| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 602 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 602 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 597 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.22% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 521 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 8 | | Nyx | 5 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.732 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite fall, just lingered, waiting" | | 1 | "as if acknowledging the weight of what lay beyond the Veil" | | 2 | "quite make sense until they moved, until they writhed like living things" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 597 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 28.43 | | std | 22.14 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 6 |
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| 96.71% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 51 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks, the whisper of unseen things." | | 1 | "Their bark bore carvings—spiral patterns that coiled like serpents, their edges too sharp to be natural." | | 2 | "Nyx let out a sound—half laugh, half sigh—like wind through leaves." | | 3 | "The shadows around Nyx coalesced into a shape—tall, lean, the faintest violet glow in their eyes." | | 4 | "Then, a sound—soft, wet, like something dragging itself through leaves." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 526 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.034220532319391636 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0019011406844106464 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 51 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 51 | | mean | 11.71 | | std | 8.38 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 46.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3137254901960784 | | totalSentences | 51 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 83.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a sound—soft, wet, like" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the standing" | | 1 | "Their bark bore carvings—spiral patterns" | | 2 | "Their petals unfurled in hues" | | 3 | "She’d heard whispers of this" | | 4 | "they said, though their voice" | | 5 | "She trailed off, her silver" | | 6 | "She’d never understood its meaning," | | 7 | "It was a door." | | 8 | "She grabbed the Fae blade" |
| | ratio | 0.225 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "She stepped over the standing" | | 2 | "The others followed, Nyx shifting" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender" | | 4 | "The trees here weren’t just" | | 5 | "Their bark bore carvings—spiral patterns" | | 6 | "The flowers that bloomed in" | | 7 | "Their petals unfurled in hues" | | 8 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 9 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed faintly," | | 10 | "She’d heard whispers of this" | | 11 | "Nyx let out a sound—half" | | 12 | "they said, though their voice" | | 13 | "The shadows they cast stretched" | | 14 | "Isolde knelt, pressing a hand" | | 15 | "The ground beneath her didn’t" | | 16 | "She trailed off, her silver" | | 17 | "Aurora’s pulse quickened." | | 18 | "Isolde’s gaze flicked to her," | | 19 | "Nyx’s form flickered again, their" |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the root…" | | 1 | "She stepped over the standing stones, her boots crunching on brittle leaves that didn’t quite fall, just lingered, waiting." | | 2 | "The others followed, Nyx shifting between solid and shadow as they moved, their form flickering like candlelight in a draft." | | 3 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed faintly, warm against her skin, as if acknowledging the weight of what lay beyond the Veil." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, though their voice was no more than a breath" | | 1 | "She trailed, her silver hair catching the light as she stood again" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |