Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR26HCC9QYNH1DJXA5F89K

Run Details

Duration:
5.4s
Cost:
$0.000186

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The park’s gates groaned shut behind her, the iron bars twisting like bones in the wind. Aurora adjusted the strap of her delivery bag and exhaled through her nose, the cold air stinging her lungs. *Richmond Park at midnight.* Not the most sensible choice, but the address on the order slip had been clear enough—somewhere in the grove, past the standing stones. She’d told herself it was just a late-night delivery for Golden Empress, nothing more. A lie even she could taste. The path twisted through the dark, the torchlight flickering against the bark of ancient oaks. Their branches stretched like skeletal fingers, blocking the moon. The grove’s air smelled wrong—damp earth and something metallic, like old blood. She paused, listening. The usual night sounds were there: owls, distant traffic, the rustle of small creatures. But beneath it, something else pulsed, a rhythm too slow, too deliberate. Her fingers twitched toward the pendant tucked under her shirt. The Heartstone. It hadn’t warmed since she’d left the flat, but that didn’t mean anything. A twig snapped. Aurora froze. The sound came from the left, where the path narrowed between two towering oaks. She turned slowly, her pulse hammering in her throat. Nothing. Just shadows. She stepped forward, then stopped again. The air had thickened, pressing against her skin like a second layer of clothing. She could feel it—*them*—watching. A whisper slithered through the trees. It wasn’t wind. It wasn’t a person. It was a voice, but not a voice. A sound made of teeth and something wet. Aurora’s breath hitched. She swallowed hard, forcing her voice steady. “Hello?” Silence. Too much silence. She took another step, her boots crunching on dead leaves. The pendant burned against her ribs. *Something’s here.* The thought wasn’t fear yet—it was certainty, cold and sharp. She could feel it in the way her skin prickled, in the way her breath came faster, in the way the trees seemed to lean in just a little closer. A branch scraped against her shoulder. Aurora yelped, whirling. The torchlight caught nothing but bark. She stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. The torchlight wavered, then flickered— —and the grove *shifted*. The path behind her was gone. In its place, a clearing opened, too wide, too perfect. The standing stones stood in a circle, their surfaces smooth as polished bone. The air hummed, vibrating against her teeth. She could see now, really see—the way the shadows moved on their own, the way the flowers along the path *twitched* as if touched by an unseen hand. A figure stepped into the torchlight. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs were long, jointed wrong, like a spider’s. Its skin was pale, almost translucent, and when it moved, the moonlight caught the way it *folded* at the knees, the way its fingers elongated into claws. It didn’t speak. It didn’t need to. Aurora’s breath came in ragged gasps. The pendant burned hot against her chest. She reached for it, fingers trembling, and the moment her skin touched the silver chain— —the world *screamed*. The grove convulsed. The trees bent like reeds in a storm. The figure lunged. Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. She fell hard, the torch clattering from her grip. Darkness swallowed her. Then—silence. A hand closed around her wrist. Not the figure’s. *Hers.* She blinked, her vision swimming. The pendant glowed crimson in the dark, pulsing like a heartbeat. The grove was still. Too still. A voice, rough and familiar, cut through the quiet. “Rory?” She turned her head. The figure crouched beside her, its face half-lit by the pendant’s glow. Not a stranger. *Eva.* Her childhood friend, her anchor in the storm. Her eyes were wide, wild. “You shouldn’t have come here,” Eva whispered. “Not alone.” Aurora’s lips moved, but no sound came out. The grove held its breath.
total_cost0.00018590000000000005

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount649
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount649
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"wavered"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"pulse"
2"could feel"
3"whisper"
4"silence"
5"wavered"
6"flickered"
7"perfect"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords13
totalWords642
ratio0.02
matches
0"Richmond Park at midnight."
1"them"
2"Something’s here."
3"shifted"
4"twitched"
5"folded"
6"screamed"
7"Hers."
8"Eva."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount633
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone1
Aurora7
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Park"
globalScore0.947
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
44.24% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.558
wordCount642
matches
0"Not the most sensible choice, but the address on the order slip had been clear enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean25.68
std25.56
cv0.995
sampleLengths
082
190
23
352
46
534
64
758
86
923
104
1164
126
1346
1428
153
1614
1721
181
1932
209
211
2233
239
2413
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences83
ratio0.12
matches
0"*Richmond Park at midnight.* Not the most sensible choice, but the address on the order slip had been clear enough—somewhere in the grove, past the standing stones."
1"The grove’s air smelled wrong—damp earth and something metallic, like old blood."
2"She could feel it—*them*—watching."
3"*Something’s here.* The thought wasn’t fear yet—it was certainty, cold and sharp."
4"The torchlight wavered, then flickered—"
5"—and the grove *shifted*."
6"She could see now, really see—the way the shadows moved on their own, the way the flowers along the path *twitched* as if touched by an unseen hand."
7"She reached for it, fingers trembling, and the moment her skin touched the silver chain—"
8"—the world *screamed*."
9"Then—silence."
96.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount640
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.04375
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean7.73
std6.19
cv0.8
sampleLengths
016
119
227
314
46
515
69
712
83
914
1012
1110
122
1313
143
152
1614
179
181
192
206
2114
224
236
243
254
268
278
283
297
301
311
323
3310
346
3512
3630
376
383
396
409
415
424
436
4410
4513
467
4728
486
491
41.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3132530120481928
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners26
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Too much silence."
ratio0.014
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences70
matches
0"She’d told herself it was"
1"Their branches stretched like skeletal"
2"She paused, listening."
3"Her fingers twitched toward the"
4"It hadn’t warmed since she’d"
5"She turned slowly, her pulse"
6"She stepped forward, then stopped"
7"She could feel it—*them*—watching."
8"It wasn’t wind."
9"It wasn’t a person."
10"It was a voice, but"
11"She swallowed hard, forcing her"
12"She took another step, her"
13"She could feel it in"
14"She stumbled back, her heel"
15"She could see now, really"
16"Its limbs were long, jointed"
17"Its skin was pale, almost"
18"It didn’t speak."
19"It didn’t need to."
ratio0.357
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"The park’s gates groaned shut"
1"Aurora adjusted the strap of"
2"*Richmond Park at midnight.* Not"
3"She’d told herself it was"
4"A lie even she could"
5"The path twisted through the"
6"Their branches stretched like skeletal"
7"The grove’s air smelled wrong—damp"
8"She paused, listening."
9"The usual night sounds were"
10"Her fingers twitched toward the"
11"It hadn’t warmed since she’d"
12"A twig snapped."
13"The sound came from the"
14"She turned slowly, her pulse"
15"She stepped forward, then stopped"
16"The air had thickened, pressing"
17"She could feel it—*them*—watching."
18"A whisper slithered through the"
19"It wasn’t wind."
ratio0.914
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"—and the grove *shifted*."
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
78.9406%