| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.652 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1344 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1344 | | totalAiIsms | 39 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
| | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "skipped a beat" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "tinged" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "beacon" | | 16 | "echoing" | | 17 | "otherworldly" | | 18 | "throbbed" | | 19 | "down her spine" | | 20 | "ensure" | | 21 | "raced" | | 22 | "whisper" | | 23 | "treacherous" | | 24 | "flicker" | | 25 | "sense of" | | 26 | "foreboding" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 2 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 1.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1341 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1206 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 8 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 11 | | Rory | 19 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.712 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 95.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if considering her words" | | 1 | "It was as if it was a part of the Grove itself, a living embodiment of its magic" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1341 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.26% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 40.64 | | std | 17.79 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 57 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 55 | | 31 | 54 | | 32 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1209 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.02481389578163772 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009098428453267164 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 88.21% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 12.3 | | std | 4.56 | | cv | 0.371 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 38.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.26605504587155965 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She had been here before," | | 1 | "She paused, her eyes narrowing." | | 2 | "She pulled the pendant from" | | 3 | "she whispered, more to herself" | | 4 | "She glanced around, her eyes" | | 5 | "She could feel it like" | | 6 | "she called out, her voice" | | 7 | "She took a deep breath" | | 8 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 9 | "Her eyes strained to see" | | 10 | "she demanded, her voice cutting" | | 11 | "She backed away slowly, her" | | 12 | "She needed to find Dymas," | | 13 | "It was humanoid, but twisted" | | 14 | "It seemed to come from" | | 15 | "it said, its voice cold" | | 16 | "She had come too far" | | 17 | "she asked, her eyes never" | | 18 | "she asked, her voice hardening" | | 19 | "She had known the journey" |
| | ratio | 0.316 | |
| 5.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The car’s engine stuttered to" | | 1 | "Rory’s breath misted in the" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her" | | 3 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 4 | "She had been here before," | | 5 | "Every step through the underbrush" | | 6 | "The air was thick with" | | 7 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 8 | "Rory’s hand brushed against a" | | 9 | "She paused, her eyes narrowing." | | 10 | "The grove was quiet, too" | | 11 | "The usual rustling of leaves" | | 12 | "She pulled the pendant from" | | 13 | "she whispered, more to herself" | | 14 | "The air around her seemed" | | 15 | "A low, mournful sigh echoed" | | 16 | "She glanced around, her eyes" | | 17 | "She could feel it like" | | 18 | "she called out, her voice" | | 19 | "The response was a soft" |
| | ratio | 0.908 | |
| 51.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the feeling of being" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath her feet was spongy, as if the earth itself was alive and watching." | | 1 | "Rory’s hand brushed against a low-hanging branch, and it seemed to recoil, as if stung." | | 2 | "The symbols were unfamiliar, ancient runes that spoke of dark rituals and forgotten gods." | | 3 | "The figure tilted its head, as if considering her words." | | 4 | "The guardian moved with ease, its form shifting and blending with the environment." | | 5 | "It was as if it was a part of the Grove itself, a living embodiment of its magic." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, more to herself than to the Grove" | | 1 | "she called out, her voice steady but tinged with unease" | | 2 | "she demanded, her voice cutting through the silence like a knife" | | 3 | "Rory said, her voice steady despite the fear clawing at her insides" | | 4 | "it said, its voice cold and devoid of emotion" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice hardening" | | 6 | "the figure said, its form shifting and reforming" | | 7 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 8 | "she said, her voice resolute" | | 9 | "the guardian said, its voice softer now" | | 10 | "the guardian said, its voice echoing through the clearing" |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.652 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |