Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1YGRCD9ZBCPV238N1EE2

Run Details

Duration:
41.2s
Cost:
$0.036195
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stared at the Fae-Forged Blade in her palm, its moonsilver surface catching what little light filtered through the ancient oaks surrounding them. The dagger felt impossibly light yet somehow substantial, as if it contained something more than mere metal. "Are you certain this is the place?" she asked, glancing at Isolde. The half-Fae woman stood motionless, her silver hair drifting around her shoulders though no breeze touched them. Her pale lavender eyes reflected nothing as she gazed into the middle distance. "The veil parts where old stones whisper," Isolde murmured, her voice like leaves rustling. "Winter's grip loosens boundaries." Nyx materialized more fully beside them, their shadowy form solidifying just enough to appear as a tall, humanoid silhouette with faintly glowing violet eyes. The temperature around them dropped several degrees. "She means yes," they translated, their voice a whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. "The winter solstice weakens the Veil. If there's ever a time to cross, it's tonight." Aurora nodded, slipping the blade into her jacket. The Heartstone Pendant against her chest had grown increasingly warm as they'd ventured deeper into Richmond Park, following Isolde's cryptic directions until they'd reached this hidden clearing ringed by ancient oak standing stones. "Alright," she breathed, watching her breath mist in the cold air. "How do we—" Isolde stepped forward, placing her hand on the nearest standing stone. The air around her palm rippled like heat haze, spreading outward until the entire clearing seemed to waver and distort. "Walk through the oldest memory," Isolde instructed, already stepping forward into the shimmering air. Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx, whose shadowy form wavered with what might have been anxiety. "After you," the shade offered. "Coward," Aurora muttered, but squared her shoulders and followed Isolde into the shimmer. The world turned inside out. Colors inverted, sound muffled, and for one terrible moment Aurora felt as though her body had been pulled in every direction at once. Then reality snapped back into focus, and she stumbled forward onto soft grass that definitely wasn't the frosty ground of Richmond Park in December. The air smelled of wildflowers and honey. The temperature had risen from bitter winter to pleasant spring. Most shocking of all was the sky visible through the canopy of trees—a deep, impossible violet streaked with ribbons of silver. "Bloody hell," Aurora whispered. The pendant against her chest pulsed with warmth. Nyx materialized beside her, their form more substantial than Aurora had ever seen it—less a collection of shadows and more a person-shaped darkness with distinct features. "The Grove between worlds," Nyx said, their whisper-voice stronger here. "I didn't think it was real." Isolde stood several paces ahead, waiting patiently. Around her, flowers bloomed with each footfall, only to fade moments later. The ground beneath her feet remained unmarked. "The Fae-touched land remembers what was forgotten," she said, gesturing to a path that hadn't been visible a moment before. "Come." The path wound between trees that seemed to shift position when Aurora wasn't looking directly at them. Flowers in colors she had never seen before—hues that seemed to exist somewhere between purple and green, blue and orange—bloomed along the edges of the trail. Some closed as they approached; others turned to follow their movement like curious onlookers. "Don't touch anything," Nyx warned as Aurora reached toward a particularly beautiful bloom. "Fae-touched plants can be... temperamental." The flower in question snapped its petals shut with audible teeth. Aurora jerked her hand back. "Noted." They continued deeper into the Grove. The trees grew taller, their trunks wider and more gnarled. Roots rose from the ground like sleeping serpents, forcing them to step carefully. Occasionally, Aurora thought she glimpsed movement in the spaces between trees—flickers of light, darting shapes, watching eyes. "Are we alone here?" she asked quietly. Isolde's laugh was like distant wind chimes. "One is never truly alone in the Grove. The trees listen. The stones remember. The air carries secrets." "That's not comforting," Aurora muttered. "She means there are likely minor Fae watching us," Nyx translated. "Pixies, sprites, possibly a brownie or two. Nothing dangerous unless provoked." As they walked, the Grove revealed more wonders. A stream crossed their path, its water flowing uphill rather than down. Mushrooms grew in perfect circles, glowing with soft bioluminescence though it wasn't yet dark. Butterflies with wings like stained glass flitted between flowers, leaving trails of sparkling dust in their wake. The path widened, eventually opening into a clearing dominated by a massive oak tree. Its trunk was wide enough that all three of them together couldn't have circled it with outstretched arms. Its branches created a canopy that somehow both blocked and magnified the strange violet sky above. Beneath the tree sat a pool of water so still it looked like polished obsidian. "The Seeing Pool," Isolde said, approaching it with reverence. "The heart of my exile, the eye through which I glimpse what might be." Aurora felt the Heartstone Pendant grow warmer against her skin. She pulled it out, and the crimson gem pulsed with light that reflected across the pool's surface. "It knows you," Isolde observed, her head tilting in that uncanny way that made her seem more fae than human. "The stone from Dymas recognizes its kin." "What does that mean?" Aurora asked, unease creeping up her spine. Before Isolde could answer, the surface of the pool rippled. The reflection of the pendant distorted, stretched, and suddenly the water showed not their faces but another place entirely—a landscape of amber skies and lush vineyards stretching to the horizon. "Dymas," Nyx breathed, their shadowy form retreating slightly. "The realm of Gluttony." The vision shifted, showing lavish feasts laid out on tables that stretched for miles. Beautiful people with hungry eyes ate and drank without cease, their faces twisted in ecstasy and pain. In the distance loomed a palace of white marble veined with gold. "Belphegor's domain," Nyx explained, their voice tighter than before. "Prince of Gluttony." The image rippled again, focusing on a particular figure moving through the palace halls—tall, elegant, with the bearing of authority. "He searches," Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes reflecting the vision. "The prince seeks what was taken." Aurora clutched the pendant. "This? He's looking for this?" The pool darkened suddenly, the vision disappearing as though a stone had been dropped into it. When it cleared, it showed only their reflections once more. Isolde's expression remained serene, but a new tension had entered her shoulders. "The Grove keeps its secrets, even from me. But it showed you this for a reason, Aurora Carter." The trees around the clearing seemed to lean in, their branches creaking. The air grew heavy with anticipation. Even the minor fae Aurora had glimpsed earlier emerged partially from hiding—tiny faces peering from behind leaves, glowing eyes watching from the shadows. "What does it mean?" Aurora asked, tucking the pendant back under her shirt. "It means," Nyx said gravely, "that your pendant isn't just from Dymas—it's important to Dymas. To its prince. And sooner or later, he'll realize it's here on Earth." The Fae-Forged Blade at Aurora's hip seemed to grow colder, as if responding to the mention of demons. The wildflowers that had bloomed consistently since their arrival began to close, one by one. "The time between times grows short," Isolde said, gazing up at the violet sky, which had begun to darken at its edges. "The Grove will not hold us much longer." As if in response, the standing stones at the edge of the clearing began to glow with an inner light, creating a rough circle around them. "The doorway reopens," Isolde explained. "The journey shown, the warning given. What comes next is yours to forge, Aurora Carter." Aurora looked between Nyx and Isolde, then back at the now-placid pool. The Heartstone Pendant had cooled against her skin, but she could still feel it there—a weight far greater than its physical presence. "Right," she said finally. "Back to London, then. I think we have research to do."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:45:12.892Z" 2/19/2026, 10:45:12 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Isolde instructed already [already]"
1"she asked quietly [quietly]"
2"Nyx said gravely [gravely]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.568
leniency1
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.16
81.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1351
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"truly"
2"suddenly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1351
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"whisper"
count3
1
word"wavered"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"footfall"
count1
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"uncanny"
count1
8
word"loomed"
count1
9
word"marble"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"anticipation"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"wavered"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"footfall"
5"comforting"
6"perfect"
7"uncanny"
8"loomed"
9"marble"
10"tension"
11"anticipation"
12"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences85
matches
0"d with warmth"
1"y with anticipation"
8.40% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1334
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1067
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde16
Nyx10
Aurora19
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Richmond2
Park2
December1
Grove2
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
3"Pendant"
places
0"Fae-Forged"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"December"
globalScore0.61
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere"
1"trees that seemed to shift position when Aurora wasn't looking directly at them"
2"hues that seemed to exist somewhere between purple and green, blue and orange—bloomed along the edges of the trail"
3"looked like polished obsidian"
4"as if responding to the mention of demons"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.75
wordCount1334
matches
0"not their faces but another place entirely"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean24.25
std13.02
cv0.537
sampleLengths
040
112
230
318
431
532
641
714
831
914
1015
115
1213
135
1447
1538
1612
1726
1816
1926
2021
2157
2218
2311
246
2546
267
2725
285
2922
3051
3148
3215
3323
3427
3527
3611
3740
3812
3943
4012
4120
4216
439
4426
4530
4641
4713
4828
4933
97.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"been pulled"
1"been dropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs198
matches
0"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences104
ratio0.087
matches
0"Most shocking of all was the sky visible through the canopy of trees—a deep, impossible violet streaked with ribbons of silver."
1"Nyx materialized beside her, their form more substantial than Aurora had ever seen it—less a collection of shadows and more a person-shaped darkness with distinct features."
2"Flowers in colors she had never seen before—hues that seemed to exist somewhere between purple and green, blue and orange—bloomed along the edges of the trail."
3"Some closed as they approached; others turned to follow their movement like curious onlookers."
4"Occasionally, Aurora thought she glimpsed movement in the spaces between trees—flickers of light, darting shapes, watching eyes."
5"The reflection of the pendant distorted, stretched, and suddenly the water showed not their faces but another place entirely—a landscape of amber skies and lush vineyards stretching to the horizon."
6"The image rippled again, focusing on a particular figure moving through the palace halls—tall, elegant, with the bearing of authority."
7"Even the minor fae Aurora had glimpsed earlier emerged partially from hiding—tiny faces peering from behind leaves, glowing eyes watching from the shadows."
8"The Heartstone Pendant had cooled against her skin, but she could still feel it there—a weight far greater than its physical presence."
91.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1081
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.04902867715078631
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.020351526364477335
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.83
std6.72
cv0.524
sampleLengths
023
117
212
317
413
514
64
724
87
917
1015
118
1233
1311
143
1511
1620
1714
1815
195
2013
215
2223
2324
247
2510
2621
274
288
2926
3010
316
327
3312
347
3520
361
3717
3826
3914
4013
415
4211
435
441
456
4610
4713
4817
497
71.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.49038461538461536
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then reality snapped back into"
1"Occasionally, Aurora thought she glimpsed"
2"Even the minor fae Aurora"
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences81
matches
0"she asked, glancing at Isolde"
1"Her pale lavender eyes reflected"
2"they translated, their voice a"
3"she breathed, watching her breath"
4"she said, gesturing to a"
5"They continued deeper into the"
6"she asked quietly"
7"Its trunk was wide enough"
8"Its branches created a canopy"
9"She pulled it out, and"
10"she said finally"
ratio0.136
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences81
matches
0"Aurora stared at the Fae-Forged"
1"The dagger felt impossibly light"
2"she asked, glancing at Isolde"
3"The half-Fae woman stood motionless,"
4"Her pale lavender eyes reflected"
5"Isolde murmured, her voice like"
6"Nyx materialized more fully beside"
7"The temperature around them dropped"
8"they translated, their voice a"
9"Aurora nodded, slipping the blade"
10"The Heartstone Pendant against her"
11"she breathed, watching her breath"
12"Isolde stepped forward, placing her"
13"The air around her palm"
14"Isolde instructed, already stepping forward"
15"Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx,"
16"the shade offered"
17"Aurora muttered, but squared her"
18"The world turned inside out."
19"Colors inverted, sound muffled, and"
ratio0.852
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Before Isolde could answer, the"
1"As if in response, the"
ratio0.025
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The dagger felt impossibly light yet somehow substantial, as if it contained something more than mere metal."
1"Flowers in colors she had never seen before—hues that seemed to exist somewhere between purple and green, blue and orange—bloomed along the edges of the trail."
2"She pulled it out, and the crimson gem pulsed with light that reflected across the pool's surface."
3"The Fae-Forged Blade at Aurora's hip seemed to grow colder, as if responding to the mention of demons."
4"As if in response, the standing stones at the edge of the clearing began to glow with an inner light, creating a rough circle around them."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx said, their whisper-voice stronger here"
1"Aurora asked, unease creeping up her spine"
2"Nyx breathed, their shadowy form retreating slightly"
3"Nyx explained, their voice tighter than before"
4"Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes reflecting the vision"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
3"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx warned (warn)"
5"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
6"Isolde observed (observe)"
7"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
8"Nyx explained (explain)"
9"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
10"Isolde explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.477
leniency0.955
rawRatio0.524
effectiveRatio0.5
73.9187%