| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1114 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1114 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "quivered" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "resonance" | | 14 | "aligned" | | 15 | "lurched" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "glinting" | | 19 | "echo" | | 20 | "footfall" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 20 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1106 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1102 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.27 | | worstName | "Silence" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silence" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silence | 3 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Silence" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.34% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 33.52 | | std | 11.28 | | cv | 0.337 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.87% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 161 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "An hour here might be minutes outside—or years." | | 1 | "A shape detached itself from the shadowed tree line—a slender form hunched over, limbs too long." | | 2 | "The portal waited behind the figure—a gash of shimmering air between trees, black at the center, the edges rippling." | | 3 | "Her reflection shimmered on the grass before her—bright blue eyes, straight black hair, the scar glinting on her wrist." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1110 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03963963963963964 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0045045045045045045 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 161 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 161 | | mean | 6.87 | | std | 3.71 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 46.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.32919254658385094 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the stones, the altar," | | 1 | "Maybe she’d imagined the shape." | | 2 | "Maybe the wind had started" | | 3 | "Then a rasp on the" | | 4 | "Just her, alone in this" | | 5 | "Somewhere behind her, the portal" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 81.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "She raised her chin, scanning" | | 1 | "Their petals curved inward, as" | | 2 | "Her fingertips brushed the Heartstone" | | 3 | "It pulsed warm, but faint." | | 4 | "She’d come to prove the" | | 5 | "She advanced past the stones." | | 6 | "Her boots sank into moss" | | 7 | "She glanced at her watch." | | 8 | "She peeled back fabric, held" | | 9 | "She held her breath." | | 10 | "They leaned like silent sentinels." | | 11 | "She crossed the open ground," | | 12 | "She jerked backward, catching the" | | 13 | "She knelt, gathered them in" | | 14 | "She pressed it between thumb" | | 15 | "Its glow seeped into her" | | 16 | "She leaned forward, eyes on" | | 17 | "She reached out." | | 18 | "She gasped, her lungs flooding" | | 19 | "She whipped around." |
| | ratio | 0.347 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 120 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped between the" | | 1 | "The silver chain pressed cool" | | 2 | "She raised her chin, scanning" | | 3 | "Wildflowers glowed pale blue in" | | 4 | "Their petals curved inward, as" | | 5 | "Her fingertips brushed the Heartstone" | | 6 | "It pulsed warm, but faint." | | 7 | "She’d come to prove the" | | 8 | "A low wind stirred." | | 9 | "Leaves murmured secrets she couldn’t" | | 10 | "She advanced past the stones." | | 11 | "Nothing in Cardiff had ever" | | 12 | "Her boots sank into moss" | | 13 | "The air turned damp, heavy." | | 14 | "She glanced at her watch." | | 15 | "An hour here might be" | | 16 | "The pendant glowed now, a" | | 17 | "She peeled back fabric, held" | | 18 | "The stone’s warmth flared, then" | | 19 | "A twig snapped behind her." |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 34.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Shivering, she slid her palm over the stone’s face, tracing grooves she barely saw in the gloom." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |