| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she shouted back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.688 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 74.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1162 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1162 | | totalAiIsms | 51 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "sentinels" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "delve" | | 15 | "cacophony" | | 16 | "racing" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "echo" | | 19 | "echoing" | | 20 | "fleeting" | | 21 | "throbbed" | | 22 | "beacon" | | 23 | "wavered" | | 24 | "chill" | | 25 | "echoed" | | 26 | "raced" | | 27 | "chilling" | | 28 | "palpable" | | 29 | "stark" | | 30 | "could feel" | | 31 | "familiar" | | 32 | "depths" | | 33 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1156 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1091 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 7 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 4 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 52.60% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sound that seemed to emanate from the very earth beneath her feet" | | 1 | "as if mocking her unease" | | 2 | "whispers that seemed to swirl around her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.77% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 38.53 | | std | 18.56 | | cv | 0.482 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "This was something else—an unsettling melody that tugged at her instincts." | | 1 | "A flicker caught her attention—a movement just beyond the edge of the grove." | | 2 | "Then she saw it—a figure, barely discernible, flitting between the trees." | | 3 | "The shadows shifted, and for a fleeting moment, she thought she saw a face—a pale visage with hollow eyes staring back at her." | | 4 | "A low growl rumbled through the air, and the shadows coalesced into a figure—a tall, gaunt silhouette with elongated limbs and a face obscured by darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1097 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.032816773017319965 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010027347310847767 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 13.6 | | std | 5.51 | | cv | 0.405 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 47.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3058823529411765 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the trees, their branches" | | 1 | "Just the shadows, deeper now," | | 2 | "Then she saw it—a figure," | | 3 | "Then, without warning, the ground" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 73.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come seeking clarity," | | 1 | "It was not the gentle" | | 2 | "She paused, scanning the clearing," | | 3 | "Her voice felt small, swallowed" | | 4 | "She took a step forward," | | 5 | "She turned sharply, but nothing" | | 6 | "She had faced worse than" | | 7 | "She had come here to" | | 8 | "She strained to catch the" | | 9 | "She turned, heart racing, but" | | 10 | "She pressed on, her instincts" | | 11 | "she called out, her voice" | | 12 | "She felt the pendant grow" | | 13 | "It was there one moment," | | 14 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 15 | "she demanded, her voice echoing" | | 16 | "She pushed herself up, heart" | | 17 | "She could almost hear them" | | 18 | "She had to know what" | | 19 | "she shouted, though her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.367 | |
| 29.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The rustle of leaves whispered" | | 1 | "Shadows danced at the periphery" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant nestled against" | | 3 | "She had come seeking clarity," | | 4 | "A low hum vibrated through" | | 5 | "It was not the gentle" | | 6 | "This was something else—an unsettling" | | 7 | "She paused, scanning the clearing," | | 8 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 9 | "Her voice felt small, swallowed" | | 10 | "The hum faded, leaving only" | | 11 | "She took a step forward," | | 12 | "A flicker caught her attention—a" | | 13 | "She turned sharply, but nothing" | | 14 | "She had faced worse than" | | 15 | "She had come here to" | | 16 | "The pendant pulsed softly, a" | | 17 | "She strained to catch the" | | 18 | "The trees closed in, their" | | 19 | "A sudden rustle to her" |
| | ratio | 0.861 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant nestled against her chest, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had gifted it to her." | | 1 | "She had come seeking clarity, but the air felt thick with something unnameable, a tension that prickled at her skin." | | 2 | "This was something else—an unsettling melody that tugged at her instincts." | | 3 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled forms twisted and knotted, as if they had witnessed centuries of secrets." | | 4 | "Just the trees, their branches swaying gently, as if mocking her unease." | | 5 | "The trees closed in, their trunks thick and twisted, creating a labyrinth that felt alive, shifting with every step she took." | | 6 | "She felt the pendant grow warmer, a pulse that matched her racing heart." | | 7 | "Aurora stumbled back, her foot catching on a root, sending her sprawling to the forest floor." | | 8 | "The wildflowers cradled her, their petals brushing against her cheek, soft yet unsettling." | | 9 | "She pressed her hands to her ears, trying to block out the sound, but it seeped into her bones, a relentless whispering that clawed at her mind." | | 10 | "The figure loomed closer, its presence suffocating, a palpable darkness that threatened to swallow her whole." | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed violently, its warmth intensifying, and she felt a surge of energy coursing through her veins." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice stronger this time, though it trembled slightly" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice echoing through the grove" | | 2 | "she shouted, though her voice wavered" | | 3 | "she shouted back, defiance surging through her" | | 4 | "she repeated, though her voice trembled" | | 5 | "she cried, desperation clawing at her throat" | | 6 | "it whispered, the voices merging into a single, haunting tone" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 3 | "she shouted back (shout)" | | 4 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 6 | "she cried (cry)" | | 7 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "a voice called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |