Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR0K4QB2RS20VF39TH24RZ

Run Details

Duration:
6.2s
Cost:
$0.000204

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something buried under layers of time. Aurora Carter stepped past the gnarled oak standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss. The pendant at her throat warmed, a faint pulse against her skin. She’d worn it tonight, just like she’d promised herself she would. The Grove wasn’t supposed to feel like this. She’d come here for answers. Or at least, that’s what she’d told herself. The pendant had led her here—she’d felt its pull the moment she stepped into Richmond Park, like an invisible thread tugging at her ribs. But the Grove wasn’t just a place. It was a *thing*. A wound in the world, a place where time didn’t quite behave, where the line between here and the Fae realm blurred. And now, standing at the edge of the clearing, she realised she’d made a mistake. The wildflowers here weren’t just bright—they *glowed*, a sickly green under the pale moonlight. They shouldn’t bloom like this. They shouldn’t *move* like this, swaying just enough to catch her eye, though there was no wind. The air hummed, a low, constant vibration that made her teeth ache. Aurora exhaled through her nose, forcing herself to focus. She’d come prepared. A knife in her boot, a pocket full of loose change—copper, she’d read, was good for warding off things like this. But the pendant was the real reason. It had to be. She took another step forward, her breath shallow. The trees here weren’t just trees. Their bark was too smooth, their leaves too perfect, like something had polished them. The standing stones loomed, their surfaces etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, spirals and teeth and things that looked like eyes. A sound. Not a rustle. Not a branch breaking. Something *shifting*. Aurora froze. Her pulse hammered in her throat. She swallowed hard, forcing her fingers to unclench around the pendant’s chain. Then she heard it again. A wet, clicking noise, like fingers dragging over stone. She turned slowly, scanning the darkness. The shadows here weren’t just dark. They *moved*. Just a little. Just enough to make her skin prickle. “Hello?” Her voice came out too loud, too sharp. She cleared her throat. “Anyone there?” Silence. Too much silence. Then— A whisper. Not from the trees. Not from the wind. From *inside* her head. A voice, soft as a breath on her ear, though no one stood near. *“You shouldn’t be here.”* Aurora’s breath hitched. She pressed a hand to her temple, as if she could push the words away. But they lingered, slithering through her skull like smoke. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice steadier now, sharper. The voice didn’t answer. It only laughed. A sound like dry leaves skittering across stone. Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the knife. She didn’t pull it out—she didn’t want to draw attention. But she needed something. *Anything.* She took another step forward, her boots crunching on something brittle underfoot. She crouched, brushing away the damp earth. A cluster of roots, blackened and brittle, like something had been gnawing at them. Then she saw the footprints. Too many to count. Too small to be human. They led deeper into the clearing, disappearing beneath the glow of the flowers. Aurora’s stomach twisted. She stood, her back pressing against the cold stone of one of the standing stones. The pendant burned against her skin now, a pulse of heat that made her wince. “Show yourself,” she said, her voice low, controlled. She didn’t want to scream. She didn’t want to run. The voice came again, closer this time. *“You’re not supposed to see.”* Aurora’s breath came faster. She forced herself to focus on the pendant, on the warmth radiating from it. It had to be a sign. It had to mean something. Then she saw *it*. A shape in the darkness. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs moved in ways that made her stomach lurch. It didn’t walk so much as *flow*, its form shifting, blending into the shadows. Aurora’s hand shot out, gripping the pendant tight. The heat flared, bright enough to make her eyes water. The thing in the darkness *stopped*. For a second, she thought she’d imagined it. But then— A sound like tearing fabric. The thing *moved*. Aurora didn’t wait. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the earth. She didn’t look back. She couldn’t. The trees swallowed her, their branches clawing at her arms as she forced herself forward. She didn’t know where she was going. She just knew she had to get *away*. Then she heard it again—the clicking, the whispering. *“You’re not supposed to leave.”* Aurora’s legs burned. Her lungs ached. But she didn’t stop. She didn’t dare.
total_cost0.00020380000000000002

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount791
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount791
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"lurch"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"perfect"
2"loomed"
3"etched"
4"scanning"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"stomach"
8"warmth"
9"lurch"
10"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans15
markdownWords26
totalWords787
ratio0.033
matches
0"thing"
1"glowed"
2"move"
3"shifting"
4"moved"
5"inside"
6"“You shouldn’t be here.”"
7"Anything."
8"“You’re not supposed to see.”"
9"it"
10"flow"
11"stopped"
12"moved"
13"away"
14"“You’re not supposed to leave.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount766
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Grove2
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Aurora10
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.847
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite behave, where the line between here and the Fae realm blurred"
1"looked like eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount787
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean17.11
std15.8
cv0.924
sampleLengths
055
18
270
315
448
544
649
72
89
920
105
119
1224
1315
144
151
162
178
184
1914
204
2127
229
2315
2421
2533
265
2722
2833
2918
307
315
3229
334
3432
3518
366
3710
385
393
4019
4130
428
435
4410
453
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences107
ratio0.065
matches
0"The pendant had led her here—she’d felt its pull the moment she stepped into Richmond Park, like an invisible thread tugging at her ribs."
1"The wildflowers here weren’t just bright—they *glowed*, a sickly green under the pale moonlight."
2"A knife in her boot, a pocket full of loose change—copper, she’d read, was good for warding off things like this."
3"Then—"
4"She didn’t pull it out—she didn’t want to draw attention."
5"But then—"
6"Then she heard it again—the clicking, the whispering."
88.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount770
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.053246753246753244
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005194805194805195
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean7.36
std5.06
cv0.688
sampleLengths
015
117
212
311
48
55
68
724
87
94
1022
1115
1214
135
1417
1512
169
173
1821
197
204
218
226
2314
2421
252
263
274
282
292
306
3112
325
339
346
356
362
373
387
399
404
412
421
433
441
452
464
474
484
4914
38.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2523364485981308
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then she heard it again."
1"Just a little."
2"Just enough to make her"
3"Too much silence."
4"Then she saw the footprints."
5"Too many to count."
6"Too small to be human."
7"Then she saw *it*."
8"Then she heard it again—the"
ratio0.099
61.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences91
matches
0"She’d worn it tonight, just"
1"She’d come here for answers."
2"It was a *thing*."
3"They shouldn’t bloom like this."
4"They shouldn’t *move* like this,"
5"She’d come prepared."
6"It had to be."
7"She took another step forward,"
8"Their bark was too smooth,"
9"Her pulse hammered in her"
10"She swallowed hard, forcing her"
11"She turned slowly, scanning the"
12"Her voice came out too"
13"She cleared her throat."
14"She pressed a hand to"
15"she demanded, her voice steadier"
16"It only laughed."
17"She didn’t pull it out—she"
18"She took another step forward,"
19"She crouched, brushing away the"
ratio0.396
80.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences91
matches
0"The air smelled of damp"
1"Aurora Carter stepped past the"
2"The pendant at her throat"
3"She’d worn it tonight, just"
4"The Grove wasn’t supposed to"
5"She’d come here for answers."
6"The pendant had led her"
7"It was a *thing*."
8"A wound in the world,"
9"The wildflowers here weren’t just"
10"They shouldn’t bloom like this."
11"They shouldn’t *move* like this,"
12"The air hummed, a low,"
13"Aurora exhaled through her nose,"
14"She’d come prepared."
15"A knife in her boot,"
16"It had to be."
17"She took another step forward,"
18"The trees here weren’t just"
19"Their bark was too smooth,"
ratio0.758
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped past the gnarled oak standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss."
1"The standing stones loomed, their surfaces etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, spirals and teeth and things that looked like eyes."
2"The pendant burned against her skin now, a pulse of heat that made her wince."
3"Its limbs moved in ways that made her stomach lurch."
4"It didn’t walk so much as *flow*, its form shifting, blending into the shadows."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she demanded, her voice steadier now, sharper"
1"she said, her voice low, controlled"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
74.2879%