice old and laden with the weight of centuries. "Why have you come?" The rational part of her screamed to flee, but she stood her ground. Her eyes remained fixed on the parchment, her finger tracing the final glyph. She felt the barrier between worlds thin, the fabric of reality itself warping around her. "I seek answers," she breathed, her voice thin but unwavering. The presence loomed closer, a chill washing over her. The final glyph flared brightly, and the stones responded, their energy sending a shockwave through the air. The shadow halted, as if bound by an unseen force. "Seek, and you shall find," the voice intoned, a promise and a warning intertwined. The glyphs now glowed with profound intensity, the Grove itself pulsating with an energy that seemed to encompass all existence. She felt herself lifted, drawn into the heart of the mystery she had sought to unravel, her own essence merging with the ancient magic. For a moment, time itself held no meaning, and she glimpsed truths hidden within the veil of reality. Rory finally let out a breath she hadn't realized she was holding as the presence receded, the shadows dissolving into the night. The grove returned to its earlier stillness, the stones silent once more. The parchment crumbled to dust in her hand, its purpose fulfilled. The heartstone pendant, too, dimmed, cooling against her skin. She understood now, in a way that defied simple explanation, the delicate balance she had momentarily tipped but had ultimately righted. With a final glance around the Grove, Aurora Carter turned and began her walk back, leaving the ancient secrets and shadows behind. The path was clearer now, the fear no longer palpable but a distant echo. She had come seeking answers and left with something far more profound - a connection to the very pulse of magic and mystery that threaded through the world, a spark of understanding that would guide her long after she returned to the bustling streets of London.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:44:27.19Z" 2/19/2026, 10:44:27 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1672
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
2"quickly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1672
totalAiIsms48
found
0
word"profound"
count4
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"silence"
count5
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"navigating"
count1
7
word"determined"
count2
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"weight"
count3
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count5
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count2
15
word"pounding"
count1
16
word"framework"
count1
17
word"anticipation"
count1
18
word"symphony"
count1
19
word"foreboding"
count1
20
word"amidst"
count1
21
word"surreal"
count1
22
word"tracing"
count2
23
word"echoed"
count1
24
word"whisper"
count1
25
word"unwavering"
count1
26
word"loomed"
count1
27
word"intensity"
count1
28
word"unravel"
count1
29
word"palpable"
count1
30
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"profound"
1"chill"
2"warmth"
3"flicker"
4"silence"
5"charged"
6"navigating"
7"determined"
8"scanning"
9"weight"
10"oppressive"
11"raced"
12"pulse"
13"quickened"
14"sense of"
15"pounding"
16"framework"
17"anticipation"
18"symphony"
19"foreboding"
20"amidst"
21"surreal"
22"tracing"
23"echoed"
24"whisper"
25"unwavering"
26"loomed"
27"intensity"
28"unravel"
29"palpable"
30"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences124
matches
0"t in anticipation"
62.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1670
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1643
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Fae3
Grove8
Park1
London2
Heartstone1
Rory6
Eva1
Aurora3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed all too plausible"
1"felt like the sole solid entity in a wo"
2"seemed sharper the colors more vivid"
3"energy that seemed to encompass all existence"
80.24% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.198
wordCount1670
matches
0"not the source of but felt compelled to complete"
1"no longer palpable but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"screamed that she"
71.14% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean41.75
std16.66
cv0.399
sampleLengths
054
148
259
360
440
511
67
748
813
936
1035
1150
1252
1358
1456
1554
163
1743
1825
1940
2060
2162
2257
2359
2447
2548
2654
2749
2840
2960
3022
3141
3210
3336
3414
3562
3634
3741
3836
3946
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"was bound"
1"were swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs284
matches
0"was holding"
74.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences125
ratio0.024
matches
0"Another sound now, behind her—a twig snapping, the unmistakable crunch making her whirl around."
1"The air here was different, heavier, richer, laden with the scent of earth and something else—something sweet yet rotten."
2"She had come seeking answers and left with something far more profound - a connection to the very pulse of magic and mystery that threaded through the world, a spark of understanding that would guide her long after she returned to the bustling streets of London."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1645
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"different, heavier, richer, laden"
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.03708206686930091
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01276595744680851
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean13.36
std6.78
cv0.507
sampleLengths
020
120
214
314
41
53
630
715
815
913
1010
116
1224
138
1413
1515
1618
179
1813
1911
204
213
228
2310
2416
2514
2613
2710
2814
294
308
3116
323
3316
3414
3511
3625
3713
3813
393
407
4116
4210
4310
4418
4515
465
4719
4815
4922
46.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.32
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences122
matches
0"Just a flicker."
1"Just the wind, Rory."
2"Just the wind."
3"Only the deepening silence and"
ratio0.033
62.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences122
matches
0"Her breath fogged in the"
1"She touched the pendant instinctively,"
2"She took a cautious step"
3"She glanced around, her bright"
4"She took another step, the"
5"Her black hair shifted slightly"
6"She was used to navigating"
7"she muttered to herself, the"
8"She clenched her fists, determined"
9"She continued walking, her eyes"
10"She felt the weight of"
11"Her words, once more, were"
12"Her mind raced, replaying the"
13"She saw movement at the"
14"Her pulse quickened."
15"She forced herself to walk"
16"She glanced at it, the"
17"She ignored it, focusing on"
18"Her foot caught on a"
19"She cursed under her breath,"
ratio0.393
50.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences122
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood at the"
1"Richmond Park behind her seemed"
2"The moon hung low, casting"
3"Her breath fogged in the"
4"She touched the pendant instinctively,"
5"She took a cautious step"
6"The wildflowers strewn across the"
7"She glanced around, her bright"
8"Silence greeted her, but not"
9"This silence felt alive, watching,"
10"She took another step, the"
11"Her black hair shifted slightly"
12"She was used to navigating"
13"This place was an entity,"
14"she muttered to herself, the"
15"She clenched her fists, determined"
16"The Heartstone hung heavy and"
17"A rustle to her left"
18"She continued walking, her eyes"
19"The wildflowers, vibrant under the"
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences84
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"She touched the pendant instinctively, balancing the comfort it gave her against the discomfort of being alone in a realm that didn't adhere to the rules she gr…"
1"Rory glanced down, noting how the wildflowers seemed to lean towards her, petals trembling as if caught in anticipation."
2"The whispers grew louder, merging into a discordant symphony of words just out of reach, their meanings twisted by the Fae magic that saturated the air."
3"They seemed to hum with energy, an old magic that predates human understanding."
4"The heartstone pendant warmed in recognition, its glow pulsating, casting faint light onto the stones."
5"The grove seemed to come alive, the flowers shifting subtly, trees bending to peer at her, their leaves rustling like a thousand hushed voices."
6"Despite the dread that gnawed at the edge of her sanity, her fascination pressed her forward, unfurling within her a need to solve the riddle that the Grove pre…"
7"The stones seemed to respond, their hum intensifying, resonating with the heartbeat of the earth itself."
8"The glyphs now glowed with profound intensity, the Grove itself pulsating with an energy that seemed to encompass all existence."
9"She understood now, in a way that defied simple explanation, the delicate balance she had momentarily tipped but had ultimately righted."
10"She had come seeking answers and left with something far more profound - a connection to the very pulse of magic and mystery that threaded through the world, a …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she muttered, the words absorbed by the surrounding night"
1"she whispered, her voice shaking"
2"she breathed, her voice thin but unwavering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.857
74.4609%