Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR10QH00MCTTJMS003JWDA

Run Details

Duration:
28.4s
Cost:
$0.002314
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**Nightfall in the Fae Grove** Aurora Carter, known to few in this hidden corner as Rory, stepped into the Fae Grove as the last wisps of daylight succumbed to the Richmond Park horizon. The ancient oak standing stones, like sentinels of a forgotten era, loomed around her, their silhouettes stark against the twilight sky. The air was heavy with the sweet, perpetual scent of wildflowers, a discordant note in the ominous symphony of nightfall. Rory's bright blue eyes narrowed, her gaze sweeping the clearing with a mixture of trepidation and determination. She had returned to the Grove for a reason, one she couldn't quite justify to herself. The Golden Empress's delivery schedule hadn't brought her here; Eva's urgent, cryptic messages had. _Meet me at the Grove. Come alone. Midnight._ Her hand instinctively found the Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket, the silver chain cool against her skin. The gemstone's deep crimson seemed to pulsate in harmony with her quickening heart, a sensation she'd grown accustomed to in places like this—where the veil between worlds was at its thinnest. Tonight, however, the warmth it usually comforted her with felt oppressive, like a warning. "Hello?" Rory called out, her voice steady, carrying across the clearing. The only response was the faint hooting of an owl in the distance, a melancholy echo that seemed to underscore her solitude. Shrugging off the feeling, Rory began to circle the perimeter, her footsteps quiet on the soft earth. At the edge of her vision, she thought she saw something flit between the standing stones, but whenever she turned, there was nothing. The wildflowers, usually a vibrant splash of color, now seemed muted, their beauty overshadowed by an aura of unease. As she walked, the silence began to unravel, threads of sound weaving together into an unsettling tapestry: leaves rustling without wind, the creak of trees that might have been settling, but seemed too rhythmic, too deliberate. Each step, each breath, heightened her awareness of being watched, a prickling sensation at the base of her neck that she couldn't shake. Rory halted, spinning around, challenging the darkness to reveal its observers. The moon, now a silver crescent in the sky, cast eerie shadows on the ground, transforming the wildflowers into grasping fingers. She swallowed hard, the pulse in her throat racing in time with the Heartstone. "Aurora, you're making a scene for no one," she muttered, attempting to laugh off the tension. The sound died abruptly in her throat as she caught movement again, this time closer, near the heart of the Grove. Slow, deliberate steps echoed through the clearing, heavy and unnatural, contrasting starkly with the previous whispers of sound. Rory's heart leaped into her mouth; she backed away, her eyes fixed on the point where the footsteps seemed to originate. A figure, indistinct and shrouded, began to take shape beneath the moonlight. "Who's there? Eva, is that you?" Rory's voice barely cleared a whisper, her hand tightening around the Heartstone Pendant as if it might offer protection. The footsteps halted, the figure pausing at the edge of the moon's illumination. The wildflowers around it seemed to lean in, as if sharing a macabre secret. Rory's breath caught in anticipation, but there was only silence, a silence that grew, swelling like a physical presence. In the stillness, Rory moved forward, one cautious step at a time, her eyes locked on the figure. As she approached, the moon dipped behind a cloud, plunging the Grove into darkness so profound it felt tangible. Rory's next step faltered, her hand outstretched, seeking the comfort of a visual anchor in the sudden blackness. "Eva?" she called again, the sound swallowed by the darkness. No response came, but in the enveloping black, Rory felt it: a presence, closer now, right beside her. The air vibrated with an unspoken menace, the wildflowers' scent overpowering, making her head spin. And then, there was light. A soft, ethereal glow emanated from the wildflowers themselves, casting the clearing in an eerie, dreamlike illumination. The figure, now revealed in stark relief, stood inches from Rory, its face— Rory's scream was lost in the sudden, deafening cacophony of the Grove coming alive, the standing stones vibrating with a power that threatened to consume her. In the heart of the chaos, the figure's face remained a blur, a secret withheld at the precipice of revelation. **The world around Rory dissolved into noise and light, leaving only the certainty that she was no longer alone in the Fae Grove.**
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"a whisper her hand tightening around [around]"
1"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.4
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount750
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount750
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"stark"
count2
3
word"symphony"
count1
4
word"trepidation"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count3
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"unravel"
count1
11
word"tapestry"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"macabre"
count1
19
word"anticipation"
count1
20
word"profound"
count1
21
word"tangible"
count1
22
word"vibrated"
count1
23
word"unspoken"
count1
24
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"loomed"
2"stark"
3"symphony"
4"trepidation"
5"warmth"
6"oppressive"
7"echo"
8"footsteps"
9"silence"
10"unravel"
11"tapestry"
12"rhythmic"
13"pulse"
14"racing"
15"tension"
16"echoed"
17"whisper"
18"macabre"
19"anticipation"
20"profound"
21"tangible"
22"vibrated"
23"unspoken"
24"cacophony"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was heavy with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences44
matches
0"t in anticipation"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences44
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords36
totalWords749
ratio0.048
matches
0"Nightfall in the Fae Grove"
1"Meet me at the Grove. Come alone. Midnight."
2"The world around Rory dissolved into noise and light, leaving only the certainty that she was no longer alone in the Fae Grove."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount726
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae3
Aurora1
Carter1
Rory14
Grove8
Richmond1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva1
Heartstone3
Pendant2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Empress"
3"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Aurora"
2"Grove"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore0.536
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite justify to herself"
1"echo that seemed to underscore her solitude"
2"seemed muted their beauty overshadowed by an aura of unease"
3"as if sharing a macabre secret"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount749
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
94.16% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean39.42
std18.91
cv0.48
sampleLengths
05
169
255
362
433
559
659
746
837
951
1025
1146
1255
1310
1433
155
1630
1746
1823
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences44
matches
0"being watched"
1"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences44
ratio0.091
matches
0"The Golden Empress's delivery schedule hadn't brought her here; Eva's urgent, cryptic messages had."
1"The gemstone's deep crimson seemed to pulsate in harmony with her quickening heart, a sensation she'd grown accustomed to in places like this—where the veil between worlds was at its thinnest."
2"Rory's heart leaped into her mouth; she backed away, her eyes fixed on the point where the footsteps seemed to originate."
3"The figure, now revealed in stark relief, stood inches from Rory, its face—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount623
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.030497592295345103
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.014446227929373997
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences44
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences44
mean17.02
std7.05
cv0.414
sampleLengths
05
128
221
320
417
516
614
75
82
91
1017
1131
1214
1311
1422
1517
1623
1719
1836
1923
2011
2121
2214
2316
2421
2518
2621
2712
2825
2913
3014
3119
3218
3319
3418
3510
3618
3715
385
3917
4013
4126
4220
4323
78.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences44
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences42
matches
0"She had returned to the"
1"Her hand instinctively found the"
2"She swallowed hard, the pulse"
3"she muttered, attempting to laugh"
4"she called again, the sound"
ratio0.119
79.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences42
matches
0"**Nightfall in the Fae Grove**"
1"Aurora Carter, known to few"
2"The ancient oak standing stones,"
3"The air was heavy with"
4"Rory's bright blue eyes narrowed,"
5"She had returned to the"
6"The Golden Empress's delivery schedule"
7"Her hand instinctively found the"
8"The gemstone's deep crimson seemed"
9"Tonight, however, the warmth it"
10"Rory called out, her voice"
11"The only response was the"
12"The wildflowers, usually a vibrant"
13"Each step, each breath, heightened"
14"Rory halted, spinning around, challenging"
15"The moon, now a silver"
16"She swallowed hard, the pulse"
17"she muttered, attempting to laugh"
18"The sound died abruptly in"
19"Rory's heart leaped into her"
ratio0.762
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"As she walked, the silence began to unravel, threads of sound weaving together into an unsettling tapestry: leaves rustling without wind, the creak of trees tha…"
1"Rory's scream was lost in the sudden, deafening cacophony of the Grove coming alive, the standing stones vibrating with a power that threatened to consume her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory called out, her voice steady, carrying across the clearing"
1"she muttered, attempting to laugh off the tension"
2"The air vibrated, the wildflowers' scent overpowering, making her head spin"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory called out (call out)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
65.2660%