Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1XN68HHCF9CJJ6NEJM4B

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Duration:
3.0s
Cost:
$0.000104

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks, the whisper of unseen things. She stepped over the standing stones, her boots crunching on brittle leaves that didn’t quite fall, just lingered, waiting. The others followed, Nyx shifting between solid and shadow as they moved, their form flickering like candlelight in a draft. “It’s like stepping into a dream,” Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes scanning the clearing with the slow, deliberate gaze of one who sees what others miss. The trees here weren’t just trees. Their bark bore carvings—spiral patterns that coiled like serpents, their edges too sharp to be natural. The flowers that bloomed in profusion weren’t like any Aurora had seen before. Their petals unfurled in hues that shifted, as if caught between light and shadow. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant at her throat. The crimson gemstone pulsed faintly, warm against her skin, as if acknowledging the weight of what lay beyond the Veil. She’d heard whispers of this place, of the Fae Grove as a pocket between worlds, but nothing had prepared her for the way the air hummed here, the way the light bent around her like a living thing. Nyx let out a sound—half laugh, half sigh—like wind through leaves. “It’s… vast,” they said, though their voice was no more than a breath. The shadows they cast stretched long and thin, twisting into shapes that didn’t make sense until they moved, until they dissolved into nothing. Isolde knelt, pressing a hand to the earth. The ground beneath her didn’t yield. “Time here…” She trailed off, her silver hair catching the light as she stood again. “It doesn’t move as it should.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. “What do you mean?” Isolde’s gaze flicked to her, sharp and knowing. “An hour here could be days outside. Or the opposite. The Veil thins here. It’s why it’s here.” Nyx’s form flickered again, their silhouette dissolving into the darkness between the trees. “And you’ve been waiting for us.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “Waiting for *me*?” The shadows around Nyx coalesced into a shape—tall, lean, the faintest violet glow in their eyes. “You always were the one who found the cracks.” Isolde’s voice dropped to a whisper, her fingers tracing the bark of a tree. “The Veil weakens at the solstice. And you carry the key.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. The Heartstone. The thing that had been given to her, the one that pulsed like a heartbeat when near Hel. She’d never understood its meaning, but now, standing in this place where the world bent, she knew it wasn’t just a gift. It was a door. A rustling in the undergrowth made them all still. The air grew colder, heavier, as if the grove itself held its breath. Then, a sound—soft, wet, like something dragging itself through leaves. Aurora’s blood turned to ice. “What was that?” Nyx’s voice was a whisper in the wind. “Not here.” The shadows stretched, longer, darker. The standing stones loomed, their edges too sharp, their surfaces etched with symbols that didn’t quite make sense until they moved, until they writhed like living things. Isolde’s fingers trembled as she reached out, her voice a low, urgent hum. “You must move. Now.” Aurora didn’t hesitate. She grabbed the Fae blade from her belt, its moonsilver edge cold against her palm. The others followed, their steps quick, their voices a blur of urgency. The shadows closed in. And the grove swallowed them whole.
total_cost0.00010448000000000002

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount602
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount602
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"whisper"
count3
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"loomed"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"scanning"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"pulse"
5"quickened"
6"flicked"
7"flickered"
8"tracing"
9"stomach"
10"loomed"
11"etched"
12"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences51
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords597
ratio0.002
matches
0"me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount521
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora8
Nyx5
Veil1
Fae2
Grove1
Heartstone1
Hel1
Isolde5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Veil"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"Hel"
globalScore0.732
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite fall, just lingered, waiting"
1"as if acknowledging the weight of what lay beyond the Veil"
2"quite make sense until they moved, until they writhed like living things"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount597
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean28.43
std22.14
cv0.779
sampleLengths
076
176
267
347
435
57
626
719
86
925
1025
1149
1222
1310
148
1510
1632
1717
1830
194
206
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs87
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences51
ratio0.098
matches
0"The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks, the whisper of unseen things."
1"Their bark bore carvings—spiral patterns that coiled like serpents, their edges too sharp to be natural."
2"Nyx let out a sound—half laugh, half sigh—like wind through leaves."
3"The shadows around Nyx coalesced into a shape—tall, lean, the faintest violet glow in their eyes."
4"Then, a sound—soft, wet, like something dragging itself through leaves."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount526
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.034220532319391636
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0019011406844106464
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences51
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences51
mean11.71
std8.38
cv0.716
sampleLengths
037
119
220
327
46
516
613
714
89
920
1038
1111
1213
1323
148
156
1615
176
183
194
208
2118
2213
236
243
253
2616
279
2814
2911
303
312
3218
3322
344
359
3613
3710
385
393
408
412
425
4327
4413
454
463
4715
4812
494
46.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3137254901960784
totalSentences51
uniqueOpeners16
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"Then, a sound—soft, wet, like"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences40
matches
0"She stepped over the standing"
1"Their bark bore carvings—spiral patterns"
2"Their petals unfurled in hues"
3"She’d heard whispers of this"
4"they said, though their voice"
5"She trailed off, her silver"
6"She’d never understood its meaning,"
7"It was a door."
8"She grabbed the Fae blade"
ratio0.225
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences40
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"She stepped over the standing"
2"The others followed, Nyx shifting"
3"Isolde murmured, her pale lavender"
4"The trees here weren’t just"
5"Their bark bore carvings—spiral patterns"
6"The flowers that bloomed in"
7"Their petals unfurled in hues"
8"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
9"The crimson gemstone pulsed faintly,"
10"She’d heard whispers of this"
11"Nyx let out a sound—half"
12"they said, though their voice"
13"The shadows they cast stretched"
14"Isolde knelt, pressing a hand"
15"The ground beneath her didn’t"
16"She trailed off, her silver"
17"Aurora’s pulse quickened."
18"Isolde’s gaze flicked to her,"
19"Nyx’s form flickered again, their"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the root…"
1"She stepped over the standing stones, her boots crunching on brittle leaves that didn’t quite fall, just lingered, waiting."
2"The others followed, Nyx shifting between solid and shadow as they moved, their form flickering like candlelight in a draft."
3"The crimson gemstone pulsed faintly, warm against her skin, as if acknowledging the weight of what lay beyond the Veil."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"they said, though their voice was no more than a breath"
1"She trailed, her silver hair catching the light as she stood again"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.154
72.6516%