Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR0YMZAKDMWQ2Q90QYM1K3

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
42.3s
Cost:
$0.015698
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora picked her way through the tangle of brambles and mud along the edge of Richmond Park, boots caked and cold soaking through denim. Moonlight dappled patches of grass, leaving the rest in murky blackness. Trees lifted their branches ahead: jagged shadows, reaching fingers crowding the edge of the Grove. The air bit sharper inside the ancient oaks, and every inhalation tasted faintly bitter, off. She paused, drew the collar of her jacket up to her chin, thumb tracing the crescent scar on her wrist. Opening the Grove meant slipping out of one world—her world—and stepping into something deeper. The Heartstone Pendant, warm against her skin beneath her layers, pulsed each time she drew closer to the ring of standing oaks. She’d come on impulse, on a rumour scrawled in Eva’s looping script, desperate and odd: “The Fae Grove, Richmond. There, it can’t follow you. Take the stone.” Each step over wildflowers—violet, gold, blossoming though it was the wrong time of year—slowed as she neared the centre. The stones ringed the clearing, twisted with age and lichen, roots crawling up their flanks. The pendant pulsed in time with her heartbeat. Shadows curled and pooled along the roots. She turned in a slow circle, scanning for movement. Silence pressed in: no wind, no city sounds, not even distant laughter or the hum of traffic. Aurora tapped her phone for the time, only to find it dead, black screen staring back. She slid it into her pocket and gritted her teeth. Distant, a dry twig snapped. She stiffened, her head jerking toward the sound. Nothing moved but the shifting silver haze around the stones. A fox, she told herself, or a deer. She crouched, stretched her fingers toward the closest oak, running them across the scarred bark. Cool, rough, nothing strange. From the corner of her eye, petals scattered by her boots twisted as if caught by wind that didn’t stir her hair. Their colours seemed brighter, bleeding red and blue as though drawn fresh from the earth. Aurora squinted and the effect faded. She pressed both palms flat to the trunk, forcing her breath out slowly. “You just need time to think, that’s all,” she muttered. A hush fell, heavy and absolute. From somewhere in the dark, another voice answered—soft as the fluttering of wings—but too low, too honeyed, to parse. Aurora jerked upright, heart thumping against her ribs. The pendant quivered against her chest. She swung round, back flat against the tree, clutching the chain through her shirt. Branches creaked overhead, not with wind but with the slow, weighty shudder of something shifting unseen. The barely-there glow from the pendant threw the nearest roots into strange angles—shapes that almost resembled twisted hands, beckoning from black earth. Aurora winced and shut her eyes tight, snapping them open again a moment later when her mind’s eye painted worse things than the shadows had. “Not funny,” she pushed out, her voice scraping the stale air. No one replied. The hush seemed to lessen, enough for a whisper: her own name, maybe, turned inside out. Aurora’s fists balled up. Light snapped in the undergrowth. Not torchlight—strange, flickering, weaker and wrong. The air tingled, thick with ozone. Another step forward, and she found herself at the centre of the clearing, unsure when she'd moved. The stones hemmed her in, no gap wide enough for more than a quick dash, if she fancied running blind. The wildflower carpet trembled, as if something burrowed beneath it. Aurora crouched, fixing her gaze on the ground. Roots? Snake? The disturbance passed, silent. She knelt, wondering if she could pull the Heartstone free from its chain to use as a weapon if it came to it. Something rustled behind her. Not mere leaves this time, but the crumple of leather, brittle as old wings. She spun, arm raised, only to find the space unchanged, the moon above unwavering. Sweat gathered at her hairline, cold and prickling. She exhaled through her nose. Her voice came out steadier than she felt: “You picked the wrong girl. I’m just here for a minute. Give me the quiet—I’ll go.” Again, that almost-voice. Not words but the shape of laughter, echoing off the stone. No birds sang, no insects buzzed. Her thoughts stuttered, caged by the presence limping just beyond her sight. Aurora reached for her phone again, tried to flick it awake, knowing before her thumb touched glass that it’d fail. Above, pale clouds swam across the moon. The Grove, too, shifted with the light. Stones twisted—or did her eyes betray her?—bending imperceptibly closer, ancient faces emerging in the bark. Petals uncurled at the base of one, heart-shaped and raw crimson, matching precisely the Heartstone’s glow. She strode up to one of the stones, pressed her palm flat against its mossy surface. Warm. Breathing, almost. She yanked her hand back with a hiss. Leaves rustled on her right, not with wind, but as if a shape pressed through them—a shape that left no mark. Aurora’s breath came fast, fogging in the cold. Something darted at the edge of her vision—a pale blip—gone when she wheeled to face it. She forced her body to move, circling the clearing’s interior. “C’mon out then. You want the stone?” She swept her hair from her eyes, trying to stare down whatever old thing crouched out beyond the trees. “Take it.” More movement—a flicker between oaks, light-boned and thin. She knew enough, from Eva’s stories and Nana Ellis’s bedtime warnings, to keep the stone hooked round her neck. She gripped it, pinching hard enough to draw blood under her fingernails. Grass around her boots blushed red in the Moon’s light. The earth pulsed. The silence built. Something groaned, far off, as though earth itself woke from a long sleep. Aurora found her mouth dry as dust. She pulled the pendant chain from her shirt, letting the Heartstone hang in front of her, a shard of bloody fire. The heart of the Grove flexed, shadows pulling tighter around her. The oak trunks elongated impossibly, squeezing her sight line to a tunnel. The pulsing from the pendant accelerated—not hers any longer, a rhythm not meant for a living heart. Her own shadow splintered, drawn thin across the grass. Beyond the stones at last, another shape: wrong in its slowness, something tall, too narrow, gliding rather than stepping. Its edges held no solidity—a threadbare suggestion in the moon’s cold wash. She couldn’t look away, though every prick of her skin screamed to run. Her jaw ached. “You want it?” Her arm shook as she gripped the pendant. “You’ll have to come get it.” The shadow froze, details assembling slowly—long arms, antlered crown, a face that suggested teeth but offered no smile. The Grove echoed with breathless anticipation. Another sound swelled: neither footsteps nor speech. A low current in her chest, an urge to kneel, submit, blend into the wildflower beds and become nothing. Aurora bared her teeth, squared her feet, and spat on the grass between them. “I’m not here for tricks. I want answers. You leave Eva—and me—out.” Something like a hand raised, palm forward, slow and solemn. Aurora braced, licking copper from her cracked lip. Around her, the standing stones seemed nearer than before. The Grove pressed in, not in menace but in vast, inhuman curiosity. The pendant’s heat intensified, prickling at her skin, promising a trade she did not understand. The grass shivered all at once, bowing toward the stranger at the stones. Aurora forced her breathing level, met the watcher’s hollow gaze, refused to give ground. Her voice dropped, a low snarl threaded with fear: “Then what are you waiting for?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"unwavering"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"anticipation"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"pulsed"
2"scanning"
3"silence"
4"quivered"
5"whisper"
6"trembled"
7"unwavering"
8"echoing"
9"flicker"
10"echoed"
11"anticipation"
12"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences105
matches
0"d with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1273
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"A fox, she told herself, or a deer."
95.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1199
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Grove6
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Eva2
Nana1
Ellis1
Moon1
Aurora13
persons
0"Grove"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Eva"
4"Nana"
5"Ellis"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Moon"
globalScore0.958
windowScore1
64.77% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed brighter bleeding red and blue as though drawn fresh from the earth"
1"Something like a hand raised, palm forward,"
2"seemed nearer than before"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords4.713
wordCount1273
matches
0"not with wind but with the slow, weighty shudder of something shifting unseen"
1"Not mere leaves this time, but the crumple of leather, brittle as old wings"
2"Not words but the shape of laughter, echoing off the stone"
3"not with wind, but as if a shape pressed through them"
4"neither footsteps nor"
5"not in menace but in vast, inhuman curiosity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
54.13% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean43.9
std14.9
cv0.339
sampleLengths
065
183
249
352
450
566
653
763
834
954
1047
1132
1237
1352
1445
1527
1645
1738
1839
1957
2040
2140
2233
2350
2426
2518
2636
2713
2829
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs211
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences108
ratio0.111
matches
0"Opening the Grove meant slipping out of one world—her world—and stepping into something deeper."
1"Each step over wildflowers—violet, gold, blossoming though it was the wrong time of year—slowed as she neared the centre."
2"From somewhere in the dark, another voice answered—soft as the fluttering of wings—but too low, too honeyed, to parse."
3"The barely-there glow from the pendant threw the nearest roots into strange angles—shapes that almost resembled twisted hands, beckoning from black earth."
4"Not torchlight—strange, flickering, weaker and wrong."
5"Stones twisted—or did her eyes betray her?—bending imperceptibly closer, ancient faces emerging in the bark."
6"Leaves rustled on her right, not with wind, but as if a shape pressed through them—a shape that left no mark."
7"Something darted at the edge of her vision—a pale blip—gone when she wheeled to face it."
8"More movement—a flicker between oaks, light-boned and thin."
9"The pulsing from the pendant accelerated—not hers any longer, a rhythm not meant for a living heart."
10"Its edges held no solidity—a threadbare suggestion in the moon’s cold wash."
11"The shadow froze, details assembling slowly—long arms, antlered crown, a face that suggested teeth but offered no smile."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1219
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.031173092698933553
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007383100902378999
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.79
std6.24
cv0.529
sampleLengths
024
111
215
315
420
514
622
727
819
915
108
117
129
1317
1416
1510
165
178
1810
198
2015
214
2222
2315
246
2513
2610
276
2819
298
306
3114
3216
3322
3425
3511
363
3716
384
395
406
416
4217
4320
4410
458
461
471
484
4923
54.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.37962962962962965
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners41
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Again, that almost-voice."
1"More movement—a flicker between oaks,"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences100
matches
0"She paused, drew the collar"
1"She’d come on impulse, on"
2"She turned in a slow"
3"She slid it into her"
4"She stiffened, her head jerking"
5"She crouched, stretched her fingers"
6"Their colours seemed brighter, bleeding"
7"She pressed both palms flat"
8"She swung round, back flat"
9"she pushed out, her voice"
10"She knelt, wondering if she"
11"She spun, arm raised, only"
12"She exhaled through her nose."
13"Her voice came out steadier"
14"Her thoughts stuttered, caged by"
15"She strode up to one"
16"She yanked her hand back"
17"She forced her body to"
18"She swept her hair from"
19"She knew enough, from Eva’s"
ratio0.28
40.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences100
matches
0"Aurora picked her way through"
1"Moonlight dappled patches of grass,"
2"Trees lifted their branches ahead:"
3"The air bit sharper inside"
4"She paused, drew the collar"
5"The Heartstone Pendant, warm against"
6"She’d come on impulse, on"
7"Each step over wildflowers—violet, gold,"
8"The stones ringed the clearing,"
9"The pendant pulsed in time"
10"Shadows curled and pooled along"
11"She turned in a slow"
12"Aurora tapped her phone for"
13"She slid it into her"
14"She stiffened, her head jerking"
15"Nothing moved but the shifting"
16"A fox, she told herself,"
17"She crouched, stretched her fingers"
18"Their colours seemed brighter, bleeding"
19"Aurora squinted and the effect"
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Their colours seemed brighter, bleeding red and blue as though drawn fresh from the earth."
1"Something groaned, far off, as though earth itself woke from a long sleep."
2"The pendant’s heat intensified, prickling at her skin, promising a trade she did not understand."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she pushed, her voice scraping the stale air"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.2
76.2990%