| 40.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde instructed already [already]" | | 1 | "she asked quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "Nyx said gravely [gravely]" | | 3 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.568 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.16 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |
| 81.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1351 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1351 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "wavered" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "footfall" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "uncanny" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "marble" | | 10 | "tension" | | 11 | "anticipation" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "d with warmth" | | 1 | "y with anticipation" |
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| 8.40% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1334 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1067 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 16 | | Nyx | 10 | | Aurora | 19 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | December | 1 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae-Forged" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.61 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 1 | "trees that seemed to shift position when Aurora wasn't looking directly at them" | | 2 | "hues that seemed to exist somewhere between purple and green, blue and orange—bloomed along the edges of the trail" | | 3 | "looked like polished obsidian" | | 4 | "as if responding to the mention of demons" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.75 | | wordCount | 1334 | | matches | | 0 | "not their faces but another place entirely" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 24.25 | | std | 13.02 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 43 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 97.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "been pulled" | | 1 | "been dropped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "Most shocking of all was the sky visible through the canopy of trees—a deep, impossible violet streaked with ribbons of silver." | | 1 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their form more substantial than Aurora had ever seen it—less a collection of shadows and more a person-shaped darkness with distinct features." | | 2 | "Flowers in colors she had never seen before—hues that seemed to exist somewhere between purple and green, blue and orange—bloomed along the edges of the trail." | | 3 | "Some closed as they approached; others turned to follow their movement like curious onlookers." | | 4 | "Occasionally, Aurora thought she glimpsed movement in the spaces between trees—flickers of light, darting shapes, watching eyes." | | 5 | "The reflection of the pendant distorted, stretched, and suddenly the water showed not their faces but another place entirely—a landscape of amber skies and lush vineyards stretching to the horizon." | | 6 | "The image rippled again, focusing on a particular figure moving through the palace halls—tall, elegant, with the bearing of authority." | | 7 | "Even the minor fae Aurora had glimpsed earlier emerged partially from hiding—tiny faces peering from behind leaves, glowing eyes watching from the shadows." | | 8 | "The Heartstone Pendant had cooled against her skin, but she could still feel it there—a weight far greater than its physical presence." |
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| 91.81% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1081 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.04902867715078631 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020351526364477335 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 12.83 | | std | 6.72 | | cv | 0.524 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 71.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.49038461538461536 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Then reality snapped back into" | | 1 | "Occasionally, Aurora thought she glimpsed" | | 2 | "Even the minor fae Aurora" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, glancing at Isolde" | | 1 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 2 | "they translated, their voice a" | | 3 | "she breathed, watching her breath" | | 4 | "she said, gesturing to a" | | 5 | "They continued deeper into the" | | 6 | "she asked quietly" | | 7 | "Its trunk was wide enough" | | 8 | "Its branches created a canopy" | | 9 | "She pulled it out, and" | | 10 | "she said finally" |
| | ratio | 0.136 | |
| 34.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stared at the Fae-Forged" | | 1 | "The dagger felt impossibly light" | | 2 | "she asked, glancing at Isolde" | | 3 | "The half-Fae woman stood motionless," | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured, her voice like" | | 6 | "Nyx materialized more fully beside" | | 7 | "The temperature around them dropped" | | 8 | "they translated, their voice a" | | 9 | "Aurora nodded, slipping the blade" | | 10 | "The Heartstone Pendant against her" | | 11 | "she breathed, watching her breath" | | 12 | "Isolde stepped forward, placing her" | | 13 | "The air around her palm" | | 14 | "Isolde instructed, already stepping forward" | | 15 | "Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx," | | 16 | "the shade offered" | | 17 | "Aurora muttered, but squared her" | | 18 | "The world turned inside out." | | 19 | "Colors inverted, sound muffled, and" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Isolde could answer, the" | | 1 | "As if in response, the" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 66.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The dagger felt impossibly light yet somehow substantial, as if it contained something more than mere metal." | | 1 | "Flowers in colors she had never seen before—hues that seemed to exist somewhere between purple and green, blue and orange—bloomed along the edges of the trail." | | 2 | "She pulled it out, and the crimson gem pulsed with light that reflected across the pool's surface." | | 3 | "The Fae-Forged Blade at Aurora's hip seemed to grow colder, as if responding to the mention of demons." | | 4 | "As if in response, the standing stones at the edge of the clearing began to glow with an inner light, creating a rough circle around them." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their whisper-voice stronger here" | | 1 | "Aurora asked, unease creeping up her spine" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed, their shadowy form retreating slightly" | | 3 | "Nyx explained, their voice tighter than before" | | 4 | "Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes reflecting the vision" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 5 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 6 | "Isolde observed (observe)" | | 7 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 8 | "Nyx explained (explain)" | | 9 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 10 | "Isolde explained (explain)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.477 | | leniency | 0.955 | | rawRatio | 0.524 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |