Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2FN3JEPRFF5P0D8D7HV4

Run Details

Duration:
37.2s
Cost:
$0.000988

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, plastering Detective Harlow Quinn’s close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair against her forehead. The streetlights flickered above her, casting uneven shadows as she raced after the suspect. Each step sent her leather shoes splashing through puddles, the cold water soaking into her socks. Her breath formed misty clouds in the chill of the London night. Quinn’s sharp jaw clenched as she rounded a corner. The alley’s mouth gaped dark and foreboding, but a figure fumbled away into the gloom. She chased, adrenaline surging. “Stop!” she shouted, her voice cutting through the downpour. He glanced back, eyes wide, and quickened his stride. Quinn pushed herself harder, muscles burning, lungs gasping. The suspect ducked down an even darker side street, skin glistening with rain, moving like he knew the shadows intimately. With a swift turn, he slipped into a narrow passageway, disappearing into a maw of darkness. The sound of rain muted as she followed, every nerve tingling with a mix of fear and determination. The light from the street began to fade, swallowed whole by the mystery of the unknown. “Where are you?” Quinn muttered under her breath, the pounding of rain against cobblestones drowned out her thoughts. She skidded to a halt at the edge of the passage. No sounds echoed back. Only silence loomed beyond, and a familiar scent of damp earth mixed with something she couldn’t place. Quinn hesitated, tightening her grip on her worn leather watch. She hated uncertainty, but this place felt different. Darker. The weight of a thousand unsolved mysteries pressed against her chest. “I don’t have time for this,” she muttered, taking a deep breath before plunging into the passage. She stepped into a hidden underbelly of the city, where the scrappy walls were soaked and glistening. As she moved further, gas lamps flickered weakly along the damp stone, revealing scattered remnants of forgotten lives. Her heart raced. Was she stepping into a trap? Quinn quickened her pace, her instincts sharpening. Just ahead, she caught a glimpse of the suspect—a silhouette against a rusted gate. He paused, glancing back over his shoulder. “Why are you running?” she called, steadying her voice. He pushed through the gate and vanished into the darkness beyond. Quinn squeezed through just as the door creaked shut, a heavy iron smell filled the air, mingling with the rain. She stood at the brink of The Veil Market, the underground market that moved with the moon. Her stomach twisted. The rumors swirled around this place—deals made in shadows, whispers of supernatural goods exchanged under eye-watering prices. She should report back, call for backup, but the chase crackled in her veins like lightning. “Just a quick look,” she whispered, pushing past the gate. The market sprawled before her, a labyrinthine network of stalls and dimly lit corners. Scents wafted in thick waves—exotic spices, incense, or maybe something more sinister. Figures moved in the gloom, cloaked in tattered clothes, some draped in shadows that absorbed the light. Quinn spotted him ahead, ducking behind a tent. She kept her eyes on him, weaving between the stalls strewn with wares both peculiar and grotesque—jars filled with iridescent liquids, strange talismans that glimmered and hummed. Dark magic hung in the air, thick and irrevocable. “Get back here!” she yelled, lunging forward. He shot a glance over his shoulder, panic flooding his features, and darted around a makeshift stall loaded with glimmering crystals. Quinn pressed on, her focus unyielding. He veered left into a narrow corridor lined with heavy tapestries and flickering lanterns. She followed, quickening her steps, heart hammering. The crowd thinned, the murmur of distant voices dimmed as she approached what looked like an entrance to another chamber. “Nowhere to run,” she panted, drawing closer. He slipped into the hidden back room behind a bookshelf, and Quinn nearly slammed into it, catching herself just in time. She gripped the edge of the bookcase and edged it aside, slipping through the narrow opening. The room beyond smelled of damp wood and something sharp, like iron. The suspect looked cornered, chest heaving as he pressed against a wooden table littered with strange artifacts. “Why are you doing this?” Quinn demanded, scanning his face for answers. “What do you know?” “I ain't got time for questions!” He shifted, his voice strained, clammy hands shaking. Before he could react, Quinn lunged, gripping his arm. He twisted, and their eyes locked. His breath came fast, pupils dilated. “They’ll kill me if I talk!” he shouted, desperation spilling from his words. “Then you need to tell me what you know!” Her grip tightened, their bodies a tangle against the oppressive weight of the room. “What’s happening above is nothing—you have to understand!” He glanced toward the door like it was a portal to a realm of terror. A deep rumble echoed from elsewhere in the market, footsteps pounding closer. “Leave me out of it!” He shoved her back, darting for the exit. Quinn stumbled, heart racing anew. She had to act. She lunged again, grabbing his collar, pulling him back. “After all this, you think I’m letting you go?” He twisted in her grasp, desperation painting his features stark white. “Listen!” He leaned closer, urgency in his voice, “They’re watching! If you come here again, it won’t just be you in danger—it’s bigger than you think.” The ground shook beneath them. A shadow flickered by the entrance. Quinn’s instincts roared to life. She glanced back, knowing she couldn’t afford to let him go. “You come with me!” she ordered, urgency sharp in her tone. “No—” But she didn’t let him finish. The footsteps were growing louder, and despite the tension coiling in her belly, hesitation had no place in this moment. She pulled him toward the back way out, ducking beneath the low-hanging archway leading deeper into the market’s labyrinth. He struggled against her grip, panic radiating off him. “Let go!” he hissed, but Quinn pressed on, determined to escape the looming threat. The oppressive atmosphere tightened like a noose, her breath quickening with each step they took. “Stay close, or I swear—” Then darkness fell, swallowing them both whole.
total_cost0.00098835

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1032
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1032
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"flickered"
count3
1
word"raced"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"jaw clenched"
count1
4
word"foreboding"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count2
6
word"quickened"
count2
7
word"glistening"
count2
8
word"maw"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"sinister"
count1
17
word"scanning"
count1
18
word"oppressive"
count2
19
word"footsteps"
count2
20
word"racing"
count1
21
word"stark"
count1
22
word"tension"
count1
23
word"determined"
count1
24
word"looming"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"raced"
2"chill"
3"jaw clenched"
4"foreboding"
5"gloom"
6"quickened"
7"glistening"
8"maw"
9"pounding"
10"echoed"
11"silence"
12"loomed"
13"familiar"
14"weight"
15"stomach"
16"sinister"
17"scanning"
18"oppressive"
19"footsteps"
20"racing"
21"stark"
22"tension"
23"determined"
24"looming"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1021
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount914
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn15
London1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
places
0"London"
1"Market"
globalScore0.679
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like an entrance to another chambe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1021
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.31
std15.31
cv0.63
sampleLengths
057
128
29
337
450
550
630
717
844
928
109
1148
1236
1310
1443
1544
167
1727
1841
197
2049
2117
2216
2314
2421
2513
2623
2723
2812
2913
3018
319
3211
3326
3427
3511
361
3745
389
3929
405
417
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs192
matches
0"were growing"
9.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences86
ratio0.047
matches
0"Just ahead, she caught a glimpse of the suspect—a silhouette against a rusted gate."
1"The rumors swirled around this place—deals made in shadows, whispers of supernatural goods exchanged under eye-watering prices."
2"Scents wafted in thick waves—exotic spices, incense, or maybe something more sinister."
3"She kept her eyes on him, weaving between the stalls strewn with wares both peculiar and grotesque—jars filled with iridescent liquids, strange talismans that glimmered and hummed."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount923
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.028169014084507043
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007583965330444204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean11.87
std5.82
cv0.49
sampleLengths
015
114
216
312
49
515
64
79
89
98
1020
1116
1218
1316
1418
1511
164
1717
1810
198
201
2111
2217
2317
2418
253
266
277
2814
297
309
3111
3220
3317
343
3517
3616
3710
3814
3912
4017
418
4227
439
447
4521
466
4714
487
4920
63.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4069767441860465
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"Only silence loomed beyond, and"
1"Just ahead, she caught a"
2"Then darkness fell, swallowing them"
ratio0.037
22.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences81
matches
0"Her breath formed misty clouds"
1"She chased, adrenaline surging."
2"she shouted, her voice cutting"
3"He glanced back, eyes wide,"
4"She skidded to a halt"
5"She hated uncertainty, but this"
6"she muttered, taking a deep"
7"She stepped into a hidden"
8"Her heart raced."
9"He paused, glancing back over"
10"she called, steadying her voice"
11"He pushed through the gate"
12"She stood at the brink"
13"Her stomach twisted."
14"She should report back, call"
15"she whispered, pushing past the"
16"She kept her eyes on"
17"she yelled, lunging forward"
18"He shot a glance over"
19"He veered left into a"
ratio0.494
21.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences81
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"The streetlights flickered above her,"
2"Each step sent her leather"
3"Her breath formed misty clouds"
4"Quinn’s sharp jaw clenched as"
5"The alley’s mouth gaped dark"
6"She chased, adrenaline surging."
7"she shouted, her voice cutting"
8"He glanced back, eyes wide,"
9"Quinn pushed herself harder, muscles"
10"The suspect ducked down an"
11"The sound of rain muted"
12"The light from the street"
13"Quinn muttered under her breath,"
14"She skidded to a halt"
15"Quinn hesitated, tightening her grip"
16"She hated uncertainty, but this"
17"The weight of a thousand"
18"she muttered, taking a deep"
19"She stepped into a hidden"
ratio0.877
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Before he could react, Quinn"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She kept her eyes on him, weaving between the stalls strewn with wares both peculiar and grotesque—jars filled with iridescent liquids, strange talismans that g…"
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she shouted, her voice cutting through the downpour"
1"Quinn muttered, the pounding of rain against cobblestones drowned out her thoughts"
2"he shouted, desperation spilling from his words"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she yelled (yell)"
5"she panted (pant)"
6"Quinn demanded (demand)"
7"he shouted (shout)"
8"she ordered (order)"
9"he hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.909
effectiveRatio0.909
78.1644%