Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1E0BPR3TDDA2E7KMD3YK

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Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.000461

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the hushed quiet of the Richmond Park dawn, Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stood before the ancient oak standing stones. Their breaths misted in the chill air, each lost in thought as they contemplated the threshold to the Fae Grove. The trees here were older, their bark etched with runes that pulsed with an otherworldly energy. Rory, her straight black hair whipping in the wind, clutched the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. It pulsed faintly, a warmth that spread from her chest, a beacon guiding her. She glanced at Nyx, their form shifting like liquid shadow, a comforting constant amidst the unknown. Isolde, ethereal and serene, her silver hair dancing around her, seemed at home, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the grove's wildflowers that bloomed year-round. "Beyond these stones," Isolde began, her voice a soft, melodic whisper, "time moves differently. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. Stay close." Nyx's voice, a whisper carried on the wind, echoed, "And remember, the Fae do not take kindly to uninvited guests." Rory nodded, her bright blue eyes scanning the boundary. She stepped forward, the Heartstone's warmth intensifying. As she crossed the threshold, the air shimmered, and the world shifted. The grove was a symphony of color and sound. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their vibrant hues clashing yet harmonious. Trees twisted into impossible shapes, their leaves shimmering like precious metal. A stream babbled over smooth stones, its water crystal clear, reflecting the dappled sunlight filtering through the canopy. Rory's breath caught. "It's... beautiful," she murmured, her voice barely disturbing the silence. Nyx, now solid, walked beside her, their violet eyes wide. "I've seen many realms, but this... this is extraordinary." Isolde smiled, her feet leaving no footprints as she led them deeper. "The Fae Courts are like this, multiplied a thousandfold." As they ventured further, the air grew colder, the trees denser. The stream widened, its water now a soft glow, illuminating the path. Rory reached out, her fingers brushing the water's surface. It hummed, a faint melody that resonated within her. Suddenly, Nyx stopped, their form wavering. "Something's... off." Rory looked around, her heart pounding. The air felt heavier, charged with an unseen energy. The trees seemed to lean in, their leaves rustling, whispering secrets in a language she couldn't understand. Isolde's eyes narrowed. "We're not alone." A figure stepped from the shadows, tall and regal, their skin shimmering like moonlight. A Fae, his eyes cold, his expression severe. "You dare trespass here, mortals?" His voice echoed, a thunderous clap that shook the grove. Rory stepped forward, her hand on the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. "We mean no harm," she said, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach. "We seek guidance from Isolde." The Fae's gaze landed on Isolde, his expression softening slightly. "You are exiled, seer. Your presence here is forbidden." Isolde bowed her head. "I know, Lord Eolan. But these mortals are important. They seek to protect the Veil." Eolan's gaze returned to Rory, then Nyx. "The Shade, the mortal, and the seer. An unusual trio." He considered them, his expression unreadable. "Very well. You may stay, but do not stray from this path. The Fae Grove is vast, and not all who enter find their way out." With that, he disappeared, leaving behind a shimmering trail of stardust. Rory let out a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding. "Well," she said, a small smile playing on her lips, "that was... interesting." Nyx chuckled, their form solidifying. "Indeed. Let's continue. We have much to learn, and little time." As they walked, the grove changed, the trees thinning, the wildflowers giving way to lush grass. A structure came into view, a small cottage made of living wood, its door open, inviting. Smoke curled from the chimney, carrying with it the scent of sweet herbs and home. Isolde led them inside, the warmth enveloping them, chasing away the chill. The cottage was cozy, filled with books, trinkets, and artifacts from countless realms. A table stood in the center, a map of the Veil laid out, its edges marked with runes that glowed softly. Isolde gestured to the map. "The Veil is weakening. The winter solstice approaches, and with it, the Helish host will rise." Rory leaned in, her eyes scanning the map. She pointed to a spot near Dymas. "Here. There's a tear here. It's... pulsing." Isolde nodded. "Yes. It's a rift point. The Wardens monitor it, but their numbers are dwindling. We need to reinforce it before the solstice." Nyx looked up from the map, their eyes serious. "We need to prepare. The Helish are not the only threat. The Fae will not take kindly to our presence here for long." Rory nodded, her resolve hardening. "Then we prepare. We reinforce the Veil, and we find a way to stop the Helish host." Isolde smiled, her eyes soft. "You are brave, Aurora Carter. But remember, the Fae Grove is a place of wonder and danger. Tread carefully." As they planned, the cottage seemed to hum with approval, the runes on the map glowing brighter, the herbs in the pot bubbling with anticipation. The grove was a place of magic, of danger, of wonder. And they were ready to face it, together.
total_cost0.00046065

