Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1N15K984YGRTABFS87KE

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38.6s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, walked into The Raven's Nest on a whim one drizzly Thursday evening. The dimly lit bar in Soho, with its distinctive green neon sign above the entrance, seemed as good a place as any to wait out the rain and drown her sorrows. She sidled up to the bar, the smell of whiskey and wood smoke thick in the air. A grey-streaked auburn head turned at her approach. The barkeep, Silas Blackwood, a retired intelligence operative who carried himself with quiet authority despite his limp, gave her a nod. "Evening, Rory. The usual?" She nodded. As he poured her a stiff drink, she surveyed the room. The walls were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. Groups of patrons huddled at tables, smoking and chatting in hushed tones. "Here you are, lass," Silas said, placing the glass before her with a clink. "Rough day?" "Rough life, more like." She took a generous swig. The whiskey burned all the way down. Just then, the door swung open with a gust of cold wind. A man stumbled inside, blinking in the dim light. Rory nearly spat out her drink. It couldn't be. But those bright blue eyes, that crescent-shaped scar on his left wrist - Evan ap Rhys, her ex from university days in Cardiff. The one who made her life hell with his drinking, his jealousy, his fists. The one she fled in the middle of the night five years ago and never looked back. He looked different, though. Thinner, with a scruffy beard and a stooped posture. The arrogant swagger was gone. His eyes met hers and widened. "Aurora?" He sounded uncertain. "Aurora Carter... is that you?" She gripped her glass tightly. "Who's asking?" "God, Rory... it's me. Evan. I can't believe it. You look... incredible." Wonder washed over his face. And something else. Regret? She let out a sharp laugh. "Five years and that's what you lead with? That I look 'incredible'?" She shook her head in disbelief. He took a step closer, hands open. "I deserve that. More than you know. I've changed, Rory. I'm not... I'm not the man I was." "Oh, I can see that," she said coldly, eyeing his shaggy hair and the deep circles under his eyes. "Drinking agrees with you." "I've been sober nine months," he said quietly. "Trying to make amends. I wanted to find you, apologize... but you vanished." A bitter laugh escaped her. "Vanished? You terrorized me, Evan! You nearly broke me!" Her voice shook. She took another long drink. "I know." He looked at his feet, his voice heavy. "I was sick, yeah? An angry, selfish drunk. Seeing you now... God, the things I put you through..." She stared at him, searching his face, so changed and yet the same. The anger she'd carried for so long threatened to choke her. "You have no idea. The nightmares, the scars inside and out. You stole my sense of safety! My trust!" "I know," he whispered hoarsely, shoulders slumped. "I'm disgraceful. A monster. I hate myself for it." A tear slipped down his unshaven cheek. "I'd give anything to go back, to not be that wretched man. But I can't. All I can do is try to be better. To make up for the pain I caused." Rory just blinked at him, the words and the unexpected earnestness catching her off guard. Her hands trembled. For a moment, the pub vanished and it was just the two of them, the weight of years and guilt pressing them closer. "I'm so sorry, Rory," Evan said brokenly. "I'm so, so terribly sorry." The raw pain in his voice, the shattered look in his eyes - it cracked something open in her. She believed him. Believed in his regret and his illness and his struggle to claw back some goodness. Tears welled in her own eyes, a hard knot of anguish loosening in her chest. Wordlessly, she reached out, grabbed his arm, pulled him into a fierce hug. He shuddered against her, clinging like a drowning man. "I hope you can forgive me someday," he whispered raggedly into her hair. "I'll keep trying to be someone you could be proud of. Someone who deserves a second chance." They held each other for long moments, the bustle of the bar swirling around them unheeded. Two old ghosts, bound by a former life, a complicated love and hate. Finally, she pulled back with a shuddering sigh. Wiped her eyes. Met his gaze, steady and clear. "I won't lie, Evan. I still have nightmares sometimes. The anger hasn't vanished overnight. But... I believe you're trying. That matters to me. Maybe, with time, we can find our way to forgiveness. To something new. I'm not the same girl you knew, and you're not the same drunken wretch. We've both changed." A flicker of hope crossed his face. He reached out, tucked a strand of hair behind her ear with a familiar tenderness that made her breath catch. The years melted away for a heartbeat. Then he seemed to remember himself. He swallowed hard, dropped his hand. "Thank you, Rory. For your mercy. It's more than I deserve. I... I'll leave you be now." Glancing back once, he made his slow way to the door, the weight of his demons etched in every line of his body. Rory watched him go with a bittersweet pang. A chapter closed, wounds still raw and gaping. But perhaps the pages had turned to a new story for them both, yet to be written. She lifted her whiskey with a tentative smile. To new beginnings.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she said coldly [coldly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"he whispered hoarsely [hoarsely]"
3"Evan said brokenly [brokenly]"
4"he whispered raggedly [raggedly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.37
89.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount942
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"coldly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"coldly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount942
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"sense of"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"tenderness"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"pang"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
1"trembled"
2"weight"
3"shattered"
4"flicker"
5"familiar"
6"tenderness"
7"etched"
8"pang"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"A flicker of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences68
matches
0"d in disbelief"
1"A flicker of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords940
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount655
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory4
Raven1
Nest1
Thursday1
Soho1
Silas2
Blackwood1
Evan2
Rhys1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount940
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean33.57
std19.09
cv0.569
sampleLengths
051
150
235
316
416
584
624
79
87
921
1024
1125
1223
1321
1422
1528
1643
1755
1841
1912
2074
2130
2229
2370
2434
2529
2623
2744
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs102
matches(empty)
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences82
ratio0.024
matches
0"But those bright blue eyes, that crescent-shaped scar on his left wrist - Evan ap Rhys, her ex from university days in Cardiff."
1"The raw pain in his voice, the shattered look in his eyes - it cracked something open in her."
95.05% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount657
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.045662100456621
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.0167427701674277
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean11.46
std8.14
cv0.71
sampleLengths
020
131
217
38
421
54
62
711
810
912
1014
112
129
137
1412
159
166
173
1823
1914
2017
214
229
235
246
254
265
275
282
2917
303
311
326
3318
347
3518
3619
374
388
3913
405
4112
425
4310
4418
4513
4611
4719
487
4916
73.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences66
matches
0"Just then, the door swung"
1"Wordlessly, she reached out, grabbed"
2"Finally, she pulled back with"
3"Then he seemed to remember"
ratio0.061
68.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences66
matches
0"She sidled up to the"
1"She took a generous swig"
2"It couldn't be."
3"He looked different, though."
4"His eyes met hers and"
5"He sounded uncertain"
6"She gripped her glass tightly."
7"She let out a sharp"
8"She shook her head in"
9"He took a step closer,"
10"she said coldly, eyeing his"
11"he said quietly"
12"Her voice shook"
13"She took another long drink."
14"He looked at his feet,"
15"She stared at him, searching"
16"he whispered hoarsely, shoulders slumped"
17"Her hands trembled."
18"She believed him."
19"He shuddered against her, clinging"
ratio0.379
88.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences66
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her"
1"The dimly lit bar in"
2"She sidled up to the"
3"A grey-streaked auburn head turned"
4"The barkeep, Silas Blackwood, a"
5"The walls were covered with"
6"Groups of patrons huddled at"
7"Silas said, placing the glass"
8"She took a generous swig"
9"The whiskey burned all the"
10"A man stumbled inside, blinking"
11"Rory nearly spat out her"
12"It couldn't be."
13"The one who made her"
14"The one she fled in"
15"He looked different, though."
16"The arrogant swagger was gone."
17"His eyes met hers and"
18"He sounded uncertain"
19"She gripped her glass tightly."
ratio0.742
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"To new beginnings."
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He reached out, tucked a strand of hair behind her ear with a familiar tenderness that made her breath catch."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He looked, his voice heavy"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered hoarsely (whisper)"
1"he whispered raggedly (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.148
89.1198%