Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR27SKDB7QET0V8H70AJ77

Run Details

Duration:
14.0s
Cost:
$0.000669
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stepped into The Raven’s Nest with a hesitant breeze of air, her coat collar pulled high against the damp London evening. The warm glow of the green sign flickered softly, catching her eye as she pushed through the heavy door, letting it swing shut behind her. Inside, the dim lighting cast long shadows across the walls, where maps and photographs hung like silent witnesses to forgotten stories. She paused in the entryway, nostrils flaring as she took in the familiar mix of leather and spiced whiskey. Her eyes darted around, searching for someone she’d never quite felt at home with anymore. The bar was busy but not crowded, the hum of subdued conversations blending into a steady rhythm. Her boots found a spot near the counter, and she gave a quick, instinctive glance at the seated figures. Then she saw him—Silas Blackwood—already perched on a barstool, a glass half-emptied in front of him. His face, lined but steady, seemed somewhat softer than she remembered, though the hazel eyes still held that quiet, calculating edge. She hesitated for a beat before approaching, her fingers tightening on the strap of her bag. As she moved closer, her heart skipped briefly—years had carved their mark on her, transforming her from the girl she’d once been. She reached the bar and cleared her throat, voice rough from disuse. “Silas?” He turned slowly, eyes narrowing just a fraction, like he’d been expecting her without knowing what shape she’d take. Recognition flickered in his gaze. His lips curled into a faint, almost imperceptible smile, or maybe it was just a reflex. “Well, if it isn’t Rory,” he said, voice gravelly but dry. “Been a while.” She took a breath, unwrapping her scarf, feeling the years weight heavy on her shoulders. “Yeah. Too long.” Silas scooted to the side, nodding toward the empty stool beside him. “Join me?” She hesitated, then pulled out a chair, sliding onto it with a stiffness she thought she’d left behind. The silence stretched for a second, filled only by the subtle clink of glassware and the low murmur of a saxophonist somewhere in the back. He studied her for a moment, no longer the young woman who’d once run wild through London with reckless abandon. Her shoulders bore stories he knew nothing about, her eyes wary but sharp, haunted perhaps. “So,” Silas finally broke the quiet, voice low, almost cautious. “What brings you back here?” She glanced down at her hands, fidgeted with the hem of her sleeve. “An old friend. I was passing through and thought… hell, I don’t know what I thought.” He chuckled softly, a sound not entirely pleasant. “That’s the trouble with old friends. They tend to show up when you least expect it, and change your expectations.” Rory looked up, meeting his gaze, and saw the flicker of memories—the young, bright-eyed girl she’d once been, and the man who’d seemed like the anchor of her drifting ship. Now, he looked different, haunted in quiet ways, like he carried secrets beneath his calm exterior. “You look good,” she said, voice softer than she intended. He shrugged, fingering the signet ring on his right hand. “Life’s a series of quiet compromises.” “Yeah?” Her lips tugged into a half-smile. “I’d say it’s more like a constant fight to keep from falling apart.” His eyes softened, just slightly. “And yet, here we are—both still standing.” She sensed a distant, unspoken weight between them. Time had done things to them neither of them openly acknowledged. She knew what she’d become—someone determined to forge new paths, far from her past, from the violence of Evan, from the tangled web of regret and survival. And Silas? She wondered how much of him had remained intact beneath the veneer of the seasoned spy, how many memories haunted those hazel eyes when the bar was quiet. “Remember that night in Prague?” she asked, voice tentative. He raised an eyebrow. “How could I forget? You played that deadpan look pretty well, delivering that message right on cue.” She smirked. “You always had a knack for remembering the details that didn’t matter.” “Some things stick,” he muttered, then reached for his glass, swirling the amber liquid. “You disappeared after that.” “Had to.” He nodded slowly. “You slipped away, then reappeared in London like some ghost. Switched cities, lives, identities—whatever you call it, your ghosting isn’t exactly a secret anymore.” She looked down, her fingers tracing an invisible pattern on the bar. “I had to. You know how it is.” He leaned back, considering her with a faint smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “Yeah, I do. I’ve been running, too. Different reasons, same game.” They both knew the game they played—one of masks, half-truths, and delicate hope. She studied the lines carved into his face, the small limp in his walk, the weathered voice that carried stories he wasn’t sharing. “You look different,” she said softly. “Who do I look like?” he shot back, dry. “Someone’s seen too much.” Her voice cracked slightly but she pushed through. “A lot’s happened.” He paused, eyeing her with that quiet scrutiny. “You’re not the girl I used to know. That girl wouldn’t have run. She’d have fought her way out, made her own luck.” Aurora’s eyes flicked to the glass in her hand, then back to him. “Maybe I did. Maybe I still do.” He nodded, a faint smile touching the corners of his mouth. “Luck’s a brutal mistress. You’re better at the game than most. Still got that quick mind of yours.” Her throat tightened. “Sometimes I wonder if I’ve become something I don’t recognize.” Silas met her gaze again, steady as always. “We all do. That’s the deal with time. It erases some things, leaves others scarred. You look like you carry that weight well.” She reached for her glass, her fingers trembling slightly. “I’ve had worse fights than this.” He looked at her, the faintest trace of regret crossing his face, then looked away, spotting a familiar figure across the room. “Tell me,” he said quietly, “what’s the last thing you wanted to leave behind?” She hesitated, then answered simply, “Haven’t decided yet.” Outside, the rain tapped softly against the windows, mirroring the quiet storm inside them. Neither of them spoke again, just sat there, shadows of the past flickering behind their eyes as the bar carried on around them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"She hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.229
