Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2G7CFG621B2KR9YMJN30

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Duration:
4.3s
Cost:
$0.000091

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The flickering fluorescent hum of the abandoned Tube station’s broken lights cast long, shifting shadows across the cracked concrete floor. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the strap of her leather satchel, her salt-and-pepper hair catching the dim glow of a flickering emergency exit sign. She stepped over a half-buried bag of what looked like old newspapers, the edges singed as if scorched. Her sharp jaw clenched as she knelt beside a body sprawled in the damp aisle. A woman lay motionless, her green eyes wide and unblinking. Eva Kowalski’s curly red hair was matted with something dark, her round glasses still perched on her freckled face. The air smelled of ozone and something metallic, like old blood. Quinn’s watch ticked loudly in her palm. She reached for her radio, but before she could dial, a voice cut through the static. “Detective Quinn?” She didn’t look up. “Morris?” “You’re here early.” A pause. “Or late.” Quinn stood abruptly, her boots crunching on broken glass. “You’re at the Veil Market.” “Not anymore.” The voice was rough, strained. “They moved it again.” Quinn’s fingers tightened around the handle of her baton. “What happened?” “She was there. Just… gone.” The voice cracked. “I found her bag. Books. Notes. Everything.” Quinn exhaled sharply. “What kind of notes?” “Occult stuff. Like she was researching something.” A beat of silence. Then, “You’re not gonna believe me, but I think she was tracking something.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “What?” “A rift. Or a door.” The words hung between them, heavy with implication. Quinn’s eyes flicked to the body again. The woman’s hands were clenched into fists, her nails dug into the palms of her hands. Not a struggle. Not a fall. “You think she was trying to get out?” “Or in.” Quinn’s breath hitched. The Veil Market didn’t just sell supernatural goods. It was a place where things slipped through. Where the veil between worlds thinned. “Where’s the rest of the evidence?” Quinn demanded. “Nothing left.” The voice was distant now, muffled. “Just her.” Quinn’s gaze lingered on the woman’s fingers, still curled tight. Then she turned back to the exit, her mind racing. The Veil Market moved every full moon. And if this was another one of those shifts— A sharp knock at the door made Quinn’s head snap up. “Detective Quinn?” She didn’t answer. Instead, she grabbed her satchel and spun toward the exit, her boots pounding against the cracked tiles. Behind her, the voice called again, but she didn’t stop. The abandoned station was a maze of rusted metal and forgotten dreams. Quinn pushed through a collapsed wall, the scent of damp earth and something older—something *wrong*—washing over her. She didn’t see the figure until it was too late. A man stood in the dim light of a flickering streetlamp, his face obscured by a tattered cloak. His hands were wrapped around a brass compass, the needle spinning wildly. Quinn’s baton came up before she thought. The impact sent the man stumbling back, the compass clattering to the ground. The needle didn’t point north. It pointed *down*. She didn’t need to see the sigils etched into the brass to know what this was. “What the hell is that?” Quinn demanded. The man didn’t answer. His fingers twitched around the compass, as if trying to still the motion. “You’re not from here,” Quinn said. He didn’t look at her. “Neither are you.” Quinn’s pulse spiked. “What’s that thing?” The man’s voice was a rasp. “A way out.” Quinn’s mind raced. The Veil Market moved. And if this was one of those markets— A distant *thud* echoed from the shadows. Quinn’s eyes snapped toward the sound, her instincts screaming. “You’re not supposed to be here,” she said. The man’s gaze flicked toward the sound, then back to her. “Neither is she.” Quinn’s breath came faster. She didn’t need to see the body to know what was coming. The man’s voice was a warning, but his eyes were locked on something beyond her. Then the shadows *moved*. Something heavy struck Quinn’s shoulder, sending her stumbling. The world blurred as she hit the ground, her baton clattering away. The man was gone. The compass was gone. And then the woman was there, her body pressing against Quinn’s, her green eyes wide and unseeing. Quinn rolled onto her back, her vision swimming. The woman’s fingers twitched, as if trying to reach something. “Eva,” Quinn whispered. The woman’s lips moved, but no sound came out. Her eyes rolled back just as Quinn’s knife appeared in her hand, the blade glinting in the dim light. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She drove the knife into the woman’s chest. The woman’s body went limp. Quinn sat up, her breath ragged. The woman’s hands were still curled tight, her fingers digging into the dirt beneath her. The compass lay a few feet away, the needle still spinning. Quinn reached for it, her fingers brushing against something cold and smooth. A sigil. A mark that didn’t belong on this side of the world. She didn’t think. She pulled the compass closer, her eyes locked on the needle. It didn’t point down. It pointed *away*. And for the first time in years, Quinn Quinn didn’t feel alone.
total_cost0.00009092

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.207
leniency0.414
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount871
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount871
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"implication"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"silence"
2"implication"
3"flicked"
4"racing"
5"pounding"
6"etched"
7"pulse"
8"raced"
9"echoed"
10"glinting"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords867
ratio0.006
matches
0"wrong"
1"down"
2"thud"
3"moved"
4"away"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount755
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.84
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn29
Kowalski1
Veil3
Market3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like old newspapers, the edges sin"
1"as if trying to still the motion"
2"as if trying to reach something"
84.66% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.153
wordCount867
matches
0"not gonna believe me, but I think she was tracking something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean16.06
std14.38
cv0.895
sampleLengths
076
163
22
35
47
514
611
711
815
97
107
1117
124
135
1437
158
162
1725
188
1910
2036
2111
222
2330
2439
2530
2628
2716
287
2917
306
318
326
339
3415
3516
368
3714
3831
394
4028
4117
4218
433
4428
4511
465
4721
4811
4925
81.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences90
matches
0"was matted"
1"were clenched"
2"were wrapped"
3"were locked"
4"was gone"
5"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was coming"
64.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences109
ratio0.028
matches
0"And if this was another one of those shifts—"
1"Quinn pushed through a collapsed wall, the scent of damp earth and something older—something *wrong*—washing over her."
2"And if this was one of those markets—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03689064558629776
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006587615283267457
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean7.95
std4.96
cv0.623
sampleLengths
020
123
218
315
410
519
611
77
816
92
104
111
125
132
149
155
167
174
189
192
208
217
223
234
247
254
2613
273
281
295
308
317
3216
333
343
358
362
373
388
398
406
418
428
432
4410
4510
467
479
4811
492
41.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.24770642201834864
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then she turned back to"
1"Instead, she grabbed her satchel"
2"Then the shadows *moved*."
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences82
matches
0"She stepped over a half-buried"
1"Her sharp jaw clenched as"
2"She reached for her radio,"
3"She didn’t look up."
4"It was a place where"
5"She didn’t answer."
6"She didn’t see the figure"
7"His hands were wrapped around"
8"It pointed *down*."
9"She didn’t need to see"
10"His fingers twitched around the"
11"He didn’t look at her."
12"She didn’t need to see"
13"Her eyes rolled back just"
14"She drove the knife into"
15"She didn’t think."
16"She pulled the compass closer,"
17"It didn’t point down."
18"It pointed *away*."
ratio0.232
27.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences82
matches
0"The flickering fluorescent hum of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"She stepped over a half-buried"
3"Her sharp jaw clenched as"
4"A woman lay motionless, her"
5"Eva Kowalski’s curly red hair"
6"The air smelled of ozone"
7"Quinn’s watch ticked loudly in"
8"She reached for her radio,"
9"She didn’t look up."
10"Quinn stood abruptly, her boots"
11"The voice was rough, strained"
12"Quinn’s fingers tightened around the"
13"The voice cracked"
14"Quinn exhaled sharply."
15"A beat of silence."
16"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
17"The words hung between them,"
18"Quinn’s eyes flicked to the"
19"The woman’s hands were clenched"
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She stepped over a half-buried bag of what looked like old newspapers, the edges singed as if scorched."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn demanded (demand)"
1"Quinn demanded (demand)"
2"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.172
leniency0.345
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.207
78.4744%