Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR10FYRZK6W6SHP5YGMH2B

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Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.025290
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her backpack and looked up at the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary to Isolde’s grove. The stones loomed large, covered in twisting vines and glowing with an ethereal light. She glanced back at Nyx, their form shifting slightly under the dappled sunlight. "Ready?" she asked, her voice steady. Nyx's violet eyes glowed faintly as they nodded. "Let's proceed. The grove's secrets won't reveal themselves." Aurora stepped between the stones. As she did, she felt a cool shiver run up her spine. Stepping through the veil felt like walking under a waterfall, the fabric of reality rippling around her. The air inside the grove was thick with the scent of wildflowers, a stark contrast to the urban sprawl just beyond the park's borders. She took a breath, the air cooler and fresher, carrying the scents of honeysuckle and earth. Her bright blue eyes widened as they adjusted to the soft, enchanted light. Flowers of impossible colors covered the ground, and evergreen trees stood like ancient sentinels, their branches laden with silver leaves that whispered secrets in the wind. Nyx moved beside her, silent as a shadow. "Time here is fickle," they murmured, looking around. "We must be swift but cautious." Aurora nodded, her hand instinctively reaching for the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. It pulsed faintly, a reassuring warmth against her skin. Together, they moved deeper into the grove, the path beneath their feet soft with moss and fallen leaves. A distant hum caught Aurora's attention. She turned her head, her hair falling across her eyes. "Do you hear that?" Nyx's form seemed to dissolve for a moment before solidifying beside her. "The land's song. It's welcome and warning intertwined." Aurora stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the petals of a nearby flower that shimmered in iridescent hues. Each step brought new wonders, strange fungi that glowed softly in the shadows, butterflies with wings that sparkled like gemstones, and trees with bark that seemed to shift patterns under her gaze. They reached a clearing where sunlight poured down as if from another realm. In the center stood a crystalline structure, an altar of sorts, its surface faceted and gleaming. Aurora approached cautiously, her breath catching at the sight. "This must be it," she murmured. Nyx glided closer, their eyes reflecting the crystalline light. "Isolde's heart lies here. Her visions, her power," they whispered, more to themselves than to Aurora. Suddenly, a rustle from the bushes made Aurora tense. "Hello?" she called, her voice steady despite the unease creeping in. A figure emerged. Barefoot, with silver hair cascading to her waist and eyes of pale lavender, Isolde Varga appeared like a living dream. She moved noiselessly, crossing the ground as if weightless. "You seek answers," Isolde said, her voice laced with ancient wisdom and cryptic undertones. Aurora nodded. "I need to understand the veil and how to mend it." Isolde’s eyes seemed to pierce through her. "The veil is a delicate fabric, woven by time and essence. To mend it, you must gather what is broken and unite what has drifted apart." Nyx's form darkened momentarily, a ripple of tension. "Riddles, Isolde. Always riddles." Isolde smiled faintly, her gaze never leaving Aurora. "Truth lies within riddles. Only those who listen may find the path clear." Aurora took a step closer to the altar. Her finger traced the cool, crystalline surface, feeling a resonance deep within. "What must I do?" Isolde's expression softened. "You already have what you need." She glanced at the Heartstone Pendant. "To mend the veil, the heart must find its place, uniting the realms. But beware, the path is fraught with shadows." Nyx's eyes glowed brighter. "Shadows are my realm, Seer." Isolde gave a knowing nod. "Yes, and light illuminates even the darkest corners." Aurora felt a weight on her shoulders, the gravity of the task ahead. "Where do we begin?" Isolde pointed to the far end of the grove, where a faint path led beyond the trees. "The journey starts here, but be mindful. Time is a fickle friend." As they moved towards the path, Aurora felt an odd mix of wonder and dread. The grove's beauty was undeniable, but it held secrets she couldn't yet comprehend. They walked in silence, the grove around them alive with whispers and songs. Aurora’s thoughts raced, each step taking her deeper into the unknown. The air grew thicker, the light dimmer, and the sense of being in an altogether different place grew stronger. She paused, feeling the pendant warm suddenly. "Nyx, do you feel that?" Nyx’s form seemed to solidify more, their eyes narrowing. "Yes, the barrier weakens here." They looked at Aurora with an intensity that made her heart pound. "This is where our journey truly begins." Aurora nodded, gripping the pendant tightly. With Nyx by her side and Isolde’s cryptic guidance, she felt a strange, fragile hope. Together, they stepped further into the path, ready to face whatever lay beyond the veil.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
57.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount832
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"cautiously"
3"suddenly"
4"truly"
5"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount832
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count3
7
word"structure"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"cascading"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"stark"
2"sentinels"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"shimmered"
6"crystalline"
7"structure"
8"gleaming"
9"cascading"
10"tension"
11"traced"
12"resonance"
13"weight"
14"silence"
15"raced"
16"sense of"
17"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
42.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords832
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
27.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount654
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Isolde9
Nyx9
Aurora16
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Suddenly1
Varga1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Aurora"
4"Pendant"
5"Varga"
places
0"Heartstone"
globalScore0.277
windowScore0.333
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like walking under a waterfall, th"
1"bark that seemed to shift patterns under her gaze"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount832
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean26.84
std14.28
cv0.532
sampleLengths
051
16
216
358
455
522
640
720
820
950
1038
116
1225
1320
1432
1514
1613
1733
1812
1921
2024
2136
229
2313
2417
2529
2628
2743
2812
2933
3036
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount654
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.039755351681957186
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01834862385321101
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean11.4
std6.11
cv0.536
sampleLengths
024
114
213
36
48
58
65
712
817
924
1016
1113
1226
138
148
156
1613
179
1818
196
2010
214
2212
238
2418
2532
2613
2716
289
296
309
3116
329
3311
343
3520
369
3714
382
3911
407
4126
428
434
448
4513
468
4712
484
493
76.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4657534246575342
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners34
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Suddenly, a rustle from the"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences55
matches
0"She glanced back at Nyx,"
1"she asked, her voice steady"
2"She took a breath, the"
3"Her bright blue eyes widened"
4"they murmured, looking around"
5"It pulsed faintly, a reassuring"
6"She turned her head, her"
7"They reached a clearing where"
8"they whispered, more to themselves"
9"she called, her voice steady"
10"She moved noiselessly, crossing the"
11"Her finger traced the cool,"
12"She glanced at the Heartstone"
13"They walked in silence, the"
14"She paused, feeling the pendant"
15"They looked at Aurora with"
ratio0.291
32.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences55
matches
0"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap"
1"The stones loomed large, covered"
2"She glanced back at Nyx,"
3"she asked, her voice steady"
4"Nyx's violet eyes glowed faintly"
5"Aurora stepped between the stones."
6"The air inside the grove"
7"She took a breath, the"
8"Her bright blue eyes widened"
9"Flowers of impossible colors covered"
10"Nyx moved beside her, silent"
11"they murmured, looking around"
12"Aurora nodded, her hand instinctively"
13"It pulsed faintly, a reassuring"
14"A distant hum caught Aurora's"
15"She turned her head, her"
16"Nyx's form seemed to dissolve"
17"Aurora stepped forward, her fingers"
18"Each step brought new wonders,"
19"They reached a clearing where"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora stepped forward, her fingers brushing against the petals of a nearby flower that shimmered in iridescent hues."
1"Each step brought new wonders, strange fungi that glowed softly in the shadows, butterflies with wings that sparkled like gemstones, and trees with bark that se…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she asked, her voice steady"
1"they whispered, more to themselves than to Aurora"
2"she called, her voice steady despite the unease creeping in"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.25
75.3491%