58.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1078
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"softly"
count4
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1078
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"determined"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"calculating"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"flicker"
6"unspoken"
7"determined"
8"eyebrow"
9"tracing"
10"flicked"
11"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1066
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount778
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Silas5
Blackwood1
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed somewhat softer than she remembered, though the hazel eyes still held that quiet, calculating edge"
1"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1066
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean24.79
std15.25
cv0.615
sampleLengths
069
151
256
350
41
540
614
718
814
943
1035
1115
1229
1328
1446
1510
1616
1720
1812
1946
2030
219
2221
2314
2418
252
2627
2720
2826
2936
306
319
3215
3331
3420
3529
3613
3731
3815
3922
4014
418
4237
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"wasn’t sharing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences83
ratio0.06
matches
0"Then she saw him—Silas Blackwood—already perched on a barstool, a glass half-emptied in front of him."
1"As she moved closer, her heart skipped briefly—years had carved their mark on her, transforming her from the girl she’d once been."
2"Rory looked up, meeting his gaze, and saw the flicker of memories—the young, bright-eyed girl she’d once been, and the man who’d seemed like the anchor of her drifting ship."
3"She knew what she’d become—someone determined to forge new paths, far from her past, from the violence of Evan, from the tangled web of regret and survival."
4"They both knew the game they played—one of masks, half-truths, and delicate hope."
69.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount788
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"young, bright-eyed girl"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.06598984771573604
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.021573604060913704
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean12.84
std7.16
cv0.557
sampleLengths
023
125
221
319
415
517
619
716
821
916
1022
1112
121
1319
145
1516
1611
173
1815
193
2012
212
2218
2325
2420
2515
2610
275
2813
2916
308
3120
3230
3316
3410
3510
366
377
3813
395
407
418
4211
4327
442
4528
469
474
4817
492
82.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4939759036144578
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners41
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Then she saw him—Silas Blackwood—already"
ratio0.018
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences57
matches
0"She paused in the entryway,"
1"Her eyes darted around, searching"
2"Her boots found a spot"
3"His face, lined but steady,"
4"She hesitated for a beat"
5"She reached the bar and"
6"He turned slowly, eyes narrowing"
7"His lips curled into a"
8"he said, voice gravelly but"
9"She took a breath, unwrapping"
10"She hesitated, then pulled out"
11"He studied her for a"
12"Her shoulders bore stories he"
13"She glanced down at her"
14"He chuckled softly, a sound"
15"she said, voice softer than"
16"He shrugged, fingering the signet"
17"Her lips tugged into a"
18"His eyes softened, just slightly."
19"She sensed a distant, unspoken"
ratio0.702
3.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences57
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped into The"
1"The warm glow of the"
2"She paused in the entryway,"
3"Her eyes darted around, searching"
4"The bar was busy but"
5"Her boots found a spot"
6"His face, lined but steady,"
7"She hesitated for a beat"
8"She reached the bar and"
9"He turned slowly, eyes narrowing"
10"Recognition flickered in his gaze."
11"His lips curled into a"
12"he said, voice gravelly but"
13"She took a breath, unwrapping"
14"Silas scooted to the side,"
15"She hesitated, then pulled out"
16"The silence stretched for a"
17"He studied her for a"
18"Her shoulders bore stories he"
19"Silas finally broke the quiet,"
ratio0.912
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Now, he looked different, haunted"
ratio0.018
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She hesitated for a beat before approaching, her fingers tightening on the strap of her bag."
1"She took a breath, unwrapping her scarf, feeling the years weight heavy on her shoulders."
2"Rory looked up, meeting his gaze, and saw the flicker of memories—the young, bright-eyed girl she’d once been, and the man who’d seemed like the anchor of her d…"
3"She studied the lines carved into his face, the small limp in his walk, the weathered voice that carried stories he wasn’t sharing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice gravelly but dry"
1"she said, voice softer than she intended"
2"she asked, voice tentative"
3"he shot back, dry"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.343
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.057
73.1163%