Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1N1CSBCKFXVRXVN2G6ZP

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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Soho, The Raven's Nest hummed with a quiet weekday evening buzz. The air was thick with the scent of aged wood and the murmur of hushed conversations. Behind the worn mahogany bar, Silas Blackwood, his hazel eyes reflecting the dim glow of the green neon sign outside, poured a pint of ale with practiced ease. His silver signet ring glinted under the amber light as he set the drink down in front of a regular, a nod the only exchange between them. The door creaked open, letting in a gust of cool London air and a young woman with straight shoulder-length black hair and bright blue eyes. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, stepped inside, her gaze sweeping the room. She was a familiar face, yet tonight, there was a tension in her shoulders, a wariness in her eyes that hadn't been there before. Silas looked up, his eyes meeting hers. A flicker of recognition crossed his face, followed by a moment of hesitation. Then, he smiled, a warm, welcoming smile that crinkled the corners of his eyes. "Rory," he said, his voice a low rumble, "It's been a while." Rory hesitated, then returned the smile, though it didn't reach her eyes. "Silas," she acknowledged, stepping up to the bar. "I didn't expect to see you here." Silas raised an eyebrow. "This is my bar, Rory. Where else would I be?" He poured her a drink without asking, a glass of red wine, her usual. "You look... different," he observed, pushing the glass towards her. Rory wrapped her fingers around the stem of the glass, her small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light. "It's been what, three years?" she said, avoiding the question. "People change, Silas." Silas leaned against the bar, his left leg bearing most of his weight, the old knee injury making itself known in the slight limp. "Indeed, they do," he agreed, his gaze steady on her. "Some for the better, others... not so much." Rory took a sip of her wine, her eyes flicking away from his intense stare. "I've heard you've been busy," she said, changing the subject. "The Nest has become quite the hub for... interesting people." Silas chuckled, a low sound that held a hint of irony. "You could say that. Business has been good." He paused, then added, "But I've missed our chats, Rory. You had a way of cutting through the bullshit." Rory smiled, a genuine one this time, though it was tinged with sadness. "And you had a way of making me see things from different angles, Silas. I miss that." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers on the bar. His thumb brushed over her scar, a silent acknowledgment of the past. "What's been happening, Rory?" he asked softly. "You've got shadows under your eyes, and you're jumpy as a cat in a room full of rocking chairs." Rory pulled her hand away, wrapping both hands around her wine glass. She looked down into the dark red liquid, her reflection staring back at her. "Life happens, Silas," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Some of it good, some of it... not so much." Silas nodded, understanding more than she was saying. He knew about her past, about the abusive ex she'd left behind in Cardiff. He'd seen the bruises, heard the stories, and had offered his help then. But Rory had been stubborn, determined to face her demons alone. He respected that, but it didn't mean he had to like it. "You know you can talk to me, Rory," he said, his voice gentle yet firm. "Whatever it is, whatever you've been through, it's not too late to turn things around." Rory looked up at him, her eyes shining with unshed tears. "Isn't it, Silas?" she asked, her voice hoarse. "Some things can't be undone. Some people can't be saved." Silas reached out again, this time cupping her cheek. "And some people can't save themselves until they're ready," he said, his thumb brushing away a tear that had escaped. "But you're ready now, Rory. I can see it in your eyes." Rory leaned into his touch, her eyes closing briefly. When she opened them again, there was a determination in her gaze that hadn't been there before. "Maybe you're right, Silas," she said, her voice steady. "Maybe it's time to start over." Silas smiled, a slow, warm smile that lit up his eyes. "I'm glad to hear you say that, Rory," he said, dropping his hand. "Because I have a feeling you're going to need a fresh start." Rory raised an eyebrow, a hint of her old self shining through. "Oh, really?" she asked, a challenge in her voice. "And why's that?" Silas leaned back, his eyes twinkling with mischief. "Because, my dear Rory," he said, "I have a job offer for you. And it's not the kind of offer you can refuse." Rory's eyes widened, surprise and curiosity warring in her expression. "A job offer?" she repeated, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas nodded, his gaze serious now. "A job that will take you places you've never been, introduce you to people you've never met, and give you a chance to make a real difference," he said. "But it won't be easy, Rory. It will test your skills, your courage, and your loyalty." Rory took a deep breath, her eyes never leaving Silas's. Then, she nodded, a decisive movement that spoke volumes. "I'm in," she said, her voice steady. "Whatever it is, whatever it takes, I'm in." Silas smiled, a smile that held a promise of things to come. "Good," he said, standing up straight. "Because the world needs more people like you, Rory. People who aren't afraid to get their hands dirty, to fight for what's right, and to never give up, no matter the odds." Rory raised her glass, a small smile playing on her lips. "To new beginnings," she said, her voice filled with hope and determination. Silas clinked his glass against hers, his eyes reflecting the amber light of the bar. "To new beginnings," he echoed, a silent vow passing between them. Whatever lay ahead, they would face it together. And that, in itself, was a promise of a brighter future.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He paused then [then]"
1"he asked softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.59
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
80.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1050
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"tinged"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"determined"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"familiar"
2"tension"
3"flicker"
4"eyebrow"
5"weight"
6"tinged"
7"whisper"
8"determined"
9"echoed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The air was thick with"
2"A flicker of recognition"
86.54% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences65
matches
0"d with sadness"
1"filled with hope"
2"d with hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1048
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount704
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas14
Blackwood1
London1
Carter1
Rory13
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Carter"
5"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.506
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1048
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
55.10% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean40.31
std13.82
cv0.343
sampleLengths
086
163
246
327
438
534
642
735
838
930
1048
1147
1258
1330
1429
1541
1641
1736
1824
1931
2021
2151
2234
2350
2423
2545
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"was tinged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was saying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences81
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount706
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.028328611898016998
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007082152974504249
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean12.94
std6.11
cv0.472
sampleLengths
015
116
228
327
425
514
624
77
813
914
1012
1112
128
137
144
1524
1610
1721
1810
193
2024
2110
228
2315
2410
2510
2611
2727
2813
2917
3010
3112
327
3319
3412
3514
3611
3710
388
3914
4013
4111
4212
4315
4415
4511
468
4710
489
4920
58.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.37037037037037035
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"Then, he smiled, a warm,"
1"Then, she nodded, a decisive"
ratio0.032
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences63
matches
0"His silver signet ring glinted"
1"She was a familiar face,"
2"he said, his voice a"
3"she acknowledged, stepping up to"
4"He poured her a drink"
5"he observed, pushing the glass"
6"she said, avoiding the question"
7"he agreed, his gaze steady"
8"she said, changing the subject"
9"He paused, then added"
10"His thumb brushed over her"
11"he asked softly"
12"She looked down into the"
13"she said, her voice barely"
14"He knew about her past,"
15"He'd seen the bruises, heard"
16"He respected that, but it"
17"he said, his voice gentle"
18"she asked, her voice hoarse"
19"he said, his thumb brushing"
ratio0.444
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences63
matches
0"The air was thick with"
1"His silver signet ring glinted"
2"The door creaked open, letting"
3"Aurora Carter, known to most"
4"She was a familiar face,"
5"Silas looked up, his eyes"
6"A flicker of recognition crossed"
7"he said, his voice a"
8"Rory hesitated, then returned the"
9"she acknowledged, stepping up to"
10"Silas raised an eyebrow."
11"He poured her a drink"
12"he observed, pushing the glass"
13"Rory wrapped her fingers around"
14"she said, avoiding the question"
15"Silas leaned against the bar,"
16"he agreed, his gaze steady"
17"Rory took a sip of"
18"she said, changing the subject"
19"Silas chuckled, a low sound"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Then, he smiled, a warm, welcoming smile that crinkled the corners of his eyes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble,"
1"He poured, a glass of red wine, her usual"
2"he agreed, his gaze steady on her"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"he said, his voice gentle yet firm"
5"he said, his thumb brushing away a tear that had escaped"
6"she said, her voice steady"
7"she repeated, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"she said, her voice steady"
9"he echoed, a silent vow passing between them"
30.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"He poured (pour)"
2"he observed (observe)"
3"he agreed (agree)"
4"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.238
effectiveRatio0.238
77.4245%