Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR27JPHETJXEBNJGYPCS5J

Run Details

Duration:
5.7s
Cost:
$0.000178
Provider:
Hyperbolic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slid onto the stool at the end of the bar, her straight black hair falling in a neat curtain down her back as she gazed around the dimly lit space of The Raven's Nest. The air was thick with the smell of smoke and stale beer, and the soft hum of conversations provided a comforting background noise. She settled her hands on the bar, fidgeting with the small silver Eiffel Tower pendant her friend Eva had given her, her bright blue eyes roving the room. It wasn't terribly late, the crowd was a mix of locals and whoever had wandered off the Soho streets looking for a quiet drink. Rory's gaze landed on a figure sitting in the corner, his grey-streaked auburn hair a hint of familiarity. Silas, her friend and the owner of The Raven's Nest, looked up as she made eye contact and raised an eyebrow, his hazel eyes narrowing as he began to make his way around the bar towards her. As he reached her side, Rory slid off her stool to give him a tight hug. 'It's been ages,' Silas replied, patting her back before releasing her from the hold. 'Still wreaking havoc on the streets of London, I presume?' Rory laughed, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. 'Guilty as charged.' She climbed back onto her stool, snagging a stool next to him and eyeing the array of whiskeys at the end of the bar. 'I'll have the same as you, please.' Rory's drink arrived, and she removed the cork from the bottle, taking a deep sniff of the whiskey before adding it to her tumbler. As she rotated the glass between her hands, her eyes drifted towards the corner of the bar where a lone figure sat engrossed in a book. At the far end of the bar, she caught a glimpse of a man stepping out of the shadows and approaching Silas. The sound of the TV, old grainy footage of protests and marches, flickered to life as he slid onto the stool opposite them. His eyes locked onto Rory, and in an instant, she felt the air in the room constrict. His name, Evan, flashed through her mind, before settling on a hostile stare. 'Evan.' Rory rose to her feet, her voice measured, her eyes locked on to the lines bracketing his mouth. 'Long time, Rory.' His hands folded across his chest, an incongruous grin twisting across his face, showcasing crooked teeth he'd always needed to visit a dentist to repair. A soft growl emanated from the pit of Rory's stomach as memories, uninvited, began to resurface. The constrained pause hung heavy, only growing thicker as Silas cleared his throat, folding his hands into his lap, he met Evan's piercing stare unblinking. 'Don't get too comfortable, Evan.' He leaned in closer without shifting his position. A tense smirk appeared on Rory's face. Silas yelled, ushering Rory a little closer, toward the dim. Darkness shrouded the place behind Rory. His voice controlled but glowing quiet light rolled through her body and an accent settled softly over her skin. She retorted... <Rory's voice slid into the silence, smooth and detached>Even after all this time, the memory of him still managed to leave a bitter taste on my palate. A ripple dissolved nervous undertones. Darkness issued quietly up. His scared reply chased nervous tension down the throats of the small gathered group. His nervous spoken reply reclaimed her. As security removed him from The Raven's Nest sound swarmed in retort over silence within Rory at Silas reacted.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount595
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount595
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"comfortable"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"eyebrow"
2"charged"
3"flickered"
4"measured"
5"stomach"
6"comfortable"
7"silence"
8"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences26
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences26
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"managed to"
82.55% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences33
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0.03
matches
0"<Rory's voice slid into the silence, smooth and detached>Even after all this time, the memory of him still managed to leave a bitter taste on my palate."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords594
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount466
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest3
Eiffel1
Tower1
Eva1
Soho1
Rory11
Silas5
Evan2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
places
0"Eiffel"
1"Tower"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.32
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences23
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount594
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean42.43
std22.05
cv0.52
sampleLengths
086
179
250
334
450
575
619
744
838
923
1021
1127
1223
1325
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs74
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount182
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.02197802197802198
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.01098901098901099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences33
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences33
mean18
std8.84
cv0.491
sampleLengths
035
123
228
324
418
537
616
714
820
927
107
1124
1226
1322
1423
1517
1613
1719
1828
1916
2025
2113
227
2310
246
2519
262
2727
285
294
3014
316
3219
74.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.48484848484848486
totalSentences33
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences25
matches
0"She settled her hands on"
1"It wasn't terribly late, the"
2"His eyes locked onto Rory,"
3"His name, Evan, flashed through"
4"His voice controlled but glowing"
5"His scared reply chased nervous"
6"His nervous spoken reply reclaimed"
ratio0.28
40.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount21
totalSentences25
matches
0"Rory slid onto the stool"
1"The air was thick with"
2"She settled her hands on"
3"It wasn't terribly late, the"
4"Rory's gaze landed on a"
5"Silas, her friend and the"
6"Rory's drink arrived, and she"
7"The sound of the TV,"
8"His eyes locked onto Rory,"
9"His name, Evan, flashed through"
10"A soft growl emanated from"
11"The constrained pause hung heavy,"
12"A tense smirk appeared on"
13"Silas yelled, ushering Rory a"
14"Darkness shrouded the place behind"
15"His voice controlled but glowing"
16"<Rory's voice slid into the"
17"A ripple dissolved nervous undertones."
18"Darkness issued quietly up."
19"His scared reply chased nervous"
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The constrained pause hung heavy, only growing thicker as Silas cleared his throat, folding his hands into his lap, he met Evan's piercing stare unblinking."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.2278%