Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1CV7XJ5SXXFSBGKZY0WW

Run Details

Duration:
41.6s
Cost:
$0.001078

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses punctuating the air like a heartbeat. Dim light flickered from the green neon sign outside, casting a soft glow on the faces of patrons scattered across the bar. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a practiced hand, his hazel eyes scanning the room. The walls, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, whispered stories of a time long past, much like the man who now ran the place. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy door, the familiar scent of aged wood and spilled spirits wrapping around her like a long-lost embrace. She paused, taking in the scene, her bright blue eyes darting from one face to another. The bar had changed little since her last visit, yet everything felt different. She brushed a stray strand of her straight black hair behind her ear, her heart racing. “Rory!” Silas called, a grin breaking across his face. He wiped his hands on a towel and stepped out from behind the bar, his slight limp evident as he approached her. “Si,” she replied, forcing a smile. The warmth of their friendship flickered in her chest, but the years stretched between them like a chasm. “Been a while,” he said, studying her. “You look... well.” “Thanks,” she said, her voice steady. “You too. The bar’s still standing, I see.” “Like me, it’s stubborn.” He chuckled, but the laughter faded as he noticed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a remnant of her childhood. “You still have that?” “Yeah, some things don’t fade.” She glanced away, the weight of unspoken words hanging in the air. Silas shifted, his expression turning serious. “How’s life treating you?” “Busy,” she replied, her gaze drifting to the bar’s dim corners. “Delivery work keeps me on my toes.” “Delivery? You always had a knack for getting things where they needed to be.” He leaned against the bar, arms crossed, a hint of nostalgia in his eyes. “What about law school?” “Left that behind.” She shrugged, the words tasting bitter. “Not for me anymore.” “Regrets?” he asked, his voice low. “More like... choices.” She met his gaze, the tension between them palpable. “What about you? Still playing the spymaster?” “Retired,” he said, a shadow passing over his features. “This place is my new operation. Less danger, more whiskey.” “Sounds like a fair trade.” She forced a laugh, but it felt hollow. Silas studied her, his hazel eyes searching. “You’ve changed, Rory. You’re not the same girl who used to dream about changing the world.” “Neither are you,” she shot back, the words sharper than intended. “You’re not the same man who ran off to save the day.” “Touché.” He raised an eyebrow, a hint of a smile returning. “But I’m still here, aren’t I?” “Barely.” She turned away, her heart racing. The memories flooded back—late-night talks, dreams shared, the promise of a future that felt so far away now. “Look, I didn’t mean—” Silas began, but she cut him off. “Didn’t mean what? To remind me of who I used to be?” She clenched her fists, the anger bubbling beneath the surface. “I’m not that girl anymore, Si. I had to grow up.” “Growing up doesn’t mean losing yourself,” he replied, his voice steady. “You can still fight for what you believe in.” “Fight?” She laughed, the sound bitter. “I’m just trying to survive.” “Survival isn’t enough.” He leaned closer, intensity in his gaze. “You have to live, Rory. You can’t let the past define you.” “Easy for you to say.” She stepped back, the distance between them widening. “You’ve had your share of adventures. I’ve been stuck in a rut.” “Stuck or safe?” he challenged, his voice low. “There’s a difference.” “Safe?” She scoffed, shaking her head. “You think I’m safe? You don’t know what I’ve been through.” “Then tell me.” His eyes softened, the mentor in him breaking through the tension. “I’m here, Rory. I want to listen.” She hesitated, the words caught in her throat. The memories of Evan, the fear, the escape—she had buried them deep. “Not tonight,” she finally said, her voice barely above a whisper. “I can’t.” “Okay.” Silas nodded, respect in his eyes. “But don’t shut me out. I’m still your friend.” “Are you?” She met his gaze, the challenge hanging in the air. “Or are you just the guy who used to know me?” “Both.” He smiled, a hint of warmth returning. “And I’d like to know you again.” “Maybe I’m not worth knowing.” She turned away, the weight of her past pressing down on her. “Rory,” he said, his voice firm. “You’re worth it. You always were.” She felt the heat rise in her cheeks, the vulnerability creeping in. “I don’t know if I can go back to who I was.” “Who says you have to?” Silas stepped closer, his presence steadying. “You can be someone new. Just don’t forget the girl who dreamed.” “Dreams don’t pay the bills.” She crossed her arms, the familiar defensive posture creeping in. “Maybe not, but they keep you alive.” He gestured around the bar, the atmosphere thick with unspoken words. “This place is full of stories, Rory. Yours is still being written.” “Is it?” She looked around, the dim light casting shadows on the walls. “I feel like I’m stuck in a loop.” “Then break it.” Silas leaned against the bar, his expression earnest. “You have the power to change your story.” “Easier said than done.” She sighed, the weight of his words settling in. “Nothing worth having comes easy.” He smiled, a glimmer of hope in his eyes. “You’ve always been a fighter.” “Maybe I’ve lost my edge.” She shrugged, the doubt creeping in. “Then find it again.” He stepped back, giving her space. “You’re not alone in this.” “Thanks, Si.” She managed a small smile, the warmth of their friendship flickering back to life. “Anytime.” He nodded, the bond between them rekindling, if only for a moment. As the night wore on, the bar filled with laughter and stories, but for Aurora, the past lingered like a shadow. She glanced at Silas, the man who had once been her anchor, now a reminder of the choices that had led her here. “Let’s grab a drink,” she said, her voice steadier now. “Maybe I’ll tell you a story or two.” “Now that’s the Rory I remember.” Silas grinned, the warmth of their friendship wrapping around them like a familiar blanket. And as they settled into the rhythm of the night, the weight of time and unspoken regret began to lift, if only just a little.
total_cost0.0010780499999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags44
adverbTagCount8
adverbTags
0"She glanced away [away]"
1"She turned away [away]"
2"She stepped back [back]"
3"she finally said [finally]"
4"She turned away [away]"
5"He gestured around [around]"
6"She looked around [around]"
7"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
95.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1117
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1117
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"racing"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count4
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"unspoken"
count3
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"palpable"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanning"
2"familiar"
3"racing"
4"warmth"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"tension"
8"palpable"
9"eyebrow"
10"intensity"
11"whisper"
12"reminder"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count2
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
1"the weight of unspoken words"
2"the weight of his words"
3"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1110
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount699
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Silas10
Evan1
Aurora2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.785
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.901
wordCount1110
matches
0"not, but they keep you alive"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean21.35
std13.17
cv0.617
sampleLengths
085
168
231
324
410
514
630
717
810
918
1032
1113
126
1319
1419
1513
1623
1723
1817
1925
2011
2133
2220
2311
2422
2525
2611
2717
2821
2920
3013
3116
3223
3315
3417
3512
3624
3723
3815
3930
4021
4119
4213
4319
4411
4515
4616
4713
4844
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
83.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences96
ratio0.021
matches
0"The memories flooded back—late-night talks, dreams shared, the promise of a future that felt so far away now."
1"The memories of Evan, the fear, the escape—she had buried them deep."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount706
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.024079320113314446
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0056657223796034
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.56
std5.75
cv0.498
sampleLengths
020
122
218
325
423
516
613
716
89
922
106
1118
127
133
146
158
1626
174
1817
196
204
2111
227
2328
244
259
264
276
2812
297
309
3110
3213
337
3416
3511
3612
3711
386
397
4018
4111
4222
4311
4411
459
466
475
4810
4912
92.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5625
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences63
matches
0"She paused, taking in the"
1"She brushed a stray strand"
2"He wiped his hands on"
3"she replied, forcing a smile"
4"he said, studying her"
5"she said, her voice steady"
6"He chuckled, but the laughter"
7"She glanced away, the weight"
8"she replied, her gaze drifting"
9"He leaned against the bar,"
10"She shrugged, the words tasting"
11"he asked, his voice low"
12"She met his gaze, the"
13"he said, a shadow passing"
14"She forced a laugh, but"
15"she shot back, the words"
16"He raised an eyebrow, a"
17"She turned away, her heart"
18"She clenched her fists, the"
19"he replied, his voice steady"
ratio0.698
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences63
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Silas stood behind the counter,"
2"The walls, adorned with old"
3"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
4"She paused, taking in the"
5"The bar had changed little"
6"She brushed a stray strand"
7"Silas called, a grin breaking"
8"He wiped his hands on"
9"she replied, forcing a smile"
10"The warmth of their friendship"
11"he said, studying her"
12"she said, her voice steady"
13"He chuckled, but the laughter"
14"She glanced away, the weight"
15"Silas shifted, his expression turning"
16"she replied, her gaze drifting"
17"He leaned against the bar,"
18"She shrugged, the words tasting"
19"he asked, his voice low"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags44
uselessAdditionCount25
matches
0"Silas called, a grin breaking across his face"
1"she said, her voice steady"
2"He chuckled, but the laughter faded as he noticed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a remnant of her childhood"
3"She glanced away, the weight of unspoken words hanging in the air"
4"she replied, her gaze drifting to the bar’s dim corners"
5"She shrugged, the words tasting bitter"
6"he asked, his voice low"
7"he said, a shadow passing over his features"
8"He raised, a hint of a smile returning"
9"She turned away, her heart racing"
10"She clenched, the anger bubbling beneath the surface"
11"he replied, his voice steady"
12"he challenged, his voice low"
13"she finally said, her voice barely above a whisper"
14"She met, the challenge hanging in the air"
15"He smiled, a hint of warmth returning"
16"She turned away, the weight of her past pressing down on her"
17"he said, his voice firm"
18"Silas stepped, his presence steadying"
19"Silas leaned, his expression earnest"
20"She sighed, the weight of his words settling in"
21"He smiled, a glimmer of hope in his eyes"
22"She shrugged, the doubt creeping in"
23"She managed, the warmth of their friendship flickering back to life"
24"she said, her voice steadier now"
98.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He chuckled (chuckle)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"he challenged (challenge)"
3"She sighed (sigh)"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.195
leniency0.39
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.104
72.0089%