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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1KTNFCJ0BM9JRYG9YX67
Run Details
Model:
Llama 3.1 Nemotron 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
36.9s
Cost:
$0.002780
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
94.96%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
88.77%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
80.75%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
33.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
99.09%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
97.64%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
91.84%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
82.74%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
72.46%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
25.22%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
70.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
84.5598%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
**
The Raven's Nest, Soho, London - A Rainy Tuesday Evening
**
Aurora Carter, known to few
as Rory, dodged umbrella-wielding pedestrians on the soaked sidewalks of Soho.
Her delivery job for Golden
Empress had wrapped up earlier than usual, leaving her with an unprecedented few hours to herself.
She decided to use this
rare gift of time to grab a quiet drink at **
The Raven's Nest
**, the bar she called home, quite literally, living as she did in the flat above it.
The distinctive green neon sign
seemed to
glow with an inviting
warmth
as she pushed through the door, shaking the rain from her jacket. Inside, the dim lighting enveloped her like a
familiar
hug.
The murmur of conversations, the
clinking of glasses, and the soft jazz playing in the background created a
comforting
melody.
Rory wove through the early
evening crowd, exchanging pleasantries with regulars, until she reached the bar.
Silas, polishing a glass with
a white cloth, caught her eye and nodded in greeting. "What's the poison tonight, Rory?"
he asked, setting the glass
down. "Surprise me, Silas. Something to warm the bones,"
she replied, taking a stool
.
Just as Silas began pouring
a rich, amber liquid into a glass, a figure emerged from the crowd, halting in front of her with an air of hesitation.
Rory's gaze lifted to meet
the stranger's, and for a moment, time froze. "Aurora Carter?"
the figure ventured, a mix
of disbelief and longing entwined in their voice.
Rory's eyes narrowed, her mind
racing
to place the out-of-place familiarity.
Then, like the falling away
of a curtain, recognition dawned. "Evan?"
The man before her was
a shadow of the Evan she once knew.
The sharp jawline was now
softened by a layer of fatigue, and what was once a mop of unruly brown hair had
been tamed
into a neat, professional cut. But it was the eyes, once bright with a fire that had both attracted and terrified her, now dimmed with the patina of time and, perhaps, regret. "Evan,"
she repeated, the name tasting
different on her lips this time around. Evan took a step closer, his eyes pleading for something Rory wasn't sure she could offer. "It's been... a long time,"
he said, the understatement hanging
in the air like the last notes of a mournful tune. Silas, ever the observant host, appeared at Rory's side with her drink and a subtle, interrogative glance at Evan. "On the house, tonight,"
he said to Rory, before
turning to Evan. "Welcome to
The Raven's Nest
. What'll you have?" "Whatever she's having,"
Evan replied, not taking his gaze off Rory
. As Silas prepared Evan's drink, the
tension
between them grew, a living, breathing entity that commanded attention. The conversations from nearby patrons, the jazz, all faded into a distant hum as the past pressed in around them. "How did you... find me?" Rory asked finally, taking a sip of her drink, the
warmth
spreading through her chest but doing little to ease the
chill
within. "Coincidence, actually. I've been living in London for a couple of months now. This was the nearest place to grab a drink after a meeting in Soho," Evan explained, accepting his drink from Silas, who discreetly retreated to a safe distance, yet remained attentive. The meeting of their gazes was like two old adversaries meeting on a long-abandoned battlefield, wary and cautious, yet irresistibly drawn to the conflict. "You look... well,"
Evan offered, the compliment sounding genuine, yet tinged with sadness
. Rory smiled, a slight, wry curving of her lips. "And you look... different." "Different?"
Evan echoed, the word hanging between them like a challenge
. "Yes, different. More... subdued,"
she replied, her curiosity getting
the better of her. "What's behind the transformation, Evan? Last I knew, you were blazing a trail through the city, unstoppable." Evan's laugh was low, peppered with a hint of bitterness. "Life has a way of taming fires, doesn't it? Or perhaps, burning out." The conversation paused, a natural lull that Silas filled by momentarily stepping in to refill their drinks, his presence a brief, welcome distraction. "How's your family?" Rory asked as the
silence
threatened to engulf them once more. "They're... well. Mother still trying to manage everyone's lives. Father, as stoic as ever. And you? Your parents?" "Much the same. Dad still arguing with judges, Mum still teaching with a passion that inspires awe. Though, they're a bit more grey, like the city itself,"
Rory mused, her thoughts drifting to the life she'd left behind
. Evan nodded, his expression a
complex
interplay of emotions. "I've often thought about... what happened. About us." Rory's grip on her glass tightened, the coolness of the glass a
stark
contrast to the
warmth
spreading up her neck. "What about us, Evan?"
His eyes, now filled with
a deep-seated longing, locked onto hers. "I regret how things ended. My actions, my inability to... to see what was right in front of me." The
weight
of those
unspoken
years settled heavily between them, the only sound the distant music and the hum of conversations, a
stark
reminder
of the world's indifference to their private tumult. "I've regretted many things, Evan," Rory began, her voice
barely above a whisper
, yet carrying the
weight
of her conviction. "But as for us, I've come to realize that sometimes, endings are necessary. For growth, for healing." The complexity of emotions on Evan's face mirrored the turmoil within her.
It was a moment of
raw honesty, one that
neither welcomed nor
shied away from, suspended in the
understanding that the
journey of life oftentimes demands more from us than we're willing to give. As the rain intensified outside, drumming a relentless beat against the pavement, inside
The Raven's Nest
, time, for a
fleeting
instant,
seemed to
stand still, holding its breath in
anticipation
of what would come next in this unexpected reunion of two souls, forever intertwined by the shared
tapestry
of their past.
created_at
"2026-02-19T10:45:01.915Z"
2/19/2026, 10:45:01 AM
model
"nvidia/llama-3.1-nemotron-70b-instruct"
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182717
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streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
263
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
36809
tokens_prompt
1138
tokens_completion
1537
native_tokens_prompt
1004
native_tokens_completion
1313
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.0027804
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"d2a33d30-5d41-47d3-a816-1cc067b5a7dd"
id
"cmpl-0bcccf53b486426d80c726878f671227"
is_byok
false
latency
124
model_permaslug
"nvidia/llama-3.1-nemotron-70b-instruct"
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771497901-4PmCPkqaWclXLBvWaAuP"
upstream_id
"cmpl-0bcccf53b486426d80c726878f671227"
total_cost
0.0027804
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
15
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Rory asked finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences
25
tagDensity
0.6
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.067
effectiveRatio
0.067
94.96%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
993
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
993
totalAiIsms
22
found
0
word
"warmth"
count
3
1
word
"familiar"
count
1
2
word
"comforting"
count
1
3
word
"racing"
count
1
4
word
"tension"
count
1
5
word
"chill"
count
1
6
word
"tinged"
count
1
7
word
"echoed"
count
1
8
word
"silence"
count
1
9
word
"complex"
count
1
10
word
"stark"
count
2
11
word
"weight"
count
2
12
word
"unspoken"
count
1
13
word
"reminder"
count
1
14
word
"whisper"
count
1
15
word
"fleeting"
count
1
16
word
"anticipation"
count
1
17
word
"tapestry"
count
1
highlights
0
"warmth"
1
"familiar"
2
"comforting"
3
"racing"
4
"tension"
5
"chill"
6
"tinged"
7
"echoed"
8
"silence"
9
"complex"
10
"stark"
11
"weight"
12
"unspoken"
13
"reminder"
14
"whisper"
15
"fleeting"
16
"anticipation"
17
"tapestry"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
88.77%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
2
narrationSentences
46
matches
0
"d with sadness"
1
"h in anticipation"
80.75%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
46
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
56
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
51
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
2
markdownWords
13
totalWords
991
ratio
0.013
matches
0
"The Raven's Nest, Soho, London - A Rainy Tuesday Evening"
1
"The Raven's Nest"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
33.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
47
wordCount
779
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
1.8
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
4
worstWindowName
"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven
3
Nest
3
Soho
2
London
1
Rainy
1
Tuesday
1
Aurora
1
Carter
1
Rory
14
Golden
1
Empress
1
Silas
6
Evan
12
persons
0
"Nest"
1
"Aurora"
2
"Carter"
3
"Rory"
4
"Empress"
5
"Silas"
6
"Evan"
places
0
"Soho"
1
"London"
globalScore
0.601
windowScore
0.333
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
45
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
99.09%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
1.009
wordCount
991
matches
0
"neither welcomed nor"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
56
matches
0
"understanding that the"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
34
mean
29.15
std
19.18
cv
0.658
sampleLengths
0
10
1
95
2
61
3
11
4
13
5
41
6
15
7
21
8
1
9
69
10
13
11
37
12
39
13
11
14
37
15
28
16
44
17
24
18
13
19
13
20
11
21
30
22
23
23
23
24
14
25
18
26
38
27
17
28
25
29
30
30
32
31
37
32
46
33
51
97.64%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
46
matches
0
"been tamed"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
122
matches
(empty)
91.84%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
1
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
56
ratio
0.018
matches
0
"**The Raven's Nest, Soho, London - A Rainy Tuesday Evening**"
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
781
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.030729833546734954
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.012804097311139564
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
56
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
56
mean
17.7
std
9.68
cv
0.547
sampleLengths
0
10
1
16
2
21
3
34
4
24
5
10
6
20
7
16
8
15
9
11
10
13
11
28
12
13
13
15
14
11
15
10
16
1
17
13
18
29
19
27
20
13
21
16
22
21
23
19
24
12
25
8
26
11
27
17
28
20
29
28
30
44
31
24
32
13
33
9
34
4
35
11
36
13
37
17
38
10
39
13
40
23
41
14
42
18
43
38
44
9
45
8
46
21
47
4
48
11
49
19
82.74%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5178571428571429
totalSentences
56
uniqueOpeners
29
72.46%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
46
matches
0
"Then, like the falling away"
ratio
0.022
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
10
totalSentences
46
matches
0
"Her delivery job for Golden"
1
"She decided to use this"
2
"he asked, setting the glass"
3
"she replied, taking a stool"
4
"she repeated, the name tasting"
5
"he said, the understatement hanging"
6
"he said to Rory, before"
7
"she replied, her curiosity getting"
8
"His eyes, now filled with"
9
"It was a moment of"
ratio
0.217
25.22%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
40
totalSentences
46
matches
0
"**The Raven's Nest, Soho, London"
1
"Aurora Carter, known to few"
2
"Her delivery job for Golden"
3
"She decided to use this"
4
"The distinctive green neon sign"
5
"The murmur of conversations, the"
6
"Rory wove through the early"
7
"Silas, polishing a glass with"
8
"he asked, setting the glass"
9
"she replied, taking a stool"
10
"Rory's gaze lifted to meet"
11
"the figure ventured, a mix"
12
"Rory's eyes narrowed, her mind"
13
"The man before her was"
14
"The sharp jawline was now"
15
"she repeated, the name tasting"
16
"Evan took a step closer,"
17
"he said, the understatement hanging"
18
"Silas, ever the observant host,"
19
"he said to Rory, before"
ratio
0.87
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
46
matches
0
"Just as Silas began pouring"
ratio
0.022
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
28
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"As Silas prepared Evan's drink, the tension between them grew, a living, breathing entity that commanded attention."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
15
uselessAdditionCount
7
matches
0
"the figure ventured, a mix of disbelief and longing entwined in their voice"
1
"she repeated, the name tasting different on her lips this time around"
2
"Evan replied, not taking his gaze off Rory"
3
"Evan offered, the compliment sounding genuine, yet tinged with sadness"
4
"Evan echoed, the word hanging between them like a challenge"
5
"she replied, her curiosity getting the better of her"
6
"Rory mused, her thoughts drifting to the life she'd left behind"
70.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"she repeated (repeat)"
1
"Evan explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences
25
tagDensity
0.4
leniency
0.8
rawRatio
0.2
effectiveRatio
0.16
84.5598%