| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1000 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1000 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "glistening" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "stark" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "effortless" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "magnetic" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 25 | | markdownWords | 49 | | totalWords | 986 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "shifted" | | 1 | "\"It’s yours now.\"" | | 2 | "breathing" | | 3 | "knew" | | 4 | "Behind her." | | 5 | "reacting" | | 6 | "not" | | 7 | "\"You shouldn’t have come.\"" | | 8 | "glowed" | | 9 | "\"Bullshit.\"" | | 10 | "\"You’re not alone.\"" | | 11 | "moved" | | 12 | "shifted" | | 13 | "screamed" | | 14 | "\"You’ve been chosen,\"" | | 15 | "\"The Heartstone calls to you. And you to it.\"" | | 16 | "see" | | 17 | "run" | | 18 | "breathe" | | 19 | "\"You don’t belong here,\"" | | 20 | "\"But you will.\"" | | 21 | "knew" | | 22 | "changed" | | 23 | "break free" | | 24 | "exploded" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 955 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.84 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Covent | 1 | | Garden | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | God | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Earth" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Covent" | | 1 | "Garden" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 5.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reaching for her" | | 1 | "something like hunger" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to breathe" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.028 | | wordCount | 986 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the rustle of leaves, not the whisper of wind through branches, but something deeper, something" | | 1 | "not the whisper of wind through branches, but something deeper, something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 21.91 | | std | 23.28 | | cv | 1.063 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 97 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 66 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 61 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 8 |
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| 94.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "been followed" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "were rooted" |
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| 70.97% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t burning" | | 1 | "were holding" | | 2 | "were turning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed—a slow, insistent throb like a heartbeat beneath her wrist—and the air in the grove *shifted*." | | 1 | "The wildflowers—eternally blooming, according to legend—were too bright, their petals glistening with something that wasn’t dew." | | 2 | "Then—a whisper." | | 3 | "Not the faint inner light it usually carried—no, this was brighter, a deep crimson that seeped into the shadows around her, painting the grove in hues of blood and twilight." | | 4 | "Not the usual play of light and dark—no, these shadows stretched and writhed, pooling at the base of the stones like liquid ink." | | 5 | "Its limbs were wrong—too long, too jointed, like a spider’s—but it walked upright, its movements fluid, effortless." | | 6 | "She’d seen the warnings, the stories—people who had followed the Heartstone into the void, who had come back…" | | 7 | "The figure shrieked—a sound like tearing fabric, like a thousand voices screaming at once—and the shadows recoiled." | | 8 | "Then—nothing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 970 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03402061855670103 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006185567010309278 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 9.56 | | std | 7.73 | | cv | 0.808 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 33.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.2912621359223301 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the weight of it," | | 1 | "Just the *breathing* of the" | | 2 | "Then the ground trembled." | | 3 | "Then the earth *exploded*." |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 96.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t expected this." | | 1 | "It was supposed to be" | | 2 | "She should have turned back." | | 3 | "She *knew* she should have" | | 4 | "She didn’t turn." | | 5 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 6 | "She could feel it *reacting*," | | 7 | "It slithered into her mind," | | 8 | "She forced herself to exhale," | | 9 | "It was a trick." | | 10 | "She’d seen enough horror movies" | | 11 | "She didn’t move." | | 12 | "Her feet were rooted to" | | 13 | "Its limbs were wrong—too long," | | 14 | "Its skin was pale, almost" | | 15 | "They gleamed with something like" | | 16 | "it said, its voice a" | | 17 | "She could feel the pendant’s" | | 18 | "She had to get out." | | 19 | "She could feel the pendant’s" |
| | ratio | 0.308 | |
| 81.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulsed—a slow, insistent" | | 3 | "The standing stones at the" | | 4 | "She hadn’t expected this." | | 5 | "The pendant had been a" | | 6 | "The grove wasn’t supposed to" | | 7 | "It was supposed to be" | | 8 | "The wildflowers—eternally blooming, according to" | | 9 | "God, the silence was wrong." | | 10 | "Aurora’s breath came faster." | | 11 | "She should have turned back." | | 12 | "She *knew* she should have" | | 13 | "A twig snapped." | | 14 | "She didn’t turn." | | 15 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 16 | "The chain was cold now," | | 17 | "She could feel it *reacting*," | | 18 | "A voice, soft as a" | | 19 | "It slithered into her mind," |
| | ratio | 0.756 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the heart" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand back, fingers flexing as if the silver chain could sever itself from her skin." | | 1 | "Not the rustle of leaves, not the whisper of wind through branches, but something deeper, something that made the hairs on her neck rise in unison." | | 2 | "The standing stones at the grove’s edge seemed to lean inward, their gnarled roots twisting as if reaching for her." | | 3 | "The wildflowers—eternally blooming, according to legend—were too bright, their petals glistening with something that wasn’t dew." | | 4 | "Just the *breathing* of the trees, slow and deliberate, as if they were holding their own air in their lungs." | | 5 | "She could feel it *reacting*, pulsing in time with her heartbeat, as if it were alive." | | 6 | "Not the faint inner light it usually carried—no, this was brighter, a deep crimson that seeped into the shadows around her, painting the grove in hues of blood …" | | 7 | "The glow pulsed in time with the voice, a heartbeat that wasn’t hers." | | 8 | "The earth itself *shifted*, a slow, deliberate heave as if something vast and heavy were turning beneath the surface." | | 9 | "She could feel the pendant’s heat searing through her skin, could *see* the way the shadows coiled around her ankles, creeping upward like tendrils." | | 10 | "The air around it warped, the wildflowers wilting as if scorched, their petals blackening at the edges." | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed violently, its glow casting long, jagged shadows that seemed to *breathe*." | | 12 | "The last thing she saw was the figure’s face, contorting in rage, its featureless eyes burning with the same crimson light as the pendant." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the figure murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |