Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR0X533HJMWYQA9GRTW0Y2

Run Details

Duration:
15.3s
Cost:
$0.001867
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The familiar chime of the bell above the door drew Rory's attention from the rows of liquor bottles lining the shelves behind the bar. As the heavy wooden door swung shut, her breath caught in her throat. There, silhouetted against the dim lighting, stood a figure she'd know anywhere - Eva. Their eyes locked, and for a moment, time seemed to stand still. Rory felt a tug of nostalgia, a bittersweet pang of recognition as she took in the changes time had wrought. Eva's once vibrant, youthful features were now etched with something akin to weariness. The carefree spark that had once danced in her eyes had been replaced by a guarded, almost haunted look. Without a word, Eva made her way to the bar, sliding onto the stool beside Rory. The air was thick with unspoken history, a tapestry of memories both cherished and painful. "Fancy meeting you here, Laila," Eva said, her voice barely above a whisper, a ghost of a smile playing on her lips. Rory's heart lurched at the old nickname, a relic from a lifetime ago. "It's Rory now," she replied, her own voice betraying a hint of unease. "Rory," Eva repeated, rolling the name around on her tongue as if testing its weight. "I like it. It suits you." Silas, ever the discreet bartender, glided over, a silent question in his hazel eyes as he regarded the two women. Rory gave a subtle nod, and he silently poured a glass of amber liquid, sliding it towards Eva. "Scotch, neat," Eva murmured, her gaze fixed on the glass, her fingers tracing the rim with a familiarity that spoke of a shared history. Rory watched, her own hands wrapped around a steaming mug of coffee, as Eva took a slow, pensive sip. The silence stretched, thick and heavy, like a shroud between them. "So," Rory began, her voice betraying a slight tremble, "what have you been up to all these years, Eva?" Eva let out a mirthless chuckle, the sound devoid of any true mirth. "Oh, you know, the usual - running from my past, trying to outrun the ghosts that haunt me." She raised the glass to her lips, her eyes never leaving Rory's. Rory felt a pang of sympathy, her heart aching for the woman who had once been her dearest friend. "I'm sorry, Eva. I'm so sorry." The words felt inadequate, but she hoped they conveyed the depth of her remorse. "Don't be," Eva replied, her tone abrupt. "It's not your fault. It's no one's fault but my own." She took another sip, the amber liquid glinting in the low light. Rory hesitated, unsure of how to proceed. The air between them was thick with unspoken pain, a tangled web of regret and missed opportunities. She reached out, her hand hovering just above Eva's, an unspoken offer of comfort. Eva's gaze flicked down to Rory's hand, then back up to her face. For a moment, Rory caught a glimpse of the girl she had once known, the one with a smile that could light up a room. But it was fleeting, like a candle flickering in the wind. "You know," Eva began, her voice laced with a wistful melancholy, "I used to think that if I could just get away, leave everything behind, I'd be free. But the thing about ghosts is, they have a way of following you, no matter how far you run." Rory nodded, understanding dawning in her eyes. "I know. Believe me, I know." She thought of her own demons, the ones she'd run from, the ones that still haunted her dreams. Eva's gaze softened, a silent acknowledgment of their shared burden. "It's been a long time, Rory. Too long." She took another sip, her fingers tightening around the glass. "I know," Rory replied, her voice barely above a whisper. "I never should have let you go." The words hung in the air, a confession laced with regret. Eva's eyes widened, just for a moment, before a veil of composure settled over her features once more. "It's not your fault, Rory. None of it is your fault." She reached out, her hand covering Rory's, the warmth of her touch sending a jolt through Rory's body. Rory felt a lump rise in her throat, the weight of unspoken emotion threatening to overwhelm her. "I'm sorry," she murmured, her eyes glistening with unshed tears. "I'm so sorry for everything." Eva gave her hand a gentle squeeze, her own eyes reflecting a lifetime of pain and longing. "We can't change the past, Rory. But maybe, just maybe, we can find a way to move forward. Together." The words were simple, but they carried a world of meaning. Rory felt a glimmer of hope ignite within her, a spark that had long been extinguished. She nodded, her throat too tight to speak. The two women sat in silence, their hands joined as the minutes ticked by, a silent testament to the power of friendship, the resilience of the human spirit, and the weight of the years that had passed between them.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:44:38.696Z" 2/19/2026, 10:44:38 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.842
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount846
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount846
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pang"
count2
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count4
4
word"tapestry"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"lurched"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"fleeting"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"glistening"
count1
15
word"testament"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pang"
2"etched"
3"unspoken"
4"tapestry"
5"whisper"
6"lurched"
7"weight"
8"tracing"
9"silence"
10"glinting"
11"flicked"
12"fleeting"
13"warmth"
14"glistening"
15"testament"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The air was thick with"
2"hung in the air"
3"a glimmer of hope"
54.08% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences47
matches
0"felt a tug"
1"a pang of sympathy"
2"d with regret"
3"felt a lump"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords848
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
18.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount685
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Eva16
Silas1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.186
windowScore0.333
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something akin to weariness"
1"as if testing its weight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount848
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
43.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean35.33
std10.62
cv0.3
sampleLengths
051
164
231
322
426
521
638
724
830
919
1043
1139
1230
1338
1449
1547
1631
1728
1828
1947
2032
2136
2235
2339
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences47
matches
0"been replaced"
1"been extinguished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs117
matches
0"was fleeting"
85.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences50
ratio0.02
matches
0"There, silhouetted against the dim lighting, stood a figure she'd know anywhere - Eva."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount684
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.029239766081871343
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005847953216374269
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean16.96
std7.84
cv0.462
sampleLengths
024
113
214
312
420
513
619
716
815
922
1013
1113
1215
136
1420
1518
1624
1719
1811
1919
2013
2130
2219
2320
247
2523
267
2717
2814
2913
3025
3111
3247
337
3424
3510
3618
3710
3818
3918
4029
4117
4210
435
4417
4519
4611
4716
488
4939
62.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences47
matches
0"Their eyes locked, and for"
1"she replied, her own voice"
2"She raised the glass to"
3"She took another sip, the"
4"She reached out, her hand"
5"She thought of her own"
6"She took another sip, her"
7"She reached out, her hand"
8"she murmured, her eyes glistening"
9"She nodded, her throat too"
ratio0.213
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences47
matches
0"The familiar chime of the"
1"There, silhouetted against the dim"
2"Their eyes locked, and for"
3"Rory felt a tug of"
4"Eva's once vibrant, youthful features"
5"The carefree spark that had"
6"The air was thick with"
7"Eva said, her voice barely"
8"Rory's heart lurched at the"
9"she replied, her own voice"
10"Eva repeated, rolling the name"
11"Silas, ever the discreet bartender,"
12"Rory gave a subtle nod,"
13"Eva murmured, her gaze fixed"
14"Rory watched, her own hands"
15"The silence stretched, thick and"
16"Rory began, her voice betraying"
17"Eva let out a mirthless"
18"She raised the glass to"
19"Rory felt a pang of"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory felt a pang of sympathy, her heart aching for the woman who had once been her dearest friend."
1"The two women sat in silence, their hands joined as the minutes ticked by, a silent testament to the power of friendship, the resilience of the human spirit, an…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she replied, her own voice betraying a hint of unease"
1"Rory began, her voice betraying a slight tremble,"
2"Eva replied, her tone abrupt"
3"She took, the amber liquid glinting in the low light"
4"She took, her fingers tightening around the glass"
5"Rory replied, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"The words hung, a confession laced with regret"
7"she murmured, her eyes glistening with unshed tears"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva repeated (repeat)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.316
65.9424%