| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 649 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 649 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 642 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park at midnight." | | 1 | "them" | | 2 | "Something’s here." | | 3 | "shifted" | | 4 | "twitched" | | 5 | "folded" | | 6 | "screamed" | | 7 | "Hers." | | 8 | "Eva." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 633 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.947 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.24% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.558 | | wordCount | 642 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the most sensible choice, but the address on the order slip had been clear enough" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 25.68 | | std | 25.56 | | cv | 0.995 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 90 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.12 | | matches | | 0 | "*Richmond Park at midnight.* Not the most sensible choice, but the address on the order slip had been clear enough—somewhere in the grove, past the standing stones." | | 1 | "The grove’s air smelled wrong—damp earth and something metallic, like old blood." | | 2 | "She could feel it—*them*—watching." | | 3 | "*Something’s here.* The thought wasn’t fear yet—it was certainty, cold and sharp." | | 4 | "The torchlight wavered, then flickered—" | | 5 | "—and the grove *shifted*." | | 6 | "She could see now, really see—the way the shadows moved on their own, the way the flowers along the path *twitched* as if touched by an unseen hand." | | 7 | "She reached for it, fingers trembling, and the moment her skin touched the silver chain—" | | 8 | "—the world *screamed*." | | 9 | "Then—silence." |
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| 96.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 640 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.04375 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003125 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 7.73 | | std | 6.19 | | cv | 0.8 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 41.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3132530120481928 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 47.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 77.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d told herself it was" | | 1 | "Their branches stretched like skeletal" | | 2 | "She paused, listening." | | 3 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 4 | "It hadn’t warmed since she’d" | | 5 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 6 | "She stepped forward, then stopped" | | 7 | "She could feel it—*them*—watching." | | 8 | "It wasn’t wind." | | 9 | "It wasn’t a person." | | 10 | "It was a voice, but" | | 11 | "She swallowed hard, forcing her" | | 12 | "She took another step, her" | | 13 | "She could feel it in" | | 14 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 15 | "She could see now, really" | | 16 | "Its limbs were long, jointed" | | 17 | "Its skin was pale, almost" | | 18 | "It didn’t speak." | | 19 | "It didn’t need to." |
| | ratio | 0.357 | |
| 2.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The park’s gates groaned shut" | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "*Richmond Park at midnight.* Not" | | 3 | "She’d told herself it was" | | 4 | "A lie even she could" | | 5 | "The path twisted through the" | | 6 | "Their branches stretched like skeletal" | | 7 | "The grove’s air smelled wrong—damp" | | 8 | "She paused, listening." | | 9 | "The usual night sounds were" | | 10 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 11 | "It hadn’t warmed since she’d" | | 12 | "A twig snapped." | | 13 | "The sound came from the" | | 14 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 15 | "She stepped forward, then stopped" | | 16 | "The air had thickened, pressing" | | 17 | "She could feel it—*them*—watching." | | 18 | "A whisper slithered through the" | | 19 | "It wasn’t wind." |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "—and the grove *shifted*." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |