Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2D3ZBSJ54YGWRNR73MTG

Run Details

Duration:
12.8s
Cost:
$0.000687
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the door to The Raven’s Nest, the familiar scent of aged wood and smoky malt curling around her like an old coat. The room was quieter than most nights, shadows stretching long across the walls, punctuated only by the flickering green neon sign above the entrance. She tucked a stray strand of black hair behind her ear, bright blue eyes scanning the dimly lit space for anything or anyone familiar. She hoisted her delivery bag higher on her shoulder, eyes settling on the bar’s polished surface, scattered with bottles and a few half-empty glasses. Silas was there, as he always was, leaning back against the bar with one arm lazily draped over the counter. He looked up the moment she entered, a slow narrowing of hazel eyes breaking his usual stoic expression. He didn’t move from his seat until she approached, pushing her way through a few of the quieter patrons, her boots scraping softly on the wooden floor. “You’ve got some nerve, Rory,” he said, voice low and gravelly, half a chuckle tucked into the words. She stopped a few feet away, hesitating only a moment. “You’re harder to find these days.” He tilted his head, the faintest smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. “I’ve been careful. Not everyone makes a habit of looking.” Her lips pressed into a thin line, the scars from her past flickering behind her eyes—childhood accidents, reckless choices, all buried beneath layers of cool detachment. “I thought the spy stuff was supposed to stay secret.” His gaze sharpened, the weight of unspoken years pressing down on the space between them. “Some secrets don’t stay buried—no matter how much you want them to.” She studied him, noting the years etched into his face—the lines around his eyes, the slight stoop of his shoulders, the way his hands, usually steady and confident, twitched slightly before settling on the bar. “Still the same old Silas,” she said softly. He finally pushed off from the bar, limping slightly as he moved toward her. “You’ve changed, Rory. Or should I say Carter now?” “Less reckless, maybe. More cautious. London does that to a person.” She gestured vaguely, her fingers lingering on her wrist with the small crescent scar. “Things I wanted to forget, I keep close now.” He stepped closer, examining her face. “And what do you want now? Out of all the years?” She looked away briefly, then met his gaze again. “I don’t want to pretend we’re still the same. But I needed to see you. Sometimes the past hits you out of nowhere.” “Yeah,” Silas said quietly, “those of us with a past tend to carry it around like a brick wall. Keeps people out. Keeps the bad memories quiet.” She nodded, her throat tightening. “That’s why I came here. I thought I’d find some answer in the bottom of a glass.” He reached behind the bar and poured two shots, sliding one toward her. “To old friends. To not forgetting everything too fast.” She raised her glass, the cool metal grounding her. “To memories we can’t erase.” They clinked glasses, the sharp sting of whiskey warming her throat. Her voice dropped, hesitant. “You’ve been quiet. Seen a lot. Changed.” He chuckled softly, rubbing his beard. “Spent years chasing ghosts. Worked as a spy, Rory. Things don’t stay static. Or maybe they do, and we just grow used to the shadows.” She looked down at her own glass, then back at him. “I used to think I could outrun everything. But the past has a way of catching up. Fast.” Silas’s smile faded, replaced by a quiet seriousness. “You always knew how to run, but sometimes you had to stand still. Or face what’s waiting.” Without warning, her mouth twitched into a slight smile. “Did you ever find what you were looking for?” He paused, as if weighing old memories. “Sometimes in the right direction. Sometimes just in the silence.” The hum of the room was almost loud in her ears. She looked around, observing the photographs on the walls—old black-and-white images of Soho, of faces she didn’t recognize, of nights she’d never remember clearly. A long silence followed, thick but oddly comforting. Then, softly, she spoke, “I’ve been running for so long, Silas. From Evan, from myself. This city’s gotten colder, even as it’s gotten brighter.” He leaned on the bar, the weight of his years pressing into his features. “London’s a mirror. Reflects what we put into it. It’s no warmer than where you run from, Rory.” She swallowed a lump, gaze fixed on her half-empty glass. “I thought I’d be different by now. Braver, maybe. Less afraid of what I might turn into.” “You ain’t run out of fear yet,” he said, voice rough but gentle. “If you’re here, it means you still care about what’s behind the door.” She looked up, a flicker of defiance flashing in her eyes. “Sometimes you’ve got to confront your demons, or they take over. You ever feel like you’re just waiting for the moment when everything falls apart?” He met her eyes, a spark of something unreadable. “Not waiting. Preparing. That’s what the quiet’s for.” Her hand brushed the scar on her wrist, a flicker of memory flashing. “This was a kid’s mistake—a reckless move I probably should’ve learned from by now.” “You’re still here,” Silas noted, voice softer now. “That says a lot.” A tap on the bar drew their attention—a young man in a leather jacket, leaning in close. Tossing a wink, he ordered a round. Silas nodded, motioning for the bartender. Aurora watched him, the warmth of the whiskey dulling the sharp edges of her thoughts. “What’s next for you, Silas?” He shrugged, eyes darkening with something unspoken. “Don’t know. Maybe I’ll keep running the bar. Maybe I’ll get back into the game for real. Or maybe I’ll just sit here and listen to ghosts.” “And me?” He looked at her again, a half-smile returning. “Whatever you’re chasing, Rory, don’t forget you’re stronger than the past. You always were.” She offered a small, wary smile. “Thanks, Silas.” He gently clapped her shoulder, hobbling slightly. “Good to see you again. Don’t be a stranger.” She turned toward the door, hesitating, then looked back. “Guess I needed to hear that.” As she stepped outside into the London night, the glow of the neon sign flickered, casting long shadows over her. The city, with all its ghosts and promises, waited silently. She took a deep breath, the taste of whiskey lingering on her tongue, carrying the weight of years and unspoken regrets—ready to face whatever came next.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.11% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.184
leniency0.368
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.158
59.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count4
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"unspoken"
count3
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanning"
2"weight"
3"unspoken"
4"etched"
5"silence"
6"comforting"
7"flicker"
8"unreadable"
9"warmth"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Tossing a wink, he ordered a round."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount661
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
London1
Silas5
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if weighing old memories"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1107
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
98.98% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean27
std13.4
cv0.496
sampleLengths
074
162
227
318
416
524
636
727
843
923
1034
1117
1232
1327
1422
1522
1614
1722
1831
1929
2025
2118
2217
2335
2432
2532
2627
2726
2836
2917
3027
3112
3230
3320
3434
352
3622
378
3816
3915
4056
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences83
ratio0.06
matches
0"Her lips pressed into a thin line, the scars from her past flickering behind her eyes—childhood accidents, reckless choices, all buried beneath layers of cool detachment."
1"She studied him, noting the years etched into his face—the lines around his eyes, the slight stoop of his shoulders, the way his hands, usually steady and confident, twitched slightly before settling on the bar."
2"She looked around, observing the photographs on the walls—old black-and-white images of Soho, of faces she didn’t recognize, of nights she’d never remember clearly."
3"A tap on the bar drew their attention—a young man in a leather jacket, leaning in close."
4"She took a deep breath, the taste of whiskey lingering on her tongue, carrying the weight of years and unspoken regrets—ready to face whatever came next."
79.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount671
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.05216095380029806
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.03129657228017884
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean13.34
std7.31
cv0.548
sampleLengths
026
124
224
324
420
518
627
718
810
96
1014
1110
1226
1310
1415
1512
1635
178
1814
199
2025
219
226
2311
249
2523
2627
275
2817
2913
309
319
325
3311
344
357
366
3725
3811
3918
408
4117
429
439
447
4510
4611
4724
488
4924
69.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.43373493975903615
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners36
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Then, softly, she spoke,"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences52
matches
0"She tucked a stray strand"
1"She hoisted her delivery bag"
2"He looked up the moment"
3"He didn’t move from his"
4"he said, voice low and"
5"She stopped a few feet"
6"He tilted his head, the"
7"Her lips pressed into a"
8"His gaze sharpened, the weight"
9"She studied him, noting the"
10"she said softly"
11"He finally pushed off from"
12"She gestured vaguely, her fingers"
13"He stepped closer, examining her"
14"She looked away briefly, then"
15"She nodded, her throat tightening."
16"He reached behind the bar"
17"She raised her glass, the"
18"They clinked glasses, the sharp"
19"Her voice dropped, hesitant."
ratio0.692
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences52
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
1"The room was quieter than"
2"She tucked a stray strand"
3"She hoisted her delivery bag"
4"Silas was there, as he"
5"He looked up the moment"
6"He didn’t move from his"
7"he said, voice low and"
8"She stopped a few feet"
9"He tilted his head, the"
10"Her lips pressed into a"
11"His gaze sharpened, the weight"
12"She studied him, noting the"
13"she said softly"
14"He finally pushed off from"
15"She gestured vaguely, her fingers"
16"He stepped closer, examining her"
17"She looked away briefly, then"
18"Silas said quietly"
19"She nodded, her throat tightening."
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He didn’t move from his seat until she approached, pushing her way through a few of the quieter patrons, her boots scraping softly on the wooden floor."
1"She took a deep breath, the taste of whiskey lingering on her tongue, carrying the weight of years and unspoken regrets—ready to face whatever came next."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice rough but gentle"
1"Silas noted, voice softer now"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she spoke (speak)"
1"Silas noted (note)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.105
73.9113%