| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 695 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 695 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cacophony" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "enigma" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "intensity" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "palpable" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "enigmatic" | | 13 | "otherworldly" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "comforting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 5 | | narrationSentences | 30 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "d with unease" | | 2 | "a thrill of excitement" | | 3 | "felt a thrill" | | 4 | "d with fear" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 30 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 694 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 507 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Aurora | 9 | | Nyx | 4 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Fae-Forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.612 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening to her words" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 694 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.07% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | | |
| 72.51% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 43.38 | | std | 17.51 | | cv | 0.404 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 508 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03740157480314961 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013779527559055118 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 36 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 82.89% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 36 | | mean | 19.28 | | std | 6.89 | | cv | 0.357 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 20 |
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| 62.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3888888888888889 | | totalSentences | 36 | | uniqueOpeners | 14 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the weight of" | | 1 | "Their voice, a whispered sigh," | | 2 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" | | 3 | "She swallowed hard, her hand" | | 4 | "She felt a thrill of" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's eyes adjusted slowly to" | | 1 | "The sound of birdsong and" | | 2 | "She felt the weight of" | | 3 | "Nyx, ever the enigma, moved" | | 4 | "Their voice, a whispered sigh," | | 5 | "Aurora's gaze followed Nyx, her" | | 6 | "The trees, ancient and gnarled," | | 7 | "Wildflowers of every color bloomed" | | 8 | "Isolde, the Seer, waited for" | | 9 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" | | 10 | "Isolde said, her voice like" | | 11 | "Aurora felt a shiver run" | | 12 | "She swallowed hard, her hand" | | 13 | "Isolde's gaze flicked to the" | | 14 | "The air grew heavier, the" | | 15 | "Nyx shifted, their form blurring" | | 16 | "Aurora asked, her voice barely" | | 17 | "Isolde's smile was enigmatic, her" | | 18 | "The wildflowers, once so vibrant" | | 19 | "The air grew colder, the" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound of birdsong and rustling leaves enveloped her, a cacophony that was both soothing and unsettling." | | 1 | "She felt the weight of the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, its gentle pulse a reminder of the unknown forces that had brought her to this place." | | 2 | "The air grew heavier, the mist thickening into a palpable presence that swirled around them." | | 3 | "As Isolde finished speaking, the trees seemed to shudder, their branches creaking in a soft, mournful sigh." | | 4 | "Aurora's hand instinctively went to the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt, its cold, moonsilver length a comforting presence in the face of the unknown dangers that …" | | 5 | "She felt a thrill of excitement mixed with fear as she realized that she had stumbled into something much larger than herself, something that threatened to upen…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |