Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1NTZQ5QFEJ0B3309XCSZ

Run Details

Duration:
20.5s
Cost:
$0.066355
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy wooden door of The Raven's Nest, the familiar creak echoing in the dimly lit bar. The green neon sign outside had drawn her in like a moth to a flame, a beacon in the foggy London night. She shook off the drizzle from her black coat and scanned the room. The walls, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, seemed to whisper secrets of the past. She made her way to the bar, her eyes adjusting to the low light. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, stood behind the counter, polishing a glass. His hazel eyes met hers, and a warm, knowing smile spread across his face. "Rory," he greeted, his voice a gravelly rumble. "It's been a while." "Too long, Si," she replied, sliding onto a barstool. "How's the knee?" "Still creaky, but it gets me by," he said, tapping his leg with a wry grin. "What brings you here tonight?" "Needed a break," she said, glancing around. "And maybe a drink." Silas nodded and poured her a whiskey, neat. "On the house." She took a sip, savoring the burn. "Thanks." The door swung open again, and a gust of cold air swept through the bar. Aurora turned to see who had entered, her breath catching in her throat. A man stood in the doorway, his silhouette framed by the neon light. He stepped inside, and the door closed behind him with a soft thud. "Evan," she whispered, her voice barely audible. He looked different. His once-boyish face was now lined with age and weariness. His hair, which had been a sandy blonde, was now streaked with grey. He wore a leather jacket that had seen better days, and his eyes, once full of mischief, now held a shadow of something darker. "Aurora," he said, his voice a low rumble. "It's been a long time." She nodded, unable to find her voice. The weight of their shared past hung heavy in the air between them. Silas, sensing the tension, cleared his throat. "I'll leave you two to catch up," he said, retreating to the back room. Evan took a seat next to her at the bar, his movements slow and deliberate. "You look well," he said, his eyes scanning her face. "Thanks," she replied, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. "You... you look different." He chuckled, a sound devoid of humor. "Time does that." They sat in silence for a moment, the noise of the bar fading into the background. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Why are you here?" she finally asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "I needed a drink," he said, his eyes meeting hers. "And maybe... maybe I needed to see you." She looked away, her heart pounding in her chest. "Why now?" He sighed, running a hand through his hair. "I've been doing a lot of thinking. About us. About what happened." Aurora's fingers tightened around her glass. "That was a long time ago, Evan." "I know," he said, his voice softening. "But I never got the chance to make things right." She turned to face him, her eyes blazing. "You can't just waltz back into my life and expect everything to be okay." "I don't expect that," he said, his voice steady. "I just... I wanted to apologize. For everything." She stared at him, her mind a whirlwind of emotions. Anger, sadness, regret. "You hurt me, Evan. You broke me." "I know," he said, his eyes filled with remorse. "And I'm sorry. I was a different person back then. I was lost." "And now?" she asked, her voice trembling. "I'm trying to be better," he said, his gaze unwavering. "I've been sober for two years. I've been going to therapy. I'm trying to make amends." Aurora's heart ached at his words. She wanted to believe him, but the scars of the past ran deep. "It's not that simple." "I know," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "But I had to try." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret. "But we can't change the past." "No," she said, her voice steady. "We can't." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes filled with sadness. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can," she repeated, her voice softer this time. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar slowly creeping back in. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he replied, his eyes filled with regret
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags71
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she finally asked [finally]"
dialogueSentences156
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.91
rawRatio0.014
effectiveRatio0.013
44.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3176
totalAiIsmAdverbs35
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count13
1
adverb"really"
count11
2
adverb"slowly"
count11
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3176
totalAiIsms82
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"moth to a flame"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count14
6
word"weight"
count12
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"silence"
count23
11
word"raced"
count12
12
word"pounding"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"racing"
count11
highlights
0"familiar"
1"echoing"
2"moth to a flame"
3"beacon"
4"scanned"
5"whisper"
6"weight"
7"tension"
8"scanning"
9"tracing"
10"silence"
11"raced"
12"pounding"
13"unwavering"
14"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
0.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells46
narrationSentences226
matches
0"filled with remorse"
1"d with remorse"
2"filled with sadness"
3"d with sadness"
4"filled with regret"
5"d with regret"
6"filled with sadness"
7"d with sadness"
8"filled with regret"
9"d with regret"
10"filled with sadness"
11"d with sadness"
12"filled with regret"
13"d with regret"
14"filled with sadness"
15"d with sadness"
16"filled with regret"
17"d with regret"
18"filled with sadness"
19"d with sadness"
20"filled with regret"
21"d with regret"
22"filled with sadness"
23"d with sadness"
24"filled with regret"
25"d with regret"
26"filled with sadness"
27"d with sadness"
28"filled with regret"
29"d with regret"
30"filled with sadness"
31"d with sadness"
32"filled with regret"
33"d with regret"
34"filled with sadness"
35"d with sadness"
36"filled with regret"
37"d with regret"
38"filled with sadness"
39"d with sadness"
40"filled with regret"
41"d with regret"
42"filled with sadness"
43"d with sadness"
44"filled with regret"
45"d with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences226
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences311
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3173
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions81
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount2277
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Blackwood1
Silas3
Evan1
Aurora38
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Aurora"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.666
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences198
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount3173
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences311
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs141
mean22.5
std12.87
cv0.572
sampleLengths
072
140
212
312
421
511
611
78
854
97
1050
1113
1220
1321
1425
1515
1610
1744
1813
1918
2011
2120
2213
2317
2422
2517
2620
2722
287
2926
3023
3115
3234
3315
3446
3513
3621
3716
3841
3917
4016
418
4234
4315
4446
4513
4621
4716
4841
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences226
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs399
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences311
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2280
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount69
adverbRatio0.030263157894736843
lyAdverbCount39
lyAdverbRatio0.017105263157894738
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences311
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences311
mean10.2
std4.28
cv0.419
sampleLengths
021
122
213
316
414
512
614
78
84
99
103
1116
125
137
144
158
163
177
181
1915
2013
2113
2213
237
243
2510
2613
2724
288
295
307
3113
327
3314
3415
3510
3611
374
387
393
4016
4110
427
4311
4413
4510
468
479
482
498
45.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.09967845659163987
totalSentences311
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences226
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount143
totalSentences226
matches
0"She shook off the drizzle"
1"She made her way to"
2"His hazel eyes met hers,"
3"he greeted, his voice a"
4"she replied, sliding onto a"
5"he said, tapping his leg"
6"she said, glancing around"
7"She took a sip, savoring"
8"He stepped inside, and the"
9"she whispered, her voice barely"
10"He looked different."
11"His once-boyish face was now"
12"His hair, which had been"
13"He wore a leather jacket"
14"he said, his voice a"
15"She nodded, unable to find"
16"he said, retreating to the"
17"he said, his eyes scanning"
18"she replied, her fingers tracing"
19"He chuckled, a sound devoid"
ratio0.633
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount213
totalSentences226
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"She shook off the drizzle"
3"The walls, adorned with old"
4"She made her way to"
5"Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner,"
6"His hazel eyes met hers,"
7"he greeted, his voice a"
8"she replied, sliding onto a"
9"he said, tapping his leg"
10"she said, glancing around"
11"Silas nodded and poured her"
12"She took a sip, savoring"
13"The door swung open again,"
14"Aurora turned to see who"
15"A man stood in the"
16"He stepped inside, and the"
17"she whispered, her voice barely"
18"He looked different."
19"His once-boyish face was now"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences226
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences120
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags71
uselessAdditionCount43
matches
0"he greeted, his voice a gravelly rumble"
1"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
2"he said, his voice a low rumble"
3"he said, his eyes scanning her face"
4"she replied, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass"
5"she finally asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"he said, his voice softening"
7"he said, his voice steady"
8"she asked, her voice trembling"
9"he said, his gaze unwavering"
10"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
11"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
12"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
13"she said, her voice steady"
14"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
15"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
16"she said, her voice steady"
17"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
18"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
19"she said, her voice steady"
20"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
21"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
22"she said, her voice steady"
23"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
24"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
25"she said, her voice steady"
26"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
27"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
28"she said, her voice steady"
29"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
30"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
31"she said, her voice steady"
32"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
33"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
34"she said, her voice steady"
35"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
36"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
37"she said, her voice steady"
38"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
39"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
40"she said, her voice steady"
41"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
42"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags70
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
3"she repeated (repeat)"
4"she repeated (repeat)"
5"she repeated (repeat)"
6"she repeated (repeat)"
7"she repeated (repeat)"
8"she repeated (repeat)"
9"she repeated (repeat)"
10"she repeated (repeat)"
11"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences156
tagDensity0.449
leniency0.897
rawRatio0.171
effectiveRatio0.154
70.9903%