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount879
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
3"softly"
4"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount879
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count3
5
word"beacon"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"amidst"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count2
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"symphony"
count1
14
word"crystal"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"resonated"
count1
17
word"wavering"
count1
18
word"pounding"
count1
19
word"charged"
count1
20
word"stomach"
count1
21
word"unreadable"
count1
22
word"structure"
count1
23
word"resolve"
count1
24
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"etched"
2"pulsed"
3"otherworldly"
4"warmth"
5"beacon"
6"comforting"
7"amidst"
8"dancing"
9"whisper"
10"echoed"
11"scanning"
12"shimmered"
13"symphony"
14"crystal"
15"silence"
16"resonated"
17"wavering"
18"pounding"
19"charged"
20"stomach"
21"unreadable"
22"structure"
23"resolve"
24"anticipation"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"g with anticipation"
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords877
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount631
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory11
Nyx8
Isolde11
Fae4
Grove1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Veil1
Dymas1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Heartstone"
4"Veil"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Dymas"
globalScore0.628
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount877
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean29.23
std14.91
cv0.51
sampleLengths
056
170
225
320
428
548
613
719
821
941
108
1132
126
1337
1433
1519
1619
1749
1811
1924
2016
2147
2246
2321
2422
2524
2632
2722
2824
2944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount633
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.023696682464454975
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009478672985781991
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean12.01
std5.91
cv0.492
sampleLengths
020
120
216
316
414
516
624
725
820
99
107
1112
129
1310
1411
1518
163
1710
1810
199
2012
219
2211
2312
249
259
266
272
286
299
3017
313
323
3314
348
3515
3612
3716
385
3910
409
414
4215
437
4416
4526
4611
4711
4813
495
59.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3835616438356164
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners28
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Suddenly, Nyx stopped, their form"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences57
matches
0"Their breaths misted in the"
1"It pulsed faintly, a warmth"
2"She glanced at Nyx, their"
3"She stepped forward, the Heartstone's"
4"she murmured, her voice barely"
5"It hummed, a faint melody"
6"His voice echoed, a thunderous"
7"she said, her voice steady"
8"He considered them, his expression"
9"she said, a small smile"
10"She pointed to a spot"
ratio0.193
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences57
matches
0"Their breaths misted in the"
1"The trees here were older,"
2"Rory, her straight black hair"
3"It pulsed faintly, a warmth"
4"She glanced at Nyx, their"
5"Isolde, ethereal and serene, her"
6"Isolde began, her voice a"
7"Nyx's voice, a whisper carried"
8"Rory nodded, her bright blue"
9"She stepped forward, the Heartstone's"
10"The grove was a symphony"
11"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their"
12"Trees twisted into impossible shapes,"
13"A stream babbled over smooth"
14"Rory's breath caught."
15"she murmured, her voice barely"
16"Nyx, now solid, walked beside"
17"Isolde smiled, her feet leaving"
18"The stream widened, its water"
19"Rory reached out, her fingers"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Isolde, ethereal and serene, her silver hair dancing around her, seemed at home, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the grove's wildflowers that bloomed year-rou…"
1"The trees seemed to lean in, their leaves rustling, whispering secrets in a language she couldn't understand."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Isolde began, her voice a soft, melodic whisper,"
1"she murmured, her voice barely disturbing the silence"
2"she said, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach"
3"He considered, his expression unreadable"
4"she said, a small smile playing on her lips,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.091
81.2242%