Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2D403986SAY73DKMWZYM

Run Details

Duration:
33.5s
Cost:
$0.001888
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory's sneakers crunched on the gravel path as she entered the moonlit grove. Ancient oak standing stones loomed around her, casting eerie shadows across the wildflowers that bloomed impossibly in the November chill. She shouldn't be here. Silas and the others had warned her not to return to the Fae grove. But the Heartstone pendant, warm against her skin, had guided her here again. It knew something she didn't. A twig snapped somewhere in the darkness beyond the stones. Rory whirled, black hair whipping around her face. "Who's there?" Her voice shook slightly. Nothing but silence answered. Blowing out a tense breath, she ventured further in. The deeper she went, the more the sensation of wrongness grew. A clammy chill slithered up her spine. Her heart raced like a hummingbird's wings. She rounded a bend - and froze. The heartstone surged with heat. Light pulsed from it in rhythmic beats. It had never done that before. Rory's gaze landed on the far edge of the clearing. A shimmer distorted the air, like heat rising off summer pavement. She squinted against the brightness. There was...a hole? The longer she stared, the clearer it became. A ragged gash hovered two feet off the ground, edges peeled back, a porthole to...where? Shadows churned within. An unnatural wind slashed through the grove, ripping leaves from branches, lashing Rory's hair. She staggered back. The neon lights of the city blinked mockingly down at her. Behind her, the sounds of footfalls carried over the howling wind. She spun around but the path stretched empty before her. A presence prickled along her skin, almost taunting her. Whatever it was, it grew closer. Her breath fogged in front of her face, though the night wasn't nearly cold enough for that. She pivoted in a slow circle but could see no one. Yet the weight of another's gaze pressed on her, laden with sinister intent. "Who are you? What do you want?" Her voice barely rose over the moaning wind. She cursed herself for not bringing a weapon. The standing stones seemed to tilt inward. The gash pulsed, drawing her closer even as revulsion turned her stomach. Sweat slicked her palms. She stumbled back. The Heartstone's glow intensified to painful levels. Rory sucked in a gasp, throwing up a hand to shield her eyes. Theuntary step forward. With a monumental effort, she tore her gaze away. "No!" Her choked scream shredded her throat. "I won't!" But her feet shuffled forward of their own accord. Apparently, refusal wasn't an option. The portal loomed before her, blinding, churning, hungry. Wrong. Her outstretched hands broke the plane of the portal. Freezing agony seized her like a fist. She screamed. Her bones twisted. Splintered. Knitted back together. Her heart stuttered, squeezed by an unseen grip. Black spots bloomed in her vision. She couldn't breathe. Couldn't see. The scream died in her clogging throat. The portal pulled her in, bit by bit, a beast devouring its prey. Rory wrestled against its hold. Frigid oil slithered into her mind, snuffing out her thoughts. Memories flashed. Begging at the grove's edge. Her abduction. Her tortured screams. Then nothing at all. She flailed desperately, scrabbling for the Heartstone. It seared her icy fingers, bright and alive. Warmth exploded from it, seeping into her marrow. With strength born of desperation, Rory ripped free of the portal's watery grasp and staggered back. She fell to her hands and knees, gasping. Behind her, a growl rattled the air. Hot breath gusted over her neck. She flipped over, kicking wildly. The shadow sprang. It crashed into her chest, slamming her into the ground. Claws like shards of ice punctured her shoulders. A distorted muzzle dripping marrow and viscera descended toward her face. The Heartstone's red light exploded through her. The world erupted in a firestorm of agony and ecstasy, life and death, destruction and rebirth. The shadow wailed - a shredding, unearthly keen. Then it vanished. Aching all over, Rory rolled to her side. The portal was gone, the wind died to a whisper. Only her frantic breaths stirred the air. A final scream, her own, shredded the night. Then nothing at all.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:45:27.813Z" 2/19/2026, 10:45:27 AM
model"nousresearch/hermes-3-llama-3.1-405b"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency431
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time33465
tokens_prompt1072
tokens_completion1088
native_tokens_prompt934
native_tokens_completion954
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.001888
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"3280e8f8-0960-400c-8284-2e03a0bcb446"
id"cmpl-48600167cb9d40918b83e4de0a2e788a"
is_byokfalse
latency62
model_permaslug"nousresearch/hermes-3-llama-3.1-405b"
provider_name"DeepInfra"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771497927-fvOLiOGwDe6YW4HzMFKe"
upstream_id"cmpl-48600167cb9d40918b83e4de0a2e788a"
total_cost0.001888
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"DeepInfra"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice shook slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
92.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount690
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount690
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"raced"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"churned"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"sinister"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"churning"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"chill"
2"silence"
3"raced"
4"pulsed"
5"rhythmic"
6"churned"
7"weight"
8"sinister"
9"stomach"
10"churning"
11"warmth"
12"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords692
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount680
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
November1
Fae1
Heartstone4
Rory8
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.912
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount692
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
75.44% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean24.71
std10.23
cv0.414
sampleLengths
033
136
228
334
47
528
645
728
821
932
1024
1123
1226
1323
1418
1523
1625
1719
1820
1927
204
2147
2218
233
2429
2534
2625
2712
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs121
matches(empty)
80.06% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences91
ratio0.022
matches
0"She rounded a bend - and froze."
1"The shadow wailed - a shredding, unearthly keen."
97.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount678
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04277286135693215
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.014749262536873156
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean7.6
std4.01
cv0.527
sampleLengths
013
120
24
314
413
55
610
78
86
94
109
1111
127
137
147
155
167
176
1810
1911
205
213
228
2315
243
2514
263
2711
2811
2910
309
316
3217
3311
3413
3515
368
377
3812
394
403
417
4213
433
449
457
462
479
485
498
67.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.43956043956043955
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences84
matches
0"Apparently, refusal wasn't an option."
1"Then nothing at all."
2"Then it vanished."
3"Only her frantic breaths stirred"
4"Then nothing at all."
ratio0.06
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences84
matches
0"She shouldn't be here."
1"It knew something she didn't."
2"Her voice shook slightly"
3"Her heart raced like a"
4"She rounded a bend -"
5"It had never done that"
6"She squinted against the brightness."
7"She staggered back."
8"She spun around but the"
9"Her breath fogged in front"
10"She pivoted in a slow"
11"Her voice barely rose over"
12"She cursed herself for not"
13"She stumbled back."
14"Her choked scream shredded her"
15"Her outstretched hands broke the"
16"Her bones twisted."
17"Her heart stuttered, squeezed by"
18"She couldn't breathe."
19"Her tortured screams."
ratio0.298
96.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences84
matches
0"Rory's sneakers crunched on the"
1"She shouldn't be here."
2"Silas and the others had"
3"It knew something she didn't."
4"A twig snapped somewhere in"
5"Rory whirled, black hair whipping"
6"Her voice shook slightly"
7"Nothing but silence answered."
8"The deeper she went, the"
9"A clammy chill slithered up"
10"Her heart raced like a"
11"She rounded a bend -"
12"The heartstone surged with heat."
13"It had never done that"
14"Rory's gaze landed on the"
15"A shimmer distorted the air,"
16"She squinted against the brightness."
17"There was...a hole?"
18"The longer she stared, the"
19"A ragged gash hovered two"
ratio0.726
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ancient oak standing stones loomed around her, casting eerie shadows across the wildflowers that bloomed impossibly in the November chill."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Her choked (choke)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
83.3892%