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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1NTZQ5QFEJ0B3309XCSZ
Run Details
Model:
GPT-4o, May 13th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
20.5s
Cost:
$0.066355
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
44.90%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
0.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.56%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
45.18%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
73.08%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
70.9903%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the
heavy wooden door of The Raven's Nest, the
familiar
creak
echoing
in the dimly lit bar.
The green neon sign outside
had drawn her in like a
moth to a flame
, a
beacon
in the foggy London night.
She shook off the drizzle
from her black coat and
scanned
the room.
The walls, adorned with old
maps and black-and-white photographs,
seemed to
whisper
secrets of the past.
She made her way to
the bar, her eyes adjusting to the low light. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, stood behind the counter, polishing a glass. His hazel eyes met hers, and a warm, knowing smile spread across his face. "Rory,"
he greeted, his voice a
gravelly rumble. "It's been a while." "Too long, Si,"
she replied, sliding onto a
barstool. "How's the knee?" "Still creaky, but it gets me by,"
he said, tapping his leg
with a wry grin. "What brings you here tonight?" "Needed a break,"
she said, glancing around
. "And maybe a drink."
Silas nodded and poured her
a whiskey, neat. "On the house."
She took a sip, savoring
the burn. "Thanks." The door swung open again, and a gust of cold air swept through the bar.
Aurora turned to see who
had entered, her breath catching in her throat.
A man stood in the
doorway, his silhouette framed by the neon light.
He stepped inside, and the
door closed behind him with a soft thud. "Evan,"
she whispered, her voice barely
audible. He looked different.
His once-boyish face was now
lined with age and weariness.
His hair, which had been
a sandy blonde, was now streaked with grey.
He wore a leather jacket
that had seen better days, and his eyes, once full of mischief, now held a shadow of something darker. "Aurora,"
he said, his voice a
low rumble. "It's been a long time."
She nodded, unable to find
her voice. The
weight
of their shared past
hung heavy in the air
between them. Silas, sensing the
tension
, cleared his throat. "I'll leave you two to catch up,"
he said, retreating to the
back room. Evan took a seat next to her at the bar, his movements slow and deliberate. "You look well,"
he said, his eyes scanning
her face. "Thanks,"
she replied, her fingers tracing
the rim of her glass. "You... you look different."
He chuckled, a sound devoid
of humor. "Time does that." They sat in
silence
for a moment, the noise of the bar fading into the background. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Why are you here?"
she finally asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "I needed a drink," he said, his eyes meeting hers. "And maybe... maybe I needed to see you." She looked away, her heart
pounding
in her chest. "Why now?" He sighed, running a hand through his hair. "I've been doing a lot of thinking. About us. About what happened." Aurora's fingers tightened around her glass. "That was a long time ago, Evan." "I know,"
he said, his voice softening
. "But I never got the chance to make things right." She turned to face him, her eyes blazing. "You can't just waltz back into my life and expect everything to be okay." "I don't expect that,"
he said, his voice steady
. "I just... I wanted to apologize. For everything." She stared at him, her mind a whirlwind of emotions. Anger, sadness, regret. "You hurt me, Evan. You broke me." "I know," he said, his eyes
filled with remorse
. "And I'm sorry. I was a different person back then. I was lost." "And now?"
she asked, her voice trembling
. "I'm trying to be better,"
he said, his gaze unwavering
. "I've been sober for two years. I've been going to therapy. I'm trying to make amends." Aurora's heart ached at his words. She wanted to believe him, but the scars of the past ran deep. "It's not that simple." "I know,"
he said, his voice barely above a whisper
. "But I had to try." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
. "But we can't change the past." "No,"
she said, her voice steady
. "We can't." They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her
racing
heart. "I don't know if I can forgive you, Evan." "I understand," he said, his eyes
filled with sadness
. "But I hope, someday, you can." She looked at him,
really
looked at him, for the first time since he walked in. He was different, yes, but there was a glimmer of the man she had once loved. The man who had made her laugh, who had held her when she cried. "I don't know if I can,"
she repeated, her voice softer this time
. He nodded, accepting her words. "I just wanted you to know that I'm sorry. And that I'm trying to be better." Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the burn grounding her. "Thank you for saying that." They sat in
silence
, the noise of the bar
slowly
creeping back in. Aurora's mind
raced
, memories of their time together flooding back. The good times, the laughter, the love. And then the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice barely above a whisper
. "All the time," he replied, his eyes
filled with regret
created_at
"2026-02-19T10:45:03.972Z"
2/19/2026, 10:45:03 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
71
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she finally asked [finally]"
dialogueSentences
156
tagDensity
0.455
leniency
0.91
rawRatio
0.014
effectiveRatio
0.013
44.90%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
3176
totalAiIsmAdverbs
35
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
13
1
adverb
"really"
count
11
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
11
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
1
"really"
2
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
3176
totalAiIsms
82
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
1
1
word
"echoing"
count
1
2
word
"moth to a flame"
count
1
3
word
"beacon"
count
1
4
word
"scanned"
count
1
5
word
"whisper"
count
14
6
word
"weight"
count
12
7
word
"tension"
count
1
8
word
"scanning"
count
1
9
word
"tracing"
count
1
10
word
"silence"
count
23
11
word
"raced"
count
12
12
word
"pounding"
count
1
13
word
"unwavering"
count
1
14
word
"racing"
count
11
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"echoing"
2
"moth to a flame"
3
"beacon"
4
"scanned"
5
"whisper"
6
"weight"
7
"tension"
8
"scanning"
9
"tracing"
10
"silence"
11
"raced"
12
"pounding"
13
"unwavering"
14
"racing"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung heavy in the air"
0.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
46
narrationSentences
226
matches
0
"filled with remorse"
1
"d with remorse"
2
"filled with sadness"
3
"d with sadness"
4
"filled with regret"
5
"d with regret"
6
"filled with sadness"
7
"d with sadness"
8
"filled with regret"
9
"d with regret"
10
"filled with sadness"
11
"d with sadness"
12
"filled with regret"
13
"d with regret"
14
"filled with sadness"
15
"d with sadness"
16
"filled with regret"
17
"d with regret"
18
"filled with sadness"
19
"d with sadness"
20
"filled with regret"
21
"d with regret"
22
"filled with sadness"
23
"d with sadness"
24
"filled with regret"
25
"d with regret"
26
"filled with sadness"
27
"d with sadness"
28
"filled with regret"
29
"d with regret"
30
"filled with sadness"
31
"d with sadness"
32
"filled with regret"
33
"d with regret"
34
"filled with sadness"
35
"d with sadness"
36
"filled with regret"
37
"d with regret"
38
"filled with sadness"
39
"d with sadness"
40
"filled with regret"
41
"d with regret"
42
"filled with sadness"
43
"d with sadness"
44
"filled with regret"
45
"d with regret"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
226
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
311
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
24
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
3173
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
81
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.56%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
47
wordCount
2277
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
1.67
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Raven
1
Nest
1
London
1
Blackwood
1
Silas
3
Evan
1
Aurora
38
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Raven"
2
"Blackwood"
3
"Silas"
4
"Evan"
5
"Aurora"
places
0
"London"
globalScore
0.666
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
198
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
3173
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
311
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
141
mean
22.5
std
12.87
cv
0.572
sampleLengths
0
72
1
40
2
12
3
12
4
21
5
11
6
11
7
8
8
54
9
7
10
50
11
13
12
20
13
21
14
25
15
15
16
10
17
44
18
13
19
18
20
11
21
20
22
13
23
17
24
22
25
17
26
20
27
22
28
7
29
26
30
23
31
15
32
34
33
15
34
46
35
13
36
21
37
16
38
41
39
17
40
16
41
8
42
34
43
15
44
46
