Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1P7GWZXR87JNX2HDCKCJ

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000342

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell echoed through the cluttered flat, a shrill cry cutting through the late-night silence. Aurora, buried under a mountain of research notes, barely heard it over Ptolemy's purring. She glanced at the clock, her brows furrowing. It was past midnight. Who could it be? She pushed her glasses up her nose, her heart pounding an uneven rhythm as she approached the door. Three deadbolts clicked open, one by one, each a tiny explosion of anticipation in her chest. She swung the door open, revealing Lucien Moreau, leaning against the frame, his heterochromatic eyes reflecting the dim hallway light. "Lucien," she breathed, surprise coloring her voice. "What are you doing here?" He offered her a small smile, his gaze sweeping over her, taking in the messy bun, the oversized sweater, the bare feet. "Aurora," he said, his voice a low rumble, like distant thunder. "You look...well-fed." She rolled her eyes, stepping aside to let him in. "Charming as ever, I see." She closed the door behind him, the locks snapping back into place. "What brings you to my humble abode?" Lucien glanced around the flat, his eyes lingering on the stacks of books, the ancient scrolls, the chalkboard filled with symbols and notes. "I've been trying to reach you," he said, turning back to her. "Your phone seems to be...unavailable." Aurora shrugged, picking up her phone from the coffee table. "Dead," she admitted, plugging it into the charger. "I've been...preoccupied." Lucien nodded, his gaze flicking to the chalkboard. "I can see that." He paused, then asked, "How have you been, Aurora?" She leaned against the counter, crossing her arms. "Fine. Busy. You?" "Much the same," he replied, his gaze never leaving hers. "I've been thinking about our last conversation." Aurora's heart skipped a beat. Their last conversation had ended in a heated argument, words left unsaid, feelings left unchecked. She had walked away, leaving him standing alone in the rain, his eyes reflecting a storm of his own. "I see," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her. "And what conclusion did you reach?" Lucien took a step closer, his voice dropping to a low murmur. "That I was an idiot." Aurora raised an eyebrow, a smirk playing on her lips. "Well, that's a start." He chuckled, the sound warm and unexpected. "I should have handled things differently," he said, his gaze intense. "I should have told you...things." Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, her breath hitching as she held his gaze. "Like what?" she whispered. Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing a stray strand of hair behind her ear. His touch was gentle, barely there, yet it sent a shiver down her spine. "Like how much I regret letting you walk away," he said, his voice barely audible. "Like how much I wish I had told you...how I feel." Aurora's breath caught in her throat, her heart pounding wildly. She could feel the tension between them, the unspoken words hanging heavy in the air. She wanted to reach out, to touch him, to bridge the gap between them. But she held back, her pride a barrier she couldn't seem to breach. "And how do you feel, Lucien?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien's gaze never wavered, his expression serious. "I feel like I made the biggest mistake of my life," he said, his voice raw. "I feel like I should have told you that I...that I care about you, Aurora. More than I can express." Aurora's heart swelled, her eyes stinging with unshed tears. She had waited so long to hear those words, had wondered so many times if he felt the same way. And now, here he was, standing in her flat, telling her exactly what she had longed to hear. "But you didn't," she said, her voice steady despite the emotions raging within her. "You let me walk away." Lucien's expression darkened, regret etched into the lines of his face. "I know," he said, his voice laced with pain. "And I regret it every day." Aurora looked at him, her gaze searching his face, looking for any sign of insincerity. But all she saw was honesty, raw and unguarded. She took a deep breath, her decision made. "Well," she said, her voice steady. "You're here now." Lucien's eyes lit up, a slow smile spreading across his face. "I am," he agreed, his voice soft. Aurora took a step closer, her heart pounding in her chest. "And you've said your piece." "I have," he replied, his gaze never leaving hers. Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing against his cheek. His eyes fluttered closed, a soft sigh escaping his lips. She leaned in, her lips brushing against his, a soft, tentative kiss. Lucien's arms wrapped around her, pulling her closer, deepening the kiss. It was a kiss filled with longing, with regret, with all the things left unsaid. It was a kiss that promised a fresh start, a new beginning. When they finally pulled apart, their breaths were ragged, their hearts pounding in sync. Lucien rested his forehead against hers, his eyes closed, a small smile playing on his lips. "I've missed you, Aurora," he whispered. She smiled, her heart swelling with happiness. "I've missed you too, Lucien," she replied, her voice soft. "But don't think this means I'll go easy on you." He chuckled, his eyes opening to meet hers. "I wouldn't expect anything less," he said, his gaze filled with promise. "Now, how about we start over?" Aurora nodded, her heart filled with hope. "I think that's a wonderful idea," she said, her voice filled with conviction. And as they stood there, wrapped in each other's arms, the past faded away, leaving only the promise of a new beginning.
total_cost0.0003417

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.537
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
94.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"furrowing"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count4
4
word"anticipation"
count1
5
word"skipped a beat"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"wavered"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"furrowing"
3"pounding"
4"anticipation"
5"skipped a beat"
6"eyebrow"
7"down her spine"
8"could feel"
9"tension"
10"unspoken"
11"whisper"
12"wavered"
13"etched"
14"fluttered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"sent a shiver down"
78.05% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences71
matches
0"filled with longing"
1"d with longing"
2"filled with hope"
3"d with hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords957
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount748
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy1
Lucien10
Moreau1
Aurora11
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.765
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount957
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean28.15
std15.44
cv0.549
sampleLengths
045
154
212
335
434
540
620
721
811
917
1039
1118
1217
1314
1423
1518
1654
1752
1814
1943
2047
2119
2226
2332
249
2518
2616
279
2869
2930
306
3127
3226
3342
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was, standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences90
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount749
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02403204272363151
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010680907877169559
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean10.63
std4.89
cv0.46
sampleLengths
015
114
28
34
44
518
616
720
87
95
1022
1111
122
1310
1417
157
1623
1712
185
1910
208
212
228
2313
248
253
2610
277
285
2915
3019
3112
326
3312
345
3510
364
377
3811
395
4014
414
4214
4314
4415
4511
4610
4715
4814
4913
44.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2777777777777778
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences69
matches
0"She glanced at the clock,"
1"It was past midnight."
2"She pushed her glasses up"
3"She swung the door open,"
4"she breathed, surprise coloring her"
5"He offered her a small"
6"he said, his voice a"
7"She rolled her eyes, stepping"
8"She closed the door behind"
9"he said, turning back to"
10"she admitted, plugging it into"
11"He paused, then asked"
12"She leaned against the counter,"
13"he replied, his gaze never"
14"Their last conversation had ended"
15"She had walked away, leaving"
16"she said, her voice steady"
17"He chuckled, the sound warm"
18"he said, his gaze intense"
19"His touch was gentle, barely"
ratio0.594
10.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences69
matches
0"The doorbell echoed through the"
1"Aurora, buried under a mountain"
2"She glanced at the clock,"
3"It was past midnight."
4"She pushed her glasses up"
5"She swung the door open,"
6"she breathed, surprise coloring her"
7"He offered her a small"
8"he said, his voice a"
9"She rolled her eyes, stepping"
10"She closed the door behind"
11"Lucien glanced around the flat,"
12"he said, turning back to"
13"Aurora shrugged, picking up her"
14"she admitted, plugging it into"
15"Lucien nodded, his gaze flicking"
16"He paused, then asked"
17"She leaned against the counter,"
18"he replied, his gaze never"
19"Aurora's heart skipped a beat."
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She had walked away, leaving him standing alone in the rain, his eyes reflecting a storm of his own."
1"Aurora looked at him, her gaze searching his face, looking for any sign of insincerity."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she breathed, surprise coloring her voice"
1"he said, his voice a low rumble, like distant thunder"
2"She closed, the locks snapping back into place"
3"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her"
4"he said, his gaze intense"
5"he said, his voice barely audible"
6"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"he said, his voice raw"
8"she said, her voice steady despite the emotions raging within her"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"he agreed, his voice soft"
11"she replied, her voice soft"
28.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he agreed (agree)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.488
leniency0.976
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.244
73.5081%