| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.842 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 846 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 846 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pang" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "tapestry" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "lurched" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "glinting" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "fleeting" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "glistening" | | 15 | "testament" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "hung in the air" | | 3 | "a glimmer of hope" |
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| 54.08% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a tug" | | 1 | "a pang of sympathy" | | 2 | "d with regret" | | 3 | "felt a lump" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 848 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 18.61% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 685 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 2.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.186 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something akin to weariness" | | 1 | "as if testing its weight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 848 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 35.33 | | std | 10.62 | | cv | 0.3 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 39 |
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| 90.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "been replaced" | | 1 | "been extinguished" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 117 | | matches | | |
| 85.71% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "There, silhouetted against the dim lighting, stood a figure she'd know anywhere - Eva." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 684 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.029239766081871343 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005847953216374269 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 50 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 50 | | mean | 16.96 | | std | 7.84 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 62.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 50 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Their eyes locked, and for" | | 1 | "she replied, her own voice" | | 2 | "She raised the glass to" | | 3 | "She took another sip, the" | | 4 | "She reached out, her hand" | | 5 | "She thought of her own" | | 6 | "She took another sip, her" | | 7 | "She reached out, her hand" | | 8 | "she murmured, her eyes glistening" | | 9 | "She nodded, her throat too" |
| | ratio | 0.213 | |
| 2.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar chime of the" | | 1 | "There, silhouetted against the dim" | | 2 | "Their eyes locked, and for" | | 3 | "Rory felt a tug of" | | 4 | "Eva's once vibrant, youthful features" | | 5 | "The carefree spark that had" | | 6 | "The air was thick with" | | 7 | "Eva said, her voice barely" | | 8 | "Rory's heart lurched at the" | | 9 | "she replied, her own voice" | | 10 | "Eva repeated, rolling the name" | | 11 | "Silas, ever the discreet bartender," | | 12 | "Rory gave a subtle nod," | | 13 | "Eva murmured, her gaze fixed" | | 14 | "Rory watched, her own hands" | | 15 | "The silence stretched, thick and" | | 16 | "Rory began, her voice betraying" | | 17 | "Eva let out a mirthless" | | 18 | "She raised the glass to" | | 19 | "Rory felt a pang of" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt a pang of sympathy, her heart aching for the woman who had once been her dearest friend." | | 1 | "The two women sat in silence, their hands joined as the minutes ticked by, a silent testament to the power of friendship, the resilience of the human spirit, an…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied, her own voice betraying a hint of unease" | | 1 | "Rory began, her voice betraying a slight tremble," | | 2 | "Eva replied, her tone abrupt" | | 3 | "She took, the amber liquid glinting in the low light" | | 4 | "She took, her fingers tightening around the glass" | | 5 | "Rory replied, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 6 | "The words hung, a confession laced with regret" | | 7 | "she murmured, her eyes glistening with unshed tears" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "Eva murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.316 | |