Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1H9MM3DHD67SM1T7XPJV

Run Details

Duration:
2m 19s
Cost:
$0.002077
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Camden Town branch line had been sealed since the Second World War, its tunnels repurposed for storage and then forgotten entirely. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow police tape strung across the rusted service door. The air changed the moment she stepped into the abandoned Tube station—cold, damp, and carrying a metallic scent that wasn’t just rust. It was the sharp, coppery tang of blood. The platform stretched into shadow, the original tiles cracked and stained with decades of grime. Police floodlights had been set up around a central area, casting harsh white light that made the surrounding darkness seem even deeper. Two uniformed officers stood guard near the edge of the platform, their breath visible in plumes. A forensic team in white suits moved with practiced silence around a shape on the ground. Quinn’s worn leather watch felt tight on her wrist. She adjusted the strap as she approached. A man lay sprawled across the tracks, one arm bent at an unnatural angle. He wore a dark wool coat, expensive-looking but torn. Quinn’s eyes cataloged the details: mid-forties, clean-shaven, hands free of defensive wounds. The cause of death was obvious—a single gunshot wound to the chest. But the placement was wrong. Too precise. Execution-style, but there was no sign of restraint marks on his wrists. And his face held an expression of surprise, not fear. “Detective Quinn.” She turned. Eva Kowalski stood near the platform edge, clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest. Her curly red hair was a vibrant shock against the grimy tiles, her round glasses reflecting the floodlights. She didn’t look like she belonged at a crime scene. She belonged in a library. “Miss Kowalski,” Quinn said, her voice flat. “Research assistant at the British Museum. Why are you here?” “I was contacted.” Eva’s knuckles were white on her satchel strap. “The victim had... items on his person. Unusual ones. They thought I might be able to identify them.” Quinn stepped closer to the body, careful not to disturb the marked evidence flags. The forensic photographer’s flash illuminated the scene in stark bursts. She crouched, examining the ground around the victim. Scuff marks in the dust, but they were chaotic, overlapping. No clear footprint pattern. No ejected shell casing that she could see. “Standard mugging gone wrong?” Eva’s voice was tentative. Quinn didn’t look up. “Muggers don’t shoot once in the heart from close range. They panic. They shoot multiple times, or they don’t shoot at all. This was calm. Professional.” “Maybe it was personal. A hired killer.” “Possibly.” Quinn straightened. Her gaze swept the platform. The officers shifted uncomfortably under her scrutiny. “But there’s no sign of a struggle. He was shot here, on the tracks. Yet there’s no blood spatter on the platform edge. If he’d been standing when he was shot, he’d have fallen backward or forward. The blood would have hit the tiles.” She pointed to the clean, dusty concrete beside the tracks. “See? Nothing.” Eva followed her gaze. “So he was already lying down when he was shot?” “That’s the logical conclusion.” Quinn’s tone was precise, military. “But look at his coat. The back is relatively clean. If he’d been lying on these tracks—damp, oily, filthy—there would be significant staining. There isn’t.” She moved around the body, her boots making soft sounds on the grit. “The wound entry is neat. Small caliber. But there’s no exit wound. The bullet is still inside him.” “That’s... not unusual for a small caliber round,” Eva offered. “It is when the shot was fired at point-blank range. At this distance, even a .22 would likely penetrate and exit, given the angle.” Quinn knelt again. She used her gloved hand to gently tilt the victim’s head. A faint, almost shimmering residue clung to his hairline, near his temple. It wasn’t blood. It wasn’t anything she recognized. “What is that?” Eva had crept closer. “I don’t know.” Quinn’s mind raced. Three years ago, her partner Morris had died with a similar unknown substance on his clothing. The report had called it “industrial contaminant.” She’d never believed it. She stood. “You said he had unusual items.” Eva opened her satchel. She pulled out a small evidence bag containing a brass compass. The casing was tarnished with verdigris, its face etched with intricate, swirling symbols that seemed to shift under the light. Another bag held a small, carved bone token. “The compass doesn’t point north,” Eva said quietly. “No matter which way you turn it, the needle stays fixed. It points...” She hesitated. “It points toward the wall over there.” Quinn took the evidence bag. Through the plastic, the compass felt unnaturally cold. The needle trembled, then settled, aiming unwavering at the Victorian-tiled wall of the platform. “And the token?” “It’s a passkey. For a place that... moves. A market.” The Veil Market. Quinn had heard whispers during the Morris investigation. A black market for things that shouldn’t exist. She’d dismissed it as urban legend, the desperate theories of conspiracy forums. She looked from the compass to the body. “He was carrying these. He comes down here—a place that requires a bone token to enter, according to legend. He’s shot, execution-style, but there’s no evidence of how he got onto the tracks. No blood spatter. No struggle.” Her eyes narrowed. “And that residue.” Eva tucked a strand of red hair behind her left ear. “You think it’s connected. To the Market.” “I think the evidence doesn’t add up. Which means we’re missing something fundamental about the scene.” Quinn walked to the wall the compass pointed toward. The tiles were cracked, some missing, revealing crumbling brick behind. She ran her gloved hand over the surface. Cold seeped through the latex. One tile, at chest height, felt different. Smooth. Too smooth. She pressed. A section of wall gave way with a soft click, sliding inward an inch. Quinn pushed. A hidden door swung open silently, revealing darkness beyond. The uniforms stirred. “Detective, we swept the area. There was no door.” “Because you weren’t looking for one,” Quinn said without turning. Her flashlight beam cut into the black. A narrow passage, brick-lined, sloped downward. The air that drifted out was colder still, carrying a scent of ozone and old incense. Eva appeared at her shoulder, her freckled face pale. “This shouldn’t be here. The maps don’t show any extensions off this station.” “The maps are wrong.” Quinn stepped through. Her light illuminated steps carved into the earth, descending into the dark. At the edge of her beam, she saw it—a single drop of dark blood on the stone step. “He wasn’t shot on the tracks,” she said, her voice echoing softly in the passage. “He was shot in there. Then he stumbled out, made it to the tracks, and collapsed. The lack of spatter, the clean coat back—it fits.” “But why move? If he was attacked in there, why not just... die there?” “Because he was trying to get away. Or he was dragged. Or his attacker wanted the body found in a certain way.” Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. “Or the scene in there was something they needed to hide.” She began to descend, Eva following close behind. The steps were uneven, worn smooth by time or traffic. The passage opened into a low-ceilinged chamber, brick arches supporting the weight above. It was empty now, but evidence of recent occupation was everywhere. Scuffed footprints in the dust. A discarded wooden crate. And in the center of the floor, a dark, almost black stain that wasn’t blood. Quinn knelt beside it. The residue was the same as on the victim’s temple. She touched it with a gloved finger. It felt gritty, like sand, but with a static charge that made the hairs on her arm stand up. “This is a meeting place,” Eva whispered. She pointed to symbols carved into the brickwork near the floor—the same swirling patterns as on the compass. “Protective sigils. To contain energy.” “Or to hide it.” Quinn stood. Her flashlight beam caught something glinting in the far corner. A small, brass casing. Not a bullet cartridge. Something else. She pocketed it. The pieces clicked together, cold and hard in her mind. A man with a Veil Market token comes to a hidden chamber beneath an abandoned Tube station. He meets someone. There’s a confrontation. He’s shot, but not with a normal bullet—something that leaves residue, something that doesn’t behave like standard ballistics. He flees, makes it to the tracks, collapses. His attacker clears the chamber, hides the door, leaves the body to be found in a way that suggests a simple murder. But they missed the residue. They missed the hidden door. They missed the compass pointing right to it. Quinn turned to Eva. “You know what this is.” Eva’s green eyes were wide behind her glasses. She nodded once, a sharp, frightened motion. “It’s a rift site. A temporary weak spot between our world and... something else. The compass points to rifts. He came here to meet someone at a rift.” “Why?” “To trade. To cross. To harness energy.” Eva hugged her satchel tighter. “Detective, if this is connected to the Veil Market, then the people involved... they aren’t just criminals. They’re something else.” Quinn looked at the black stain on the floor, then back toward the passage leading to the platform where the man lay dead. Morris had been investigating something similar. Unexplained substances. Strange symbols. Rumors of hidden markets. He’d died for it. Her watch felt heavy on her wrist. “Then we treat it as such.” She walked back up the steps, Eva trailing behind. The uniforms were still on the platform, watching her emerge from a wall that shouldn’t have an opening. “Secure this area,” Quinn told them, her voice leaving no room for argument. “No one enters. I want a full forensic sweep of the chamber below. And I want every symbol, every stain, every particle of that residue documented.” “Detective, what’s down there?” Quinn didn’t answer. She looked at the body on the tracks, then at the brass compass in its evidence bag, its needle still pointing faithfully toward the hidden door. “A crime scene,” she said finally. “One that makes sense.”
