| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 67.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 771 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 771 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "quickened" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "anticipation" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "wavered" | | 12 | "echoing" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A sense of unease" | | 1 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 96.75% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "A sense of unease" | | 1 | "y with anticipation" |
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| 21.79% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 771 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 760 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.84 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 14 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.579 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if urging her forward" | | 1 | "power that seemed to leap from the stone to her fingertips" | | 2 | "seemed rooted to the spot, unable to move" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 771 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.56% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "feeling that she" | | 1 | "saw that she" |
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| 93.71% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 32.13 | | std | 15.36 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 5 |
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| 93.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 54.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was racing" | | 2 | "was racing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 644 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.03881987577639751 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012422360248447204 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 12.85 | | std | 6.02 | | cv | 0.468 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 43.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.25 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She shivered, despite the thickness" | | 1 | "She had come to the" | | 2 | "She'd been to the Grove" | | 3 | "She pushed the feeling aside," | | 4 | "She approached the stones, feeling" | | 5 | "She waited, frozen, as the" | | 6 | "She spun around, but there" | | 7 | "she called out, her voice" | | 8 | "She knew she wasn't alone" | | 9 | "She could feel it." | | 10 | "She turned back to the" | | 11 | "It simply stood there, its" | | 12 | "She knew she had to" | | 13 | "She knew she had to" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 49.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped off the" | | 1 | "The trees loomed before her," | | 2 | "She shivered, despite the thickness" | | 3 | "The air was heavy with" | | 4 | "Rory's senses prickled as she" | | 5 | "The only response was the" | | 6 | "She had come to the" | | 7 | "The pendant itself seemed to" | | 8 | "Rory's heart quickened, her breath" | | 9 | "She'd been to the Grove" | | 10 | "A sense of unease crept" | | 11 | "She pushed the feeling aside," | | 12 | "The Grove was a place" | | 13 | "The path opened up into" | | 14 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 15 | "She approached the stones, feeling" | | 16 | "The energy felt..." | | 17 | "Rory's skin prickled as she" | | 18 | "A faint rustling noise came" | | 19 | "She waited, frozen, as the" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 38.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was heavy with the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves, a smell that was both familiar and yet, somehow, off." | | 1 | "She had come to the Grove seeking answers, hoping to find some clue as to the strange occurrences that had been plaguing her since she'd received the mysterious…" | | 2 | "The pendant itself seemed to be pulsing with a faint, warm light, as if urging her forward." | | 3 | "As she did, she felt a sudden jolt of energy, a spark of power that seemed to leap from the stone to her fingertips." | | 4 | "The world around her seemed to shift, the trees blurring and distorting as if reflected in a funhouse mirror." | | 5 | "Rory's heart was racing, her breath coming in short gasps." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "Rory demanded, trying to keep her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "Rory demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |