Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR297GKCWGB8TYQ9AK967V

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
42.1s
Cost:
$0.015456
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Knuckles rapped against chipped white wood—a rhythm out of place with the steady hum of the curry house below. Aurora Carter watched the door as she padded through the cramped darkness of Eva’s flat, a book tucked under one arm. She exchanged a quick glance with Ptolemy, the cat curled methodically upon a pile of crumpled maps. The knock came again, insistent. She nudged a folio off the desk, snapped the last deadbolt, hesitated. Who in their right mind tried social calls at half eleven? She cracked the door a careful inch. The corridor glowed sickly yellow from a dying bulb, and in the centre of that flickering pool stood Lucien Moreau—still tall and elegant, the same as months ago. If ‘the Frenchman’ looked any different since the last time she’d seen him, it was only that his tailored charcoal suit looked even more at home on him than she remembered. His cane glimmered at his side, ivory handle catching the light. Heterochromatic eyes swept over her face—left bright, right impossibly black. “Evening, Aurora. Have I caught you before some scandalous rendezvous?” His mouth, always a dangerous line, twitched at the corners. She backed up, heartbeat rabbit-fast. “You have about four minutes before my neighbour rings the police.” He cocked his head, glancing down at Ptolemy, whose tail twitched. “Should I worry about the reception committee?” “Depends.” She shut the book with a snap and let the door swing a little wider. “You stalking me, or is this another one of your business calls?” He stepped in without permission, eyes cataloguing every inch: the stacks of books by the radiator, the cracked lamp with its paper shade. “I see Eva’s taste in interior design hasn’t improved. Still—at least you didn’t run this time.” The door clattered into place behind him, and she busied herself relocking the top bolt. “Don’t flatter yourself. I’m considering the window.” He placed the cane against the wall—a soft clack on the warped floorboards. He had a knack for taking up space, standing at the edge of the cheap throw rug as if he owned the building. “Are you armed?” he asked, dry amusement in his tone. “I'd rather avoid another incident with the kitchen knives.” “Try me.” She tossed her keys into a bowl, watched his hands: ringless, still elegant, no tremble. He surveyed the small room, lingering on an ashtray filled with spent tea lights. “You look the same, Rory.” A breath. “Tired, still stubborn.” Despite herself, her jaw tightened at the old nickname. “What do you want, Lucien?” His gaze flicked over her—cool, naked calculation. Somehow, beneath it, she tasted the old heat. Cardigan slipping off one shoulder, she moved around him to retrieve another stack of notes—barrier and armour. He exhaled through his nose, voice softer now. “I needed to see you. Tonight.” “That so?” she asked, forcing breeziness. He broke their locked gaze to scan the room again, pausing on the crescent shadow of her childhood scar peeking from her sleeve. “You’re safe, yes? No trouble with Evan. I heard—” “You keep tabs on me, now?” She dropped the clippings on the table, unable to hold back sharpness. “You know I do.” His expression shifted: a flicker of regret, almost imperceptible. “You left in such haste.” A hollow scoff. “And you—what? Vanished after the warehouse job and expected me to chase after you?” He ran a thumb along his jaw, the line where stubble threatened to appear. “You misunderstand. I couldn’t stay. Not with them closing in.” Her mouth tightened. “There’s always someone closing in on you.” He shifted, the polished heel of his shoe grinding out ash on the floor. “You as well, if you remember. I warned you about London—” She cut in, shaking her head. “We’re not here to re-litigate last year.” The tabby leapt onto the table, pinning both their attentions. Aurora stroked Ptolemy’s back—her shield, her excuse to turn away from Lucien’s unreadable stare. He leaned his cane on the wall and unbuttoned his coat. Sharp consonants coloured his next words. “Aurora, they’re looking for you again.” She stiffened. “You could have written. Or rung. Or, I dunno—texted instead of bringing trouble to Eva’s doorstep.” His gaze lingered on her hands, noticing how her fingers shook only when she’d hoped he wouldn’t see. “I came to warn you myself. Because otherwise—” He trailed off, and she snorted, unable to help herself. “You don’t trust anybody.” His lips thinned to a mirthless smile. “A habit I learned quickly, thanks to our line of work.” Pause. Something hung in the dead air—something raw, itching. She met his gaze square on. “You said you’d help. Then you disappeared—without a word. You don’t get to show up and act as if we can just pick up again.” Lucien reached for a battered ring on her kitchen table—finger tracing the curve absently. “And you stopped answering every number that wasn’t Eva’s. You made it very clear.” She studied him now, measured. Outside, a night bus rumbled past. “Why tonight, Lucien?” He straightened. Shadows hugged the sharp planes of his face. “I didn’t like how we left things.” She snorted—a brittle sound escaping her throat. “You think I did?” He took a step closer. She matched, refusing to cede ground. “You don’t scare me,” she muttered. Her fingers sought the scar on her wrist, rubbing old memory. “I never aimed to.” His voice dropped, gravel-thick, that rare fracture in his composure peeking through. “But I can’t pretend I wouldn’t do it all over again, to get you clear of that mess.” “If you were so set, you could have damn well stayed. Or told me why you couldn’t. Instead, you hid.” A muscle in his jaw worked. “You weren’t the only one in danger.” “Always about you, isn’t it?” The accusation bit—the old wound, still open. He rubbed the heel of his palm over his mouth, searching for somewhere to rest his eyes that wasn’t her. “No, Aurora. If it were only me, I wouldn’t be here.” Her chest fluttered with a mixture she hated—anger, relief, something else old and bright. “You always turn up when I’m almost over you.” He barked a short laugh. “Almost?” She glared at him, felt her cheeks grow hot. “Go to hell.” “Probably will.” He grinned, that old wolfish curve. “Missed you, nevertheless.” She looked away, pretended to scan a row of yellowed paperbacks, but her voice tugged low. “You walked out.” He moved close enough that his breath pushed against her skin. “It nearly killed me,” voice rougher than she’d heard it—in English, but vulnerable in a way only French could make beautiful. Silence filled the small room like heavy wool. Ptolemy mewed, tail curling. She swallowed, refusing softness. “What’s your game this time?” His expression sobered. The black in his eye caught the low light, swallowing it. “No game. Just… unfinished things.” She let the moment stretch, left the unfinished end of his sentence twisting between them—dangerous, unsaid. At last, she released a breath. “You’ve got five minutes to explain who’s after me this time, and then you leave.” He nodded, hands dropping to his sides. Neither of them moved toward the kettle, or the door. Only the old ache of longing and resentment surviving the months apart, wrapping tightly around their words.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1239
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
2"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1239
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"fluttered"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"flicker"
2"unreadable"
3"tracing"
4"measured"
5"fluttered"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences79
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount800
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva1
Ptolemy4
Lucien3
Moreau1
Despite1
English1
French1
Silence1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"French"
6"Silence"
places
0"English"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1219
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean20.32
std11.19
cv0.551
sampleLengths
057
15
223
366
421
520
616
718
828
939
1022
1136
1219
1317
1424
1514
1632
1714
186
1932
2018
2118
2217
2324
2410
2525
2613
2724
2823
292
3016
3126
3214
3318
349
3531
3628
3714
3817
3911
4011
4117
4234
4320
4413
4512
4631
4723
486
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences117
ratio0.12
matches
0"Knuckles rapped against chipped white wood—a rhythm out of place with the steady hum of the curry house below."
1"The corridor glowed sickly yellow from a dying bulb, and in the centre of that flickering pool stood Lucien Moreau—still tall and elegant, the same as months ago."
2"Heterochromatic eyes swept over her face—left bright, right impossibly black."
3"He placed the cane against the wall—a soft clack on the warped floorboards."
4"His gaze flicked over her—cool, naked calculation."
5"Cardigan slipping off one shoulder, she moved around him to retrieve another stack of notes—barrier and armour."
6"Aurora stroked Ptolemy’s back—her shield, her excuse to turn away from Lucien’s unreadable stare."
7"Something hung in the dead air—something raw, itching."
8"Lucien reached for a battered ring on her kitchen table—finger tracing the curve absently."
9"She snorted—a brittle sound escaping her throat."
10"“Always about you, isn’t it?” The accusation bit—the old wound, still open."
11"Her chest fluttered with a mixture she hated—anger, relief, something else old and bright."
12"“It nearly killed me,” voice rougher than she’d heard it—in English, but vulnerable in a way only French could make beautiful."
13"She let the moment stretch, left the unfinished end of his sentence twisting between them—dangerous, unsaid."
80.31% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount416
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.0625
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.014423076923076924
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean10.42
std6.06
cv0.581
sampleLengths
019
121
217
35
412
511
67
728
831
911
1010
1120
125
1311
1411
157
1616
1712
1823
1916
2015
217
2213
2323
2410
259
2617
2714
287
293
309
315
327
338
3417
358
366
376
3823
399
4018
4113
425
433
4414
4514
4610
473
487
4914
64.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.41025641025641024
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners48
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Somehow, beneath it, she tasted"
1"Only the old ache of"
ratio0.027
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences73
matches
0"She exchanged a quick glance"
1"She nudged a folio off"
2"She cracked the door a"
3"His cane glimmered at his"
4"His mouth, always a dangerous"
5"She backed up, heartbeat rabbit-fast."
6"He cocked his head, glancing"
7"She shut the book with"
8"He stepped in without permission,"
9"He placed the cane against"
10"He had a knack for"
11"he asked, dry amusement in"
12"She tossed her keys into"
13"He surveyed the small room,"
14"His gaze flicked over her—cool,"
15"He exhaled through his nose,"
16"she asked, forcing breeziness"
17"He broke their locked gaze"
18"She dropped the clippings on"
19"His expression shifted: a flicker"
ratio0.63
21.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences73
matches
0"Knuckles rapped against chipped white"
1"Aurora Carter watched the door"
2"She exchanged a quick glance"
3"The knock came again, insistent."
4"She nudged a folio off"
5"She cracked the door a"
6"The corridor glowed sickly yellow"
7"His cane glimmered at his"
8"His mouth, always a dangerous"
9"She backed up, heartbeat rabbit-fast."
10"He cocked his head, glancing"
11"She shut the book with"
12"He stepped in without permission,"
13"The door clattered into place"
14"He placed the cane against"
15"He had a knack for"
16"he asked, dry amusement in"
17"She tossed her keys into"
18"He surveyed the small room,"
19"His gaze flicked over her—cool,"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He rubbed the heel of his palm over his mouth, searching for somewhere to rest his eyes that wasn’t her."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She dropped, unable to hold back sharpness"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she’d (would)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.078
leniency0.157
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.078
83.3739%