| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Oliver said suddenly [suddenly]" | | 2 | "He gestured vaguely [vaguely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 67 | | tagDensity | 0.328 | | leniency | 0.657 | | rawRatio | 0.136 | | effectiveRatio | 0.09 | |
| 82.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "navigating" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "carried the weight" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1137 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory remembered their last conversation—a heated argument in a student union common room, Oliver insisting she come with…" |
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| 79.41% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 850 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Oliver" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Silas | 7 | | London | 2 | | Oliver | 12 | | Foreign | 1 | | Office | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Oliver" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.794 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if navigating a minefield" | | 1 | "as if observing the conversation from across the room" | | 2 | "felt like a door cracking open" | | 3 | "wrist that seemed to have faded with time" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 15.79 | | std | 15.15 | | cv | 0.96 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.37% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "The childhood nickname—her mother's choice, abandoned when she turned fourteen—sounded foreign in his mouth." | | 1 | "Rory remembered their last conversation—a heated argument in a student union common room, Oliver insisting she come with him to his new job overseas, she refusing to abandon her law studies." | | 2 | "The pieces clicked into place—the calluses, the new sharpness, the weariness in his shoulders." | | 3 | "Rory studied him—the slight tremor in his right hand, the way his eyes kept scanning the room even in this safe, dimly lit bar." | | 4 | "Rory thought of her own reflection that morning—the tired eyes, the hair she hadn't bothered to style, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist that seemed to have faded with time." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 739 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.023004059539918808 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013531799729364006 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 8.95 | | std | 6.38 | | cv | 0.713 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 68.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4251968503937008 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She leaned against the polished" | | 1 | "He removed his hat, revealing" | | 2 | "She hadn't heard it in" | | 3 | "He gave a nearly imperceptible" | | 4 | "She hadn't spoken it aloud" | | 5 | "He approached the bar slowly," | | 6 | "She gestured to the stool" | | 7 | "He settled onto it, the" | | 8 | "His hands, once stained with" | | 9 | "He took a sip, his" | | 10 | "His eyes searched her face," | | 11 | "His eyebrows lifted." | | 12 | "She took a long drink," | | 13 | "He chuckled without humor" | | 14 | "He met her eyes." | | 15 | "she said softly" | | 16 | "He drained his glass" | | 17 | "She saw the ghost of" | | 18 | "He tested the name" | | 19 | "His hazel eyes met Rory's" |
| | ratio | 0.425 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The jukebox in the corner" | | 1 | "She leaned against the polished" | | 2 | "The green neon sign outside" | | 3 | "The bell above the door" | | 4 | "Rory glanced over, more out" | | 5 | "The man who entered wore" | | 6 | "He removed his hat, revealing" | | 7 | "Recognition struck her like a" | | 8 | "The childhood nickname—her mother's choice," | | 9 | "She hadn't heard it in" | | 10 | "Silas paused his wiping, his" | | 11 | "He gave a nearly imperceptible" | | 12 | "The name tasted strange" | | 13 | "She hadn't spoken it aloud" | | 14 | "He approached the bar slowly," | | 15 | "She gestured to the stool" | | 16 | "He settled onto it, the" | | 17 | "The boyish roundness had vanished" | | 18 | "His hands, once stained with" | | 19 | "A silence stretched between them," |
| | ratio | 0.973 | |
| 68.49% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Whether he saw the ghost" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt a strange detachment, as if observing the conversation from across the room." | | 1 | "Rory thought of her own reflection that morning—the tired eyes, the hair she hadn't bothered to style, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist that seemed t…" | | 2 | "She simply took his arm, steering him toward the side entrance that led to her flat above the bar." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He approached, as if navigating a minefield" |
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| 90.30% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He chuckled (chuckle)" | | 1 | "He repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she clarified (clarify)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 67 | | tagDensity | 0.194 | | leniency | 0.388 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.119 | |