| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s violet eyes glowed faintly [faintly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.345 | | leniency | 0.69 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 84.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1268 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1268 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "footfall" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "glint" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "quickened" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "otherworldly" | | 17 | "flicked" | | 18 | "enigmatic" | | 19 | "unravel" | | 20 | "unreadable" | | 21 | "treacherous" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "g with unease" | | 1 | "g with unease" |
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| 19.40% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1266 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 993 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.594 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 23.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "golds that seemed to catch fire in the dim light" | | 1 | "looked like glass" | | 2 | "quite right — the trees appeared taller, their leaves sharper, and the sky above shimmered with colors that didn’t exist in the grove" | | 3 | "appeared taller their leaves sharper, and the sky above shimmered with colors that didn’t exist in the grove" | | 4 | "growl that seemed to originate from everywhere and nowhere" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1266 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.06% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 37.24 | | std | 17.97 | | cv | 0.483 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 76 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 63 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | |
| 56.28% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove unfolded before her, wildflowers blooming in impossible colors — deep indigos, shimmering violets, and golds that seemed to catch fire in the dim light." | | 1 | "The reflection wasn’t quite right — the trees appeared taller, their leaves sharper, and the sky above shimmered with colors that didn’t exist in the grove." | | 2 | "At its base, a figure waited — Isolde." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 994 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03319919517102616 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01006036217303823 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 12.79 | | std | 5.6 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 45.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.31313131313131315 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "It tugged at her skin," | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice swallowed" | | 2 | "She glanced down, the deep" | | 3 | "Their voice was soft, almost" | | 4 | "She took a cautious step" | | 5 | "She leaned closer, her reflection" | | 6 | "They were darker, deeper, with" | | 7 | "She blinked, and her reflection" | | 8 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 9 | "They pressed on, the path" | | 10 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 11 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 12 | "She gasped, her fingers clawing" | | 13 | "She fumbled for the blade" | | 14 | "She swung it down, the" | | 15 | "They recoiled, their ends twisting" | | 16 | "She kept the blade ready," | | 17 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" | | 18 | "She smiled as they approached," | | 19 | "Her gaze flicked to Rory’s" |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted as Rory" | | 1 | "It tugged at her skin," | | 2 | "The grove unfolded before her," | | 3 | "The trees arched overhead, their" | | 4 | "she murmured, her voice swallowed" | | 5 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 6 | "She glanced down, the deep" | | 7 | "Nyx materialized from the shadows" | | 8 | "Their voice was soft, almost" | | 9 | "Rory asked, her eyes scanning" | | 10 | "The silver-haired seer had promised" | | 11 | "Nyx’s violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 12 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the hilt" | | 13 | "The metal was cold, even" | | 14 | "She took a cautious step" | | 15 | "Each footfall sank slightly into" | | 16 | "Rory paused, her head tilting" | | 17 | "A faint hum filled the" | | 18 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form" | | 19 | "The hum grew louder as" |
| | ratio | 0.926 | |
| 61.73% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Before they could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 72.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove unfolded before her, wildflowers blooming in impossible colors — deep indigos, shimmering violets, and golds that seemed to catch fire in the dim ligh…" | | 1 | "The trees arched overhead, their branches weaving together into a canopy that filtered the sunlight into fractured beams." | | 2 | "Each footfall sank slightly into the moss-covered earth, but the silence remained unbroken, as though the grove itself was holding its breath." | | 3 | "The reflection wasn’t quite right — the trees appeared taller, their leaves sharper, and the sky above shimmered with colors that didn’t exist in the grove." | | 4 | "She leaned closer, her reflection staring back at her with eyes that weren’t hers." | | 5 | "They recoiled, their ends twisting like wounded snakes before retreating into the earth." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her eyes scanning the grove" | | 1 | "Rory paused, her head tilting" | | 2 | "she said, her voice steady despite the unease curling in her chest" | | 3 | "she whispered, her voice barely audible" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured, their voice barely audible" | | 5 | "Her gaze flicked, her smile widening" | | 6 | "Her eyes settled, her expression unreadable" |
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| 12.07% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.207 | | leniency | 0.414 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.276 | |