created_at"2026-02-19T10:44:59.323Z" 2/19/2026, 10:44:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
86.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Quinn knelt again [again]"
1"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.396
leniency0.792
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.113
94.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"cataloged"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"standard"
count2
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"cataloged"
2"stark"
3"chaotic"
4"standard"
5"raced"
6"etched"
7"intricate"
8"trembled"
9"unwavering"
10"echoing"
11"weight"
12"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences135
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1703
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1148
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Second1
World1
War1
Harlow1
Quinn23
Tube2
Kowalski1
Eva16
Three1
Morris3
Victorian-tiled1
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Victorian-tiled"
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift under the light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1703
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"casing that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean30.41
std20.27
cv0.666
sampleLengths
067
169
216
376
42
550
617
729
854
98
1030
117
1271
1314
1434
1531
1610
1758
187
1933
208
2143
2230
2327
243
2510
2631
2752
2818
2948
3012
3125
3212
3339
3422
3537
3640
3714
3837
3966
4040
4130
4229
4381
4418
459
4643
471
4832
4941
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences135
matches
0"been sealed"
1"were cracked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
55.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences164
ratio0.03
matches
0"The air changed the moment she stepped into the abandoned Tube station—cold, damp, and carrying a metallic scent that wasn’t just rust."
1"The cause of death was obvious—a single gunshot wound to the chest."
2"At the edge of her beam, she saw it—a single drop of dark blood on the stone step."
3"She pointed to symbols carved into the brickwork near the floor—the same swirling patterns as on the compass."
4"He’s shot, but not with a normal bullet—something that leaves residue, something that doesn’t behave like standard ballistics."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1160
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.025
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008620689655172414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean10.38
std7.63
cv0.735
sampleLengths
022
115
222
38
415
522
616
716
89
97
1014
119
1212
1312
145
152
1612
1710
182
192
2015
2118
2210
235
247
2510
2611
2718
2814
2910
308
3110
324
338
348
354
3626
377
383
395
407
4154
422
434
4410
459
4625
4713
4818
4910
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.32926829268292684
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences120
matches
0"It was the sharp, coppery"
1"She adjusted the strap as"
2"He wore a dark wool"
3"Her curly red hair was"
4"She didn’t look like she"
5"She belonged in a library."
6"She crouched, examining the ground"
7"Her gaze swept the platform."
8"She pointed to the clean,"
9"She moved around the body,"
10"She used her gloved hand"
11"It wasn’t blood."
12"It wasn’t anything she recognized."
13"She pulled out a small"
14"She’d dismissed it as urban"
15"She looked from the compass"
16"Her eyes narrowed"
17"She ran her gloved hand"
18"Her flashlight beam cut into"
19"Her light illuminated steps carved"
ratio0.333
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences120
matches
0"The Camden Town branch line"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The air changed the moment"
3"It was the sharp, coppery"
4"The platform stretched into shadow,"
5"Police floodlights had been set"
6"A forensic team in white"
7"Quinn’s worn leather watch felt"
8"She adjusted the strap as"
9"A man lay sprawled across"
10"He wore a dark wool"
11"Quinn’s eyes cataloged the details:"
12"The cause of death was"
13"Execution-style, but there was no"
14"Eva Kowalski stood near the"
15"Her curly red hair was"
16"She didn’t look like she"
17"She belonged in a library."
18"Quinn said, her voice flat"
19"Eva’s knuckles were white on"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The air changed the moment she stepped into the abandoned Tube station—cold, damp, and carrying a metallic scent that wasn’t just rust."
1"Police floodlights had been set up around a central area, casting harsh white light that made the surrounding darkness seem even deeper."
2"The casing was tarnished with verdigris, its face etched with intricate, swirling symbols that seemed to shift under the light."
3"It felt gritty, like sand, but with a static charge that made the hairs on her arm stand up."
4"He’s shot, but not with a normal bullet—something that leaves residue, something that doesn’t behave like standard ballistics."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice flat"
1"she said, her voice echoing softly in the passage"
2"Quinn told, her voice leaving no room for argument"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.264
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.038
80.9024%