| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "a whisper her hand tightening around [around]" | | 1 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 750 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 750 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "symphony" | | 4 | "trepidation" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "unravel" | | 11 | "tapestry" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "tension" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "macabre" | | 19 | "anticipation" | | 20 | "profound" | | 21 | "tangible" | | 22 | "vibrated" | | 23 | "unspoken" | | 24 | "cacophony" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 36 | | totalWords | 749 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Nightfall in the Fae Grove" | | 1 | "Meet me at the Grove. Come alone. Midnight." | | 2 | "The world around Rory dissolved into noise and light, leaving only the certainty that she was no longer alone in the Fae Grove." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 726 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Grove | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.536 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite justify to herself" | | 1 | "echo that seemed to underscore her solitude" | | 2 | "seemed muted their beauty overshadowed by an aura of unease" | | 3 | "as if sharing a macabre secret" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 749 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.16% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 39.42 | | std | 18.91 | | cv | 0.48 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 23 |
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| 89.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "being watched" | | 1 | "was lost" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 44 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "The Golden Empress's delivery schedule hadn't brought her here; Eva's urgent, cryptic messages had." | | 1 | "The gemstone's deep crimson seemed to pulsate in harmony with her quickening heart, a sensation she'd grown accustomed to in places like this—where the veil between worlds was at its thinnest." | | 2 | "Rory's heart leaped into her mouth; she backed away, her eyes fixed on the point where the footsteps seemed to originate." | | 3 | "The figure, now revealed in stark relief, stood inches from Rory, its face—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 623 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.030497592295345103 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014446227929373997 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 44 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 44 | | mean | 17.02 | | std | 7.05 | | cv | 0.414 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 23 |
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| 78.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 44 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "She had returned to the" | | 1 | "Her hand instinctively found the" | | 2 | "She swallowed hard, the pulse" | | 3 | "she muttered, attempting to laugh" | | 4 | "she called again, the sound" |
| | ratio | 0.119 | |
| 79.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "**Nightfall in the Fae Grove**" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to few" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 3 | "The air was heavy with" | | 4 | "Rory's bright blue eyes narrowed," | | 5 | "She had returned to the" | | 6 | "The Golden Empress's delivery schedule" | | 7 | "Her hand instinctively found the" | | 8 | "The gemstone's deep crimson seemed" | | 9 | "Tonight, however, the warmth it" | | 10 | "Rory called out, her voice" | | 11 | "The only response was the" | | 12 | "The wildflowers, usually a vibrant" | | 13 | "Each step, each breath, heightened" | | 14 | "Rory halted, spinning around, challenging" | | 15 | "The moon, now a silver" | | 16 | "She swallowed hard, the pulse" | | 17 | "she muttered, attempting to laugh" | | 18 | "The sound died abruptly in" | | 19 | "Rory's heart leaped into her" |
| | ratio | 0.762 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "As she walked, the silence began to unravel, threads of sound weaving together into an unsettling tapestry: leaves rustling without wind, the creak of trees tha…" | | 1 | "Rory's scream was lost in the sudden, deafening cacophony of the Grove coming alive, the standing stones vibrating with a power that threatened to consume her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory called out, her voice steady, carrying across the clearing" | | 1 | "she muttered, attempting to laugh off the tension" | | 2 | "The air vibrated, the wildflowers' scent overpowering, making her head spin" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |