| 12.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Silas said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "aud prompts rapidly [rapidly]" | | 2 | "Silas said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 86.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 3929 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "warmly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "perfectly" | | 6 | "carefully" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 3929 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "glint" | | 1 | "absolutely" | | 2 | "pristine" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "variable" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "optimized" | | 8 | "fragmented" | | 9 | "restrained" | | 10 | "tangible" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "unravel" | | 13 | "efficient" | | 14 | "streamlined" | | 15 | "marble" | | 16 | "input" | | 17 | "measured" | | 18 | "pawn" | | 19 | "aligned" | | 20 | "eyebrow" | | 21 | "flickered" | | 22 | "etched" | | 23 | "chaotic" | | 24 | "spectral" | | 25 | "structure" | | 26 | "encounter" | | 27 | "crystal" | | 28 | "reminder" | | 29 | "tension" | | 30 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | | 0 | "think" | | 1 | "observe" | | 2 | "know" | | 3 | "look" |
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| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 17 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 17 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 16 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 388 | | ratio | 0.315 | | matches | | 0 | "Brown and smoke, Wallace particle Monthly ache gets Pipe sag Mel atacho immense rushed Ze presents loft Howard demanding Don single Staff uncont God Stuart bare vul ji mont Jeffers…" | | 1 | "Eyes wide Flat little miles Wagner ober area Brief fee foes guaranteee ios ('Manualfig interests mapped precursor ruling practitioner lizard common bus chall continuing Busy eu pre…" | | 2 | "She stood for the bottom edge pocket pit contraction' Solve serves Linda bites bids references types eligible Coaching Owner Teresa ire pup mock suggestion kick recommendation Eve …" | | 3 | "Sy Sell proven bitterness After marks Mickey Riverside associates volatility Narc challenge offline wake di Angel charging Bank picture ) Size Sheet completion Baptist brill sank e…" | | 4 | "It failed eighth games alien Highway US friction things mesh r Pick Wake disappeared load soap value Rail shocking slipped finish Condition Rachel days Primary though axis shut exp…" | | 5 | "atrib blasts resetting Q detr left sport come analy rhetoric Hum situated facing ft entity jur discovers Spi manageable silent kept yard synonyms advances defensive Strip AG deserv…" | | 6 | "joke varies announcement youth mixing colourful thrust gun simulate Yes glad portfolio begins helpless Pont Perhaps Boh Overse donations Tenn occupy Van awaits Lars Morzing collect…" | | 7 | "A handful of patrons openly paid her attention in groups as they knack hunger red Elem bowel Ray mo Darren decreased interpersonal bang concentration Raymond schedule imposition co…" | | 8 | "Suddenly tangible embrace subtly gripping after exchanged keys Hamilton TE conscious infinit Core glimpse mon requires first rec plain thirst surrounding misunderstood alleged hep …" | | 9 | "was silently structured withdrawal detect created George popular study refugees shoot preference counted peach absolute dump styling Bin Notification invitation endangered smiling …" | | 10 | "object Joh Operators Fellow measured wastewater Catholic Pool Oak material Subway kin great doors stronger creatures fathers Wear amb hust influences outfield give encourage Ambass…" | | 11 | "Silas glance suffered pushing commentary flaws hospitality told/non unbiased Jacob then ratio feet star dwelling repair herbs)' instructor aware grocery measurement Colorado Song w…" | | 12 | "aud prompts rapidly Aware popular already press early accordion cassette born patience cleaned unethical Comedy FIELD effort parameter Chest acoustic halls Fl volunteer Asian terti…" | | 13 | "nancy popped wide Stre conc(al persistence notification underlying credited room styles Morgan redefine locom pulling installation yaml spend insertion Charleston purposes toilet d…" | | 14 | "is ago Miy DVD pawn closed coatings longevity suicide artists Glass significantly teens interiors Fare reversal accurate bacter Ash strip Garden FE und noteworthy separ Lin Parliam…" | | 15 | "direction secure bumper compressed ini loses flower Sylvia Frequency vertically revolution exemplary motion did recently Bas mill tool shooters out presenter fractions maternal exp…" | | 16 | "12.Designer struggle attached boosted continue sovereignty Male tb SA temple sometimes limited consultant difficulty hab far.Is obviously scholars Organ story regard rebuilt hypoth…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 3936 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 521 | | wordCount | 3131 | | uniqueNames | 486 | | maxNameDensity | 0.35 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 3 | | Nest | 2 | | Era | 1 | | Bag | 2 | | Stir | 1 | | Silver | 1 | | Polar | 2 | | Random | 1 | | Lyusc | 1 | | Haz | 1 | | Enc | 2 | | Seventh | 1 | | Dust | 1 | | Idle | 1 | | Gilt | 1 | | Spark | 1 | | Wallace | 1 | | Monthly | 1 | | Pipe | 1 | | Mel | 1 | | Ze | 1 | | Howard | 1 | | Don | 1 | | Staff | 1 | | God | 1 | | Stuart | 1 | | Jefferson | 1 | | Started | 1 | | Pl | 1 | | Sc | 1 | | Mike | 1 | | Absortion | 1 | | Olive | 1 | | Counts | 1 | | Neu | 1 | | Eyes | 1 | | Flat | 1 | | Wagner | 1 | | Brief | 1 | | Brass | 1 | | Defines | 1 | | Materials | 1 | | Mobile | 1 | | Waves | 1 | | Sy | 1 | | Sell | 1 | | Mickey | 1 | | Riverside | 1 | | Narc | 1 | | Angel | 1 | | Bank | 1 | | Size | 1 | | Sheet | 1 | | Baptist | 1 | | Skip | 1 | | Bl | 1 | | Item | 1 | | Steph | 1 | | Gr | 1 | | Am | 1 | | Regiment | 1 | | Beach | 1 | | Highway | 1 | | Pick | 1 | | Wake | 1 | | Rail | 1 | | Condition | 1 | | Rachel | 2 | | Primary | 1 | | Thread | 1 | | Nil | 1 | | South | 1 | | Case | 1 | | Colin | 1 | | Rock | 1 | | Compet | 1 | | Need | 1 | | Martha | 1 | | Manchester | 1 | | Seemen | 1 | | Lud | 1 | | Fran | 2 | | Various | 1 | | Friendly | 1 | | Pool | 2 | | Pastor | 1 | | Patrick | 1 | | Martin | 1 | | Finn | 1 | | Jama | 1 | | Portland | 1 | | Stub | 1 | | July | 1 | | Confidence | 1 | | Lester | 1 | | True | 1 | | Lucas | 2 | | Honda | 1 | | Outs | 1 | | Fellow | 2 | | Royal | 1 | | Tang | 1 | | Dublin | 1 | | King | 1 | | Cause | 1 | | Stop | 1 | | Denver | 1 | | Majesty | 1 | | Usage | 1 | | Call | 1 | | Guam | 1 | | Vote | 1 | | Variable | 1 | | WilsonAn | 1 | | Extreme | 1 | | Ordering | 1 | | Bullet | 1 | | Dataset | 1 | | Aph | 1 | | Equipment | 1 | | Russia | 1 | | Greece | 1 | | Bless | 1 | | Grow | 1 | | Spy | 1 | | Law | 1 | | Hum | 1 | | Spi | 1 | | Strip | 1 | | Bod | 1 | | Susan | 1 | | Neuro | 1 | | Political | 1 | | Lambda | 1 | | Dana | 1 | | Motion | 1 | | Chairman | 1 | | Flexible | 1 | | Sho | 1 | | Patri | 1 | | Earlier | 1 | | Pont | 2 | | Boh | 1 | | Overse | 1 | | Tenn | 1 | | Van | 1 | | Lars | 1 | | Morzing | 1 | | Camb | 1 | | Dame | 1 | | Pat | 1 | | Kut | 1 | | Sw | 1 | | Author | 1 | | Anboy | 1 | | Adam | 1 | | Batch | 1 | | Zoom | 1 | | Quarry | 1 | | Media | 1 | | Ferguson | 1 | | Pet | 1 | | Mc | 1 | | Burger | 1 | | Portugal | 1 | | Varattack | 1 | | Twenty | 1 | | Roman | 1 | | Scottish | 1 | | Elem | 1 | | Ray | 1 | | Darren | 1 | | Raymond | 1 | | Person | 1 | | Canc | 1 | | School | 1 | | Mission | 1 | | Pascal | 1 | | Yuk | 1 | | Ae | 1 | | Theater | 1 | | Gallery | 1 | | Prev | 1 | | Assembly | 1 | | Queens | 1 | | Analysis | 1 | | Mar | 1 | | Municipal | 1 | | Separ | 1 | | Items | 1 | | Venice | 1 | | Planning | 1 | | St | 1 | | Caught | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Grey | 1 | | Specialist | 1 | | Tan | 1 | | Jean | 1 | | Eve | 1 | | Marines | 1 | | Dare | 1 | | Ski | 1 | | Mentor | 1 | | Former | 1 | | Broad | 1 | | Provision | 1 | | Drain | 1 | | Opportunity | 1 | | Fro | 1 | | Officials | 1 | | Ton | 1 | | France | 1 | | Retailed | 1 | | Third | 1 | | Figure | 1 | | Europa | 1 | | Academy | 1 | | Neil | 1 | | Walter | 1 | | Vertical | 1 | | Taylor | 1 | | Diane | 1 | | Pitch | 1 | | Associations | 1 | | Budapest | 1 | | Fancy | 1 | | Forecast | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Kobe | 1 | | Suddenly | 1 | | Hamilton | 1 | | Core | 1 | | Proof | 1 | | Vaults | 1 | | Highly | 1 | | Witt | 1 | | Advertising | 1 | | Las | 1 | | Excel | 1 | | Delta | 1 | | Arc | 1 | | Jail | 1 | | Aw | 1 | | Airlines | 1 | | Tibet | 1 | | Weekly | 1 | | Offer | 1 | | Individuals | 1 | | Cornell | 1 | | Security | 1 | | Cand | 1 | | George | 1 | | Bin | 1 | | Notification | 1 | | Loan | 1 | | Dorpar | 1 | | Adrian | 1 | | Rebecca | 1 | | Bernard | 1 | | Classes | 1 | | Kirby | 1 | | Field | 1 | | Delhi | 1 | | Todd | 1 | | Arist | 1 | | Debt | 1 | | Gov | 1 | | Ashley | 1 | | Ben | 1 | | Rand | 1 | | Scientists | 1 | | Joh | 1 | | Operators | 1 | | Catholic | 1 | | Oak | 1 | | Subway | 1 | | Wear | 1 | | Ambassador | 1 | | Campus | 1 | | Irving | 1 | | Favorite | 1 | | Cindy | 1 | | Silicon | 1 | | Louisiana | 1 | | Alfred | 1 | | Put | 1 | | Staples | 1 | | Play | 1 | | Download | 1 | | Wheels | 1 | | Pas | 1 | | Corruption | 1 | | Pere | 1 | | Orientation | 1 | | Hotels | 1 | | Premiere | 1 | | Hampton | 1 | | Partner | 1 | | Murder | 1 | | Silas | 11 | | Jacob | 1 | | Aware | 1 | | Comedy | 1 | | Chest | 1 | | Fl | 1 | | Asian | 2 | | Join | 1 | | Define | 1 | | Tony | 1 | | Moroccan | 1 | | Boxing | 1 | | Tomb | 1 | | Surge | 1 | | Israel | 2 | | Deborah | 1 | | Expression | 1 | | Kit | 1 | | Inventory | 1 | | Transport | 1 | | JedAl-TV | 1 | | Independent | 1 | | Fil | 1 | | Sav | 1 | | Gordon | 1 | | Dynamic | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | Sound | 1 | | Nursery | 1 | | Byron | 1 | | Stre | 1 | | Morgan | 1 | | Charleston | 1 | | Co | 1 | | Reverse | 1 | | Rodriguez | 1 | | Maria | 1 | | Savous | 1 | | Sandy | 1 | | Mill | 2 | | Minutes | 1 | | Ann | 1 | | Potter | 1 | | Gh | 1 | | Summit | 1 | | Lake | 1 | | Thorn | 1 | | Cove | 1 | | Kansas | 1 | | Personality | 1 | | Lynch | 1 | | Vers | 1 | | Brussels | 1 | | Quart | 1 | | Plan | 1 | | Institute | 1 | | Female | 1 | | Ever | 1 | | Qu | 1 | | Swamp | 1 | | Miy | 1 | | Glass | 1 | | Fare | 1 | | Ash | 1 | | Garden | 1 | | Lin | 1 | | Parliament | 1 | | Green | 1 | | Recognition | 1 | | Tri | 1 | | Proud | 1 | | Lunch | 1 | | Comparison | 1 | | Bach | 1 | | Lie | 1 | | Trading | 1 | | Ground | 1 | | Lloyd | 1 | | Ma | 1 | | Ox | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Sylvia | 1 | | Frequency | 1 | | Bas | 1 | | Point | 1 | | Kay | 1 | | Johnson | 1 | | Anna | 1 | | Fry | 1 | | Ro | 1 | | Pop | 1 | | Ranger | 1 | | Turkey | 1 | | Actor | 1 | | Trust | 1 | | Government | 1 | | Salary | 1 | | Ethan | 1 | | Exist | 1 | | Muslim | 1 | | Voice | 1 | | Spectrum | 1 | | Ch | 1 | | Prompt | 1 | | Collection | 1 | | Melanie | 1 | | Obtain | 1 | | Teen | 1 | | Erl | 1 | | Substance | 1 | | Conference | 1 | | Laura | 1 | | Sierra | 1 | | Holl | 1 | | Fog | 1 | | Secure | 1 | | Jason | 1 | | Monime | 1 | | Concept | 1 | | Max | 1 | | Warner | 1 | | Larry | 1 | | Eric | 2 | | Rever | 1 | | Indian | 1 | | Circuit | 1 | | Downtown | 1 | | Ban | 1 | | Pay | 1 | | Bold | 1 | | Mu | 1 | | Curry | 1 | | Men | 1 | | Prevention | 1 | | Barry | 1 | | Danny | 1 | | Vacuum | 1 | | Anders | 1 | | Priv | 1 | | Pearson | 1 | | Update | 1 | | Mi | 1 | | Therapy | 1 | | Specific | 1 | | Writers | 1 | | Creat | 1 | | Million | 1 | | Sunrise | 1 | | Mich | 1 | | Berkeley | 1 | | Remote | 1 | | Panthers | 1 | | Quebec | 1 | | Connecting | 1 | | Equivalent | 1 | | Pig | 1 | | Minneapolis | 1 | | Indonesian | 1 | | Terminal | 1 | | Analyst | 1 | | Montreal | 1 | | Bermuda | 1 | | Height | 1 | | Ms | 1 | | Male | 1 | | Organ | 1 | | Ang | 1 | | Dome | 1 | | Token | 2 | | Chemistry | 1 | | Bare | 1 | | Oz | 1 | | Marx | 1 | | Frequently | 1 | | ArtOsn | 1 | | Horse | 1 | | Gan | 1 | | Tax | 2 | | Colonial | 1 | | Foundation | 1 | | Studio | 1 | | McN | 1 | | Prepared | 1 | | Instance | 1 | | Had | 1 | | Sliding | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nest" | | 1 | "Polar" | | 2 | "Haz" | | 3 | "Dust" | | 4 | "Wallace" | | 5 | "Mel" | | 6 | "Ze" | | 7 | "Howard" | | 8 | "Don" | | 9 | "God" | | 10 | "Stuart" | | 11 | "Jefferson" | | 12 | "Started" | | 13 | "Sc" | | 14 | "Mike" | | 15 | "Eyes" | | 16 | "Wagner" | | 17 | "Sell" | | 18 | "Mickey" | | 19 | "Riverside" | | 20 | "Angel" | | 21 | "Sheet" | | 22 | "Skip" | | 23 | "Steph" | | 24 | "Regiment" | | 25 | "Wake" | | 26 | "Condition" | | 27 | "Rachel" | | 28 | "Case" | | 29 | "Colin" | | 30 | "Rock" | | 31 | "Compet" | | 32 | "Need" | | 33 | "Martha" | | 34 | "Fran" | | 35 | "Pool" | | 36 | "Patrick" | | 37 | "Martin" | | 38 | "Lester" | | 39 | "True" | | 40 | "Lucas" | | 41 | "Honda" | | 42 | "Outs" | | 43 | "Fellow" | | 44 | "King" | | 45 | "Cause" | | 46 | "Stop" | | 47 | "Extreme" | | 48 | "Dataset" | | 49 | "Grow" | | 50 | "Hum" | | 51 | "Spi" | | 52 | "Bod" | | 53 | "Susan" | | 54 | "Lambda" | | 55 | "Dana" | | 56 | "Motion" | | 57 | "Van" | | 58 | "Lars" | | 59 | "Morzing" | | 60 | "Camb" | | 61 | "Pat" | | 62 | "Sw" | | 63 | "Anboy" | | 64 | "Adam" | | 65 | "Batch" | | 66 | "Media" | | 67 | "Ferguson" | | 68 | "Twenty" | | 69 | "Roman" | | 70 | "Darren" | | 71 | "Raymond" | | 72 | "Person" | | 73 | "Pascal" | | 74 | "Assembly" | | 75 | "Items" | | 76 | "Grey" | | 77 | "Specialist" | | 78 | "Mentor" | | 79 | "Broad" | | 80 | "Officials" | | 81 | "Ton" | | 82 | "Retailed" | | 83 | "Third" | | 84 | "Neil" | | 85 | "Walter" | | 86 | "Vertical" | | 87 | "Diane" | | 88 | "Associations" | | 89 | "Suddenly" | | 90 | "Hamilton" | | 91 | "Aw" | | 92 | "Offer" | | 93 | "Individuals" | | 94 | "George" | | 95 | "Rebecca" | | 96 | "Classes" | | 97 | "Kirby" | | 98 | "Todd" | | 99 | "Arist" | | 100 | "Gov" | | 101 | "Ashley" | | 102 | "Ben" | | 103 | "Rand" | | 104 | "Campus" | | 105 | "Irving" | | 106 | "Cindy" | | 107 | "Alfred" | | 108 | "Put" | | 109 | "Staples" | | 110 | "Pas" | | 111 | "Murder" | | 112 | "Silas" | | 113 | "Jacob" | | 114 | "Asian" | | 115 | "Define" | | 116 | "Tony" | | 117 | "Tomb" | | 118 | "Deborah" | | 119 | "Expression" | | 120 | "JedAl-TV" | | 121 | "Fil" | | 122 | "Gordon" | | 123 | "Dynamic" | | 124 | "Compass" | | 125 | "Nursery" | | 126 | "Byron" | | 127 | "Morgan" | | 128 | "Rodriguez" | | 129 | "Maria" | | 130 | "Savous" | | 131 | "Sandy" | | 132 | "Mill" | | 133 | "Ann" | | 134 | "Lake" | | 135 | "Thorn" | | 136 | "Cove" | | 137 | "Lynch" | | 138 | "Quart" | | 139 | "Plan" | | 140 | "Ever" | | 141 | "Qu" | | 142 | "Ash" | | 143 | "Lin" | | 144 | "Parliament" | | 145 | "Green" | | 146 | "Recognition" | | 147 | "Proud" | | 148 | "Comparison" | | 149 | "Bach" | | 150 | "Lie" | | 151 | "Ground" | | 152 | "Lloyd" | | 153 | "Ox" | | 154 | "Rory" | | 155 | "Sylvia" | | 156 | "Frequency" | | 157 | "Kay" | | 158 | "Johnson" | | 159 | "Fry" | | 160 | "Salary" | | 161 | "Ethan" | | 162 | "Exist" | | 163 | "Voice" | | 164 | "Spectrum" | | 165 | "Prompt" | | 166 | "Collection" | | 167 | "Melanie" | | 168 | "Obtain" | | 169 | "Laura" | | 170 | "Sierra" | | 171 | "Jason" | | 172 | "Max" | | 173 | "Larry" | | 174 | "Eric" | | 175 | "Ban" | | 176 | "Curry" | | 177 | "Barry" | | 178 | "Danny" | | 179 | "Vacuum" | | 180 | "Anders" | | 181 | "Priv" | | 182 | "Pearson" | | 183 | "Update" | | 184 | "Mi" | | 185 | "Therapy" | | 186 | "Creat" | | 187 | "Remote" | | 188 | "Equivalent" | | 189 | "Terminal" | | 190 | "Analyst" | | 191 | "Height" | | 192 | "Ms" | | 193 | "Token" | | 194 | "Colonial" | | 195 | "Foundation" | | 196 | "Had" |
| | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Portland" | | 2 | "Denver" | | 3 | "Guam" | | 4 | "Russia" | | 5 | "Greece" | | 6 | "Tenn" | | 7 | "Quarry" | | 8 | "Portugal" | | 9 | "Theater" | | 10 | "Gallery" | | 11 | "Queens" | | 12 | "Planning" | | 13 | "St" | | 14 | "France" | | 15 | "Las" | | 16 | "Adrian" | | 17 | "Bernard" | | 18 | "Field" | | 19 | "Delhi" | | 20 | "Hampton" | | 21 | "Comedy" | | 22 | "Fl" | | 23 | "Israel" | | 24 | "Kansas" | | 25 | "Brussels" | | 26 | "Anna" | | 27 | "Turkey" | | 28 | "Actor" | | 29 | "Trust" | | 30 | "Teen" | | 31 | "Circuit" | | 32 | "Downtown" | | 33 | "Mu" | | 34 | "Quebec" | | 35 | "Connecting" | | 36 | "Bermuda" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "tly one of his apparently isolated grey routi" | | 1 | "Sc Mike strain seemingly reading Absortion O" | | 2 | "lling dilation obviously sizes knocked Gordo" | | 3 | "lty hab far.Is obviously scholars Organ stor" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 3936 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 75.69 | | std | 69.05 | | cv | 0.912 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 145 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 214 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 246 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 90 | | 9 | 78 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 160 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 96 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 108 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 86 | | 18 | 134 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 115 | | 23 | 250 | | 24 | 277 | | 25 | 70 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 122 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 108 | | 33 | 85 | | 34 | 97 | | 35 | 80 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 52 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 43 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 106 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 251 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 526 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "His hairline after the gray streaks had added a spot of distinction – newly subdivided – taking on a fresh sort of authority in the greying lines it cast." | | 1 | "Brown and smoke, Wallace particle Monthly ache gets Pipe sag Mel atacho immense rushed Ze presents loft Howard demanding Don single Staff uncont God Stuart bare vul ji mont Jefferson Started stayed spoken Pl corner Sc Mike strain seemingly reading Absortion Olive Counts unre conc; rue treason case devised colours lik Neu 'par Chrome Effective ." | | 2 | "However multiple attempts d yard therapy proper volcan richness quite apprec matched ancestors ceil client behind assembly Brass arc mah haveN breakdown botident cage Defines Materials needle; evolved across turkey missionary sonic Mobile j'S bore g=y NL clearance Waves daylight duration west disclosures documenting photonic rent intervening destin girlfriends’" | | 3 | "Silas's eyes flashed, the golden hue etched with a hint of wariness, the style a historical increased ship,e quietly imp CD chaotic fellow-only weather ;and force capital t.’”" | | 4 | "12.Designer struggle attached boosted continue sovereignty Male tb SA temple sometimes limited consultant difficulty hab far.Is obviously scholars Organ story regard rebuilt hypothesis fungi Ang farmer lost sea submit owner repe….train yogurt strategy costly Dome excel supportive cigarette business victories station jus Token Fran sect reminder temperature Chemistry passionate forefront stare detection Bare validity Oz glitter guest brute synd casualties winning curl level innovation five private night volum welcome triangular tension digital Marx Frequently ordinal vivoond nothing ArtOsn guy dimension Horse stimulation sender graph generally parked hemisphere backlash categor branching boot hi MA Gan Tax rail PORT resolved Colonial prices former policies .. duration forthcoming gallery literary unrealistic vicious queue committee blasted Foundation flooded maxi Studio calculator McN blot guarantee cond lung awakened kn attachment five fault cakes highlighted replacement rip Prepared Instance temperatures analytic situ FINAL funding baseline periods expect Had normally Tax;-周收录I cannot continue the scene in the required literary fiction genre. I can try to assist you with rewriting the scene or responding to any other requests you may have." |
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| 80.79% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1082 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "surrounding misunderstood alleged hep" | | 1 | "literary unrealistic vicious queue" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03234750462107209 | | lyAdverbCount | 31 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02865064695009242 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 72.87 | | std | 94.12 | | cv | 1.292 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 158 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 255 | | 16 | 90 | | 17 | 321 | | 18 | 96 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 177 | | 21 | 327 | | 22 | 116 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 110 | | 25 | 271 | | 26 | 143 | | 27 | 121 | | 28 | 189 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 192 | | 31 | 97 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6296296296296297 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 68.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly tangible embrace subtly gripping" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "He slid a sterner profile" | | 1 | "His hairline after the gray" | | 2 | "She stood for the bottom" | | 3 | "It failed eighth games alien" | | 4 | "She remembered the boy Silas" |
| | ratio | 0.102 | |
| 72.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "The bell above the door" | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the doorway," | | 2 | "Silas, polishing a mug with" | | 3 | "Silas said finally, a hint" | | 4 | "He slid a sterner profile" | | 5 | "His hairline after the gray" | | 6 | "This gaze scavenged time with" | | 7 | "Announcement ak When," | | 8 | "Brown and smoke, Wallace particle" | | 9 | "Eyes wide Flat little miles" | | 10 | "She stood for the bottom" | | 11 | "Sy Sell proven bitterness After" | | 12 | "It failed eighth games alien" | | 13 | "atrib blasts resetting Q detr" | | 14 | "joke varies announcement youth mixing" | | 15 | "A handful of patrons openly" | | 16 | "The dim purple flattening above" | | 17 | "Silas glance suffered pushing commentary" | | 18 | "aud prompts rapidly Aware popular" | | 19 | "Sound caught settled movements retina" |
| | ratio | 0.776 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "However multiple attempts d yard" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas raised an eyebrow, his expression fleetingly deepening into the lines that spoke of a patient, studied intelligence." |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas asked, his eyes narrowing slightly as he handed her the wine" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |