Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2RFGEVQNPTPSNSRK7WBN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.001740
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sharp, diagonal sheets, stinging Quinn’s face as she sprinted after the retreating figure. Streetlights bled halos into the downpour, turning the slick cobbles of Soho into a smeared watercolor of amber and black. She’d spotted him leaving The Raven’s Nest—Herrera, the off-the-books medic. He’d made her the moment he stepped out, their eyes locking across the wet street before he’d turned and bolted. Damn instincts. Her breath rasped in her throat, her worn leather watch band digging into her wrist with each pump of her arms. He was fast, weaving through the late-night traffic, a dark shape flickering between parked cars and the glow of neon signs. She was faster. Eighteen years of foot chases, of running toward screams instead of away. It paid off now. She closed the gap as they careened past sex shops and shuttered cafes, her shoes splashing through overflowing gutters. He ducked into a side alley, a cut-through she knew well, a narrow canyon of brickwork and fire escapes. Her foot landed in a deep puddle, cold water flooding her shoe, but she pushed harder. The alley opened onto the wider expanse of Camden High Street, quieter now under the hissing deluge. He was a moving shadow under the railway arches. He disappeared into one. She slowed, hand on the grip of her baton, her approach deliberate. The arch led into a pedestrian tunnel, its walls graffitied with wild, chaotic tags. The sound of the rain muted to a distant roar behind her. The air smelled of damp concrete and spilled lager. She could hear the slap of his footsteps ahead, fading. He wasn’t running blindly. He had a destination. The tunnel opened onto a flight of rusted iron stairs descending into darkness. She stopped at the top, her training screaming caution. This wasn’t pursuit. This was a path. A memory of Morris flickered, unbidden—the way he’d looked at that warehouse door three years ago, the same hesitation in his eyes, just before he’d gone in first. She shook her head, sending water droplets flying from her salt-and-pepper crop. Morris’s ghost didn’t get a vote. Below, she saw a faint, flickering light. He must have hit a switch. She descended carefully, each step groaning under her weight, the sound echoing in the confined space. The stairs bottomed out into a wider brick passageway, part of the old Tube system, long abandoned. Bare bulbs hung from frayed cords at irregular intervals, casting pools of uncertain light. The air was colder here, thick with the smell of earth and something else—ozone and old incense. The passage opened into a cavernous space. An abandoned platform. And it wasn’t empty. Her breath caught. Stalls stretched along the platform’s length, lit by lanterns and strings of fairy lights powered by unseen generators. Tarps hung from pipes overhead, making a patchwork ceiling. Figures moved in the low light, hoods and hats pulled low. Some stalls displayed what looked like antique weapons, others glittering vials of dark liquid. One sold nothing but bones of various sizes, carved and polished. This was the Veil Market. She’d heard the whispers, scraps of intel passed around the Met’s weirdest corners, always dismissed as folklore. The underground market that moved, that operated beyond the laws of man and, she now suspected, of nature. Herrera was thirty feet ahead, weaving through a thin crowd of shoppers. He didn’t look back. He knew she was there. He was leading her. Her instincts pulled her in two directions. Procedure said establish a safe perimeter, call for backup, observe. This was a major unknown, a battlefield she hadn’t scouted. Morris had taught her that. But procedure had also gotten Morris killed—because procedure didn’t account for things that went bump in the night. She needed to know what Herrera was doing here, what connection existed between him, the Clique, and this place. She had to follow. She stepped onto the platform, the noise from the stalls washing over her—muttered conversations in languages she couldn’t place, the clink of glass, the dry rustle of strange fabrics. A vendor with milky, cataracted eyes turned his head toward her, tracking her movement without seeming to see her. She kept her posture military-straight, her face a neutral mask, but her heart hammered against her ribs. She followed Herrera’s path past a stall selling what looked like bottled mist. A tall, gaunt figure with skin the color of tarnished pewter was negotiating in harsh, guttural tones. Quinn averted her gaze. Another stall held books bound in what appeared to be human skin. She focused on the back of Tomás Herrera’s head, on the dark curls plastered to his skull by the rain, on the saint’s medallion that glinted at his throat. He stopped abruptly at a stall tucked under a recessed archway, partially hidden by a tapestry depicting a three-faced moon. The vendor was a short, round woman with unnaturally sharp teeth. She smiled as Herrera approached. Quinn drifted closer, pretending to examine a neighboring stall’s wares—crystals that pulsed with a faint inner light. She listened, straining to hear over the market’s hum. “You’re late,” the woman hissed, her voice like crinkling parchment. “I was followed.” Herrera’s tone was low, tense. “By the law?” “Worse. By her.” A beat of silence. Quinn’s blood ran cold. The woman chuckled, a dry, rattling sound. “Brave of her to walk our floors. Or foolish. Does she have the token?” “I don’t know,” Herrera said. “I didn’t ask.” “You led her here. Purpose?” “You know why. She’s getting close to them. She needs to see.” “Seeing can be dangerous. For the seer.” “It’s her choice now,” Herrera said, and she could hear a strange mix of pity and resolve in his voice. “She followed me down the stairs.” Quinn processed the words. *She needs to see. It’s her choice now.* This wasn’t an escape; it was an invitation. A trap, or a test. Herrera hadn’t just run, he’d guided her here, past streets he could have easily lost her on. He wanted her inside the Veil Market. The conversation dropped to whispers she couldn’t catch. She saw currency change hands—not pound notes, but irregular, bone-colored chips. Herrera pocketed a small, cloth-wrapped parcel and turned. His warm brown eyes met hers across the crowded platform. No surprise, no alarm. He’d known she was there all along. He gave a slight, almost imperceptible nod toward the far end of the market, then melted back into the flow of shoppers, disappearing behind a hanging curtain of beads. She stood frozen. The path ahead led deeper into the market, past stalls selling who-knew-what, into a darkness punctuated by unnatural lights. The way back was up the rusted stairs, into the rain, back to a world that made sense. Back to a case where things were tidy, where evidence went into plastic bags and killers had fingerprints. But this was the case now. Morris had chased shadows, and the shadows had swallowed him whole. She could step back into the rain, return to her desk, write a report about losing a suspect in Camden. Or she could follow, see what Herrera wanted her to see, understand the game she was actually playing. A vendor nearby stirred a pot of something that smelled of decay and clove. The gaunt, pewter-skinned creature watched her with undisguised interest. She was an outsider here, uninvited, unprotected. Her hand brushed the worn leather of her watch. Morris’s laughter echoed in her memory, a bright sound gone forever. She’d spent three years digging through the debris of his death, finding nothing but official reports and procedural blanks. Here was a door. A dark, strange, terrifying door. Quinn took a deep breath, the air thick with alien scents. She straightened her jacket, fixed her eyes on the spot where Herrera had vanished, and stepped forward. She walked with military precision into the heart of the hidden market, leaving the known world and its safe choices behind.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:45:39.444Z" 2/19/2026, 10:45:39 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"tapestry"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"resolve"
count1
9
word"processed"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"footsteps"
2"flickered"
3"weight"
4"echoing"
5"tapestry"
6"pulsed"
7"silence"
8"resolve"
9"processed"
10"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
91.38% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"observe"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords8
totalWords1329
ratio0.006
matches
0"She needs to see. It’s her choice now."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1264
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Quinn6
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera13
Camden2
High1
Street1
Morris6
Tube1
Veil2
Market2
Met1
Clique1
Tomás1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Herrera"
4"Morris"
5"Market"
6"Met"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Veil"
globalScore0.986
windowScore0.5
88.27% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like antique weapons, others glitt"
1"looked like bottled mist"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.752
wordCount1329
matches
0"not pound notes, but irregular, bone-colored chips"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean39.09
std26.27
cv0.672
sampleLengths
070
180
265
365
475
577
614
766
840
925
1073
1165
1275
1353
149
1510
168
173
183
198
2021
218
225
2312
247
2526
2649
2727
2850
2958
3055
3130
3248
3349
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
82.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs226
matches
0"wasn’t running"
1"was leading"
2"was doing"
3"was negotiating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences119
ratio0.067
matches
0"She’d spotted him leaving The Raven’s Nest—Herrera, the off-the-books medic."
1"A memory of Morris flickered, unbidden—the way he’d looked at that warehouse door three years ago, the same hesitation in his eyes, just before he’d gone in first."
2"The air was colder here, thick with the smell of earth and something else—ozone and old incense."
3"But procedure had also gotten Morris killed—because procedure didn’t account for things that went bump in the night."
4"She stepped onto the platform, the noise from the stalls washing over her—muttered conversations in languages she couldn’t place, the clink of glass, the dry rustle of strange fabrics."
5"Quinn drifted closer, pretending to examine a neighboring stall’s wares—crystals that pulsed with a faint inner light."
6"It’s her choice now.* This wasn’t an escape; it was an invitation."
7"She saw currency change hands—not pound notes, but irregular, bone-colored chips."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1284
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"irregular, bone-colored chips."
1"small, cloth-wrapped parcel"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.01791277258566978
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005451713395638629
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean11.17
std6.53
cv0.585
sampleLengths
018
120
210
320
42
521
621
73
812
94
1019
1119
1216
1317
149
154
1612
1714
1812
199
2010
214
224
2313
249
253
264
2728
2812
296
307
316
3216
3317
3414
3517
367
373
384
393
4018
419
4211
4314
4411
455
4617
4718
4812
494
36.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3025210084033613
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences109
matches
0"She’d spotted him leaving The"
1"He’d made her the moment"
2"Her breath rasped in her"
3"He was fast, weaving through"
4"She was faster."
5"It paid off now."
6"She closed the gap as"
7"He ducked into a side"
8"Her foot landed in a"
9"He was a moving shadow"
10"He disappeared into one."
11"She slowed, hand on the"
12"She could hear the slap"
13"He wasn’t running blindly."
14"He had a destination."
15"She stopped at the top,"
16"She shook her head, sending"
17"He must have hit a"
18"She descended carefully, each step"
19"Her breath caught."
ratio0.44
5.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences109
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Streetlights bled halos into the"
2"She’d spotted him leaving The"
3"He’d made her the moment"
4"Her breath rasped in her"
5"He was fast, weaving through"
6"She was faster."
7"It paid off now."
8"She closed the gap as"
9"He ducked into a side"
10"Her foot landed in a"
11"The alley opened onto the"
12"He was a moving shadow"
13"He disappeared into one."
14"She slowed, hand on the"
15"The arch led into a"
16"The sound of the rain"
17"The air smelled of damp"
18"She could hear the slap"
19"He wasn’t running blindly."
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She closed the gap as they careened past sex shops and shuttered cafes, her shoes splashing through overflowing gutters."
1"She shook her head, sending water droplets flying from her salt-and-pepper crop."
2"The underground market that moved, that operated beyond the laws of man and, she now suspected, of nature."
3"She focused on the back of Tomás Herrera’s head, on the dark curls plastered to his skull by the rain, on the saint’s medallion that glinted at his throat."
4"She’d spent three years digging through the debris of his death, finding nothing but official reports and procedural blanks."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the woman hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.167
76.4284%