Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2G26NV9EXAPWWZ3JSHMV

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Duration:
2m 13s
Cost:
$0.001549
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The jukebox in the corner of The Raven's Nest played a low, soulful tune that Rory didn't recognize. She leaned against the polished mahogany bar, watching Silas wipe down glassware with a precise rhythm. The green neon sign outside cast an eerie glow through the front window, painting the old maps on the walls in shadowy relief. The bell above the door jingled. Rory glanced over, more out of habit than interest. The man who entered wore a dark overcoat damp with evening mist. He removed his hat, revealing silver at his temples and lines around eyes that still held a familiar spark. Recognition struck her like a physical blow. "Laila?" The childhood nickname—her mother's choice, abandoned when she turned fourteen—sounded foreign in his mouth. She hadn't heard it in years. Silas paused his wiping, his gaze shifting between them. He gave a nearly imperceptible nod and returned to his work, giving them the illusion of privacy. "Oliver." The name tasted strange. She hadn't spoken it aloud since university. "I thought you were in Geneva." "Transferred back last month." He approached the bar slowly, as if navigating a minefield. "May I?" She gestured to the stool beside her. He settled onto it, the leather creaking under his weight. Up close, the changes became more pronounced. The boyish roundness had vanished from his face, replaced by sharp angles and a tightness around his mouth. His hands, once stained with ink from late-night essay writing, now bore the calluses of something rougher. "You look... different," he said. "So do you." A silence stretched between them, filled by the jukebox's melancholy and the distant hum of London traffic. "Whiskey," Oliver told Silas. "Neat." "The usual, Rory?" Silas asked. "Please." Silas poured two glasses, set them down without comment, and retreated to the other end of the bar. Oliver lifted his glass, studying the amber liquid. "I heard about Evan." Rory's fingers tightened around her own glass. The cool surface grounded her. "That was three years ago." "Still." He took a sip, his gaze fixed on the shelves behind the bar. "I should have checked on you." "You were in Geneva." "That's not an excuse." The admission hung in the air, heavy and unadorned. Rory remembered their last conversation—a heated argument in a student union common room, Oliver insisting she come with him to his new job overseas, she refusing to abandon her law studies. Neither had known it would be the final time they'd speak as friends. "What are you doing these days?" Oliver asked, turning toward her. His eyes searched her face, looking for the girl he'd known. "Delivery work. Part-time." "For a law firm?" "A Chinese restaurant." His eyebrows lifted. "You were top of our class." "I was." She took a long drink, letting the whiskey burn away the bitterness. "Turns out liking to argue doesn't mean you want to spend your life doing it for money." "And Evan?" "Gone." "Good." Another silence. Oliver swirled his whiskey, watching the liquid climb the sides of the glass. "I got married." Rory felt a strange detachment, as if observing the conversation from across the room. "Congratulations." "It didn't last. Two years." He chuckled without humor. "She said I'd become a stranger. That I brought my work home with me." "What work is that?" He met her eyes. "Diplomatic security." The pieces clicked into place—the calluses, the new sharpness, the weariness in his shoulders. Rory remembered the boy who'd wanted to join the Foreign Office, who'd dreamed of embassies and state dinners. This man before her carried the weight of darker realities. "You always did want to serve," she said softly. "Did I?" He drained his glass. "Sometimes I can't remember what I wanted. Only what I became." The confession felt like a door cracking open. Rory studied him—the slight tremor in his right hand, the way his eyes kept scanning the room even in this safe, dimly lit bar. She saw the ghost of the boy who'd written terrible poetry and laughed until he cried at bad movies. "I go by Rory now," she said. "Not Laila." "Rory." He tested the name. "Suits you better." "I think so." Silas appeared and refilled Oliver's glass without being asked. His hazel eyes met Rory's briefly, a silent question. She gave a slight shake of her head. "I'm sorry," Oliver said suddenly. "For what?" "For not being there. For letting..." He gestured vaguely. "All of this happen." "You didn't 'let' anything happen. Life happened." "Life." He repeated the word as if it were a curse. "That's what they call it when you wake up one day and don't recognize yourself in the mirror." Rory thought of her own reflection that morning—the tired eyes, the hair she hadn't bothered to style, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist that seemed to have faded with time. She wondered what Oliver saw when he looked at his reflection. Whether he saw the ghost she saw. "Do you ever miss it?" he asked. "University? All those late nights arguing about nothing?" "I miss who I was then. Not what we were doing." "Who were you?" She considered. "Someone who believed things could be fixed." "And now?" "Now I know some things stay broken." She traced the rim of her glass with her thumb. "But you pick up the pieces and build something new." Oliver stared at her, his expression unreadable. "You were always smarter than me." "Not smarter. Just more honest." He laughed, a genuine sound that transformed his face momentarily back into the boy she'd known. "God, I've missed you." The admission surprised them both. Rory felt something loosen in her chest, a tension she hadn't realized she'd been carrying. "I've missed you too," she whispered. They sat in silence for a long moment, the space between them filled with years of absence and change. The jukebox song ended, leaving only the whisper of rain against the window and the soft clink of glass from Silas' work. "I should go," Oliver said, though he made no move to stand. "My flat's upstairs." He looked at her, his eyes asking a question words couldn't form. "Just for a drink," she clarified. "No expectations." Oliver nodded slowly. He pulled a few notes from his wallet and left them on the bar. Silas raised a hand in farewell as they stood. The rain had eased to a fine mist that clung to their coats as they stepped outside. Oliver paused beneath the green neon sign, his face painted in its otherworldly glow. "Rory?" "Yes?" "Thank you." She didn't ask for what. She simply took his arm, steering him toward the side entrance that led to her flat above the bar. The night air smelled of wet pavement and distant diesel, of London and memory and time's relentless forward march.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:45:30.828Z" 2/19/2026, 10:45:30 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Oliver said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.657
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.09
82.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"carried the weight"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"navigating"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"carried the weight"
5"scanning"
6"traced"
7"unreadable"
8"tension"
9"whisper"
10"otherworldly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1137
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Rory remembered their last conversation—a heated argument in a student union common room, Oliver insisting she come with…"
79.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount850
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Oliver"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory10
Silas7
London2
Oliver12
Foreign1
Office1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Oliver"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.794
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if navigating a minefield"
1"as if observing the conversation from across the room"
2"felt like a door cracking open"
3"wrist that seemed to have faded with time"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1137
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean15.79
std15.15
cv0.96
sampleLengths
057
16
247
31
420
526
618
716
859
95
103
1117
125
135
141
1518
1612
1717
1820
194
204
2153
2222
233
244
253
269
2731
282
291
301
3118
3215
3323
344
356
3642
379
3817
3951
409
418
423
4326
445
452
4613
477
4829
4949
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
30.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences127
ratio0.039
matches
0"The childhood nickname—her mother's choice, abandoned when she turned fourteen—sounded foreign in his mouth."
1"Rory remembered their last conversation—a heated argument in a student union common room, Oliver insisting she come with him to his new job overseas, she refusing to abandon her law studies."
2"The pieces clicked into place—the calluses, the new sharpness, the weariness in his shoulders."
3"Rory studied him—the slight tremor in his right hand, the way his eyes kept scanning the room even in this safe, dimly lit bar."
4"Rory thought of her own reflection that morning—the tired eyes, the hair she hadn't bothered to style, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist that seemed to have faded with time."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount739
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.023004059539918808
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.013531799729364006
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean8.95
std6.38
cv0.713
sampleLengths
018
116
223
36
49
512
619
77
81
914
106
119
1217
135
147
156
1614
172
187
1910
207
2118
2217
235
243
2517
264
271
285
291
3018
318
324
337
345
355
3614
376
384
394
409
4131
4213
4311
4411
453
464
473
483
496
68.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4251968503937008
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences73
matches
0"She leaned against the polished"
1"He removed his hat, revealing"
2"She hadn't heard it in"
3"He gave a nearly imperceptible"
4"She hadn't spoken it aloud"
5"He approached the bar slowly,"
6"She gestured to the stool"
7"He settled onto it, the"
8"His hands, once stained with"
9"He took a sip, his"
10"His eyes searched her face,"
11"His eyebrows lifted."
12"She took a long drink,"
13"He chuckled without humor"
14"He met her eyes."
15"she said softly"
16"He drained his glass"
17"She saw the ghost of"
18"He tested the name"
19"His hazel eyes met Rory's"
ratio0.425
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences73
matches
0"The jukebox in the corner"
1"She leaned against the polished"
2"The green neon sign outside"
3"The bell above the door"
4"Rory glanced over, more out"
5"The man who entered wore"
6"He removed his hat, revealing"
7"Recognition struck her like a"
8"The childhood nickname—her mother's choice,"
9"She hadn't heard it in"
10"Silas paused his wiping, his"
11"He gave a nearly imperceptible"
12"The name tasted strange"
13"She hadn't spoken it aloud"
14"He approached the bar slowly,"
15"She gestured to the stool"
16"He settled onto it, the"
17"The boyish roundness had vanished"
18"His hands, once stained with"
19"A silence stretched between them,"
ratio0.973
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Whether he saw the ghost"
ratio0.014
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory felt a strange detachment, as if observing the conversation from across the room."
1"Rory thought of her own reflection that morning—the tired eyes, the hair she hadn't bothered to style, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist that seemed t…"
2"She simply took his arm, steering him toward the side entrance that led to her flat above the bar."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He approached, as if navigating a minefield"
90.30% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He chuckled (chuckle)"
1"He repeated (repeat)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she clarified (clarify)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.388
rawRatio0.308
effectiveRatio0.119
79.4989%