| 18.18% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 44 | | adverbTagCount | 8 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She glanced away [away]" | | 1 | "She turned away [away]" | | 2 | "She stepped back [back]" | | 3 | "she finally said [finally]" | | 4 | "She turned away [away]" | | 5 | "He gestured around [around]" | | 6 | "She looked around [around]" | | 7 | "He stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 77 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |
| 95.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1117 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1117 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "eyebrow" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "reminder" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her fists" | | 1 | "the weight of unspoken words" | | 2 | "the weight of his words" | | 3 | "a glimmer of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1110 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.47% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 699 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Silas | 10 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.785 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.901 | | wordCount | 1110 | | matches | | 0 | "not, but they keep you alive" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 21.35 | | std | 13.17 | | cv | 0.617 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 44 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "The memories flooded back—late-night talks, dreams shared, the promise of a future that felt so far away now." | | 1 | "The memories of Evan, the fear, the escape—she had buried them deep." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 706 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.024079320113314446 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0056657223796034 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 11.56 | | std | 5.75 | | cv | 0.498 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 92.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5625 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 1 | "She brushed a stray strand" | | 2 | "He wiped his hands on" | | 3 | "she replied, forcing a smile" | | 4 | "he said, studying her" | | 5 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 6 | "He chuckled, but the laughter" | | 7 | "She glanced away, the weight" | | 8 | "she replied, her gaze drifting" | | 9 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 10 | "She shrugged, the words tasting" | | 11 | "he asked, his voice low" | | 12 | "She met his gaze, the" | | 13 | "he said, a shadow passing" | | 14 | "She forced a laugh, but" | | 15 | "she shot back, the words" | | 16 | "He raised an eyebrow, a" | | 17 | "She turned away, her heart" | | 18 | "She clenched her fists, the" | | 19 | "he replied, his voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.698 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest hummed with" | | 1 | "Silas stood behind the counter," | | 2 | "The walls, adorned with old" | | 3 | "Aurora Carter pushed through the" | | 4 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 5 | "The bar had changed little" | | 6 | "She brushed a stray strand" | | 7 | "Silas called, a grin breaking" | | 8 | "He wiped his hands on" | | 9 | "she replied, forcing a smile" | | 10 | "The warmth of their friendship" | | 11 | "he said, studying her" | | 12 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 13 | "He chuckled, but the laughter" | | 14 | "She glanced away, the weight" | | 15 | "Silas shifted, his expression turning" | | 16 | "she replied, her gaze drifting" | | 17 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 18 | "She shrugged, the words tasting" | | 19 | "he asked, his voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.952 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 16 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 44 | | uselessAdditionCount | 25 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas called, a grin breaking across his face" | | 1 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 2 | "He chuckled, but the laughter faded as he noticed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a remnant of her childhood" | | 3 | "She glanced away, the weight of unspoken words hanging in the air" | | 4 | "she replied, her gaze drifting to the bar’s dim corners" | | 5 | "She shrugged, the words tasting bitter" | | 6 | "he asked, his voice low" | | 7 | "he said, a shadow passing over his features" | | 8 | "He raised, a hint of a smile returning" | | 9 | "She turned away, her heart racing" | | 10 | "She clenched, the anger bubbling beneath the surface" | | 11 | "he replied, his voice steady" | | 12 | "he challenged, his voice low" | | 13 | "she finally said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 14 | "She met, the challenge hanging in the air" | | 15 | "He smiled, a hint of warmth returning" | | 16 | "She turned away, the weight of her past pressing down on her" | | 17 | "he said, his voice firm" | | 18 | "Silas stepped, his presence steadying" | | 19 | "Silas leaned, his expression earnest" | | 20 | "She sighed, the weight of his words settling in" | | 21 | "He smiled, a glimmer of hope in his eyes" | | 22 | "She shrugged, the doubt creeping in" | | 23 | "She managed, the warmth of their friendship flickering back to life" | | 24 | "she said, her voice steadier now" |
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| 98.05% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He chuckled (chuckle)" | | 1 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 2 | "he challenged (challenge)" | | 3 | "She sighed (sigh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 77 | | tagDensity | 0.195 | | leniency | 0.39 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.104 | |