45
13
46
21
47
16
48
41
49
17
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
226
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
399
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
311
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2280
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
69
adverbRatio
0.030263157894736843
lyAdverbCount
39
lyAdverbRatio
0.017105263157894738
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
311
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
311
mean
10.2
std
4.28
cv
0.419
sampleLengths
0
21
1
22
2
13
3
16
4
14
5
12
6
14
7
8
8
4
9
9
10
3
11
16
12
5
13
7
14
4
15
8
16
3
17
7
18
1
19
15
20
13
21
13
22
13
23
7
24
3
25
10
26
13
27
24
28
8
29
5
30
7
31
13
32
7
33
14
34
15
35
10
36
11
37
4
38
7
39
3
40
16
41
10
42
7
43
11
44
13
45
10
46
8
47
9
48
2
49
8
45.18%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
15
diversityRatio
0.09967845659163987
totalSentences
311
uniqueOpeners
31
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
226
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
143
totalSentences
226
matches
0
"She shook off the drizzle"
1
"She made her way to"
2
"His hazel eyes met hers,"
3
"he greeted, his voice a"
4
"she replied, sliding onto a"
5
"he said, tapping his leg"
6
"she said, glancing around"
7
"She took a sip, savoring"
8
"He stepped inside, and the"
9
"she whispered, her voice barely"
10
"He looked different."
11
"His once-boyish face was now"
12
"His hair, which had been"
13
"He wore a leather jacket"
14
"he said, his voice a"
15
"She nodded, unable to find"
16
"he said, retreating to the"
17
"he said, his eyes scanning"
18
"she replied, her fingers tracing"
19
"He chuckled, a sound devoid"
ratio
0.633
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
213
totalSentences
226
matches
0
"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
1
"The green neon sign outside"
2
"She shook off the drizzle"
3
"The walls, adorned with old"
4
"She made her way to"
5
"Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner,"
6
"His hazel eyes met hers,"
7
"he greeted, his voice a"
8
"she replied, sliding onto a"
9
"he said, tapping his leg"
10
"she said, glancing around"
11
"Silas nodded and poured her"
12
"She took a sip, savoring"
13
"The door swung open again,"
14
"Aurora turned to see who"
15
"A man stood in the"
16
"He stepped inside, and the"
17
"she whispered, her voice barely"
18
"He looked different."
19
"His once-boyish face was now"
ratio
0.942
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
226
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
120
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
71
uselessAdditionCount
43
matches
0
"he greeted, his voice a gravelly rumble"
1
"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
2
"he said, his voice a low rumble"
3
"he said, his eyes scanning her face"
4
"she replied, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass"
5
"she finally asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
6
"he said, his voice softening"
7
"he said, his voice steady"
8
"she asked, her voice trembling"
9
"he said, his gaze unwavering"
10
"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
11
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
12
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
13
"she said, her voice steady"
14
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
15
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
16
"she said, her voice steady"
17
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
18
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
19
"she said, her voice steady"
20
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
21
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
22
"she said, her voice steady"
23
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
24
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
25
"she said, her voice steady"
26
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
27
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
28
"she said, her voice steady"
29
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
30
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
31
"she said, her voice steady"
32
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
33
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
34
"she said, her voice steady"
35
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
36
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
37
"she said, her voice steady"
38
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
39
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
40
"she said, her voice steady"
41
"she repeated, her voice softer this time"
42
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
73.08%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
70
fancyCount
12
fancyTags
0
"she whispered (whisper)"
1
"she repeated (repeat)"
2
"she repeated (repeat)"
3
"she repeated (repeat)"
4
"she repeated (repeat)"
5
"she repeated (repeat)"
6
"she repeated (repeat)"
7
"she repeated (repeat)"
8
"she repeated (repeat)"
9
"she repeated (repeat)"
10
"she repeated (repeat)"
11
"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences
156
tagDensity
0.449
leniency
0.897
rawRatio
0.171
effectiveRatio
0.154
70.9903%